Reviews by edf-k
Summary:

What could Bella walk in on that would scar her for life?Christmas will never be the same for Bella, especially when one song keeps playing every time she turns on the radio.  My entry for the Broken Record Holiday Contest.

Flashy Avi


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crackfic
Characters: Charlie/None
Genre: Humor, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3798 Read Count: 684
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: edf-k Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Panty-Wearing Freak One Shot

OMG, I was laughing so hard at the end I was crying.  HAHAHAHA



Author's Response:

I had so much fun writing this.  It makes me happy to know other people laughed at it too.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

~Jenn

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625035
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Oh my goodness, so much has happened so quickly to Bella.  I wonder if Edward will really just let her go or not.  Perhaps she'll get to go to college after all and not have to give up her dreams and still get 'her Edward' too.  That would be the ultimate happy ending I think, but we'll see because they are just both so broken at the moment.  Cannot wait to read more.

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Awe, that was so sweet to end this chapter there.  The family is all moving forward and doing very well and so are they.  Very nice.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123486
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Sins of the Past-Carlisle's Outtake

OH MY GOD, I am almost speechless.  That would definitely put Aro in a position to demand Edward's joining....just wow.  I can only imagine how interesting that conversation is going to be in the next chapter once it's "aired out".  Oh my, that six degrees game takes on a whole new level with this little nugget of knowledge.  On one hand, she's mated - done deal...on the other, they'll have to hid it from the tribe or they could be accused of stealing a potential imprint.  Those kids are just never going to find a break. I wonder how long it will take Eleazar to return to Forks and how long for Aro to catch wind of this.  We thought Edward was protective before, that was nothing compared to what will happen now.



Author's Response:

It's going to be tricky finding their way out of this.

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yummy, animal Edward is out to play. 



Author's Response:

Yes he is....grrr!

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh and the plot thickens, can't wait until Edward realizes they weren't talking out loud earlier.  That in combination to the purr, should be an interesting conversation.  I wonder if she'll be able to hear anyone else or if it's something that will jsut be between the two of them. Looking forward to the next update.

Chocolate Jasper by Mynxi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

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Jasper is sent as a gift from Mistress Alice. Bella is expecting Jasper but not everything he has planned for her. One giant Lemon! Under 18 not permitted! Vampire Jasper/Human Bella. O/S. AU. Just for fun.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3705 Read Count: 1533
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Feb 2010
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Man oh man, now I really need a bottle of chocolate and will just have to wish for Jasper to appear as well.  sigh.



Author's Response:

LOL well have fun with your chocolate...I'll send Jasper over but you have to return him in one piece. :)

 

Thanks for the review!

xoxoxoxoxo
M

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward are happily engaged with their whole lives ahead of them. What happens when a tragedy strikes that will change them forever? AU, all human.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86164 Read Count: 6795
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2010
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--Shadow of the Day

I can totally sympathize with the family having gone through this type of situation before.  Nothing can prepare you for the devestation a stroke can cause. Definately tissues needed...great chapter.

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Sun Doesn't Shine Forever

I have not been teary-eyed this often in a fiction in a long time...good job!

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5--Grace

Yep, another tissue worthy chapter.  Love the attention to all sides of the story you are showing as everything unfolds.

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Give Me Strength

Wow, I really can't compliment you enough on how you are writing this story.  It's painful to read, but too good to not read.

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue Blue Skies

Wow, just wow. I had to stop reviewing after each chapter because I felt I was being too repeatitive.  I have loved the roller-coaster you have written and look forward to reading more of your work.

Different Beginnings by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

How would things be if Carlisle turned Bella first 100 years after he was turned? what if Esme was Emmett and Edward's real mother and they were all human and Jasper found Alice whlie Alice was a newborn and they found Bella and Carlisle then Rosalie joins???

follow from Carlisle's POV first then goes to Bella's, possibly other to come, as we see how things would be like if there were different beginnings for all of our favourite charactors.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 51670 Read Count: 7151
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2010 Updated: 17 Nov 2022
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: How It All Starts

I always wondered what must have gone through Carlisle's mind regarding his change.  This seems like a very good place to start and I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

well thank you, i just took a few things i learnt in history class about how some people were like when it came to being no so nice towards things that were different and then what is written in the first book of Twilight and a few other things that were sort of implied but not and kinda put some common sense into the mix and shook it up and the first chapter was born, I always wondered what Carlisle would have thought as well as i sat long and hard about it and then the story sort of formed around that!

Thank you for reading and i hope you keep doing so as there is more fun to be had

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144859
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

HAHAHAHAHA, what a great re-introduction of Miss Bella. LOL

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my god, just keeps getting better. Love the new Bella and can't wait to read more.  Was laughing too loud toward the end (now my husband is looking at me funny, but could not contain that sh*t...too funny).

Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Wow, I LOVED your ending.  Having Charlie in there was a stroke of genius and wrapped everything up very nicely.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74032
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

Great lemon :) So very happy for these two characters and look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rating and review!  I'm glad you loved their first time.  I have itching to write that scene since this idea first came to me.

Till next time

Nickey

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79458
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Wow, what a great story.  So very well written, I haven't teared up that often during a fan-fic in a while.  Thank you for sharing.

Summary:

 

After five years of marriage, Edward knows all of Bella's deepest, darkest desires.  Now they find themselves alone in the first class cabin with the exception of the sexy stranger who is sleeping across the way.  Bella may finally get one of her most erotic wishes granted. 

 

WARNING: Rated NC-17 for lemons and a threesome.  If that is too much for you, then run along little ones.  You have been warned.

 

 

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4432 Read Count: 7790
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Mid Flight Ménage-à-Trois

Oh my goodness, so freaking HOT! I can only imagine how interesting dinner is going to be. hehe



Author's Response:

Ohhhh, to be a fly on THAT wall.  Thanks so much for the rating and review!

Nickey

Summary:

 

Jasper feels the pull to one of his human students at the Seattle Art Institute where he teaching a class on photo Journalist. Does his student feel the pull also and will he dominate her?

Banner moved to chapter 1 to meet google policy standards :-(


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4159 Read Count: 1204
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2011 Updated: 31 Jul 2011
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting one-shot, just one quesiton - can I please (pretty please with sugar on top) sign up for a "dark room session"? LOL, Jasper has got to be the hottest teacher around and I imagine they will enjoy learning all about each other in the years to come.



Author's Response:

Yes sign up for the dark room...  Yes know that is about a years waiting time.

 

Hugs

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella’s long distance best friend shows up unexpectedly on her doorstep after being discharged from the Army under mysterious circumstances.

Banner by christagbanners

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9126 Read Count: 974
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2011 Updated: 03 Aug 2011
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful one-shot.  It sucks that both main characters were forced to suffer at the hands of people who claimed to "love" them.  I am happy to read they were at least able to support each other when everything else fell to the side and happy that they found each other in the end.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  I really envisioned both Bella and Jasper coming from very isolated circumstances, and the ones who love us have the most power to hurt us. 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

Bella has always hated her Christmas birthday, but a visit from a sexy santa might just change her mind!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1200 Read Count: 1324
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2011 Updated: 05 Dec 2011
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can I please sign up for that particular santa?  I promise I've been good and hey, we share the same birthday ;)  Awesome gift :)



Author's Response:

oh hunny! if i could send you santaward, i totally would...after I had my way with him!

Breaking Free by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

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Banner by Illicit Writer

 

Can people start anew after being abandoned by those who supposedly loved them?  Bella and Jasper build new lives for themselves after being torn asunder by Edward and Alice?  But what happens when they run into each other?  Will they give love a chance?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16150 Read Count: 3097
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2012 Updated: 16 Apr 2012
Reviewer: edf-k Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Not a bad little one-shot.  I have always felt that those two characters were the ultimate "doom" to any person who dared to be an individual or different.  I like how you had the Cullens punishment dealt with and the obvious closeness between Bella/Vicky - very refreshing.



Author's Response:

Oh, Edward and Alice were at their worst.  Carlisle and Esme were so brainwashed that they lost the ability to think for themselves.  Thanks for reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes