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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
another very enjoyable chapter! He thinks of the most inventive things to push her limits.....I like that! Had to laugh a lot at the purple vibrator left out in plain sight....
Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68
This story just keeps getting better, deeper, more conplex, yet simpler at the same time. While the submissive has her tasks to fulfill and her own self to know and love, the dominant too has his tasks. The creativity needed to give the submissive exactly what she need astounds me....I will read more tomorrow...
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
It must be difficult to get used to being in sub mode all the time, even when it's not the "usual" time....I wonder what her punishment will be.....then again, I know nothing about the life firsthand so I probably should not say anything. I love that Esme put her hair in braids. What a wonderful way to let Bella know she wasn't mad at her!
Date: 20 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70
I looked for your group on FB but it wasn't there. Guess I'm too late, even though this story is still not marked complete. LOVED the baseball game. LOVED that Bella figured out the story of Jessica and Mike. LOVE this story!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
more family time, but mixed with D/s stuff too. I'm trying to be as casual as I can in reading all you've written so far because i know when I get to chapter 110 that I will want more. I know you will finish this, you've said as much, and others in the group have hinted that they think so too, but damn, every time I risk reading a WIP, I get nervous that I will be left hanging. Some affect me more than others, and this one will devistate me if I don't get to know the end. No pressure! LOL! Really, just stream of consciousness rambling. I really love this story!
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 (1st half)
It seems they are both learning here....
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
i'm glad to see some semi-closure for Rose....Bella kicking Emmett's ass was fun to watch.....still with you all the way in this story.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
wow that was a LOT of information packed into this chapter! I had no idea about where James $600/mo was going. I totally agree with Charlie in that Bella needs to come clean about James and press charges, for her sake and for the sake of any past and future victims of James'. I just keep being blown away by this story and all it's twists and turns and intricasies.....
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79
Oh dear! We are getting a plethora of information these last 2 chapters! I'm loving it! I really don't feel bad at all for Jessica. Everything she did was for spite in retaliation for Edward's perceived rejection of her in favor of Bella. She deserves what she gets. I can't help but feel that Karen is planning something more sinister than I can imagine for Bella. I wouldn't care to guess what that might be....
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80
Reading this chapter made my clit ache. Damn!
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
Fascinating, mesmerizing, titillating, and oh so educational! Just an explosion of pleasure for the senses, this chapter was....I loved the yellow flogger with the roses at the tips....
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
I can't guess at anything because I know nothing about this life style except that reading about it winds up my libido and makes me aroused beyond anything I have known. I'm an old woman so that says a lot. I very much enjoy reading this story whether it is information about the drama going on or the sex scenes, or the behavior modification that doms practice. That all is done with love is what astounds me....
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84
I love the advice that Emmett gave Edward on the way to golf.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
This chapter revealed all those mundane plot details that are vital in making up this story right along with the D/s stuff. I love that this story has both. Once again, at the risk of sounding like a broken record, I need to say that I fervently hope you finish this one day. I know life comes up and must be addressed. I too have that to deal with. Those who have been reading this longer than I have faith you will finish, so I will make every attempt to trust that you will. Thank you for all you give us.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86
The fact that people keep referring to what happens in their lifestyle in this story as disgusting and degrading, or whatever, makes me wonder why in the hell they keep reading the story if they feel like that. I am at a loss to know why that is.....
This reader loves reading about these things and even though you issue a disclaimer every chapter, I learn more with each chapter I read. I read lots of different stories but must admit these are my favorite. They touch a place in me I didn't know was there. Each portrays the life a bit differently and I'm fairly sure they mimic RL in that way. I may be mistaken as I have no first hand knowledge, but there are similarities and things that ring true throughout all of them. Very enjoyable to read about, for me.
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87
A full and rich chapter! Every new scene enchants and arouses me. This is truly an eye-opening story for me. Enjoyable doesn't half cover it....
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88
I'm going to stop here for today. I would read this 24/7 if it were practical, which it is not. I'm serious! I had to read this chapter as I hadn't remembered about the patch of hair thing....I know she shaved it so it wouldn't show with her leather dress being so tight....It's so bad that Rosalie has to go back and testify. I hope it doesn't put too much of a strain on her with her pregnancy. Will you write those chapters? Is your blog still up? I can't seem to find it....anyway, see you tomorrow...
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89
This is one of those chapters that is like the glue that holds the whole story together. The everyday details of their lives together where they, more or less, live like any other family does comes shining through here. I'm sure there are hints of things to come but I'd rather enjoy it as a whole and not pick it apart.....if you don't mind....
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90
I'm wondering if someone disconnected the aforementioned hose in her car while she was in the market.....I sure hope Demetri is the good guy he appears to be for Bella's sake...
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
It has to be one of the 3...Mike, or Jess, or Karen. My bet is on Karen. Damn straight she's grounded! If she has an ounce of self-preservation in her body, she will now get that.....
I have made a request to get into your FB group but so far it's not granted.....
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92
I wonder if James is behind prodding Karen to hurt Bella....I wonder if Mike and Jess are really dead, not just gone.....so many possibilities. It's good to see Bella finally dealing with all the pent up pain that James cost her....emotional pain, walls meant to protect her are now keeping her defiant, but no more....I hope. Very emotional and revealing chapter!
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
Their growing closeness is a pleasure to see....The mystery element of the story is entertaining too, right along with the sexy stuff....
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94
I think officer Hawk is an OK guy. I'm sure he deals with people all the time with whom he needs to be an asshole to get anything done. Maybe it's his natural bent.....I still think he's just doing the job as he sees it needs to be done. All the pieces of this puzzle keep growing closer together....I didn't see Bella's hesitancy at selling her house as having anything to do with how she feels about Edward. She's learning how to trust again and it's a slow process. His idea of renting it out is a nice compromise. I felt she was open to that.....little does she know he has already bought her engagement ring. Is he waiting to ask until this is all settled with who is out to get Bella? Maybe he needs to do it sooner.....j/s...love the story, LOVE the story and am starting to read the OTs.
Please accept me into your FB group. I am Judy Edson Sokolowski
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
Fabulous chapter! So much going on! Leah is going to film the BJ??? Oh geez, this is playing dirty on Bella's part, isn't it? I love that! I'm betting on Bella...
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96
wow I was kind of blindsided by Alice's attitude. Is she pregnant? That would explain her being so up and down with her emotions.....or is that just the real her coming out? Is she jealous that she's not the only female getting attention anymore? IDK....the photo shoot was very nice and Jacob's reaction was hilarious.....I'm glad I found time mid-week to squeeze in reading another chapter....
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97
I agree with Edward in that being pregnant doesn't excuse her treatment of Bella and how she spoke to Edward about Bella. Suck it up and take responsibility for her behavior, is what I say! Love Vinny, he's so precious....can't wait to see more of the "usual".....
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
that chapter was so full of different things that i don't know where to begin to respond. as I am reading this, there are only 12 chapters left that you've written, so for you to say this was the last "usual" chapter kind of makes me sad in a way. You mention a sequel, but as of today 1/28/14 there is not only no sequel, but this story isn't even finished. I guess I need to be in for the long haul....I love all of this...the bratty Alice thing makes me a bit sad as I think Edward means to cut her out if she doesn't treat his Bella right.....and what can I say about the playroom stuff...it's why I read stories like this. you are very good at writing this stuff. makes me wonder, but I know you don't talk about personal stuff. Keep writing, I'll keep reading and gladly.
'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must.
Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story.
Doctorward is there too, just like the first story.
It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children.
Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one.
Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore
Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 467277
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A day in the life of Bella Cullen
its been a while since I finished The Story Of Us, so it took me a while to remember just what the details of each character were. It's about time to start this and I will read slowly and savor each chapter....I love EJ and CC and how each are so different, you share similar traits. If I were a teenage girl, I would be attracted more to CC. These are well defined and solid characters and the story is always good. It's also really great to see E and B's passion is as hot as always! Love that the boys are both grateful that their parents still love each other and are uncomfortable with their PDA's. Just fucking hilarious!!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Party like a Rock star
OMG I'm so glad that I finished raising my kids already because I don't think I could cope with how soon the get into sex these days!! Great story! EJ is such a guy like the ones I knew when I was young in that he has sex with anyone who want to....CC is more like a one person at a time kind of guy. He plays music and is smart and different. Just like the ones I would have liked then. I love that the boys' friends called Bella a milf.....so cute!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: That's Amore
I really liked this chapter! EJ seemed different, or maybe you showed us more of his internal dialogue. I did catch the Twilight references. You made cute use of them. EJ seemed to fall for the one that didn't fall all over him.....Love CC and Sheila too! They're so cute when the puppy love all over the story! LOL! This is thoroughly enjoyable so far!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Choices
This chapter ended up being scary and sad. I guess marriages are not perfect, I wouldn't know because mine was spent trying to keep a cheating husband with me. How Edward told Michael about sex was so precious....
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Unchained Melody
another spot on chapter. this feels like real stuff. i think that's one mark of exceptional writing. your characters always feel real, not just on the page, but 3 dimentional. thanks for this story. i am reading 1 chapter a day. hopefully....
These are extra's from my story. It just provides more information and will also provide a place for other POV's
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99277 Read Count: 40318
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Aro's Recollections
I just found these outtakes and am reading to catch up.....
your fan,
Judy
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: A Chat With Edward
interesting.....things have changed some in later chapters, I see....
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Bella's Journal - 1st writing assignment
I like what she wrote, but what do I know. Nothing first hand of this lifestyle...
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Bella's June Limits
distinct changes!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Jasper's OT
Thanks for this. I LOVED reading the story of Jasper and Alice!
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Esme's OT
What a wonderful chapter on Esme. I'm gaining a more well rounded look at this family from reading these OTs.....
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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.
Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.
Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?
*Rated for strong language and lemons* Banner made by: Kiwibeme
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 94835
Date: 24 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prologue
This is my choice for my next completed story to read. I read another of your stories, Walk, some time ago and put several others on my TBR list. So here I am...I'm loving the first chapter. You got their wrong choices out of the way quickly, so now I'm eager to see where this goes!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I love this! Neither of them is really looking for a relationship, but it looks like neither will be able to deny their attraction. How long that will take is anyone's guess. Well, except yours, as you wrote the story! Bella strikes again with putting Tanya in her well deserved place!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I love the no-nonsense way Bella told Alice to back off matchmaking for her. I love straightforward people like that! Why does Tanya already dislike Bella? Is she jealous? Hmmmm....the Cullens' party sounds fun!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
so looks like Alice wants to set her up with someone. Edward maybe? I'll keep reading!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
nice. writing is snappy and good, characters likeable. i'll read a couple more chapters tonight then start again tomorrow...
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Thank you for writing this lovely story!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I love seeing inside Edward's mind. I applaud him for his restraint, knowing he is leaving soon and won't be back for a while. Still, I long for them to be happy together. I have a lot of time to read today so hope to get in at least 10 chapters. Thanks!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I think she's in trouble too....they are so cute and the dog loves them both already....
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
ha ha that's quite the nod to Twilight there at the end. Oh dear. Bella took that the wrong way and Edward hasn't a clue! Seems she is as obsessed over him as he is over her. The need to just sit down and talk about it!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
See...that's why making ASS umptions makes a ass out of u and me....
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Leave it to Alice to cut through the BS! Yes!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Is it Mike Newton leaving the flowers? Wasn't he the student that "accidentally" brushed up against her butt at school? Love that they're getting so close to each other!
Date: 25 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
we're half way through the story now. i'm enjoying it a lot.
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
That was hot! I seriously don't know why it is called "dry humping" when there is nothing dry about it! Good thing they were at his house where he could clean up quickly. Sorry I didn't get to 10 chapters today....
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I always hoped to have this kind of relationship one day. Sadly, at 70, I think my chance has passed. I love to read stories like this and live vicariously through them. This one is a gem. Thank you...
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
wonderful lemon! such a sad goodbye...her trying to be all stoic....
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Will he quit his job to be there with her? Tune in tomorrow....
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I guessed it was Newton, didn't I? Lucky guess! Yikes...
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
hooray for all the people, and dog, that saved her!
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I don't understand why fan fic characters aren't all fat, what with all the pizza they eat! Doesn't anyone eat vegetables?? Yikes!
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
evil cliffie! good thing this is already complete so I don't have to wait to see what happens...Charlie to the rescue??
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Love how possessive Bella is and how she, once again, put Tanya in her place!
Date: 26 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
*sigh* what a great wedding. thanks so much for this...I tore through it today, didn't I?
"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic.
Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard
Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.
Beta'd by aeglow
Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672371
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Stars in the Sky Outtake
love the finger in the pussy thing....it is hardest on the kids and they found out anyway, didn't they? their love is the basic thread running through this story. that is what kept me coming back to it and to WTS...
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter One in Edward's POV
I remember when I first read this chapter, the other one from Bella's POV.....I was just gobsmacked! I thought it was the hottest, most erotic thing I had ever read. It sucked me in to the story immediately. Now reading Edward's POV, seeing what's going on in his head, the picture is complete! Just a mesmerizing story, an epic tale. You are the shit, my dear, and I mean that in the most positive way. Thanks for giving us this!
Quiet Storm Sequel.
How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.
Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward.
Edward/Bella.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1532896
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Indemnity
great fucking lemons. I didn't think this chapter was boring, they needed to address her guilt. and the shopping trip was a cute distraction. Sandy can be annoying....
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Wag the Dog
wow that was some chapter. Bella and Edward both get crazy jealous. I don't blame her a bit! If that was me, I know I would react the same. Hell I chased my ex around our back yard with a knife when I came home from work one day thinking I was miscarrying and found him fucking his drummer in our garage. I get it! I love these 2. There's nothing each wouldn't do for, or even to, the other in the name of love.....
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: And Once More for Luck
oh so good! he came right up to the school and revealed himself....throughout both of these stories, Edward remains one of the most romantic, among other things, beautlful men ever. their love is epic!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Knee-Jerk Reaction
you always keep it real here. he would never cheat, you told us so, but he's human and he thinks about doing stuff that ultimately he never does. is she really insecure about his fidelity after all these years? i can see where she might have her moments...i love this wicked and crooked tale.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: This Time Around
I love all your fics. I read Made in the Shades up to chapter 18 and you haven't updated in a while. I know you said it's almost done so I wait for the rest of it. Meanwhile I read you and CaraNo, like 3 or 4 stories each every chance I get.
What will happen to Anthony if Carlisle and/or Candace get fucked up? Sometimes I forget just how much violence is a part of all their lives because I get caught up in the kids or the sex. There are just so many facets to your tales. I love it all. I live for a good story!!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Come Hell or High Water: Part Two
I'm not a PC mom, never was. My youngest son's dad gave him alcohol when he was about 5 and I lost it. I always wanted my kids to smoke pot with me when they were teens but they never did. They waited until they were with friends to do anything like that. Was I a good parent? Generally speaking I think so. What Edward did was poor judgement but in the context of what was happening, and who he is, understandable. Love the story.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Conformity
I love this family. From the first chapter of Quiet Fire, I was hooked. I wanted to wait to read this until it was finished but had to start. Love Edward, Bella, and the kids! Sonny and Kate kissing at age 11! Yikes!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then
nice little slice of life/shower story. i love the way bella interacts with the younger women and teenage girls....like she is the mother hen/den mother of the group. love the way edward smirks internally at the thought of his wife fighting Lauren over the flirting non-issue....men are pigs sometimes...LOL. the overall casualness of this chapter is a nice way to wind down the story. too bad you couldn't hit your goal of 69 chapters. i would have loved that! i love the story anyway, you must know that by now.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Come Hell or High Water Part One
So is Edward going to tell Sonny the truth, or some part of the truth, about who he really is? This is heavy stuff. Kids finding out stuff at such an early age. I hope Edward doesn't hurt Roger. That he is related must mean something...I love all of your work that I have read so far, Lexi.
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Misery Loves Company
What a fucking great chapter what with the cussing out, the baby cussing, the women calling out each other, Edward smiling through it all and then hot as hell fuck in the bathroom! Whew! I loved it all and laughed out loud to myself all the way through! Fuck!!
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Thou Mayest
Yeah, I'm definitely still here. All this interaction between couples feels like real life. Things like this happen all the time. Real interests me. This is all good shit and I love it! Thanks for writing real characters with real problems...
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Rolling in the Deep
Is Aro going to die? Fuck, I hope not! That was intense! From Adele to assasination attempts in one chapter. Great stuff. I know you won't kill off Edward. I have faith in you.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chasing Regret
This is some serious shit. Edward is fucking scary when he it working but a different, completely different, man with his family. I hope Aro makes it. I like him a lot. Would he really take out Edward if need be? I will be reading this all weekend as I am not going on FFN again until Monday to honor the boycott.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Bucked Up
you said things would get rough. you weren't kidding! I feel bad for little Anthony. I'm along for this ride until the end. I love the way you write!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Bitter Fruit Part One
Jesus H. Christ. This shit is getting deep. You have no mercy, my dear! You keep me interested, engrossed, and entertained!! I fucking love this story!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Two Weeks Later
The most intense chapter yet! I'm so glad he didn't kill Aro. For the part of this chapter that I thought he did, until you set that right, I was devistated. Edward is so scary the few times I have seen him get like that. Bella knows him so well that she let him rape her, then let it go. What a love they have! Twisted and sick and strong as hell! I wish I could love, and be loved by, someone like that. I would certainly give up all for it!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Eclipse
I love this fucking great epic story. Real flawed people who love each other! Please don't stop writing! You have a gift. Fuck those who don't get it!
Please finish Have Mercy Baby and Made In The Shades!! I love them too, in their own way. But these 2, Quiet Storm and Weather The Storm, are 2 of the greatest tales ever! You had me on this Bella and Edward from chapter 1 of QS! I have recommended them to everyone I know who reads fan fic!!!
I'm so glad Aro got his memory back. The exchange between Edward and Aro in this chapter was intimate and touching. I do hope it stays in the past for both of them!!
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: A Tight Fit
Are you kidding me?? What Bella did was so in character for her! It was also quite hilarious and hot! She has always needed Edwards cock, so why would now be any different! Relax, Lexi, we who truly love your work KNOW that you are a creatively gifted writer. At lease I do. These stories are a very effective form of escapism for me. I love it when I am transported away from RL and can live vicariously through these characters. My favorites are always the baddest, most vile, disgusting ones. LOL! That's just me and I can find redeeming qualities about each and every one....Thank you for sticking with US!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Too Many Movies
So Esme hired someone to kill Candace? Wow that shit is so fucking sad. Edward will have to take her out, won't he, if that's true. That remark you made a few chapters back in your A/N about Edward loving Bella but she is still just a possession.....I have been thinking about that now for a while.....that kind of throws me....
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Blondie
This is a fine mess. Esme has to go? I'm glad Edward left it up to Carlisle. It was an amusing moment to think of Edward taking care of his 2 sick buddies, one brother and one right hand man.....Is this story complete yet? How can I tell on this site? I tried to add it to my Favorites but couldn't get that to work. Damn...
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I don't know what to say anymore. I don't know why readers give you such a hard time. You tell a fascinating and expertly written story. It's just entertainment. When I read this chapter, I knew Edward wasn't going for any lap dances or blowjobs because I always remember that they don't cheat on each other. You wouldn't say that if you didn't write it that way. Jesus fucking Christ! Grow the fuck up, people. I love this story!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: The Twilight Zone
Almost a fluffy chapter here! LOL! It's good that they talked about the real reason Edward avoided sex. I hope they're past it now. They don't see as much themselves when they're not always hot for each other. I guess couples in their 30's have those problems when they've been together so long but didn't think our E and B would. Silly me.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Aro's Daycare
This was different....glad Aro got some....Gigi too! They needed that!
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Intricate Dance
great chapter....again...still. not much to say. its late and I hurt. later...
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Breaking Dawn
wow! the 2 kills were so gruesome! cutting out his tongue and gouging out his eyeball! Fuck. I winced and felt slightly nauseous but couldn't stop reading! Telling Bella about it during sex....just no words! You were right! This chapter was the most graphic ever. JFC Lexi! You outdid yourself this time. These are not nice characters but they are well written and stand out off the page real. I'm in 'til the end...
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: NuMb
whew! the bodies are piling up....I am glad that Esme is alive althought I don't know why....I must be one crazy MF to because I can so see the attraction of Edward. He's both a murderous psychopath and a loving family man. An interesting juxtaposition....I have ALWAYS been attracted to bad boys and this just takes it a whole giant step farther!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Long Drive
What should happen to Alice's so-called father? I like Edward's idea of shoving a gun up his ass.....maybe a cock or 2 first? Cut off his balls? I amaze myself with these thoughts....I really love Edward and Bella, with all their strengths and faults....even if he is a murderous, dangerous man. They're why I keep coming back to this story.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: To Be Announced
Nice to have a cute, almost fluffy, family chapter!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Great Adventure
bombshell indeed! this is a whole other story! the button ceremony was good. love the Sopranos too! James Gandolfini looks like my dad did when he was that age....
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One
Edward will find out. Find him. This is an exciting new thread! Renee is a shit mother to let Charlie treat Bella that way for all those years....
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Voices Carry Part Two
Still reading. Thanks for writing! Sonny's crush on Mari is cute...
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Requiem for a Dream
I just fucking love these 2 and this story. It makes me get all warm and fuzzy inside. This is how real parents act! They fuck up with their kids and disagree! I love the way you write this stuff.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Fight Club Part One
Just lovely! Really! Heartwarming Mafia shit!!! Family stuff....and I love the bit at the end where he says, "and I wanted to go back in". Just fucking knocked me out! Thanks!
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Fight Club Part Two
oh God that was gruesome what they did, and continue to do, to Brandon Swan. It never ceases to amaze me that one man, Edward, can be so brutal one minute, and such a family man the next....
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Beach Blanket Bingo Part One
who would have thought that you would write an almost fluffy chapter. I love the family stuff....
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Beach Blanket Bingo Part Two
no chapter 38? well I guess that was then, so there probably is one now. I love the stuff at the beach. there seems to be no way to get all the way away from the business though, is there? Sonny and Katie are adorable....just a few years away from sex! Carlisle is still a mess. His daughters too. Are they really going to kill Esme? I think so..