Reviews by stephlj
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 145046
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: stephlj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is friggin HILARIOUS!!!

Now, if you didn't mean it to be funny, and I've offended you, I'm truly sorry. But... training rabbits! I'm dying over here!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84308
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: stephlj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (or not)

Reading your A/N about being corrected on your grammar. I am a grammar nazi... seriously. I never have problems pointing out problems to someone.

But, I have never, in reading the earlier chapters of your story, wanted to say anything. The reason is that I could tell that english is not your primary language. And, sometimes, it just doesn't matter.

Your story stands, even with mistakes. The plot and pacing are good, the story is interesting, the characters are developing at (a snails pace!) a normal, good rate.

I hope that any criticism you've received has not discouraged you... since this is marked completed, I can only assume it hasn't! You keep writing, do your best. You've got a great imagination, and a talent for expressing it!

(I could do without the chapters that have the weird arrows though!!)

Reviewer: stephlj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

Loved it. Loved it. Loved it.

I loved this story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

When The Twilight Never Comes

Could it be that some things are just meant to be?

Without Edward to save her, Bella is hit by Tyler's van and is taken to the hospital, barely alive. She is lucky enough to cross paths with Carlisle Cullen, a vampire doctor who saves her life.

Bella is in danger once again during a simple trip to Port Angeles and once again, there is no Edward in sight, but Jacob Black is all too happy to step in his place.

Carlisle is dangerously outnumbered when facing the three nomads, until a certain pair of golden-eyed vampires show up to help.

So where is Carlisle's family? Who is haunting his house? Is Jacob Black really gay? Is Sam a drug-dealer? And who is responsible for turning everything upside down—The Volturi? The Quileute Elders? Or maybe the source is much closer to home than everyone thinks.

Some things even Alice can't predict.

WINNER Best Mystery/Adventure in the Emerging Swan Awards 2012.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181770 Read Count: 30772
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Apr 2012
Reviewer: stephlj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Outtake - Official Timeline

Very unique perspective beautifully written. Thanks!