Reviews by Koshivuh
Summary:

After a bad break-up, Rose and Alice take Bella out to find her someone to have a little “fun” with so they head to La Push, a local college hangout, where she meets a certain 17 year-old looking guy with green eyes and sex hair. OOC. First chapter written for the NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-Shot Contest.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38182 Read Count: 23676
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 May 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Where the Boys Are

I saw it coming, considering there was a picture of a pregnant belly on a banner in the summary section. I like it so far, though. 

Summary:

My piece for Fandom for Tsunami releif. When Bella goes with Edward to meet his long time friend, Jasper Whitlock, she finds what she least expected.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10554 Read Count: 7483
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 May 2012
Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Deffinitely new for me. I've read things similar to this in a general sense, but I'm not used to this Bella. I can't say I didn't like this, but I also can't say I loved it, only because of how Bella reacted. I guess I was expecting her to be more indignant that Edward just left her in the middle of the night with no warning beforehand of what his true lifestyle was. However, I respect that this is your story and it is your choice on how you write your characters, and I believe I'll continue to read the next chapter (or more...if there's more.). Hopefully I will come to enjoy this more :)

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Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yes, definitely unexpected. I don't know, I liked this story, and it was very, very well written, I guess I'm more of a romantic (monogamous romantic...). I've read, and do read stories that include relationships involving more than two people, but I guess this was somehow different for me. Maybe it was because it involved a dom/sub relationship (even though I've read stories with that as well.). I'm honestly not sure, but it wasn't that bad. Although, I was surprised with the ultimate outcome. Not bad.

Summary:

One moment was all it took to tear them apart. Now, in a single heartbeat, they'll find their way back together one last time. My Halloween One-shot for Twilight Fanfic Advocacy Compliation. MA/NC-17

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1549 Read Count: 1283
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, good :] There's more? Because I'm completely comfused.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When a secret is revealed, just days before her wedding, Bella leaves her fiancé Edward, as well as her sisters, in a panic, wondering: will she be able to forgive him in time, or leave him standing at the altar. June Drabble War entry.

MADE BY: LUNARECLIPSE1

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MADE BY: MINA R.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20084 Read Count: 104378
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm not really sure if I'm ready for the angst, but I guess we'll see what happens :)

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Unfortunately I haven't seen any of the Madea movies, but I hope to one day :)

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm thinking Edward slept with Tanya. But that's just because it seems to always be Tanya. Plus, she's the "oldest, dearest friend" and they seem to always be the ones who fuck you over in the end (in fiction, anyway ;) )

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Lol, I was convinced it was Tanya, but I'm actually happy it wasn't her :)

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Uh, yeah, she deserves more than a little bit of time, but you can't erase the past, you can only do your best to get passed it.

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Alternate Ending Part 2

It's over! :( But it was a good read! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152447
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Haha! OMG! The fact you reported your car stolen is awesome XD

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter! I am loving this so far :D For some reason I feel like Bella's "Secret Admirer" is someone other than Edward...I guess I'll find out :D Unfortunately I have a terrible sore throat, but fortunately your fanfiction is a great distraction ;)

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Okay...So I have a feeling something other than a "burst pipe" was wrong with Bella's car. I'm not sure if I just have amazing deduction skills, or it was super obvious. I have my guess pegged on that creepy guy with the cap that reminds me of James and  was at the BIG C. I don't know, I guess everything will be revealed eventually :)

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Looooved! Great lemon :D

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Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Okay...So my thoughts that Edward and his family are in a Mob or something are becoming more sure by the minute, but then I think that they're not. So I'm really not sure what to think :(

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I...am so confused.

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

For some reasonthe review box was all messed up on the last chapter, so I couldn't review, but I'm here now! :) Loved this chapter, and I especially love our couple! I had passing thoughts that it could be someone Bella worked with, but it wasn't really an option that I lingered on. I really thought it was CG, haha. Anyway, I can't wait for more of this story to unfold!

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I honestly feel like going to the cops, at this point, can only do more harm than good.

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Lol, I suspected it was her. I guess we'll find out for sure :)

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter! I'm really sad now, because I'm sure this is ending in the next couple of chapters :( But that will give me the chance to read your other fan fictions :)

Reviewer: Koshivuh Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Haha, I knew it :) But all of the stereotypical pregnancy signs were there, so I'm not going to claim to be a genius.

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Looooved this! I can't wait to see what these next chapters hold and to read some of your other stuff! :)

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Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 26: HIGH STAKES

Wow, that's really exciting! I'm happy for you :D it also looks like it's going to be really good!