Reviews by judyblue95
Summary: Past Featured Story

ws

Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532896
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Love and Happiness

What a hoot! Bella taking down the bitch that hit on Edward! I love it! You're in the groove here with this chapter....it did just flow!  I love this story!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Members Only

Will we ever know if Esme killed herself?  Does it matter?  I'm sorry to see Nanny go. I liked her feisty self!  Will Bella ever seek out her birth father?  Geez I'm full of questions today.  I hate to see her estranged from Emmett but don't blame her. That's a helluva secret to keep for 11 years!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

What happened at the sitdown with Ronnie? Is that in the next chapter? I wonder if Carlisle is really fallling this time. He never loved Esme or Anthony's mother really, so maybe there's a first time for him at almost 40....I never cease to love E and B's sex scenes! From the first chapter of QS they have always been so hot!  Love this epic story!  Will there be a part 3 after you finish this one? Any chance of you getting QS published or will you have to give up too much to do so?  I was VERY disappointed with the published version of EP.  I don't want that to happen to you, but you deserve money for your work, should you ever decide to go for that.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Trick or Treat Part Two

I love this chapter!  It tugs at my heart strings.  For Bella to gain a loving father at this time of her life is just a godsend!  And Aro wanting to date her sister!  That's going to be both strange and fun, I think.  Thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: The Light

wow. who would have thought that Carlisle could do the right thing, the unselfish thing, the honorable thing? not me!  I am blown away by his restraint!  Maybe he does love her....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Fork Me

dads and kids night out! so cute! that little Ant is learning fast! pretending to be lost so he can bring a woman back to dad....yikes!  A Sonny POV would be interesting....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: The Cupid Shuffle Part One

Why was Bella mad at Alex?  Just a day in the life of these colorful characters....I love it and this story....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: The Cupid Shuffle Part Two

Alex and Carlisle...has the leopard changed his spots? They both seem besotted so maybe it will work. I like Alex. Bella puking on the bathroom floor and Aro slipping and landing in it.....2 of my favorite thing in this chapter!  Mauro better watch himself or he will end up clipped....Lexi I love these Storm tales of yours. Did I say that I loved them more that EP?  That's saying something cuz I loved EP.  Is a pdf of QS available for download yet?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: That Thing You Do

Sonny and Katie are the cutest thing ever!  She wants to touch his penis and he wants to see her little rosebuds.....I love all this family stuff. Sonny's POV was very entertaining. He's 12 goin on 17...knows how to play the adults already but still such a little boy.  I am in love with your writing!

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Thanksgiving

I always remember you say no cheating and a HEA.  That's one of the reasons that I like your stories so much. That and the epic literery qualities to each of them that I have read.  So no, I never thought Edward was interested in Alex. I do believe he is jealous of the time she spends with Bella....and really hope Carlisle can be redeemed by true love. Bella meeting her birth father is a real deal too...I understand that she's not used to having parents who care but maybe that will change.  and, lastly, if Aro can't have his MC, then maybe he can have her look-alike half sister....oh and Sonny's boner was just too cute!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: End of the Day

Is there a coup coming on? I don't think you'll kill off Edward, but Carlisle or Aro might not be safe.....I truly do love their family life. Sonny will be trouble. After I finish this, I am going to read QS again. I just rec'd it to a friend and she loves it!  Is it available for download yet? I would love to own my very own copy....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

black guys in the drive-by car, huh? are they thinking it was Laurent? Lloyd is a dead man walking, I think.  Mauro? he needs to go, but isn't a made man protected?  This chapter scared me. Thank God Sunny will be OK.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

Is it DJ that Edward doesn't want to tell Bella about? that's some grusome image of that kid biting the stairs before his head got kicked in....I may need to stop here and read more tomorrow....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Riders of the Storm Part One

This is their worst fight ever. I do have faith in you, but this shit is bad.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Riders of the Storm Part Two

I'm glad she didn't kill him. It may have changed her for the worse. Edward is sending her away, sending her and Sonny away.  You keep saying to trust you.....this shit is bad! How will you get them out of this one?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Days Like This

Are they really OK? It seems with every fight, every arguement, they get a little further apart. Say it isn't so. Please tell me it's my imagination, my stuff. I love this story so much. It contains real emotions, real feelings. I feel it in my gut.  You say to trust you. I'm trying....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

I like this chapter much better. Was the Skip too lenient with Lou? Maybe, but if Lou keeps on being like that, he won't live long....Love the family stuff....sorry to see this story end, but then maybe you can move onto finishing other stories, huh?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Day-to-Day

It's been a while since they had sex like that. I missed it...SSDD for Edward what with Jersey and the Albanians....guess that shit never ends. Love the stuff with Sonny and Damion.....guess we're nearly finished here?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

What a family!  I love this story and will be sad to see it end.  Love that Bella finally unloaded on Lauren. I mean, what does Edward always do when he thinks someone is flirting with Bella? Turnabout is fair plan and Lauren has had that coming for a while now.  I also love how hot it makes Edward to see Bella get violent!  Straight to the bathroom and hard as a rock!  Oh mama....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

did Aro and Lau really get back together? is that what I read? hmmmm...i love the end-of-the-day family stuff. seems like an ordinary family....and I loved your little vocal thing you gave us as a preview of this chapter. you sound like you're one of them! I mean that in the nicest, most complimentary way! I know this is winding down, almost done until the future jump....these 2, QS and this one, are arguably my favorite fics so far. I mean I love CaraNo's stuff too, and yours just as much. You guys always have a story or 2 on my currently reading list.  Just thanks! I'm an old perv who loves Rob and the best of fan fic. What can I say.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I don't know what to say!  I'm stunned!  Damion is one sexy little motherfucker!  I'm kind of glad he didn't get to Maggie, but then again I remember being 15 and wanting all that from a boy or a man.....wow.  you took me back to my youth.  if some older guy who was that beautiful lived on my street, I would have been going after that big time!  I guess I'm partial to the crazy ones.....great chapter!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapel Bells

wow. that was interesting for a last chapter....kind of like, just another day in the life of the Cullens....and I guess that would be exactly a fitting ending to this tale. It's like we don't need a dramatic ending to close out their lives because life goes on just like this for them each and every day.  I really really really love these 2 stories, QS and this one. From the first chapter of QS to the last in this time frame, I have enjoyed every minute, every word. it feels like real life with it's messes, its ups and downs, instead of some tied up in a neat package story.  Thanks for the ride. I look forward to the future takes...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Yeah, this is good!  Kylie is a spoiled brat, but then we knew that was going to happen, at least I did, her being the only girl and the youngest....I hope what mama told her sinks in.  She should hold out for true love!  Sonny is headed to where his father is, it looks like....it will be good to see each of their POVs....Is Carlisle reverting to his old ways?  I guess you'll tell us when you're ready.  I'm already loving this future take on everyone.  As always, you don't disappoint me!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

so little Dame is beating Sonny at his own game....glad to see it!  wonder what will happen at the sit down?  B and E don't know Dame is in the life. What will they think about that?  So much happening in this chapter.  I need to read it again...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Oh I love this chapter!!  Kylie finally realizes who she really loves!  Her best friend... and little Peto, Gio the former nerd!!  I'm glad she won't marry that cheating bastard Joe.  They were right!  He just wanted he to move up in the organization.   I need to go back and read chapter 61 again. I think I was sleeping through half of it....LOL!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

I really like how you're wrapping up this story, this EPIC tale that I have loved for 2 stories now.....I'm telling you, I read every mafia fic I can find and there are none I have loved more than this one.  Edward has aged beautifully in looks and in wisdom.  I really love he and Bella's love and fidelity for each other.  That is the heart of the story.  This POV just oozes with his Edwardness....is that a word?  Thanks for giving us your talent and creativity!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

what the hell happened to Damion? He was this sweet, sensitive little boy and now he's turned into a cold blooded killer and a liar and manipulator!  Wow! This was an intriguing chapter with lots of insight into this lost little boy/man. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

loved this chapter!  family interactions portrayed quite well, with a healthy dose of realism.  i'm rooting for Kylie and Peto....18 is an age where you feel grown up but really don't know shit!  I want inside Edward's head about all this and more in the next chapter.....you write this wonderful tale for as long as you like and I will read it all!!

Summary:

daw

All Bella is looking for is a quick drink after a bad day at work, but when she runs into Edward Cullen--her high school crush--she decides to play a game with him. If she can keep herself from falling for him, she can walk away and leave him wanting more.  But Bella might find that losing the game is the best thing that ever happened to her...

Rated for lemons/language.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6739 Read Count: 2234
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2011 Updated: 13 Nov 2011
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Drinks After Work

Today is a day of one shots.....stories that I never took the time to  read. I chose yours because, well just because!   I loved this one too!  The longing by both of them, the wonderfully explicit sex, the hiding and running.....all make for such delicious drama.  If you had the time and/or inclination, this would make a lovely expanded story....but you've moved onward and upward. That's ok. I will read it all, in time...

Summary:

eb


A free-spirited archaeologist and a shy, absent-minded genius find a 500 year old vampire who thinks she's a goddess. They trying to sneak back to the US, teach her about the modern world, and trying very, very hard not to fall in love with the Dark Goddess. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 149098 Read Count: 50406
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 12 May 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm reading this version, thanks you your input. I started with the last chapter, 8.  I'm glad you wrote this as a poly story. I think it was the more loving thing to do. Thanks!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 17 May 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I finished reading this story. I enjoyed it very much, but it isn't a true poly story because there is no sexual interaction between Edward and Jacob. I was hoping for that, so am mildly disappointed it wasn't that way. All in all, it was worth reading. Thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/57032/images/bee1982_Playing_with_Fire.png

Banner made by the talented chistagbanners.

 

Join Bella in her million dollar life. All she wants is one night with sexy barman Edward, desired by every female who enter's Twilight nightclub, but Bella soon learns she is playing a dangerous game and may end up with more than she bargined for.     

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124180 Read Count: 50296
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Apr 2012
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

pretty hot first chapter, beegurl....i like this because it is a completed fic and I have liked others of yours....didn't you write "Worship"? are you the same writer?



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews but nope beegurl isn't me. I'm bee1982. I think beegurl is above me on the auhtor list, but hey I'm glad you've found PWF. :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yep, Bella fucked up big time. she didn't like it when guys went after her just for her money now she's offering money to Edward? WTF?  Methinks Edward won't stay away for long, though....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He does want her....do you usually write HEAs?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

does he really sleep with different women every night? and he wants Bella too? Hmmmm....these characters are all whores, aren't they? what fun!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

ok so our 2 protagonists are now going to satisfy their carnal desires....i have trouble believing that this will stay a 1 night stand. i think they will fall....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

 you surely gave us a very abbreviated lemon for Bella and Edward!! I know, you are the writer and it is your perogative....so Edward has fallen for Bella, huh? I don't think she can stay away for long....what will her parents think? does she care?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i'm glad she's going home with him. she will realize that she can't live without him...eventually...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love our Edward....I would say yes, money or no money....she will see.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

of course she is every bit in love with him as he is with her. he needs to make it big in music and make a lot of money then her parents might accept him. maybe.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

c'mon. can't she just have who she loves? this isn't feudal europe, is it? an arranged marriage fcs? would her parents cut her off if she stayed with Edward? does she care about money more than love? if she does, then she doesn't deserve him!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I want a screaming orgasm too!  oh, wait, my lover already gives me those....LOL!  Hooray for Bella for standing up for Edward like that!  Alex is a pig!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

A screaming orgasm sounds wonderful! If I still drank, I would surely try one.  Why did she give her parents Jacob's name? What purpose will that serve?  I hope her scheme to get a talent scout to discover Edward works.  How can her parents force her to marry that pig, Alex! she will be miserable! Is there hope for our lovebirds yet? I really love a HEA.....j/s

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i can't stand that they will have to part! you have to do something! maybe you already have and I will just have to read and find out.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

you need to find a way to keep them together, you hear me! I want my HEA....please, Bee....you have a lot more chapters left in this story....find a way, please?  I really hate Alex and think he will show his true colors to Bella soon....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

still enjoying the story and wishing for a HEA...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

No, this is just wrong! He will turn on her, I can just feel it! What happened to Edward? Why did he do that? Yikes, this story is just going in the wrong direction! It's always darkest before the dawn, right?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

this hurts me, I can imagine how they feel...I can't believe you did this!  Alex will turn out to be an abuser, I just KNOW it!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I knew it! Alex Volturi is evil! Oh I can't wait to see him get what's coming to him....you have over half the story to make this right, to have them wind their way back to each other.....I can't wait to see who or what will take Alex down.....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

oh Fuck!  will he be aloof? will she?  what will Alex do? I'm glad you made the time jump so we didn't have to hear Edward's misery.  Although he has been seen with a few blondes, hasn't he? Is it all for show or has he moved on....?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Alex commands her?? OK now I know I was right about that asshole!  He will end up abusing her.  Just wait until she finds out that it was him who had Edward beaten up and who threatened him and Bella if she didn't marry him.  Of course, you wrote this so you know. I am just guessing. How am I doing? I know you won't tell me. It's OK. I can read one more chapter tonight then I'm going out. I will finish this tomorrow!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I like the alternate Bella/Edward POVs. It gives a fuller view into what is going on.  So Jane thinks Edward is into her, huh?  What a way to get revenge on Alex!  Now Edward is famous and not so powerless as before maybe he can fuck up Alex instead of the other way around. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This can't be it for them!  I have a feeling, after a lot more drama and angst, that they will find each other again.  I will keep reading with that hope in mind.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am waiting for when she finds out what her husband is really like! How he had Edward beaten up back then....just let him show his true colors just once to her....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

you are too funny....of course you know everything!!  I'm glad that Alice and Rose dragged her away to show her this cottage. She needed to know how he really felt. Now she needs to know about Alex and what he did....and why he is so nervous about her going to the wedding.  I am spending my Saturday finishing this story as I have to know what happens!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I know she is cheating, but he is her soul mate and Alex played dirty to get her.  I know that technically doesn't make it OK but, holy shit, a person needs to follow their heart sometimes and convention be damned!  I wonder what nasty business Alex will pull out of his hat in order to try to keep Bella?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Alex? Jane? who would know to punch him out like that?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

how could she say she loved Edward and not believe him? does he still want her after all this? Alex needs to receive some retrubution for all he has done. Bella needs to see what kind of man she has gotten herself tangled up with....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

It has to be Edward's child!  I can't believe she is still with Alex. Somebody kill him, please?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Lets hope the baby looks like him....I know it's his...please let them be together at the end....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hooray! I am so happy for them......but I suspect we haven't seen the last of Alex yet...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I think this will get pretty ugly before it all turns out OK....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

oh no! Too dangerous! he could choke her out before help arrives!  I love that they're together and happy but things could go wrong!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

oh I wish you would put more details into your lemons....other than that, i have no complaints. the story is great!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

jane's words seem insincere considering her outburst at the news of Edward and Bella's marriage....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

*sigh* 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

no words. they got their happy ending....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Thank you for this wonderful story!

Starlet by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan: movie star, beloved icon, and little girl lost. Edward Masen: rising star, former bodyguard and afraid of losing everything all over again. She loves him and he loves her but will their love survive drugs, fame and jealousy? AU/AH ExB

 

stories/42014/images/starlet-1.jpg


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 231110 Read Count: 71656
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2014
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Turtle Island

Of all your stories that I am reading, or have read, this one is my favorite. I'm so glad to see this sizzling new chapter tonight. Their honeymoon was one that I wouldn't want to come back from either!  I love their love and devotion for each other.  I think we will see the terrible 3 again but that will be the end of them. I  hope it will be....These 2 have been through so much and they deserve their baby and happy ending.  On to the premiers....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Home is Where the Heart Is

Long time here between chapters. I read 19 and 20 againg just to catch up.....I'm not sure if Charlie should be given another chance, I mean what parent treats their child like that and doesn't care for 8 years to try to make it right? Forgiveness is good and all, but I doubt he thinks he did anything wrong to be forgiven for.  Just my opinion....as for James, Jacob, and Victoria, I hope they fought among themselves and killed each other off.....barring that, I hope they don't disrupt either the wedding or the premiere...just when Bella is getting her sanity back. Please don't wait so long between updates again....I know you can only do what you can do, but I forget large chunks after months and completely lose the mood of the moment. Not flaming you, not meaning to do that, just telling you how it is for me....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: All that Glitters...

I understand their need to stay safe in L.A. but if I were a fan at tent city and were deprived of my access to a picture and/or autograph, I would have been so disappointed......you did leave us with an evil cliffie, didn't you!  Hopefully you won't wait so long for the next chapter to resolve this!  Was Jared in on it? Is that why Jabob had such easy access to the limo? or maybe he hurt Jared to get in.....I guess we'll see next time, won't we?  This story is probably my favorite of all yours and I'm very happy you're writing it again and are going to finish.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Is Not Golden

I hope the surprise is a reference to the baby that Bella had that was taken from her!  I have loved this story a lot and am glad to be reading new chapters!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Moving On

This was my favorite story of yours for a long time and I missed it very much!  I'm so very happy for this chapter and for the promised epi in 2 weeks!  As I read this chapter, so much of the story came back to me. I'm glad their ordeal is over and that life can go on for them and the healing it will hopefully bring. Once you finish this, I am requesting to keep it in my files as I only want to own my very favorite ones.  Star Crossed is now my new favorite of yours as I have been a ST fan since the beginning. I truly appreciate your creativity and prolific writing skills. You give us so much! I hope the holidays are good for you and congrats on your award for your porn skills!!  Thanks again for all you give to us, your fans.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 28: That's a Wrap: Epilogue

Kudos to you for one helluva epi/ultimate chapter! I love how you incorporated all the semi-familiar kind of events from some shall-not-be-named possibly recognizable actors' lives that we all know and love. That was supremely wonderful! Thank you for finishing this story, arguably my favorite of yours along with Star Crossed, when you had RL to contend with and loads of other bunnies hopping all around.  I am in awe of your prolific talent, my dear. I am grateful for all you give us!

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/

 

 

banner by FrozenSoldier

 

 

banner by SoapyMayhem


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

i think you must be dealing with a tragedy in RL but it is not my place to ask.  I feel close to all the authors I read but know you don't know me from a signpost.....I love reading all the things that you so generously give us and very much appreciate how you all do it for the love of it and not for any monitary gain....thank you for hours upon hours of delicious entertainment!!!  I'm glad you're finishing up this story and would love to hear from you, at your leisure, about what you plan to do next.  Finish up stories that are WIPs?  Write new stories?  Publish completed stories? Thank you so much for your efforts and I look forward to whatever comes next!!

Judy

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

He's not afraid to let her know....that is sexy in and of itself!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

quite a jump in this chapter from the last... he's really going to watch her film a sex scene??  he's either really brave, really secure, or maybe both!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Alice will freak!!!  LOL! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

winding down, I see....where do we go from here?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

love this story...which one of yours should I read next?  I want to read the serial killer one but you haven't finished it yet, nor are you currently updating it....so which one shall I choose??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

found and purchased both you Kindle books....you are L.J. Anderson, right?  Please tell me where I can sign up to be notified when you publish more....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

well that went better after the initial shock....hope you are doing well, my dear, from what you've hinted in the A/Ns, you had some nasty RL stuff to deal with....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

sex and pancakes....what more could a girl ask for?  I've read a few of yours so I may try a couple more...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

hope she remembers in the morning....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

will she fall asleep before he can give it to her???  i bet so....In case you havent' noticed, I am totally infatuated with this little drabble of yours...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

geez, where is my Edward like this?  add in that he's a sci-fi and/or computer nerd, and my ideal man would be complete....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

got the feeling it ain't gonna happen tonight....she'll pass out...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

she's going to have one hell of a hangover tomorrow...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

me!  I think you just may do that....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

glad to hear you have plans for a couple dozen more chapters....I'm reading it all today in a marathon....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

so I see you're still not done here after 65 chapters....hmmmm....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

so sweet, these 2...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

hot guy, hot car, what's not to love....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

some place she'd never expect, probably.  she is such a horn dog!  isn't that usually the guy's thing? LOL what kind of woman's libber am I??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

these 2 were MADE for each other....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

she's full of bravado, this little girl....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

that didn't take long....LOL!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

yes, me, I want that too, come on over here.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

yep, I love reading about these two unlikely lovers, so drag it out as long as you see fit, just please please finish it eventually, OK?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

spanking? oh, I didn't know this was going to be THAT kind of a story....oh I don't mind at all, just wasn't thinking bubblegum bdsm.....LOL!