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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining
I wonder what Aro has done to Elizabeth aka Bella. He wants her so I do not think thathe will kill her like he probably did with Tanya. I just pray that Charlie can get there before Aro rapes the poor girl. He might think that sex is dirty, but he felt lustful feelings towards Esme and now Bella. I am glad that she remembers everything now, but there is no way for her to get out. I want to know what Felix left for Charlie.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You
I love this story. Heck, I love all your stories. I miss the TSS...glad James got what was coming to him. Aro is so evil. He so wants to have Bella for breakfast, lunch, and dinner just like he did with Esme. He called Bella the chosen. Is that not what Esme said that he called her as well. I wish there was someway that the Cullen's could protect her from his nasty grip before he get does something bad. I am so waitng for Charlie to come save Bella before he take her virginity on her honeymoon night. They are already pumping her up with fertility drugs so he can get here preggers when he takes Edward's place in popping her cherry. This man is such a sexual deviant. He gets to screw every single 16 year old girl on his compound. I am sure that the person who Bella (Elizabeth) felt staring at her was the King of Creep, Aro Volturi!! Dang, was he this facinated with Esme as well. I wonder how much trouble Bella is going to get into for running off with Alice? I am sure that she will receive some sort of reflection time or punishment. I still cannot believe the beating of Rebecca. It was so brutal. I would have thrown up too. Why would she have to masterbate? Was she not married? I guess she was not getting enough or the women are not allowed to cum when they have sex. That seems right up Aro's crazy rule alley. Can't wait for more!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega
Edward called Charlie, but he never hung up the phone. In chapter 31, Edward was entering the closet when he heard charlie talking through the receiver. Aro did not hang up the phone. He just sae that the box was open. Charlie heard the entire encounter. All of Aro's crazy words. I would love the next chapter to be in Charlie's POV. I have re-read the chapters twice. The phone was never placed back on the receiver. If it was, it was never written.
I know that Charlie heard all of it!
Thank you for the update. Can't wait to see what is next.
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624954
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45
I love the flashback. Bella does not remember it now, but she always wanted Edward. Well, the sweet and caring Edward from when they both were little. Before Carlisle turned into the Devil. I am so glad that Edward remembered the ice cream. Edward is going to be in for the shock of his life when he finds out the Carlisle wants Bella for himself as a replacement for Renee. I have no idea how Carlisle is going to react to this news. I just know that something bad is coming. It has been too perfect!!
Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.
Banner by Mehek18
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Congratulations on your book publishing!
Jacob is the wherewolf who has imprinted on Bella, right? She already imprinted/mated with Edward. Bella has been in the room with Jacob all night. I think that if she was supposed to be Jacob's imprint that she would have imprinted with him when she saw him. She has chosen Edward. Jacob just needs to drop dead. Sorry, Team Edward!
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
I'm also Team Vamp (I love Emmett personally) Everyone just assumes Jacob is the one talking.
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I am worried about what is going to happen between Edward and Bella when Aro finds out who Bella is? Do you think that he will try to take her away from Edward, or will he force Edward to come to Voltera with Bella?
Author's Response:
We'll find out soon...
Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed?
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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace
Writing is always the best way to get how you feel out in the universe especially when you do not want anyone else to know how you feel. It is very cathartic.
Yes, I am sure that we all have questions that will never be answered, but isn't that always the case regardless if your are reading a published book or a story in fanfiaction.
I am happy things have started to work out for you.
Can't wait to see what you do next....
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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood. Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver? Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?
This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over). Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I loved the way to you made this Horror story into just that, a horror story. I think that it was ingenious for it to be a novel that Bella was writing insead of it being true. It was a twist that I never expected, and I was not disappionted in the eng.
Thank you for finishing the story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you liked my story. :)
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I believe that Edward is going to be selfish and change Bella so he can keep his toy for eternity.
I do not understand why Bella is being so needy of Edward? One would think that she would push him away since he has done nothing but rape, sodomize, and beat her since he kiddnapped her.
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995705
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
His temper is going to make her run. She is going to run home and then Jim(James) is going to try to do something bad to her. He has severve anger issues. He actually needs to see someone. I am speaking as a professional on this one. He always sees RED and never thinks before he speaks. He will lose Bella.
I love the story. I really do, but why would a multi-millionare buy his sub and the women he claims that he is going to spend the reast of his life with a silver collar? Is he two cheap to buy white gold or even platinum? It just does not make any sense to me.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review - I really appreciate your comments and will take them into consideration - although I need to defend Edward's anger here - he feels betrayed by her lack of openess given the fact that she had kept things from him before... I am addressing that in the next chapter.
(BTW - her collar IS white gold - she just doesn't know it, she THINKS it is sterling silver - stop reading over my shoulder! *winks*)
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
I think Edward's feeling of forboding has to do with Bella getting hurt. I know that he does not know that Jacob is in town and now is besties with James, but I have a feeling that they were waiting for him to leave Bella alone so that they could make their move. I just hope that Bella is not raped by James or Jacob. I have a feeling that she is going to be snatched before she gets a chance to get to Rose's house. Just my feeling. Things have been too quiet on the J&J front.
Author's Response:
Hmmm - thank you for your review and comments.
Forgive me if I don't say anything!
xoxo
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
I can't even imagine how hard it was for you to write this chapter knowing how hard it was for me to even read this chapter. I was bawlling like a baby at the end. I agree with Carlisle. The way Edward punished Bella by ignoring her and taking off without word was WRONG! Bella already has low self esteem, low self worth, and most importantly, a huge fear of abandonment by Edward. I am sure that some people think that she got exactly what she deserved in her punishment, her worst nightmare coming true-Edward coming to his senses and leave her. I understad why it was done, but no matter how pissed you are at somebody, doesn't mean that cruel and unusual punishment is needed.
Love the story. Thank you for the update. I am sure that this chapter is going to have either Team Edward or Team Bella supporters.
Author's Response:
thank you for your review and support! you are so right about the supporters thing xoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
great chapter. thank you for the update. i knew that billy did not have a legal leg to stand on....love the story and all recs.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review hon
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
I am so glad that he finally proposed. It is about damn time to. I think that the way he did it was perfect for them. They were just the Edward and Bella that met in Italy again. LOVED IT!!!
Emmett is cray, but I can see his point. If he is packing, a man might think that he could hurt the baby. Well, in a way he can if their is something wrong with the cervix. Nothing wrong with Rose's cervix, and the doctor told them that sex was ok...even good actually.
I knew that Bella would freak the day of the Oscars, but I knew that Alice, the seasoned pro, would get her through the fear.
Heidi is such a jealous bitch. Yes, I said it. GREEN WITH ENVY!!! I am so proud of Bella standing up to Felix and Heidi but mostly Heidi!! Hell that turned me on and I am a heterosexual female..
Now, we have three weddings to look forward to. I can't wait for that roller coaster ride.
I love you story and how honest you write. Your writing brings out the emotions in me. One minute I am laughing, crying, or pissed. (all in one chapter)
Thank you.
Author's Response:
Hi there Sweetie -
Thank you so much for your great review and comments. Lots happening and lots to write about. Emmett was so much fun to write - he really is so typical but I love how sweet he is. Hmm Heidi better not talk down to our girl - she doesn't know who she is dealing with, but Edward and Bella will set her straight!
Three weddings - omg - so much to do! But I wouldn't have it any other way.
I'm so glad that my writing moves you - one way or another.
talk soon, love, me xoxo
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
Perfect as always. ;)
Date: 05 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Perfect ending for the new begining.
Thank you for two years of the best Edward and Bella story I have ever read.
Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society. He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent. Enter Bella Swan. Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both? All EPOV. Starts darker, quickly turns humorous. Language, lemons and some violence.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue #3
OMG!!!!!! That was freaking hilarious.....
You my dear are brillant. That was the best payback ever!!!!
I love this story, and I am sad now that it has come to its fruition. I will be on the look out for your new stuff next year...
Have a wonderful Holiday Season...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I knew back when he decided to plot revenge what it would be and I just waited til he could enact it in person.
I'm so happy you love this story. It's probably my fave that I've written, though I of course love them all :) I'll do some outtakes when I get time so feel free to let me know if you have any suggestions!
Happy Holidays to you and thank you so much for your review :)
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I hope that Bella rips Victoria an hole that she does not use! Can't wait for next update. Thanks ;)
Author's Response:
Haha an extra hole would be a good thing :) We'll see! Thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 School Daze
That was a wonderful surprise!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you thought so! Thanks!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Cowtake
That was great! I love how Edward will do anything no matter how ludicrous it is for Bella. Loved it! Thank you for the outtake.
Author's Response:
:) Thank you! Yeah, he'll do absolutely anything for her, not silently, but he will do it! I had a blast writing this chapter! Thank you so much for reading it!
Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC. Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.
It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.
*WARNING: Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
This has been a fantastic story. I am so sad that it has come to its conclusion. I love how Bella was able to get pregnat and that they baby came out healthy. I thought that maybe you would go for that because in many cases, people who adopt tend to get pregant when they never thought that they would. I love the fact that you showed that they loved Ellie just as much as they did Audrey. I am sad to see this story end, but I hope that you do have something new coming out soon...
Thank you again for many months of a wonderfully written love story of Edward and Bella!
This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.
On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.
At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?
Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!
This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!
Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40825
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: On the floor
I use my iphone for everything. For some strange reason, my phone will not let me leave a review. I dusted off the laptop and wanted to let you know how much I enjoy reading your story. I hope Tanya's plan does not embarrass Edward too much. You are appreciated!! Look forward to reading more.
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club
I love the story, and I know that this is a work of fiction. I know some about the community. Tanya would have be reprimanded in someway for using the cat o nine on Edward. It is a HARD limit for him, and she knew this and did it anyway. I know her goal was to get him to "safeword", and he did. He should have done it the moment he saw tha cat o nine, but he did not want to embarrass or let down his Mistress. Tanya's behavior was reprehensable. Can you please make her get what is comming to her? She needs to be punished herself. She broke a major rule of the BDSM lifestyle, and for Carlisle to go along with it almost make me want to vomit. I lost much respect for him as a Domme with the scene. I just wanted to vent some because I know how things work, but this is your story and I respect that. Atlest Bella will be there to help put Edward back together again. I know the good stuff is just around the curve. I just think that Tanya is a Royal Bitch!! Love reading and please keep it coming.
Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106339
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Wow. Bella has a serious case of PPD. I speak as a licenced psychologist. You nailed it! If that is not what you were going for, I am sorry, but the way everything was written was spot on PPD.
Author's Response:
It is exactly what I was going for! Thanks so much!
Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.
Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
I just finished reading this chapter, and I noticed that 23,041 people have read this story; but only 276 have reviewed. I feel like a fucking bitch. Your story is MY TOP FAVORITE out of 79 other stories. I think that I have never left a review before. It is very troubling for me to realize my lack of common courtesy. Here you are pouring your head and heart into this story that I LOVE SO MUCH, and I have NEVER COMPLIMENTED you! I am a heartless bitch just like Esme'. I would like to COMMEND you on this story. It is absoultely the SMARTEST take on a D/s realtionship that I have ever read in fanfiction! I thought that The Training School Saga was phenomenal, but I have to say that Be My Master - Head Master? is the HANDS DOWN WINNER! Thank you so much for every single word written in this story and all your other stories. If I was a coach, I would slap your ass and say, "Great Job".
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and thanks for reading.
I have to say I am often guilty of not leaving reviews also but I am working on it so don't feel bad.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
Wow. I had no idea where you were going to take her reasoning, but you sure as hell shocked the crap out of me. Excellent! I never saw that coming at all. I can't believe that Esme cared more about herself than she did her own child. What a royal bitch with a capital B. I wonder how Esme is going to get Bella's support. Bella is very compassionate, but I do not want her to offer Esme any. This is going to kill Edward. He is not as forgiving as his lovely wife. I know that if I were in his shoes that I would be hurt, angry, and disappointed. I do not know how Esme is going to talk her way out of this mess. Fourty years of lies. I am so ready for the next chapter. Thank you for giving us this outake. I think that we were all dying to know what was in that envelope.
Author's Response:
Bella knows without looking the information in the envelope has the potential to destroy the way Edward sees his mother. Bella forgives many things but not seeing Edward or the kids hurt = even she isn't that compassionate.
Thanks for reading - Beth
After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Two lovers, ten prisoners, and one hundred freedmen, part 1
Wow, Jane is freaky crazy. Love this story. Can't wait until everyone get the chance to escape. I am so sorry for your loss. I could not even imagine having to go through that yet. God bless you.
Author's Response:
Thanks :0)
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Rosalie among the Volturi
I was hoping that you would include the entire scene in this chapter because Rosalie's revenge is everything that the brothers deserve and then some.
Thank you for the update! Have a wonderful Holiday Season!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, it's just that the next chapter with the recounting of Rosalie's revenge is as long as this one and I just didn't have time to translate it as I had to update my other stories as well.
A wonderful Holiday Season to you too :0)
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Winds of change
Well, Jasper has amnesia. How convenient for him. He was the protect of Alice when she was little, and now he is the cruel, evil man who captured Alice for the Volturi.
Jacob, Jacob, Jacob....That poor man is so love with Bella it hurts. He most definately is very intuative. He knew that Aro would be the hand to punish Bella, and of course, unfortuantly, he was correct. I also think that Jacob is jealous of Edward's proximity to Bella.
I love the way that Carlisle defended his children eventhough he still thinks that what they do is monsterous. If it was not for Carlisle and his sons thing most definately would be 1000 time worse than it is now. It is so sweet that Carlisle is crushing on Esme. I honestly think that she has the same feelings as well, but she is more concerned for her ladies at this present time.
I love how Edward is furious that they have pulled him away from Bella to tend to Jasper, but they do not know at the time what Aro has done to Bella. I am so glad that he told them what happened to Bella, and why he did not need to be there to help Jasper because he needed to get back to tending to Bella.
Rose is always the spitfire. She threatens everyone. Love her!!
Emmett is completly clueless to what has been happening around him. He takes things so in stride that it is almost scary.
I am so ready to get back to Edward and Bella. I know that Edward loves Bella, but when is Bella going to love Edward back?
Thank you for update. Until next time...
Author's Response:
Bella does love Edward back, but she just feels it doesn't make sense because she's only known him for three days. This is why she didn't want to tell him point blank, but she will eventually admit her feelings to him.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Edward and Bella
I already know what is going to happen next. I actually know how the story is going to end if you keep it exactly the same as you did in the orginal French version.
I took your advice and found the orginal on ff.net and had it translated into french. It was worth it because there is some great stuff coming up. I also love to read this story translated by you because you wrote it. Others do not know what was going on in your mind while writing the orginal French version; therefore, I can read the traslation. but not really feel the emotions behind the words. I know that sounds confusing, but I hope that you understand what I mean.
Can't wait for story to be finished in English. No time frame needed. I will take it when I can get it. ;)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you were able to read the story in French with a translator. Of course I will stay as true as possible to the original version (isn't it fun to enter my mind both in French and English? being fluent in English, I can't stand to read a translation anymore because I can't stand to enter the translator's mind, I want to be in the author's mind, but with me, you have the author's mind whether you read in French or English :0) ) Soooo, I think you mean that since you read the story in "French-translated in English", now you're prepared to read it in English (whenever I post the real thing) because you know what I was thinking all along. Now, I'm not sure about the rest, if you mean that since the translation wasn't perfect, it was hard to see the emotions, or if it has to do with the story in itself, but I'll take it that you're enjoying the ride and that you'll stick with me. I'm happy that you're not pressuring me to finish this translation asap because right now I have no idea when this translation will be complete. It can be anywhere between 6 months and a year. I wish I could tell you I'm busy with RL and I don't have time to work on it much, but the truth is simply that I don't have the motivation to work faster. I hope you can see my point of view: I receive between 10 and 15 comments every time I post an update, and lately it's been less than that. I mean, I love when someone sends me a message that says please update soon I'm you're biggest fan, but I can't work my ass off for just one comment like that. I would need to have at least 50 (which I sometimes get with my stories in French). I can see why Icy posted the first 65 chapters of MotU in less than 6 months, heck, who would make 500 reviewers wait for ages ? But I have to put my priority where the readers review the most, and right now it's on my translation of People like us from English to French, so I work on that every week, and when I have free time I work on Slave. And it's likely that I will continue to do so for a while...
Date: 05 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Deflowering Isabella
Reading yourr English translation of the "deflowering" of Bella was so much better than the translated French version. It was hotter, and I was able to feel the story and the emotions better than in the translated version.
Loved it! Thank you ;)
Author's Response:
I have to laugh at this one because I made a try at google translate just to see how it would sound and it was like WTF? Yeah, I definitely think you will enjoy the real English version better :0)
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Interlude in the good doctor’s apartment, part 2
Tanya is just trying to get Edward's attention away from Bella and back on herself. She is jealous of Bella because she has done the one thing that Tanya was never able to do, win Edward's heart.
I admit that that was a messed up dream, but it was very interesting.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
In the next chapter, we'll see that Edward has been very naive to think his relationship with Bella could be kept a secret.
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Rescue
I am very thankful that you chose to translate this story from French to English. I have always said that I would wait months in between updates because I loved the story so much. Thank you for finishing it instead of abandoning ship.
Author's Response:
Although sometimes I feel very depressed due to the drop in the numbers of reviews I get for that story, I never intended to abandon the translation, and right now I'm typing the epilogue, so it should be posted within 2 weeks.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Tanya's last resort
I have already read the french version, but the english version is so much better! I know what is going to happen, and I can't wait to read in english what Rosalie is going to dish out to those perverts!! Go girl power!
I like the way that Edward will handle Tanya as well.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I never advise any one to use the google translator to read a story, whether it be a French translation or an English one. Google translator just doesn't know how to translate the idioms or the way a sentence is turned and it will sound very weird most of the time... But at least you know there will be a happy ending :0)
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: The end of a reign of terror
I will wait until the cows come home for this story to finish!! It is well worth the wait. Up next, the big escape!!
Oh, we have have to give Rosalie a huge shout out for her wonderful work on the pigs of Volterra.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sticking with me :0)
Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Two lovers, ten prisoners, and one hundred freedmen, part 2
It was just getting to the great part and you cut us off! lol I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Freedom
Well, is that some shitty luck for the ladies? I wonder if Jamees will try to take them back or do more sinister things with them?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue
Thank you for finishing this story. It was wonderfully entertaining in every way, shape, or form. I wish that my French was not so rusty so I could read you other stories.
Author's Response:
I've devoted myself to translation over the past year, so basically most of the stories on my page do exist in English as well, except for my sequel to Hunting Party, Bonjour Paris, which I have yet to translate.
Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe. Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time. What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'? What will the punishment be? Will it break him? Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).
Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
I loved the ending. It was perfect. I could not have asked for a better ending to this story. I am sad that laurent died, but it was his choice.
I do hope that you write something else. Thank you for the update and finishing the story.
Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? Adult language/Violence/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42787
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Unexpected
Riley has always given me the creeps. With all of those agents around, how could they not see what was going on. I figured Edward would be right there watching Bella and Riley like a hawk so he could kick Riley's ass if he saw anything he deemed inappropriate. I do hope that Bella will be smart enough to scream. I know that the music would probably be loud, but it was a slow song. I want to know more about Riley. Really, what is up with the creep?
Thank you for update and I really am excited to find out where your story is going to take us.
Author's Response:
i agree. riley is just a creepoid. EPOV next chapter will clear up some of the confusion of how Riley gets away without them noticing. we will learn more about who Riley really is later in the story. but for now, he's just a sleazy high school teenager. thanks so much for the review!!! ;)
Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19378
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Closure
I am dying to know what makes the situation not o.k. Did Aro lie when he said that he did not know Tanya would be there? Was it all a big act?
Hmmmmmmmmm.......
Thank you for the update. I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chapter.
Tanya is kinda crazy....right?
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105120
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology
I love this story. Thank you for the update.
Based on my experiences, I would suggest the cross as a piece of furniture or even a swing. The whipping bench can be used for pleasure as well as for punishment. Fun times...As far a toys, I love a great sude flogger, the fantastic egg, a vibrating butt plug(small for newbees), a crop, or a cane. Ther options are limitless when it comes to impact toys; even the cat o nine feels fantastic when it is used for pleasure and not punishment.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing
I am ready for more Domward. Is Bella going to eventually going to find out that Edward is a vampire......I guess I will find out soon enough.
Author's Response:
Yes she will. and he will find out what she has been hiding. Thank you so much for reading it!
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring
Another great chapter! I think I am really going to like this story. I love Domward and all of his smutiness. I am very familar with the BDSM world.
This is a moot subject now, but Bella should not have called Edward "Master" until his collar was around her neck. You are requied to call the Dom "Sir" or "Mr. or Ms. blah blah" before that collar is around your neck. If you do, it will result in one painful ass the next day!! I speak from experience.
Again, love the story and this chapter. I have read so many BDSM stories about human Edward and Bella. I love your concept of Domward the "Vampire" and Bella the "human". Eagerly waiting for more.....
Author's Response:
I just figured out where I slipped, I was being so careful up to the email. Thank you so much for pointing that out and I will go back and fix it. When I know something is wrong I always want to correct it. Thank you and always feel free to tell me if I get it wrong. I believe in portraying the lifestyle in a good light, so any pointers you have are always welcomed.
The next chapter si being written as we speak. so once my beta corrects it I will post it. Thank you again.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming
Great Chapter. I can't wait for details of her dream in the next chapter. I think that Edward is already in love with Bella. Vampires mate for life, right? I loved how you made him feel bad for punishing Bella, but atleast he went through with it. I was afraid that he would not finish the punishment. He did get easier on her toward the end when he should have made those last three the hardest. (I again can speak from experience) Edward is different from my Master because he can hear Bella's thoughts as he is punishing her. I think that that made the punishment situation comletely different than what would happen in the real worls. Again, thank you for a another wonderful chapter, and I cannot wait for the next. Happy writing.
Author's Response:
I can not thank you enough for such a great review. And for understanding what I was trying to convey in her punishment. It should have been rougher, but it's one thing to hear someone say ouch and another to see their pain inside your mind. I felt he had to finish the punishment, if he was truly trying teach her.
As for mating for life? Well there are somethings that never change. But sshhuusshh, dont tell Edward that he is not an incubus, he hasn't realized that yet! But we will all be there when he does.
Thank you for speaking from experience and as always I would love to hear about anything you think I should be putting in! I guess I would be called an interactive writer so everything my fans suggest is taken seriously and if it fits in the storyline I am more than happy to put it in.
Next chapter is already done and is being corrected, as soon as I get it back I will post it! Happy reading!
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer
I am so pissed at Esme and Carmen. How could they believe one word that would come out of Tanya's "the slut" mouth? Esme needs to get down on her hands and knees and beg for Edward's forgiveness. What kind of mother would allow a women to rape her son, let alone help her complete the task. Esme might have thought that she was doing the right thing, but she was totally wrong. Hell, she should have raped Edward herself!!!!
Thank you for update. Ready for another one. Love the lap dance and can't wait for the poll dancing.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas
Another great chapter. I am curious as to what Jasper might find.
What is up with Bella's mind stopping mid thought? Is her hidden power starting to manifest, or is there really not a thing she is thinking?
Thank you...can't wait to read more...Have a wonderful Holiday season.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom
I am so happy that Edward told Bella that he loved her, and that he wanted a D/s relationship as well as a vanilla one. I am also so glad that Bella agreed.
Edward finally saw into Bella's mind without any cut offs. If the outtake is what he saw, then I agree that it is very informative!
Can Bella hear Edward in her mind? The way that it was 't written seemed like she could, but I am not sure. Maybe they were just thinking the same thing?
I can't wait to see what our favorite couple goes through next...Also I am dying for an update to The Third Wife.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Well, I loved hearing Bella's side of her story. I am making an assumption here so bear with me please. This is what Edward heard in the chapter before?
I love your stories. I will admit that sometimes I read and not review, but that is only when I read on my iphone. It just will not let me leave a review. I can write one using my phone on fanfiction. It is wierd.
Anyway, please try to get out of the slump you find yourself in. There are many people who love your stories. I am sorry that they read and do not review, but atleast they are reading. I know that is no consolation, but I think you are a very imaginative, clever, and talented. ;)
Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together? All-Human
Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!
Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards. See banners below.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Creme Eggs & Welcome Distractions
I hope that the conversation that Edward and Charlie had included Edward's permission to marry Bella. I think that it is time that this couple got married and consumated their relationship. What do you think?
I know that it is going to be hard for both Bella and Edward to be away from one another. I just pray that they do make it through the distance.
Love this story, and thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
hmm...I think you will be pleasantly surprised when he does propose. I've got the entire proposal outlined and written....I ADORE THE WAY HE DOES IT ... but that's all i can say without giving too much away....sorry...suffice it to say that it's PERFECT for Bella. Makes me all gooey inside thinking about it. lol. Thanks!
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances
Another great update. I loved the belly dancing for Edward. Of course we expect Rose to belly dance for Emmett in the nude. Bella needs to lose the rest of he insecurity. When is going to realize that there is no way Edward would leave her again...unless she cheated...
I can't wait for her surprise trip. I so want them to get engaged while she is over there.
I love your wordiness, but I would love to get to surprise trip soon...please.
Author's Response:
I'm trying....I promise...just a few minor events need to happen before the trip...who knows...maybe I can cover them in one chap...I'll try. Thanks!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Unsolicited Advice & Airline Wings
Another great chapter. Thank you. There is nothing like a slow burn ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts
I can't wait for Bella to surprise Edward in England. I love the way you have written you EDward and Bella. They are so different than the books with the exception of overprotectiveness and money on Edward's part.
How are they going to make it a month?
As always, another great chapter. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
i'm looking forward to England also. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen
Thank you for the update. I am not sure what is going to happen, but I think that Alice convinced Edward to propose to Bella earlier than planned???
Patiently waiting for new chapter of LOV and V&V.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing..the next chap is up now. enjoy!
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights
Yea!!! I knew that Alice convinced Edward to push up his proposal date!!! I am so excited to see what he says and how Bella reacts.
Ready for the next chapter....Write. Please write.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Alice is involved. Thanks!
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds
Yeah!!! I knew that he was going to ask her. The way that he proposed was so sweet and thoughtful. I can't believe that he bought Tolken's house for Bella. I love Gordan myself, and I love that you included him in the proposal. I think the end was perfect. It was sweet and romantic not lust driven and cheap.
I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't wait until LRM catches up with V&V.
Love stories!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for everything you said. Remember Gordon wants to attend the wedding. That should be fun. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge
As always loved every minute of chapter. I do have to admit the way you decided to exact revenge on Edward was pure genious! I would never have thought of that on my own. I wish I had a Rose.
I am trying to figure out who is sending the flowers. You said that it will not be "addressed" until later in the story. Is there anyway that you could throw in a hidden clue????
I love this story. Thank you for the update. I will not be mad for the cliffy if you get the next chapter out ASAP!!! :)
Author's Response:
i will try! no hints though...i just can't do it. sorry. working on a little bit of LRM..then back to V&V. Thanks so much!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations
Thank you for the update.
I am pissed at Edward for pushing Bella away. She was trying to be supportive and he treated her like $hit. Did he forget that she has self esteem issues? His action on that porch will set her back in therapy.
O.K. are you going to keep throwing #hit at them the entire time? Now this false pregnancy rumor has them all messed up. Since she is 8 months pregnant, it will not take forever to prove that he is not the father. All it will take is a DNA test. Crap they can do them very early in the pregnancy now! With Edward's status, a lawyer or a judge could force the witch for a mandatory paternity test. I know that this is true. Plus we are not even into the stalker yet. What else are you going to throw at them to ruin their relationship?
I do not mean to come off as a bitch, but I am really passionate and involved in this story. It just ticks me off. I guess that is a good thing. You are a fantastic writer in the fanfiction world if you can get that kind of response from me.
Author's Response:
a little drama keeps it interesting and i don't want to give away the story BUT you know them well enough by now... I'm sure the way they handle this won't be a surprise. We'll find out about the pregnant chick and her reasons in the next chapter. Suffice it to say, B & E are strong. have faith.
This is the first time since the Tanya debacle that Edward's been truly tested...so far he fails... I will say that the road to the wedding won't be without a little more drama, but we will get there.
i'm glad you're passionate...it makes me so grateful that readers appreciate all my hard work. I get mad at the characters myself...just like sometimes I'm appalled at Emmett's behavior...and I FREAKING WROTE IT! lol. Take care, and stay passionate.
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox
I am glad that Edward is going to hire a privte eye to dig into that lying witches past. I am glad that they are going to take her to civil court about this issue. I know it will take a court order for the DNA test, but in real life, you can have a DNA test before the baby is born. I am trying to ignore everything I know as a biological science teacher and go with the flow, but it is so so so hard.
Thank you for the update. Edward is wound so tight that he is ging to have a heart attak at the age of 24. Bella is right about Edward needing to talk to a professional before the wedding.
Thank you for the update, and I am so happy that LRM will be caught up with V&V. I know that you have been working very hard to get the readers to this point.
Author's Response:
If it wasn;t so close to the due date...they probably would have pushed for an earlier test...but as it turns out we are literally only days from delivery. Next chap or 2 will resolve a lot of this. poor Edward...he really is on the edge somewhat. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags
Wow, I never thought we would hear from the ranger again. He wanted to give payback to Bella and Geri for ruining his career. He did that to himself.
I am so proud of Bella for fighting back. I thought at first she was going to just give up, but then she remembered everyone who loves and cares about her and found the will to fight. I am thankful for the boots with heels that Rose gave her. Heels can be very dangerous when used with enough force. I am glad that Bella got into the fetal position on the floor boards when the car was crashing through the forest. Again, I am so proud of her for fighting back. I do not know if getting out of the car was the best decision, but at least she was able to find a place in the forest where she could call 911.
Edward is going to flip his shit when he finds out exactly what happened. I am sure that he is going to throw himself a pity party and blame himself for the incident. He always blames himself, and 98 times out of 100 Bella is the one to blame. I love Bella, but she really is very naive (sheltered). I understand why she is the way she is, but can we get her to make smarter decisions?
Thank you for the update. I love how you write your cliffies. You have them resolved in the next chapter unlike other authors who string it out over five chapters.
Author's Response:
i don't like long cliffies...especially in fanfic because you can't sneak ahead (like I do when reading a book--yeah i'm a little cheater) to make sure everything turns out okay. If I didn't know E was coming back whilst reading New Moon, I would have bitten my nails down to the nub. lol. Bella is getting better...this is all about how they are both changing and growing into the people they were meant to be...takes a while to catch up.
Thanks!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time
very nice...can't wait to find out about prank...really looking forward to Bella and Edward's wedding and honeymoon ;)
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video
I really enjoyed Emmett and Rose's wedding, and I really can't wait to see what you do with Bella and Edward's wedding.
Why is/was James so hell bent on interviewing Jeffrey Dryden? Does he hate Bella that much. She did not want to have sex with him so go after the person who killed her mother and almost killed her. I want something really bad to happen to Victor James. A paps car running him off of the road and into a tree. I know that is so un Christian of me, but I despise him so much. What goes around comes around. Please let him meet his fate.
Thank you for the update. I have family that lives around the same area and had to deal with the quake and hurricane as well. God bless!
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 83: Good Friends & Fireside Picnics
Either Shane really wants a real relationship with Bella, or he is gay? Since you are saying that there will be drama in the next chapter, I believe that my assumption of Shane liking Bella too much is correct. I am sure that tablods will make the situation esculate.
Thank you for the update. I was really worried that Edward was not working late and was just avoiding Bella because he was jealous of Shane. Maybe he was ignoring her or maybe he was working as he said. I guess we will never know.
Author's Response:
France 1830
After the betrayal and death of his wife, Englishman Edward Cullen is bitter by love. But when he meets a tradesmen's daughter who was everything his late wife wasn't, Edward finds himself giving his heart to a woman who he, in the past, would deem improper. With duties of society and burdens of the past pushing them in all directions, will the two lovers be able to give themselves everything their hearts desire?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69979 Read Count: 47177
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I so love where this story could go. I started to read it based on a reccomedation by one of my favorite authors, peoplelikeus. I have to agree with Michelle about the banner. It is fabulous, and it does entice one to take a chance and read story. Again, love it. Patiently waiting for more.
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Another great chapter. Thank you for the quick update :)
Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
Please tell me that this new revelation about Tanya will not make Edward regret marrying Bella? Edward was not meant to be with Tanya. He was meant to be with Bella, right? If I am not mistaken, Edward made the comment that he never felt the way that he feels about Bella with Pre-pregnant Tanya?
I wonder who was shot? I guess we will find out next chapter.
I would really love a HEA. I can't believe that it has come to an end as well. It went so fast.
Thank you
Author's Response:
Edward had a traditonal marriage with Tanya and your right, the way he felt for Tanya could never compare to what he feels for Bella. He could never regret marrying Bella because he loves her with his heart and soul. He is just able to let go of the hurt and the anger that he felt for Tanya.
One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Love the story and where it might be headed. I just do not understand why Bella is bitchy with Edward? How long is it going to take Bella to get her head out of her ass?
Again, thank you for chapter. Patiently waiting for another.
Author's Response:
Because Edward was acting like a Jeaslous fool and Bella's been alone, with the exception of Jasper, for three hundred years:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Wow, I am proud of Edward! Go Edward! You take charge of Bella. Thank you for the update. I am so ready to find out who or what is the "power" that Bella feels is coming to Forks. Please update soon so we can all find out how Bella takes the kiss from Edward.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yeah, they finally made love. I think it was very romantic and fuckhot. I am curious to see who shows up on the Cullen's side of the fight with Aro.
Thank you for the update. How long do you intend on the story being?
Author's Response:
I have through Chapter 21 done and there will be three more. SO not long.
EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.
Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Tying Up Loose Ends
I can't wait to see what type of reaction Bella is going to have when Edward tells her about the encounter and what he learned about Meghan. I am sure that Bella will feel sorry for her and tell Edward that he did the right thing by forgiving her. After all, He would not be with Bella if everyting worked out with Meghan. I am upset that James gave her HIV along with I am sure countless others. I am sure glad that Edward did not do anything sexual with her.
I can't wait for the next V&V chapter. Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
me too. She was young and very stupid...but doesn't deserve this. Thanks!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 54: A Love Worth Waiting For
Loved this from his point of view. I can't wait to see where they go on their honeymoon.
Thamk you for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. as you can see, it's taken me forever to catch up with reviews. there was a glitch that kept my responses from appearing...but i finally figured out how to get around that. I've started writing the sequel and the beta says the first chapter will be back to me by Tuesday.
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389573
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING
THANK YOU FOR THE CLUE TO BEB ENGRAVING ON THE BRACELET
BROWN EYED BEAUTY
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Many people missed and didn't figure it out yet. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
Story war reccomendedby peoplelikeus's beta. I love where this is going. I appreciate the background information and character development, but Bella is kinda raking on my nerves right now.( i know that she is scared that people will think that there is something wrong with her)
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
Oh, I so ready for Edward to realize that his "pet" is the one he wants the most, Bella. How long are we going to have to wait for their scene to happen? I am very, very patiently waiting.
Damn, Tanya is a psycho or more like a sociopath.
Thank you for the update. I am always to excited when I see the email letting me know that their is a new chapter for me to read. I am just like Emmett on Christmas morning.
Author's Response:
Lol! We'll be getting soon, I promise! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
What a great way to ring in the new year! Drinking wine amongst friends and reading this chappie on phone! I love it. That was priceless. I am proud of Bella for dishing it out to Leah. That super bitch deserves it. Love Seth. Cute...Back to party...Happy New Year and thank for update.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Seth is such a cutie! I'm so glad that you loved it, I was really nervous about getting chewed out in reviews because didn't bring the conversation to this chapter. I really, really wanted to, but it would have been too long. The characters from this chapter at some point will play a role in Bella's life so I wanted to get there introduction out of the way, plus let the readers know that unfortunately we haven't seen the last of Jacob Black. Just a little secret, I'm going to my best to get the next one up in a couple of days. Reviews like yours make me eager to write! Thanks for taking the time to read and review! Laterzzz:) Happy New Year! Enjoy your party and drink responsibly! Be Safe and see you next year! Krazi & Mojo xoxo
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
Loved the chapter. Edward makes me wet in his Dom personna ;) I am glad that Edward has a feeling that he knows the female on the line. I wonder if Bella felt that was too?
Is Bella going to be at the Cullen's party since she left her dad's house early? Will Edward learn about Bella's annulment before he meets her in the playroom at the club?
I can't wait to see how these two react when they fugure out each others true identities. I know that Tanya is crazy as all get out and just waiting to mess with Edward and Bella.
Thank you for update. Can't wait for next one. Would love to know the answers to my questions though.....
Author's Response:
Ha ha! Now that´s not fair, if I answer all those questions, you would know too much! And as they say, ¨if I tell you, then I´d have to kill you!¨ Lol! Soon, you´ll get your answers, I promis! Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
I am so glad that you gave us Edward's side of the situation. I was going crazy wondering what was going through his mind. I am glad that he knew Bella good enough to act like a Dom to get answers from her. Even then, he still had a hard time getting the information out of her. Bella needs to realize that she has nothing to be embarassed about when it comes to Jacob.
I am wondering how Edward will handle the three guilty people at the table and what else he may say or do to Alice. She knew the shit was going to fly, but I do not think that she realized Edward would blow up the way he did.
I am glad that Jasper came in and talked some sense into Edward. I just wish that Alice or Jasper would have told him the truth about Bella's marriage when he asked. They betrayed both Edward's and Bella's trust with the mystery submissive lie. Why stay loyal to Bella on the marriage issue.
I do wonder what Edward will do now that he found out Bella's virgin status secret??
Please tell me that since they both have loved each other for years that a real relationship will come out of this as well as a D/s relationship? Pretty please. I want them to declare their love for one another before anything physical happens.
Thank you for not giving up on this story. It is fabulous. I also love all the pictures that you insert into the chapter. Can't wait to see what is next for the two.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and
I am glad that you are settling in nicely at your new job and trying to get back into the flow. I know how hard it is to start working after you have not done it in a while. It take alot of adjustment.
HOT, HOT, HOT! I need a new pair of panties just from reading that chapter.
I do not understand why Bella did not say anything back? I am sure she was shell shocked, but come on. Leaving us hanging like that is so mean. ;)
I thought that Edward was going to tell Bella that he had been in love with her for years. I read the chapter twice, and he only said that he loved her, not how long he had loved her. I thought she would say something more to him as well, but all we heard was "it was always you". I do not even think that he picked up on that tidbit.
Are they ever going to admit to one another that each of them coveted the other for years?
I am glad that they are moving into a relationship mode, but they really need to do some more talking and keep their hands to themselves while they talk.
I can't wait to see what you have for us next time. I do not want this review to come off as bitchy because I love this story, but I was just disappointed that they did not tell one another how long they have wanted each other for many years. Again, love the story and can't wait to see what comes next.
By the way, I love the pictures. They are better than what my mind can come up with. Who would have a problem with the pictures...wierd
Author's Response:
“Isabella, I invited you here for a reason, and it wasn´t as a way to get rid of you; quite the opposite actually.” I let out a long breath that I didn´t know I was holding. “I´ve thought of nothing but you, since the day I watched you and Alice lying by the pool all those years ago.” Remembering Isabella´s translucent skin glowing in the Illinois sunshine had my cock straining against my pants. He did mention it in passing, but they'll definitely be talking more in the next chapter! Thanks for the review, and I fixed the missing pics and added more! Krazi xoxo
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...
I read this on my iphone and it will not let me leave reviews so I logged online so I could leave a review.
I am glad that they both finally admitted that they loved one another. I think that Edward went farther and said that he had been in love with Bella for eight years while Bella only said five years in her head? Maybe I need to read chapter again.
The entire chapter was perfect. I love that they have so much in common and can have flowing conversations. I do see how Edward is trying to separate RL with D/s. I agree with the name change. It really is the easiest. I love that they are going to go to Forks to see Seth. I especially love the fact that Bella is free from the man whore Jake.
I understand where both of them are coming from with the living together. Edward knows what he wants, and he asks for it. Bella is hesitant because they really do not know each other that well. How about a compromise of her living in the sub room and not in his bedroom. She is going to have to stay there several nights a week anyway so why not? I do love the fact that Edward wants to do anything to make the dog love him. They do say that if the dog loves the boyfriend then it is a shoe in. ;)
Date: 13 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…
I can't believe that you cut us off there. I wanted more. I did not think that you would bring in a stalker who I assume is James. It may not be, but there were a few subtile clues. Well, we have stalker Tanya so why not stalker James.
Happy Birthday!
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance
Well Ladies, that was one hell of a cliffy.
Let's us name the important characters that were accounted for before the gun shot: Edward, Bella, Emmett, Rose, and Esme
The characters that were not accounted for: Carlisle, Angela, Laurent, and Eric
If Bella said that she was sorry to Edward at what she saw, then it should be Carlisle, but it could possibly be Angela. I am thinking if it was Angela that Bella would have been more upset, but you know what they say about making assumptions.
Now, I have no idea who could have shot the gun, or if anyone was shot at.
Author's Response:
hahahah LOVE THIS REVIEW.........U accounted for everyone...hahah...But who and where was everyone....its almost like clue...it was esme with the knife in the library haahha.hope u dont have to wait long......
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2
That was great. I am so glad that they were able to be together for Christmas.
Is Laurent harrassing Bella? (He is the only one I know who has an accent)
Who is harrassing Edward? (no mention of accent in voice on Edward's end)
What is the status of Bella's marriage? I know that she asked for a divorce, and he is in jail.
Angela needs to realize that Edward would give up every penny he has to leave her. Not leave her for Bella, but leave her period! She is one psycho!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
We are also glad they got to be together for Christmas!
Is it Laurent??? I would tell ya but then DLIR would kill me. So sorry I can't :( But I do know who has been calling Edward! But there again I can't tell guess why??? Yep you guessed it DLIR will kill me! She's mean like that LOL JK
Thank you for your awesome review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl
Well, I guess I am not that great a clue. I would have never come up with Esme in street with the gun committing suicide.
That was a great chapter. Now, Carlisle went into that house to get Angela, right? He already new that Edward was not their and went somewhere else?
I hope you save Carlisle. Esme should be the only one who dies in this story.
Thank you for the update, and I would love to see Rose's POV please.
Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale
Well, I agree with Rose. Bella should have been there for Edward first and Angela second.
I knew it was Carlisle that was shot. Yes, he did save Rose, but if would not have been where he was, he probably would not have gotten shot.
Now I can play Devil's Advocate for Bella's behavior. Angela and Bella had been through some pretty heavy shit together for God knows how long. Beaten and tortured. They both helped each other. One would distract while the other was able to get away with something small that would help them in the long run.
I really hope that Edward does not stay mad at Bella for too long. Shit, he was going to propose and he did not get the chance because Bella was kidnapped! Can you ever let these two star crossed lovers a break? I mean, like come on!!
Y'all should be hiding...I am from the south, and we like our guns....kidding
Author's Response:
hahahaha i soooooooooooo laughed out loud with the south comment..........hahah ohhhh guns lol
we hope u enjoy where we bring our two love birds next
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow
They both were wrong in how they acted.
I am very proud of Alice for standing up for Bella when she does not even know her. She pegged Bella correctly just from what Edward told her about her character.
Can't wait for part 2.
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2
I am still on the fence when it comes to Team Edward or Team Bella in concern to his death. On one hand, I think that Bella comforting Angela was the right thing to do because if it wasn't for Angela, Edward might have lost Bella in the big picture. Also, Angela and Bella went through something very tramatizing together and stuff like that always brings people together.
On the other hand, I think Bella was cold and callous that she went to Angela instead of the love of her life, Edward, to comfort her about Esme's death. Edward should have been in forefront of her mind. Hell, he is the one who saved her from Eric after all.
She was damned either way she chose. There are many arguements that can be made for both sides, but no matter how she chose someone was going to get hurt.
I really can't wait to read her POV and she what she was thinking. I want to know if she ever felt bad about chosing Angela over Edward. I know her brain works differently so the next chapter should be a pretty good read.
Thank you for two fabulous updates in two days. All your readers greatly appreciate it.
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 32: A Good Lawyer
That was evil to leave it right there! I thought that we would get an answer at least,
Thank you for the update
Author's Response:
You will next chap. It will be up soon.
Thank you so much for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 33: I was his. Always and Forever.
That was very sweet.
I can't wait for Edward's POV of wedding, their first night in the new log cabin, and the honeymoon.
I did love the strip club stuff, but I wish that you would have let Bella show Tanya a thing or two. Also, did she never notice that the tie she bought him was gone leading to the wedding?
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
hahahah there has been a few requests for the tanya brawl...maybe we will see an out take for that...hahah......now a honeymoon...........rawrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Edward leaves Forks and Bella behind after the incident with Tyler's van. Now, five years later, he finally returns to his family and the Pacific Northwest. While picking up his latest Swedish automobile, he is confronted by a very familiar scent. Will Edward be able to fight the pull his singer has on him a second time? Or will he stick around long enough to find out What Drives Her?
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~ What Drives Her has been nominated by you!! ~
-Nominated in the Sunflower Awards for "Best Vampire Story".
-Nominated for a Faithful Shipper Award for "Best Alternate Universe/Canon Story"! (Update: TKegl got the well-deserved win for her story, "Beyond Time". I highly recommend reading it, if you haven't already!)
-Nominated for a Vampie for "Best AU Story" in the Newborn Round, Winter 2011.
-Nominated for a Shimmer Essence Award for "Best Dazzled Moment", in the 2010 Snowflake Quarter.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 258430 Read Count: 27261
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Happy
I just found this story and I love it so far. Maybe I missed this while I was reading or it was implied.......
Is Bella still a virgin at the age of 22, or did she have sex with Jake?
Is Edward sill a virgin?
Can't wait until I am caught up with all 25 chapters :)
Author's Response:
LOL, these sorts of questions make me giggle, but I wonder the same thing when I read other people's stories. So, this topic will be brought up between B & E very soon. I kind of hate to spoil it, but my Bella & Edward are meant to be as close to canon as possible, so you might be able to guess the answer. ;-) If it's really bugging you not to know, PM me.
Thx! Ginnie
PS- Questions about B's relationship with Jake can be answered in one of the outtakes available on my profile! :-)
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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268824
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
I am glad that she went to ask Renee questions. It was a very emotional chapter. I wish she would have told them about the dream.
Thank you for the update and can't wait until the next one.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
I wonder what happened to Bella? She was with Edward last chapter and she was upset but otherwise unharmed.
Author's Response:
reread the end of chapter 36, where she and Edward are hit by an eighteen wheeler.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
I should have known that the parents would have blamed Edward for the accident. He did not do anything wrong. It was not his fault. It was the 18 wheeler's fault.
I am glad that throught this tragedy that the families have finally come together to become one large confusing family. I am also glad that Bella is alive as well as Edward.
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.
Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.
L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie
Tkegl...Thank you!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)
Wow, that was one hell of a chapter. I do not know what to comment on first.
Edward is at the cabin trying to not change, but he is not winning the battle? He wants Bella, but at the same time he hates her because she is human?
Who would have guessed that you would throw in a twist that garlic harmed your vampires? Fantastic curve....
Did they hurt Emmett? Will Jasper be able to fight of the change? Where the hell are Carlsle and Esme? Will Carlisle heal from the garlic water? Why are these orginals coming for the Cullen's?
Too many questions to ask. I could keep going, but I will stop.
Author's Response:
Hiya *waves*
Hopefully all of your questions will be answered soon.
Thing is with Edward is that he's a bit "different." You'll see soon. And Carlisle and Esme are at their mansion in Forks.
Thanks so much! And thanks for reading!!! =)
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk
April Fool's Day
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
We will have the actual chapter posted later today or Thursday since we have 98.9% complete =)
Date: 10 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)
We still do not know if it was Bella who Emmett killed?
Thank you for working so hard to get this out to us. I really enjoyed the chapter. It would be nice if I could keep on reading like a book, but if this was a book, I could not ask questions of the author and receive answers ;)
Author's Response:
yes you do know. that was not bella who was killed. edward had her lol awwwwwwwwwwwww thank you1
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Urge
That was worth the wait. It is so rare to see Jasper as the villian. I love it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm liking Jasper as the villian *grins*
Thanks again,
xoxo
Jells
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)
I am so confused. Thank you for the chapter, but please hurry with the next one.
Author's Response:
You will be confused no more!!!!! We're coming with the chapter in a few hours.
He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself? AH/AU
A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Edward has fucked up royally this time.
I can't believe that he fucked Tanya while he was dating Bella. If that is the way he shows his love, I would not want to have anything to do with him.
He has ruined Bella publically and most importantly emotionally. I do not think that she can come back from what Edward said. The sad thing was that what he said about his relationship with Bella was partly true. He really did feel that he was her arm candy and not the big bad rock star "Edward Cullen".
How many times did Edward fuck Tanya? Was it just a one night thing or was it an ongoing affair? When Bella finds out about the two of them, she will really spiral out of control more than she already has.
Thank you for the update, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :) It was just a one-time, drunken mistake. (Not that it makes it excusable or that it will matter to Bella any less)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I am so glad that neither one of them were hurt badly. I should have known that Edward would take the fall for the accident if it was not that serious. I guess that it is to early in the story for a horrible accident to hurt one of them.
Damn police! Edward was about to come clean about Tanya, and they had to come in a mess it up. When Bella finds out about Tanya, Edward is going to lose her. Her dream where he was on his knees holding onto her shirt and she was looking at him with disgust in her eyes as the door closes is forshadowing. We also know that Bella will turn to Jacob when Edward breaks her heart.
I really would love for someone to kick Edward in the nads for all the shit he had done to screw Bella and himself.
Boy, these two "kids" sure have messed up big time. I hope that one day that they can find a way to forgive each other and have their happily ever after.
Thank you for update..Waiting to see what is in store next for our two star crossed lovers.
Author's Response:
"Star crossed lovers" - I love that you called them that. It has a double meaning for them too :)
I'm actually nervous to write the next two chapters...I gave everyone (including myself) a glimmer of hope to see Edward rise to the occassion and do such a selfless act out of love for Bella. But he still hasn't learned from his mistakes. I feel like each chapter is a different side to bipolar Edward ;)