Reviews by SassYNoles
The Wife by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
Summary:

Bella and Carlisle are starting a new life in San Francisco with their adorable boys and supportive extended family. They've been through hell, but they're together. Aren't they? Will they be able to survive life away from Forks? NC-17, AU. The Wife, sequel to The Babysitter.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future , Read Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76251 Read Count: 43327
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2014 Updated: 08 Oct 2017
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Powerful emotional chapter !!!

Well done hunnie !!

I'm still bummed and in mourning that Peter's dead !!

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

So much love for this story !!

 

Loved the update !! Xx

 

Cannot wait for more !

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Whoa ... about time Jake and Sam did their job !

Poor Bella ... finding out that sick fucker kileld her father ..

Dr Gerandywhether he thought of her as a daughter doesn't excuse is behaviour ..

Now Carlisle ..

Eek .. I honestly expected him to go off at her more ...

Maybe it's the calm bfore the storm ?

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Sometimes I just want to shake Bella out of this horrendous time ..

I think she should take Liam up on the appointments ..

She puts too much pressure on herself ..

cannot wait for more

 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm going to say it ..

Cunts ...

That's what her so called friends are being .. and shit ones too !!

How is Bella supposed to heal if the people she loves the most keep tearing her down .. ??

I am glad that she told them where they can shove it ...

Maybe if they took the time to ask and undertand Bella's reasoning as tgo why she left like she did they might have a change of opinion ..

And for them to do that at Michael's art show ..

Tacky !!

Anyhoo ..

I loved the moments between mother and son ..

It seems like we are getting somewhere positive with them YAY !!

I did laugh a lot about the boys and Carlisle and balls being mentioned .. & Tyler being a ladies man ..

So cute !!

You know I loved it sweetheart ;)

Can't wait for more X

 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love this Carlise ;)

 

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Holy shit !!!

I am so glad that Peter talked her out of leaving ... But effing Aro/Garner whatever his name is now has her and Peter's injured !!

Please don't kill him off ! I heart Peter :(

 

 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

:O You kiled Papa Pete :'(

Oooh you Evil Evil Lady *Sniffs*

& poor Carlisle ... he's going to think that the worse of Bella now .. I hope he doesn't blame her .. she's going to blame herself because Peter wouldn't have been out if he wasn't talking sense into her ..

Lord ... the next lot of chapters are going to be horrendous ..

Big girl panites on ...

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can see why Bella left them all ..

She did what she thought was best !

She put the saftey of her children and family first and although it went haywire I don not think she was being selfish ..

I just hope once everyone says their peace to her they let it go ..

Peter's death wasn't her fault ..

It was Aro's ...

She didn't ask Peter to follow her .. he chose too ..

So looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I'm glad that Bella told Alice what she did ..

And she is right !!

I don't think they all realise what to the extent Bella has gone through

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Bella needs to stop putting so much pressure on herself ..

She's setting herself up for failure !!

She needs deep breathes and she needs to see that counsellor also ..

I hope she listens to the advice that her professor gave her ..

Sometimes the prospective of someone that doesn't love us or who isn't close to us is just what we need ;)

Cannot wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

YAY !!

I was so excited to see this in my inbox :D

I still think that Alice, Esme, Rose & Emmett are shit cunts for turning their backs on Bella ...

But I am glad that at the end of this chapter ..

That it was Jasper's father Jackson who nudged her in the direction of feeling a glimmer of hope that she one day will be healed !!

Cannot wait for more !

Love this story :D



Author's Response:

Thank you, sweets.

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

So worth the wait !!

Love that Marcus and Phil are together ;)

Nice little surprise !!

Even Lauren and her ditzy self ..

I loved how Bella handled Michael & Tyler ;)

Maybe she could make him a cushion or pillow out of the material from the shirt ..

Cannot wait till more !!

Loved it ! X

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

*Sighs* ..

Have I ever told you how much I love this story ??

Cause I do ..

& the ending for the Wife was perfect !

Bring on chapter 3 xx

Summary:

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Sequel to Silent Wishes. Bella and Edward overcame the odds and found their happy ending, but will it last? All they have now are whispered hopes of a future worth fighting for.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75889 Read Count: 21459
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2015 Updated: 30 Oct 2022
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I really hate all this jealousy that Edward is experincing ...

I'm worried that these two will end up seperated from it :(

He's going to say something in the heat of the moment and then probably take off with James and Tyler ..

I just hope this doesn't happen to them, they've come so far together both a people and as a couple ..

I have missed this story !

Cannot wait for more X

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Let's hope that Edward has gotten rid of his shithead behaviour and acts like a proper husband should ..

They both need to keep communicating ..

You always make me cry when I read your characters pain on the screen...

Well done !

Lookng forward to more X

Summary:

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Dancing with the Devil cost Bella a piece of her soul. Will she earn her redemption? Or be lost forever. Sequel to Carlisle's Gift.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76020 Read Count: 33912
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2015 Updated: 27 Aug 2022
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Noooooooooo ..

 

You made one of my fave hunnies the Sandman :(

No wonder Alice was freaked the fuck out ..

She knew !

Argh .. cannot wait for more X



Author's Response:

Sorry not sorry about Peter😂😂😂😂

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Looking forward to more as always !!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, sweets!

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awww ...

I just want some happy for them both ..

Bella needs to get help, she needs to stop believing she deserves everything ..

Maybe she should speak with Garrett more since he has been where she is where Carlsile is concerned?

I hope that Edward finds his sister and returns to his wife and soon !

 

 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Poor Bella and Edward ..

They both need this to be over with .,

They need to heal her more so then Edward..

Is there going to be a HEA for them?

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Looking forward to more as always !

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Fabulous !

Loved finding out more on Edward and Bella !!

I hope we find out when they married !

Damn Alice butting in; in that exact moment hahaahaha

The Sandman .. good lord .. sounds creepy !

So will Bella's redemption be finding Edward's sister ?

 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 27 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YES !! So excited to see this here !! woohooo !

Love the way you have intorduced Jasper and Emmett into the story !!

& Even Mike .. even if he is a pervy ass ... lol

Poor Alice .. a year on and she's still struggling ...

I love also that Aro is still trying his hardest to help ! Bless !!

Annabelle Masen !!

Are Bella and Edward married ?

So need more lovey !!

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella’s eyes fluttered closed. “Maybe, but who’s taking care of me, while I take care of everyone else?”

When nothing but silence filled the air, she knew nobody had an answer for her.

 

That's where Edward should have said me :(

Poor Bella .. I felt sorry for her moreso in this chapter

Can't wait for more !



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow some more insight into how Bella and Edward met !

Total shockewr that Jasper, Emmett and Rose are all part of the crew .. I wish i could say i seen that coming but alas i didn't ;)

Can't wait for more

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Can I just say that I hate Leah ??

She sure as shit is a psychopath !!

& the way the everyone just didn't say anything about the way she baits Belal ..

*Shakes head* ..

She sure is in something when it comes to Bella .. Attached ? Maybe Skeezy ? Infatuated ??

All of the above ..

As always deart .. Loving it

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Woohooo I'm back !!

Just caught up on the chapters !

Edward sure does put his foot in his mouth a lot ..

He needs to realise where his priorities should lie and he keeps choosing wrong ;)

I hope this is the wakeup he needs and also in a way the wake up Bella needs !

Can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Welcome back!

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Leah's an evil bitch ..

Bella should have said what Leah said to her ..

I think Bella has the right to say what she said to Edward ..

His priority should be doing everything he can to help his wife who is struggling ..

Bella is now asking for what she needs ..

Cannot wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you, doll. It's not so much that Leah's an evil bitch, just more that she can't get over whats happened. Not everyone can be saved, even when they're saved.

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward and Bella don't need to leave

They should be making Leah, Jake and Seth go ..

The ranch is Bella's ..

I liked hearing Emmett's story even if it was heartbreaking ..

He helped her see what she needed ..

I just hope that someone spoke to Edward and made him see so he doesn't flip again ..

Loved it as always hunnie

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yay !

I was so excited to see this in my inbox !

Though you should be resting after your fall lovely X

I hope you are feeling better ??

You'd think Bella'd get a bit of a break but no such luck ..

Bloody Leah's gone missing !

Is it horrible for me to want her to be taken out by a car on her escape?

Maybe then Bella will get some contentment ..

As for the others all looking or not looking at Bella ..

I wonder if that's to do with her not wanting to go with Leah?

Surely they could put themselves or try to put themselves in her shoes and see why she can't !!

Mike .. Eek the puppy has arrived .. hopefully Edward put an end to him coming around ..

Anyways rest up !

& as always can't wait for more !

 



Author's Response:

If it helps, I'm writing in bed. Thank God for laptops. Still sore. The bruising is just starting to really show. Arm and thigh are still swollen. Head aches again, and all that crap. Think my body just hates me. 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Now if they had just listened to Bella sooner about her concerns with Leah than this wouldn't be happening !!

Edward should have paid better attention too !!

In a way I agree with Aro ..

I know I know Bella's her ownn person but still ..

Cannot wait for more

Loved it  X



Author's Response:

Thank you. I debated for awhile on if Bella should stay or go, but I just couldn't see her letting Edward go without her. 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Looking forward to more X

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Here's to hoping that Garrett can help Bella with healing ..

I wonder if Edward will feel threatened if they build a friendship bond?

cannot wait for more hun !

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Looking forward to more X

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well shit ...

I didn't think it would happen that fast ..

Did she die from being shot? Leah that is ..

But Bella didn't get off lightly either she was shot too ..

So cannot wait for more X

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10159
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 19 May 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh I loved that last line about fate !

What a unqie story :)

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 19 May 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank god for fate stepping in ;)

And for cupid getting ready to shoot that arrow ;)

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 19 May 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Such a cute little tale !

I do wish you would do more so we can see how Bella and Edward grow as a couple X

Summary:

Falling for a Dark Soul

 

Isabella Swan moved away from the world she’s known, trying to move on from the loss of her parents and raising her baby sister, Katie. She’s always seen the best in the world, but she’s struggling in coping with all of the changes in her life. A new start was needed and she packed up, moving from the small town of Forks to Chicago to work as an advertising junior executive at Masen Advertising Corporation.

Edward Cullen, CEO of Masen Advertising Corporation, is a cold-hearted, uncaring, hateful asshole. An orphan and living in foster care until he turned fifteen, he was adopted by Carlisle and Esme Cullen. Edward struggled with forming relationships. All he wanted was a partner, a friend, a lover, a wife, a mother to his children. He lost his wife, Tanya, when she was found screwing his partner, Jacob Black, on his desk. She also shattered his heart, ending several pregnancies, even though Edward had pleaded to start a family.

What happens when Edward bumps into Bella in the hallways of Masen Advertising Corporation? Will she be the chink in his armor, shattering his carefully constructed walls? Or will he bring her into the darkness, shattering her optimistic view of the world? It’s uncertain, but she’s Falling for a Dark Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 250672 Read Count: 73874
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2020 Updated: 17 Apr 2021
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thanks for the chapter .. I can't review on FF as it won't allow me to even view this story .. thank god for FB and links to STARS :)

 

Cannot wait for more X

Summary:

 

Finding Love through a Kids App 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12132 Read Count: 3200
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2020 Updated: 17 Mar 2021
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So looking forward to seeing where you take this!

I love DadWard ;)

Solace by MissLiss15 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

Solace Banner

 

 Pregnant at 18, Bella struggles to make peace with her decision to give her baby up for adoption. Her father suggests moving in with her mother and step-father in Ohio for a change of pace. She meets Edward, a young Amish widower conflicted about his faith after his wife's death. Can they form a bond strong enough to help each other heal?

 

This story is very loosely based off of a story called Autumn’s Promise by Shelley Shepard Gray. It has no smut in it and is very Christian based (it’s an Amish story, so...lol!) but it’s so sweet and I hope some of you will check it out!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38632 Read Count: 13487
[Report This] Published: 02 Nov 2020 Updated: 01 Feb 2021
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Gosh I love how you have written these two .. they are perfect for each other .. Edward has such a beautiful way with words ..

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is privileged, sheltered and unknowingly naive. Edward Masen is tough, rugged and street-smart. Their worlds are so far apart, their experiences incomparable. But when there's a spark, it can become a flame; a flame a fire. Can they overcome their differences and learn from each other? Or are they destined to burn? AH.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 37785 Read Count: 870
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2020 Updated: 04 Nov 2020
Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This chapter was Perfect !

I loved the laughter, the playfulness.. these two whilst so drastcally different mould well with each other ..

Thanks for the chapter, cannot wait for more X