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Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 106447
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: sa71728 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Ugh, a big no on Esme being pregnant.



Author's Response:

Hi sa71728

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. The reviewer support for an Esme pregnancy was overwhelming, so I've proceeded with that storyline. I hope you'll keep reading Wrecked, but I'll understand if you don't want.

Regards, Jkazzie

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324434
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: sa71728 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

They are so lucky a child is not involved in this fuckery.

Reviewer: sa71728 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

I feel like Edward was pretty justified in his reaction.  Bella needs to realize that there are certain things that are not appropriate when you are married; allowing a man who is not your husband or family to have his arm around you is one of them.

Reviewer: sa71728 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving

For Chapter 22

Dammit, I was reviewing two stories at once and gave this one the wrong rating.

Summary:

 

She's a rockstar and he's a musician. Let's take a peek at a morning of their life. EXB Mature. Olderward. Written for Fandom4JuvenileDiabetes


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4060 Read Count: 6231
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: sa71728 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this.  Is there any chance that you'll expand it?



Author's Response:

Probably not. It was a o/s I wrote for a fandom cause

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87332
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: sa71728 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sounds like Liz is pregnant; that should be interesting.



Author's Response:

So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant.  Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe.  Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course.  Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon.  Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her.  You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.

Kasi & Jessica

 

Teaser:  I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.

“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”

“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.

“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.

Reviewer: sa71728 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow, Alice is a real piece of work.  If I were Edward, I would pray that Bella never found out I went through her phone records and emails in order to find evidence of Alice's accusations; that could very well kill the relationship.  I feel like for all Edward's talk of loving Bella and her being the best relationship he's ever had, he doesn't trust her in the least.  I was offended on Bella's behalf when Alice called her a whore and all Edward had to say was that she should keep her voice down.  And for all his talk of control, he's allowed Alice to manipulate and control him; Bella's right, he needs to take a long hard look at himself.



Author's Response:

Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all.  Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story.  Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole.  So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters.  There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through.  I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We do love hearing your thoughts.  Jess & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”

“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.

“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.

“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.

“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”

“Wherever we go, we go together.  Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”

Summary:

 

Bella prepares to navigate through the entertainment industries perils as famous Edward Cullen's new girlfriend. Will she survive or will she be just another Hollywood tragedy? What happens when Edward reveals something that may cause Bella to rethink her relationship with the man she loves? Read Part One first. Warning for spanking and domestic discipline.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148461 Read Count: 50479
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 27 May 2013
Reviewer: sa71728 Signed
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I truly found this story interesting and was really hoping you weren't going to go the insta-family route with Embry's kids (hoping against hope really, it wasn't exactly subtle what was going to happen).  1. E/B still had major issues to deal with: every time I thought Bella had grown a spine, a paragraph later she was giving in to Edward (she allows him and the others to bully her into things and all she does is bitch about it instead of taking non passive-aggressive action or bitch about it and then have Edward distract her followed by her saying 'he's right'); 2. I didn't care about Embry or his kids, I still don't care about them.  Also, there were at least two major logic failures in this story that I was hoping you were going to address, but one didn't happen and the other I won't know if you address because I'm going to have to bow out now.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, sorry this story wasnt your cup of tea :-)