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Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?
This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too. Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.
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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.
This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.
By- SexyLexiCullen
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420792
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: My turkey leg
married people fight. they jus do.....she should have told him, but I see her point, I guess. Jared and Irina are a hoot!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Maxwell's silver hammer
The vibrator incident had me howling! So funny what with Edward getting all jealous at hearing her from the street when he got home... just fucking hilarious!! Rose's mother-in-law is just unbelievable! This is really true to life stuff here. My dad was his mother's only child and drove my mother crazy. They had a her-or-me confrontation when I was little that I still remember....My grandma was lovely to me, she lived in a little house out back, and was my emotional salvation as a kid.... I love the warm, fuzzy feeling of this story....
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Lake George Escape
Edward and the praying mantis were the funniest thing about this chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Baby Baby
Edward is such a man.....asking if he can watch! I know he was making a joke, but what if Bella had said yes! No, I really don't think she would have....Just having a little fun here.....I do feel bad for Bree. It's no joke what her ex wants to do by taking her kid. That's just wrong! Love the office loving by our irrepressible duo....
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Big Day
how funny that only a man would say something like, "my vagina is ruined" during the birth of a baby!! i hope he doesn't tell Bella that!! and Carlisle knowing exactly why he was crying only to reassure him that, "it goes back to normal"....just fucking hilarious! great story!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 36: The proclaimers
being a new parent is the scaries thing I have ever done! I was 20, he was 19, and we knew nothing!! i love the humor, as always, in this chapter and especially relate to the attempt at anal! my ex and i tried it once, long ago, but he didn't know what he was doing and didn't prepare me first......needless to say that attempt did not succeed!! great description....
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: A Hard Day's Night
those interns were cruel to Bella! she would have torn them a new one if she'd heard them talk! Edward just got them back....he seems to be a good instructor...good description of the chaos of the hospital!!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Mom Jeans
What a riotous chapter! First the Bambi thing, then the fuckhot sex....I love it all. You are a tease and a helluva writer! Thank you dear!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time
Another hilariously riveting chapter! You write complex and interesting characters. I still am amazed that this is your first fic.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Southern Deviled eggs
cockblocked by daddy the cop! too funny!! Edward's mood swings earlier gave me whiplash.....j/s....but it all worked out so well....makenna the ho must have been irritated...can't wait to see if she says anything about it....great story!
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Don't mess with the Jedi
I love these guys. The Jedi cape thing was very sexy....love the role play! Irish twins for the Cullens! That will be a handful! Great story, fun chapter! I laugh a lot while reading this....
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Flirting, Gossiping. Memories.
oh dear....one day that jealous streak, that insecurity, will get him into real trouble. it's not about her, or what she does, it's about him and how he feels about himself....says Dr. Judy..LOL! We need to find Alistair a woman of his own and soon!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Alistair Scott MD
I liked seeing things from Bambi's POV....he seems genuinely nice and I'm glad he and Edward cleared the air. I hope it works out for him and Mary....
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: SinSation
Yeah, I have a tiny crush on Alistair too....He's really sweet, the kind of guy that I never seem to meet....I don't blame Tanya either....she was hurting and wanted to lash out. Alistair was right, revenge never makes one feel better for long and worse in the end. Nice chapter!
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Rounding Second
kind of a filler chapter, didn't you say that? but nice to see events from different characters' POV. I hope the girls' talk with Mary about sex did her some good.....it really can be great if she loosens up a bit and also if she and Al do love each other. Enjoyable chapter, all in all.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Sliding into home
this sounds like almost the end.....it's a lovely and quirky story!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Long Beach Island
Chelsea and Heidi deserved everything they got. Women like that are the reason I never had many friends when I was younger. I hate that kind of catiness between women. Throwing the butter was the least they deserved! These kinds of family interactions are just like what happens in real life. This story has a real life feel to it and has me totally interested and engaged!
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Somethings never change.
I love this story. I have enjoyed every minute, every word, of it. All the sexy times, the hard times, the silly times; all the drama and pain and joy. Every bit. Thank you so much!
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
Best fucking epi I have ever read! Just fucking awesome. EJ and CC as teenagers, brother not a year apart, are fully fleshed out characters! They couldn't be more different yet alike in so many ways. In my teens, I would have gone for CC over EJ....Their knock down drag out fight just typical of brothers. So precious! All the characters were so well written that I felt like I was watching a movie, not reading a book. What a great end to this story. Or is it the end? This was written a long time ago, as I am reading it now so it is probably done. I see you've written a sequel. That's probably where your outtakes and extra epis went, huh? I am quite satisfied with this and am not surprised at all at how good your first story is. It holds up against any of your others and most all else I read. Thanks Lexi!
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254882
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72
nice fluff....nice change of pace in a family setting!
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110
well here I am, at the end of what you have written so far. at the beginning of this chapter, you said it was so long that you had to break it up into 2 parts. i don't understand why months have gone by without you giving us that 2nd part unless you hadn't written it yet. no complaints, not really, I am just hoping to be released from this cliff I am standing on before too much longer. I know RL comes first. I do. Just venting. I really LOVE this story and hope you not only finish it, but write the sequel you've spoken of.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107
I'll say! That was just chock full of information on a lot of things. I must say it did cross my mind that Quil might want Edward to train him.....it seems that he's taking it casually, Quil is, what with his offhand remark about him and Clare not being "full time" at this. I sort of took that to mean that they just want to play at it and not immerse themselves in the lifestyle. Maybe they just don't realize, like Edward said, it's not about "acting" submissive, or dominant for that matter. It's about who you are inside.....but wtf do I know anyway. I know that I really enjoy reading this story. A lot!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106
mixed chapter. loved the shower, it came out wonderfully! not so much the stuff about Caius that still has to be dealt with. Still, what I remember most is Bella's realization about James and how her family is so close knit. It's wonderful to have that.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104
I love everything about this story. I do. I never cease to be amazed at each new thing I read. I love the definition of "slut-talk". Since I know Edward never hits Bella for punishment, I wonder what hers will be for her slow reactions....you talk about wrapping this story up....it is at 110 chapters now and not yet marked complete. I'm dying to know where this goes from here, but very grateful for the wonderful story you've given us so far!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100
I loved this chapter. I love Dougie! His openness about his past has given Bella something that she so desperately needs! Not only does she have a friend and cohort in Dougie, but also someone she may be fully able to share her past with. Then maybe she can let Edward in too, in those ways, like the tampon thing, that she can't do yet. This was a wonderful experience. Leah liked him too!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99
I'm not sure if I wrote anything about chapter 98 or not. It was almost too overwhelming and I read it twice. I love how you explain your rationale in your A/Ns. It helps this ignorant girl understand things better. Although I am aroused by reading about playroom time, it also disturbs me somewhat, especially the level of pain. This chapter was fluff by comparison. I enjoy both but it was nice to have a reprieve from the intensity....I wonder who her babysitter is.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103
oh jeez! is Dougie going to rat her out for the head giving contest thing they had going? the manipulation? and what did Bella do wrong that Demetri yelled at her for? not going to him fast enough? hmmmm....
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102
they're not taking the 18 y/o's to the club are they? I hope Bella doesn't get here bare ass spanked while they are there....Edward wouldn't do that, I know....I think I know. No, I know. He and Riley are going to talk about the plan later, I remember. James just gets more and more disgusting the more we find out about him, doesn't he? Ugh!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
Well haven't you just thrown some very twisty curves into the mix here....with just 5 more chapters written in this story, I eagerly await the resolution of all this. I sincerely hope you carry on with this story....
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76
yes. that was definitely a relief to read. i believe the previous chapter was my favorite, but this one runs a close second. will she revert to manipulative behavior? maybe. probably. but maybe not, and maybe with more clarity about it sooner. I always love their sexy romps....
Date: 09 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101
Damn he's good! He won by just a hair....love the friendship between Bella and Dougie. It's sooooo good! Love Riley's idea for Bella's public outing....love this story! When will it be finished? Will you still write the sequel? I'm sorry to hear you and your family got caught up in Mother Nature's tantrum.....hope you all are OK!
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71
I really like how Edward dealt with Jasper's questions. He did well explaining in terms Jasper could relate to. I must admit that I agree with Edward about the medical profession and am currently experiencing that phenomena myself. Medicare is JUST like that.....on with the story. I am loving the ride....
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
I'm not mad at Edward, not at all. I get that he needed to show her the literalness of her behavior and how it played out to the bitter end. I don't get what part in this lesson the cane played. I guess I'll figure that out when the time comes.
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
staggeringly beautiful. i'm overwhelmed. this is truly an honest and true way to live. i don't think i have it in me to be that humble.....wonderful story!
p.s. every time i review a chapter, i giggle a bit when i push the "submit" button.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This sounds really promising, but I have a few questions.....well maybe just a couple. First let me say that I love this type of story and find few that I like. I'm hoping this is one of them. I'm concerned that you've been writing this for a LONG time, that it already has 110 chapters, and that it still is not marked complete. Do you intend to finish it? I really want to keep reading, and I probably will, but I would hate to get to chapter 110 and find that it never goes anywhere else....You certainly don't owe me an answer, but I would be very grateful to have one anyway.
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I decided that I'm in and reading no matter what. I like where I think this is going. It's a plus in my POV that you got kicked of FFN.....or so I heard. I can only read a few chapters a day, but I will keep reading until I finish. I want to hear more....
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Edward sounds almost too nice to be a Dom....not that Doms can't be nice. I don't know, I guess something else comes out in him when he plays....love Carlisle!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
what's up with Edward? is she too close to his real life? hmmm....
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'm liking the story a lot....
Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm a slow reader and that's all I have the time for now. I won't be around tomorrow, but will the next day, Sunday. Loving the story so far.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I'm wondering what your own personal experience, if any, have you put into this story. This is an ususual request on my part, and one I expect you may not answer. I was just wondering what you know of this world from your real life. I enjoy reading these kinds of stories very much, some more than others. They all seem just a bit different from each other. I have no experience here, only intererst.
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
So this will be Edward's first foray into a 24/7 relationship with part dom/sub and part "normal" couple?
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Is this part of the permanent disablilty that Aro was referring to or is that physical disablilty..? Poor baby, she thinks that Edward showing restraint is him not wanting her....I guess that is what she is used to. Haven't a clue what the lock numbers mean, but hope you tell me...
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I laughed loudly, all by myself on the couch in my living room as I read this chapter, when she named his penis "Little Eddie", then thinking about the reality of it, renamed it "Mr. Ed". OMG he has a peen the size of a horse, was what I thought. Tickled me to no end! Very nice chapter, I'm glad she is getting more comfortable talking to him, telling him what she is thinking when he asks. I love how his compassionate side shows along with his dominant side....
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
yeah, he would know if she used her frozen pop.....i wonder who was in that car that tried to run her down...was it james? has he come after her already?
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I think her first scene with him triggered her nightmare. I'm so glad she told him what happened. Yes, I would love to be secured to Edward's ceiling....i'm too old for that now, but in my younger days I would have loved to encounter this lifestyle and someone to care for me like this....you write a spellbinding story!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
still reading and loving it! do you ever read new reviews like mine?
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
loved the collar ceremony, especially what she said at the end. I love reading lemons, but even more so as they fit into the context of the story. I am very much enamored of this story.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
luscious lemony chapter indeed! I'm not sure if i think it was that fair of him, or if I get the point of him setting her up to fail at stopping her orgasm. I guess it's to learn control....but it seems like manipulation to me....still, I love the story!
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I've often wondered what a clit clamp feels like....it sounds painful, but the way you write it, it doesn't.....until later and when it comes off....I'm immersed in your story, reading it every chance I get, in between and around the WIPs I read....
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
baby got back? no, that wouldn't be it...LOL! i'm no good at guessing. Does Edward hold anything against Bella that she does during their non-usual times when the go back to being dom/sub? I hope not cuz that just doesn't seem fair.... I love how Bella dunked Emmett to get him to shut up about her orgasm standard-writing...
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I am wondering what happened to Seth's collar. Is James coming around trying to find Bella? Geez I hope not! How is it that he beat her until she was almost paralyzed and got no jail time at all? How can that happen? It pisses me off royally! I don't like Caius or Irina...at all!
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
No James stealing the collar, then...what a relief....I don't remember Alec....I really really can't stand Irena and Caius and wonder what their game really is....
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
took a break for the holidays now I'm back reading. this will take me a while....I really hope you finish this one day. I'm having a wonderful time savoring this beautiful story...
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Bella seems to be getting kind of passive-aggressive about Edwards requests/commands.....wonder how he'll deal with that besided the pie denial...
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
God that was awful, what James did to her. I hope that Edward finds him and castrates the bastard! He loves her! She loves him! What else really matters....
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I'm still here, but can only read sometimes. It's OK, I hope maybe that you'll finish this before I get to chapter 110...I'm really enjoying your story here. Please continue it...
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I can feel Edward's anguish from here.....She needs to take care of herself, value herself, like she does others.....
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I'm really glad he was honest with her about how having to punish her hurt him too. Why would anyone think he was too hard on her? I don't think he was, not at all. His punishment was well thought out and appropriate to the offense. Love the story. Please finish it someday.
Date: 07 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I think Jane provides a valuable service to Bella by showing her friendship and by showing her the philosophy behind their lifestyle. I particularly like the quote from that female Indian Guru....and agree with it, although I've never yet been able to live it.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I'm reading this so long after you wrote it that I'll never get a teaser....but then again, I have another chapter to read next....I crave that next chapter....
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
what a beautiful and intense scene....with his hand signals, was he teaching her how to act at the club? loved every word of this chapter!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
He is very creative in the things he thinks up to put her in the right frame of mind.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Today, reading this makes me sad. I wish I had someone to care about me as much as Edward cares about and for Bella....
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
sweet family time, Cullen style. love it!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
that sounds like one evil little device, that C-grip, if one is not allowed to come. If one IS allowed, then that changes everything....can't wait to hear his reasons.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
I am curious about what Stefan said and what it means. I love that Edward let her cum in public with the BFF and I think she loves it too....This nastiness and gossiping by club members about Bella and their relationship pisses me off. What a bunch of jealous cunts! ...and I don't like that word either! Kudos to Edward for reaching out to Leah and Jacob. Their interactions were amusing, for the most part, except when Leah got bitchy...
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
stupendous chapter....and yes, I'm wet.
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
wow you wrote this a long time ago...as I am reading this now, it has been over a year since BD2 came out...over a year and no more Twilight....anyway, It looks to me like Bella can't keep this inside any longer. She will have to trust Edward or she will self-destruct.....I hope she picks the former rather than the latter. I hope Tanya rots in hell, the fucking bitch!
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
I have been reading this all day, I just can't put it down....now my lover is due to arrive within the hour and I must go.....damn this is a good story. PLEASE finish it one day, won't you?
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
well that was intense....i just have to keep reading...is she pregnant?
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
reading your story just always brings my emotions to the surface, whatever they are. i understand that Edward is struggling too with what he saw in those pictures. I'm glad Jane pointed that out to Bella....these 2 are finding their way through some pretty deep and long-buried pain...it's a marvel to read your wonderful words describing this....the picture jumps out at me vividly...
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Great insight gained here....I love the way he called her out on her bad acting and that she copped to it with a laugh....I wonder what her punishment wil be....gotta go for now...be back tomorrow...
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
as far at buying the Twilight movies went, I bought one of each....didn't want to miss a thing....the I bought them all again once I got my blu-ray player.....no such thing as too much Twilight...
I love how their relationship is progressing...how she is owning up to mistakes right away now, how he considered the money spent for groceries, how she considers what Jane says and adjusts it to her own self....it's all coming along nicely....
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
on to the usual....nice chapter. I like that Bella and Jane have a friendship that is Bella's alone....
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
she went off into subspace....I've heard and read much about that state but never felt it personally....it sounds wonderful....
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
her conversation with Leah must have rattled her into forgetting not to lift heavy things....
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Why was Tanya at a family gathering? I don't get it. Sorry. She's just a nasty bitch....I'm very much into the story and can't help but to read it in all my spare time. Why can't Bella remember to take care of herself? Causing herself injury in NOT in anybody's best interest, no matter what the urgent pressing want it...
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
oh god, that pinky mouse story was gross and almost made me puke! I shiver just writing this.....
What's Bella going to do now that that damned clip has to stay on longer while Edward goes to check out the triggered alarm? Love Jasper and Alice's obvious prejudice at even the thought of the BDSM lifestyle....well I don't love it, I actually find them quite narrow-minded....
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
I was pissed at Officer Hawk too. It seemed almost like he was blaming Bella for what happened to her, then and now. Is he an abuser too? Was it a woman who broke into their house? Heather seems like a long shot, but could it have been Tanya?
Ooh, even my clit was tingling reading that last description of what Edward was doing to Bella....I don't understand why he said, "We're even" when her mini orgasm at the removal of her clit clip wasn't anything she could control...
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
The fact that Heather left the shelter that morning speaks volumes about her probably being the one who broke in. The only thing we don't know now is why....
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
I thought it might be Heather breaking into their house, but now I wonder how she would have been able to get the default code....I truly love how your are giving us a full picture of how their relationship is developing, bit by bit. I know that you will write more than double the amount of chapters you have so far because, as of this reading, the story is up to 110 and still not complete. I can't tell you enough how I totally enjoy reading it. One of the best D/s stories ever! And who said there was too much sex...silly person....
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
I'm not buying Irena's little act for a second! She wants something. She was fishing for information. I wonder how she and Caius tie in with Mike, of all people. I seem to remember Mike making inappropriate gestures of some kind toward Bella, or am I wrong? You gave us a little, only for it to pose more questions! Clever of you.....again, I say there is NO SUCH THING as too much smut. Not for me!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
So now there's another woman thrown into this mix of who might have broken into Edward's house. Jessica could have gotten the default code from Mike....and why is Mike saying he isn't with Jessica? Caius is an absolute pig and I'm wondering what he has to do with all this except wanting Bella.....I think Bella did absolutely the right thing when she spoke to, answered Jessica's threats, through speaking to Rosalie. Technically she WAS speaking to a family member, albeit about the bitch Jessica and what she was saying about Bella.....you weave a great tale, dear!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
another flawless chapter.....not much on my mind this time.....LOVE the story!
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
I never thought Bella and Aro had a sexual relationship. I always though of it as an uncle-niece kind of thing and I was right.....Was Edward jealous of Bella and Aro laughing together in the kitchen? Seems like he got over that quickly.....hmmmm, if running away got me fucked hard like that, I would surely run away with regularity....
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
I enjoyed this chapter as an out of the ordinary one.....all fitting into this story nicely. Love the lemons and the playtime too, but this balances all that out to show their complete life, not just the sex. wonderful job.
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55
just when she thinks he won't put her on a leash, he comes back with one....this should be interesting.....love their day in Victoria....and now I'm confused about the bands. I thought she said she didn't bring them, but then she put them on.....
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
well THAT was intense! I like that he made the point there at the end about treating her as childish as she behaved. I hope she gets it....I do and I'm not a sub....
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
beautiful, relaxing and exhilirating day! I wonder about the significance of her dream....guess I'll have to read another chapter!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58
fun and lively and full of all sorts of things, heavy and light. what a fun chapter, especially the end where Paul's big mouth just let all kinds of cats out of the bag...I love it!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
this was a warm, comforting, and quite reveling chapter. bella seems relaxed with her friends, but its clear too that she didn't let them in on the horror of James until it was too late.....LOVE the way Edward soothes and comforts her.....
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
on that note, my day has ended and I need sleep for work tomorrow. I'm over half way through what you've written so far and mesmerized by this story. I'm not a fast reader, but let me tell you, I'm reading it in every spare minute that I have. Please Please Please finish it someday....
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61
I love how he changed her memories of the woods behind the school! Perfect! I also love how you are going slowly here, giving us every detail about their lives and building a solid story.
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62
wow what a chapter. I'm very proud of Bella for slapping James, but I think she should have pressed charges, then and now. She is taking blame for what happened to her by being ashamed for everyone to know what he did to her. I don't know what Jared's problem is.....Is he jealous of Edward? great read, this chapter was...
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
Should one of them have found Bella and Edward in that motel room, they would have never understood what was happening. They would have thought Edward was just like James. I thank God I don't live in a small town! Edward did what he knew Bella would need and took care of her....I see that!
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
Poor Jake (the dog) he was happy yet bewildered and tired! LOL.. I'm very glad that Leah and Edward had their talk, their first one, and hopefully Leah will back off Bella now....
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65
not much to say about this chapter. it's all good. the only thing I wonder is what's up with James' mother?
Date: 16 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
Back to reality now....I wonder what the PI found....I'll read more on the weekend...