Reviews by Mona Rider
Dear Reader by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
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Edward is running out of time to find his mate before the Volturi will demand his allegiance. It will take more than just infatuation to make it out on the other side. A story of vamps, witches and more. NC-17 for lang, violence and mature content.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15131 Read Count: 1697
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a ride... thanks for taking me along. This was great!



Author's Response:

Thanks Mona!  You are an awesome cheerleader and I love taking you along for rides! hehe

xoxo

tb

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The things some people will do for love....

 

Serial Drabble

Rated: NC-17 for gore, violence and graphic hardcore horror 

Genre: Extreme Horror

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14160 Read Count: 10422
[Report This] Published: 05 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Twenty One

Oh boy... this is just... UGH why must you be so vivid that I feel like im there and want to kill daddy ed. *Grumbles and paces waiting for more*



Author's Response:

<3 <3 

Summary: Past Featured Story

(E & B Version) A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149771 Read Count: 33296
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

HOLY shit what!! Gone like gone from sight or gone like dead... my god woman you know how to cliff us.

Summary:

Revised April 2012: Bella Swan is a wallflower. Quiet and shy but with a secret lurking within her soul. Will her new professor and his TA be the ones to discover her secret and what will she think when she discovers theirs? Lemons galore. POLY B/E/J

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories Read by CNYBella, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69591 Read Count: 158406
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Wake Up Call

Is Edward actually growing up? I cant wait for more! I just love your chica!



Author's Response:

Mona!  Did I know you were reading this one?  WOW... thanks!  And yes, Edward's on his way...

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Mea Culpa

Who could be there... Oh man, I can't wait to know more. Annnnd to your question, Ive been reading this since way back when. I swear ed is always a complex being, Jasper so expressive and needy. And poor Bella!



Author's Response:

Ahhh... you sneaky little thing...lol!  But thrilled that you're here with me.  As for these three, the mend has started, but it won't happen "overnight".

 

xoxo

tb

Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Consequences

Oh the mooshy gooshy goodness... I swear I kinda wanna cry and to me that just isnt okay but good for you since I'm a gorey bitch that doesnt cry over much. Love you for this but damn must you break into my heart and steal a little bit for these three? *Huffs* I'll just sit here in my puddle and think of whats to happen next.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Another Brick in the Wall

Holy moly... so much happened. I hope she takes what he says and loves him for it. I hope ed gets his act together but if what he admitted was true he has alot of work to do before he can be anything but an douchebag.

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Life Goes On

Oh god ominious moment... I just dont even know.

 

Bella and jasper seem to be on the track at least until he confesses.



Author's Response:

LOL... at this point I don't mind that you're left guessing.  Now, if I mark this complete and you still have questions, well then I won't have done my job!

 

xoxo

tb

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Screams followed us, grunts and groans from the dead. Zombies. Who would have known right? Well obviously a few specialists knew, they created this disease, these dead corpses that liked to munch on out flesh. And it spread here to the land down under, where the where women glow and men plunder.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Horror, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Horror, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5484 Read Count: 73
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well damn woman that was amazing... Great job!

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Elizabeth is bought from her father to be Aro's bride. She is kept prisoner in his home and has to endure unspeakable torture. This is an out take for Involuntary Rapture.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9621 Read Count: 5255
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Elizabeth's Story

 

Okay I know, I said I would put this in my TBR bookmarks but it was calling my name. 'Mona, hey Mona come read me... I'll make you happy!' I had to... it made me. *turns all sorts of reds. I'm a living human tomato* Oh my god... The rapes, vivid. *shifty* Fuck it... *throws my security blanket aside* I am a fucking deviant. It was amazing. I was on edge the whole time. I almost thought maybe Marcus was coming up the stairs pissed his son deviated from the schedule. 'Cause I could so see him mad over Aro getting more time than him but nope it was Anthony to the rescue. White stallion masked as a boat and all. Fuck yeah... Penis stomping FUCKING epic!!! Loved it! snuggles in next to everyone else with my cocoa and my blankie Bitches betta respect this story!



Author's Response:

i love this... cant wait for you to read IR!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407545
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

poor guy... just get it on with her!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Ya, is that open for anyone? Ill take a good walla fucking!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I don't need a break! I want more!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Heed your own advice eddie!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

haha... she is even asking for it!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awe eye contact

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Friends shout out! LOVED IT!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I lost my place so I'm just randoml picking back up!

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

HAHA I loved the discription of her with the cocks in hand! FUCKING AWESOME

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

haha, GO Charlie!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor girl!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What a sweet dad...

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

HAHA, embaressing and priceless her dad called her bosses! NICE!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I would pay to see that... What a sight that would be! I can't wait for more!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

STUCK IN MINE TOOO!!!!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

not a hobbit, haha a guy who doesnt care what he fucks apparently!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Poor girl all alone with no toys whats a girl to do...

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Whats that saying, never judge a book by its cover... Well I think that applys here so dont run BELLA

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Haha... men can be manipulative too!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

COCKblocked by a damn cell!

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh yeah add in the connections FUN!

Reptile by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

She spread herself wide open to let the insects in. 
She leaves a trail of honey to show me where she's been. 
She has the blood of reptile just underneath her skin. 
Seeds from a thousand others drip down from within. 

Devils speak of the ways in which she'll manifest. 
Angels bleed from the tainted touch of my caress. 
Need to contaminate to alleviate this loneliness.

Come what may, because  even creatures of the night have to live it large, but Karma has always found away around strokes of luck right?

Warnings- The usual: Things you wouldn't want you children to read.  Keep away if you're under the legal age to buy cigarettes. 

 

Short, multi-chapter, Prompt for Durty Nelly's  Gore Corner Vegas Prompt.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Horror, Humor
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 469
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...

Holy shit... I actually like him even though he is a asshole.

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: I'm so Sick...

Oh my god... haha, I am laughing so fucking hard! That's amazing.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Smoke and Signal fires...

blah blah blah praise praise praise. mwuah!

Last To Know by TBandJelly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 214]
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Summary:  One day, three missent texts and four couples... secrets spilled and relationships kindled but who will be the last to know? A soap opera of fanfic proportions. Rated M for language and slashy lemons. Written for the Drabble Wars DYAC Prompt challenge.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Family, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12626 Read Count: 13126
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

amazing... as always you two blow us all outa the water! more please!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What good siblings...

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can so hear the girls from 'White Girls' SHOOOOOOOPPPPIIINNNGGG!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I have to say AWE Young love is so cute!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

awe... good edward!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It's never too soon for a little thigh grabbage

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Uh oh wrong move esme! Run for cover! RUN!

Summary:

 

I was given 3.5 days to come up with a story for the Drabble War 'DYAC' prompt.

 

 

 

JA Mash and Texasbella said 'You have to use this one' and showed me the picture.

 

 

 

Of course, never one to turn down a challenge, I agreed.

 

 

 

They gave me a maximum word count of 9k and a couple of extra words to use, can you guess what they are?

 

 

 

This is an Edward and Bella story, with a sweet Esme thrown in :)

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4666 Read Count: 54765
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

whata start!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

lmao! wrap them things up!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I knew guys like him... More more!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

lol sexting

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

haha... Esme is silly!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yeah defo a creep with a nice dick apparently

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yeah you'll both be eachothers bitch!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

HAHA... it's gotta happen sooner or later!

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

she is so edward spoiled...

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

HAHA... Damn you esme! Loved it great job woman!

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Bella doesn’t see herself very clearly which makes her shy, geeky and withdrawn.  Her favorite place to hide and escape?  The local comic book store owned by her only semi-friend, Emmett. When Emmett isn’t there one day, will her imagination get carried away over the new guy? Bday shot for my Jelly girl... JA Mash (who also made the banner!)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4316 Read Count: 1563
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was amazing... Happy birthday jess and I swear Bella C needs some extra mega thank you for writing this awesome ditty! Is it hot in here? *fans self* Damn!