Reviews by JDThorn
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478798
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

What could possibly act like a parasite in a woman's body and multiply in 24 hours? It's totally a baby Bella!!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

This is such a great and wonderful story. Another of my VERY favorites. Love it to pieces!

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SUMMARY: Edward, fresh out of veterinary school moves to the small town his grandfather was from, after his sudden death. There he inherits his veterinary clinic and ranch. He finds himself intrigued by the young Isabella who tries to runaway with her brother several times. What will Edward do when he finds a journal his grandfather kept and realizes that his own grandfather was trying to help her and her brother get away?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76586 Read Count: 117708
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2014 Updated: 29 Jun 2014
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I don't care about what anyone else says, you ladies made the right choice regarding lemons in this story. It's a great story without them. Lemons are fun and sexy, but you know you can write well when you don't HAVE to put them in and the story is great anyway. Lemons are and should always be a bonus to a great storyline and you girls are the queens of great stories. Thank you. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Loved this story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A serial killer’s on the loose. The victims are all 5’ to 5’7, brown eyes, long brown hair. To make matters worse four friends are being stalked. With letters, photos, phones calls and threats, will the stalker get too close? Is the stalker and the killer one in the same? What happens when tragedy strikes and the girls pay the ultimate price? Annual Halloween story, all human.

Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41521 Read Count: 12414
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I think Sam is the stalker and we still don't who the killer is, but I think Edward is just a sweet awkward guy.

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After the death of Gabriel Swan and Charlie Swan, the running of Swan's Toys, Trees and Reindeer is left in the hands of a very young Bella Swan. Why don't the majority of the townspeople remember sweet little Bella Swan? Who is this cold hearted woman who is running the Swan Plantation? What will the workers do when the normal two week vacation at Christmas is canceled?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39677 Read Count: 21862
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 Dec 2014
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OH MY GOSH!!! Charlie is the Twins' father!!! Bella is their SISTER!!! Now what she said to Edward makes so much more sense.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I bet Tanya was the girl who tried to include Bella too. 

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Date: 09 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wonderful story. Loved it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner By: Christag Banners

Summary: Can the library assistant catch the eye of the new kindergarten teacher? How will he react when he finds out she's only eighteen? Will he keep his distance, or stop letting the twenty year age difference hold him back?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14796 Read Count: 7181
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2015 Updated: 13 Feb 2015
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well even if this did not do well in the contest, I LOVED IT, and would have if I'd have known about the contest. You ladies are up in my top 5 favorite writers of fan fic. Keep up the excellent work. I'm going through your stories one by one and enjoying every second of it. Can't wait for more.🔥👍🏼🤗🤓😍😆

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Summary: Between deployments and deaths, will Bella and Edward find their happy place together? When they find their love, will it survive the war they're surrounded by? Tissue warnings are given, but a happy ending is promised. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26925 Read Count: 34733
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2015 Updated: 16 Mar 2015
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm betting he was to announce his retirement to come home & be with Bella.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

They are acting and sneaking around like an actual couple who are being intimate, but they are not so they should be ok as far as fraternization goes. But they are very close so I don't know where that stands in regards to the army.

Summer Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 353]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Bella Swan’s last summer before starting college is here. Charlie Swan encourages his daughter to let loose and live. What happens when the town’s notorious bad boy comes back? Will he sweep her off her feet?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25488 Read Count: 79478
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2015 Updated: 29 Apr 2015
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wonderful! A definite favorite. I did not want this one to end.

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BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 28879
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I loved this story so much. Really funny, at times I was laughing out loud. Just so good!

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Summary: Emmett Cullen messes up and has to repeat his senior year of high school. What will happen when he starts bringing home Bella, and how will his father Edward react? Things get intense when Edward starts to think of Bella in more ways than just his son's girlfriend.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85896 Read Count: 126023
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 05 Oct 2015
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I have a theory... Bella is not really Em's girlfriend. She is tutoring him and to cover that up they've agreed to say they are a couple. Maybe Em is embarrassed and don't want the kids at school or his dad to know. Maybe she's doing it because she is lonely cause her parents are always gone. He (Em) is very fond of her but not much more. After all she is the opposite of his type. Whatever they were doing in his room, it was NOT having sex. Either he was doing some kind of schoolwork or she was sitting on his back while he did push-ups She's small enough. When I was little (maybe 12) I used to do that for my dad's friend who couldn't afford a gym. he would have me get on his back like he was a horse and do push-ups and I would have to try to stay on. I'm pretty sure I squeaked a bit too, and he grunted, but there was NOTHING sexual about it. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Another theory... He (Em) wants to keep the football groupies away so he and Bella are pretending to be a couple. She obviously likes Edward and feels the "tingle" so something is up. Maybe she agreed so she wouldn't have to be alone so much. I also think Bella & Emmett are very good friends. There is an obvious affection there but I've noticed the Edward has not seen them kiss other than the forehead.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Now I KNOW Bella likes Edward, she was probing for info. I'm not too sure about Tia. I think she's too much of a feminist. There is nothing wrong with Edward being a gentleman and she SHOULD appreciate it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Now I think Emmett likes Rose & told Bella about it. I'm more sure that this thing with Bella is a front for something. I just can't figure out what it is.

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Summary: Being born into a made family has both advantages and disadvantages. Sometimes a man has to reflect on which relationships he involves himself in.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98617 Read Count: 229009
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2015 Updated: 23 Sep 2015
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Absolutely loved this story. I will definitely read it again in the future.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

All I have to say is "Thank goodness Jake is gay." Otherwise he'd probably be a dead man walking!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

While Tanya was at the restaurant with her 'date' Tanya did say that she wanted to hurt Bella because Bella hurt her. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I'm guessing the test results came back? 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

That rapist pig should have been skinned alive...slowly.

Tie the Knot by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 372]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Statistics say arranged marriages have a better chance at lasting. Is that still true if the couple is chosen by a group of experts and married on TV with at least one partner in it for the wrong reasons?

 


A lost bet, the promise of money and a stranger for a bride. Will confirmed bachelor Edward Masen find a match made in heaven or hell?

 


~Inspired by the show Married at First Sight~

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117195 Read Count: 55452
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2017
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Original Outline

I am SOOOOOO happy with the ending you chose to use. I read the original outline and I felt like if you would have gone with that storyline I would have been crying for most of the rest of the story. You chose wonderfully and I truly appreciate it. Thank you. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 135034
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I really hope Emmett not only gets his ass handed to him, but I hope he gets arrested and prison time. The stair thing & the car thing could be construed as attempted murder. Under the right circumstances, both instances COULD have killed her and the boys. 

Anyhow... Reading on - love you wonderful ladies! 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

MUCH LOVE - for the story and it's lovely writers. 

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Story Summary: Edgar the bullfighter needs to cowboy up and admit to his buttercup just how deep his love and affection for her goes. Before he gets the chance, danger strikes. It will be up to him to save the day and the woman he's in love with.



 


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9623 Read Count: 2637
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2016
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was just so sweet. A wonderful love story. 🐂💜

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 10154
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: JDThorn Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2024 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was very sweet and cute. LOVED it!