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One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315689
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
I hope she gets to even up the score soon...it's so much fun to watch them duel...
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations
these 2 are both so fucked. and yes literally but that wasn't what I meant...
Date: 29 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
I love that Jacob is all sweet and nice! Love it! Is Cullen jealous?? Could it be? Good!
Author's Response:
He's a cutie! Thanks for reading and reviewing :) x KB
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
that shower scene made ME wet! hot hot hot!
Author's Response:
Hahahaha!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I like that you've made Jacob a hunky relatively innocent character in all this debauchery. Kudos!
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
looks like she's got one up on him. wonder how long that will last...
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
sorry but I'm finding it difficult to stop reading long enough to review. I fucking love this story. These are not Ms. Meyer's characters, are they? No, they are all dirtied up and having much more fun.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
just wow. Domie rec'd this little ditty to me, knowing I love the smut. this is grade-a choice smut and I love it! thanks!
Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.
Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752196
Date: 20 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Declarations
I googled the Dodge Viper. The pics I found are much uglier than the above pic you posted. I like the older one much better!
Date: 17 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
I'm glad Esme voiced the things to Elizabeth that Edward probably never would have said. That being said, although I stayed and raised my kids after my ex abandoned us, I was still selfish and used drugs to cope with my heartache, thereby alienating my kids forever. Although it has been many years and I am drug and alcohol free for 21 years now, and despite words to the contrary from them, my relationships with them are forever changed and I can't expect any better from them. This chapter brought all this to the forefront for me. Thanks for this lovely story. I am very much enjoying it and hope you still have contact with the fandom.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All
Fucking Feds is right!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For
That was nice! Yes, they are slowly getting there, I see. Thanks for you A/N telling us of your plans for the story. Do you ever still read reviews?
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps
I'm glad things are getting a bit better between E and B....
Date: 12 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Runaway Rollercoaster
What will happen to Tony? Who will man the front desk now? Can they get someone they trust on such short notice. I'm glad Bella and Edward worked it all out, but what will happen with their SWAT training now? Will they get in trouble for leaving? Too many questions....I'll just read.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
heartbreaking chapter! Emmett was spot on about Bella's reaction. I'm enjoying the angst and the slow burn here....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 9: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Poor Bella. She can't win. I hope she believes her friends when they tell her about Trevor.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Sleeping With An Angel
I'm noticing, the more of this story I read, that it just flows beautifully. The written words on the page slide easily into my head and heart. I love that Edward has finally admitted to himself that he is in love with Bella! Something makes me think it will take her a while to really believe this....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out
I'm glad he finally got to tell her his POV of what happened with Maggie. I know they aren't done resolving this, but maybe their friendship, at least, has been repaired a little. I wonder if Trevor IS in fact a player. He seemed nice....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J
I get how he feels. I do. It's better to never let anyone get close enough to hurt you than it is to be heartbroken when it inevitabley happens at the end of a relationship. I can relate to that. I can attest to the fact that all that kind of life gets you is alone and lonely at age70.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I love Mama D's description of Edward. It seems to take men longer to grow up than women, doesn't it? We let them get away with it! I hope girls' night out is fun her Bella and her friends....
Date: 18 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss
what a harrowing chapter. Bella is the hero and Edward is the one that gets shot....
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment
Oh poor Edward? I hope his slip into Slutward again was just temporary! Do men really get fooled by being led around by their dicks?? Oh silly me! Of course they do!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell
I'm so glad you're writing a Bella that is smart, capable, and a bad ass doctor. I love that! I'm also glad Andy woke up!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Hi there! This story has been on my TBR list for a long time! Another of yours was rec'd to me but I thought since I've had my eye on this one longer, that I would read it first. I'm ecstatic to find it here in it's unedited form and will happily read it here. Slutward! I love that name....can't wait to read of his, and the other guys', adventures.....
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
If Jasper can spot their attraction for each other, it must be real! Are we going to have a slow burn on this one? Good!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection
That sure was a doozy of a first date! Nicely written!!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum
I had just seen the opening gif show for this story before starting to read today. You said there would be mob involvement and here it is! Edward's apartment sounds really yummy!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting
So, I am guessing that new doctor Trevor is the new boss! Oh ugh! Looks like Bella and Alice are in trouble....love the lovey dovey kissy face stuff!! Can't wait for the first real lemon between them, lemon hoor that I am....
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames
OH I don't like that the mob has a mole on Alice's security detail, both for now when they're guarding both of them while the guys are out of town, and for afterward when it's just Alice. I hope Jacob might play a major role in helping the girls when the bad guys try to take them.....j/s. and p.s. I really don't like when Alice fusses and tries to glam up Bella, telling her that Edward will love it and it will drive the other girls off. I think that plain Bella alone is enough to do that, and if she isn't then Edward isn't sincere. Alice needs to butt out! just my 2 cents!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected
Love that he gave her his grandmother's ring. Love that it can be worn 4 different ways, depending on the level of commitment. Nice taste of lime!
Date: 12 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Missing and Misunderstandings
I know their relationship is new, but for Bella to think the worst immediately without giving him any chance to explain isn't right. I hope she doesn't get kidnapped or anything like that on her way back to Chicago!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation
Last chapter for me for today. I love their playlists, and hearing which songs they picked, but the lyrics in the body of the chapter was tedious and I skipped over most of them, especially the ones I knew. Sorry, just my opinion. I'm glad they worked things out.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Getting Reacquainted
Delicious. This will hold me over until the actual full on making love occurs. I'm glad Tanya seems to be a good guy in your story.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Truth Revealed
I hope Elizabeth isn't conning Edward. That would be too much! I still distrust her. Her explanation seems almost too easy....love the song, "Sex On Fire".
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Empowering and Contentment
I hope they don't regret helping Tanya. I'm still skeptical of her motives, but that may be my hangup. This is an immensely enjoyable story!
Date: 14 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time
At last! In this chapter, I read the song lyrics carefully. The songs you used here were perfect to describe them and their union. I loved it!
Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Thanks for the pics at the end of this chapter! Your words did a good job describing the outfits, but the pics are nice to have! I too have the feeling that Trager or his friends are not done with them yet....
Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches. The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband. Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons
Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 372980
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess
So I find myself reading yet another of your stories here....I love period pieces and look forward to this one! Might I hope that the "Tony" she met in Italy is actually Prince Edward Anthony Cullen?? I read on....
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask
It IS him! I just know it by the way Alice and Esme reacted to her humming their tune! I'm already falling in love with this charming fairy tale....
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince
I am pleased to be reading this as a completed story. I read on TWCS or AO3 whenever I can as they do not censor as FFn does. I prefer uncensored versions. Love the exchange between Edward and Angela. Did Angela recognize the parting phrase that Edward used? Possible from his time spent in Italy???? LOL...
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles
ah poor Isabella....I'm eagerly awaiting the reveal and hope it will be what I think it will be!
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation
I'm reading as fast as I can to get to the reveal...I have to leave in an hour
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities
next chapter? will we know who they really are next chapter??
Date: 26 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss
how very lovely and romantic. thanks!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans
I'm once again reading this story. I just had to start the day reading chapter 8 over again to get a taste of their lemony goodness. In this chapter, I wonder if King Charles is purposely making it seem a war is imminent for his own unknown as yet purposes of if he misreads the situation. I love that you show Bella as a strong and intelligent woman here, even if she has to disguise that intelligence by feeding clues through her brother. Bravo!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage
She is a quick learner! LOL! Desire to learn will do that to a woman....I love the lemons!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore
Still reading and enjoying this very much...love what Bella did for Emmett!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment
ah another sweet lemon of a chapter. I love reading about their love!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen
with all that coupling, she'll be with child in no time...and have fun doing it! Tanya. ugh. How did I know she would be in here somewhere!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty
I wonder if the gossipy jealous ladies circle that has formed will grow bolder in their torment of Bella once Edward has gone to France. I have every conidence that Bella can handle herself and them!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante
I would have hated to live at court in that time. Gossipy petty jealousies are not for me!
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful
I suspect Rosalie may be an eventual ally, but I also susect Tanya will not and will try to secude Edward in some way. Ugh! The things Bella has to put up with!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra
Oh I love Alice! Those pregnancy hormones are in full bloom! I hope Edward returns soon!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm
I hope her nausa and vometing is due to her being pregnant....and I'm glad Edward is taking care of the Tanya situation, all the while knowing nothing of how insecure Bella is being about what his relationship with Tanya might be. Maybe it's her pregnancy hormones making her extra sensetive???
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath
stupid nobles! bickering and jockeying for position is all they care about! Carlisle should chuck them and find others who are more intelligent and amenable! Yay! I was right! She is pregnant!!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Banished
I suspect we haven't heard the last of Tanya yet. No telling what she will do.. I wouldn't put it past the stupid bitch to try to kill Bella, which would seal her fate! Things are heating up for Emmett and Rosalie! Yes! I love that Edward is asserting himself as future king!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Diplomacy and Alternative Forms of War
Tanya needs to die. How sweet was Bella with the envoys?
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden
here i am again today! this chapter begins a mystery that I hope will lead to the demise of Tanya Denali and all who help her....
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises
I can't believe Tanya got away or that she is gone for good, but with only 7 chapters left, maybe it is true. I love the surprises Edward got for Bella!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings
Just when I was thinking Tanya got away with all her dirty tricks, you surprise me and have Jacob capture her. I'm eager to see who she throws under the bus at her inquisition....
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment
I should have known it was James! And all the Denalis! good riddance....
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown
I love that Kate got the benefit of Bella's mercy. I don't think she deserved what the others got as she was blackmailed vehemently to participate. They were very generous with her. I'm so happy that Emmett was given the lands at Gloucester. I know he will do right by them and also be able to court and marry Lady Rosalie. Now comes Alice's baby....
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 27: A Critical Choice
I knew, or almost was sure, you would keep Alice safe. Good news all around!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs
Under what name did you publish this book, Children of Creation? It looks like something I would read....
Twins are here. A boy first is good for the monarchy, and a girl second will be daddy's little princess! I'm so glad I found this story. I have really enjoyed reading it!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties
And so ends this lovely tale! Enjoyable unto the very last word, it is....thank you so much!
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue
My eyes teared up at the first words of this chapter, as I knew what was coming. What a magnificent epilogue! What more could one want that to live a long and happy life with family around. It's too bad Edward went so far ahead of her. That is really sad,but they are together now and off on endless adventures. Thank you for this lovely and moving story!
Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?
This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too. Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.
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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.
This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.
By- SexyLexiCullen
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420500
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Aftermath
well that was intense! thanks for the technical term explanations. and yes, although the hospital sex scene was a bit over the top, I loved it and it certainly fit their usual mode of behavior! Loved that you had Carlisle walk in on them! LOL!! It doesn't surprise me that Bella didn't want to read Jacob's letter but I 'm glad he repented and got sober.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Take a bullet for you
love how you used the line from Twilight there at the end of the chapter....Bella must have been shot in an artery for her to spurt blood. who else got shot? Edward? Maria? Maybe the police made it there in time to save Edward. Great drama...
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Complications
what a ride! i understand Edwards desire to wait to greet his new son until Bella could be there so they could do it together for the first time. family who thinks they know what is best for you can be a pain. i get that. i'm so glad Bella is ok. wonderful drama, optimum outcome. wonderful heartwrenching story!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Maria
no shit! she is one sick bitch! she twisted everything that happened to fit what she thought was reality! she needs some serious help. doesn't Edward see that she is a danger to Bella? I hope it won't be too late when he does realize what she is capable of.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Out of Character.
i have nothing but good things to say about this chapter. it was fun and funny. and yes, Bella is a 25 year old so why wouldn't she be curious about X? It is sad, however, to see their family members still into that at their age every weekend. Our E and B have a very different life and just wanted to see how their rich city cousins lived. I believe they did and that was enough! It was funny how Edward thought he "broke" Bella's vagina! Three hours of solid fucking will make any vagina hurt!! LOL!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Quagmire and the hag
love this chapter. what a fucking riot! alice revealing all the family "quirks", edward losing his temper then the making up later, esme and her pill purse, all those kids in their house at once....geez i'm glad that those days are over for me....but I loved this chapter
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Love Game
so this is your first fic, huh? I wanted to read another completed fic so I picked this one....you never disappoint so here goes...
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Run this town
he's a man, what do you expect? and a gorgeous ass man at that! hmmmm....reminds me of a certain actor I have heard of....lusting after her bubble ass in chapter 2! outstanding! I read on, my dear....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: SSDD
thanks for the background on Bella! so she is early 20's? and Edward is mid to late 20's? i see also that Mike Newton is his usual annoying self....not much else to say this chapter...
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Don't feed the bears
yep. good stuff! they seem to like each other and are compatible. geez what a boring review....i hope they have hot monkey sex soon and that you describe it in graphic detail!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: eXfactor
Jake evidently can't take a not so subtle hint....Edward comes off a bit arrogant but insecure...how can he be both? Bella is young, a bit shy, and a sexy freak waiting to happen, right? oh you tease and make me wait for the lemons.....i know you write outstanding ones, so i will wait not so patiently....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: The blue box blues
they are getting close quickly. i like that. who is in the rabbit? Jake?
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Mac N Cheese
ok that was scary. jake has lost it. Maybe now she will consider that restraining order! E and B's time, however, was sweet and sexy.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Revelations
will there be a conflict since Bella is Carlisle's scrub nurse? that won't stand in their way, I don't think....feelings are growing quickly if thoughts like children are entering his mind already....they are so sweet....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Picking up the pieces
this is a very romantic story, with the exception of Jacob, so far. I am truly enjoying their courtship. I had to giggle at Renee's behavior. Always borderline inappropriate...
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Moody's mood for love
I love how they publicly displayed their affection for one another at that dance they went to. Your description of their lovemaking was flawless. This is your first fic? Really? You're a natural, my dear.
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: The empty bottle saloon
so....jealous Edward and hot rough dance floor intimacy! i'm glad she didn't take that dive apartment over the bar, even if they have to sneak around a the parents' houses for a while longer. James didn't mention his family...is he still with them or does he maybe want Bella now that she's all grown up and not available....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: The green eyed monster
I hope Edward's jealous reaction to James doesn't put Bella off...hope he learned his lesson! i am awaiting the next lemon....!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Thanksgiving
so she is wary of them moving in together....i can understand that. after all it has only been a couple of months and after what she gave up for jake...she is just finding herself and she is so young....BUT...love is a powerful drug! something tells me that they will be going through some more shit before they end up happy together...
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Crawl inside you
it is a good chapter! they talked and got thing out in the open, mostly. I wonder why she didn't tell him that her first was James....i know what she said but maybe she is holding something back? I'm glad they decided to move in together. their relationship is new but they are ready for this, I think. the tone of the overall chapter was happy and positive. good work!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: As time goes by
Jake is not through bothering Bella, is he? The look-alike girl thing is just creepy. I love the present Edward got Bella for Christmas. Things are moving quickly and she hasn't told him about James being her first, either. Keeping secrets always ends badly....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Ode to Joy
She gave Maria her new cell phone number....is Maria playing her? Did she get the number so Jacob could have it? God, I hope not. The proposal was wonderful and romantic!
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Following her lead
the ups and downs of a regular couple....i'm still waiting for the Jacob shoe to drop....
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Unemployment
poor Maria. I hope she will be ok. Something tells me we haven't seen the last of Jacob. Is it me or does Edward seem the slightest bit controlling? Probably my issues....but....Love love love Butch!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: What really happened
OMG Maria is as crazy as Jacob! What a thing to find out after just having returned for a lovely vacation!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Post traumatic stress
i don't think it was filler at all. it was necessary to show how a real person would react to having experienced a traumatic event. PTSD the call it, I think, or PTSS. It may take most people more than one visit to a cemetary to get through these feelings but you did a good job showing the basics. so lets move along to the wedding....
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Jenna's
wow i'm impressed with the medical term definitions. the bachelor party was a hoot. drunk Edward waving his dick around....what a picture! the rehearsal was cute. sweet. i never experienced any of that so is that how most of them go?
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: I'm too sexy
oh oh. Bella's little nonchalant pill substitution caught my eye....is she pregnant? that would explain the moods and the nausea.....and the horniness....the bachelorette party was fun. someday i want to experience that, maybe....i never have yet....I am enjoying the fun aspect of the last few chapters after the angst of the shooting and its aftermath.
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: The Wedding
that was a wonderful chapter. i feel warm all over. I love the porn DVD they have from Rose's office! I love the humorous tone of most of the chapter. I really love that she is pregnant and almost didn't fit into her wedding dress. I thought it was from the birth control pill substitution and didn't know that antibiotics can nullify the pills' effectiveness! Anyway, I think Edward will be happy even though this was totally unplanned! This is it for me tonight. I need to sleep. The reception will have to wait until tomorrow....I do love this story!!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: The reception
loved it all....is she going to tell him soon? I very much enjoy your turn of phrase. You might think about writing a book, if you're not already. I mean, all these stories you write are for your own and our enjoyment, I know, but seriously, you could make a living!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Ice Ice Baby
she's gonna have a baby!!! they're gonna be parents!!! beautiful and scary all at the same time! Edward is a geek...Geeks can be beautiful too!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Lingerie and Lasagna
My pregnancies were long ago so it's hard to remember details. I remember being very comfortable pregnant, at least with my last one. I didn't have to try to hold my stomach in to look thin anymore. What a thing to remember!
These 2 are the cutest thing ever! They can't keep their hands off each other, no matter what. That must be the best feeling in the world to be that in love. The kit kat story is so precious! I do remember the mood swings and that I was told that the first thing to go when I was pregnant was my sense of humor! I probably ripped a new one on the person who said that to me!
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Colonial Williamsburg
i just got a picture of Edward licking the turkey leg juices off her boobs.....LOL! Great chapter! The adventures of Dr. Edward and pregnant Bella....I laughed and giggled out loud all the way through the chapter. Loved Bella pouring cold water on Emmett in the shower! It served him right! I do remember being affected a lot by smells and tastes while I was pregnant....you're dredging up distant memories here! Fun stuff! I'm enjoying the hell out of this story!