I really liked this story. I can't see Charlie letting her go th Chicago with someone she only knows for 2 days though. I would kill my daughter if she pulled that crap and she's 19! But I loved it anyway and because it's Edward it is ok. I would love to see another chapter of this one maybe of the move and of his parent's reaction and how they handle her schooling, apartment hunting, her getting pregnant since they did not use any birth control or protection. I love it when they have babies. Thanks for sharing. :) ~JDThorn

Loved this 1 shot. Can't wait til A Long Way to Go is finished so I can read it to.

Wow, I REALLY enjoyed that chapter way more than I anticipated. Getting to hear hisPOV was refreshing and it made me like him a lot more than I did. I mistook him for a creepy dude who was trying to steal Bella from Edward (even though I knew that could never happen), but now I see him as a really nice kid whom Edward and Bella could probably be friends with. I have to admit I'm VERY disappointed with James though. It's obvious that he still has feelings for Bella and always did and now he feels it's ok to cheat (even if it's an open relationship, it's fairly clearly defined) and if he'll cheat on his wife, who's to say he won't make another play for Bella, right? It's fair to assume so now. LOVE THIS STORY - can't wait for more and the next one. Good call on the name change too. This name has better 'attraction" than the name of the hospital where they work, especially since Bella only worked there for a couple of chapters. 

Now THAT was a great chapter. The parents betting on which kids get some! That was hilarious!! Can't wait to find out the results!! 

So cute! GREAT CHAPTER! I was born in Brooklyn, (live on East 54th street) but was moved away at the age of 4! :( unfortunately I don't think I have much Brooklyn left in me. Maybe just attitude.

I thought this chapter was GREAT! Plenty funny and enlightening in regards to EJ. Also I LOVED the Twilight Saga references. And I LOVE Debbie even for EJ. Seems he was hit with the Italian Lightening Bolt!(Colpo di fulmine) I hope he doesn't blow it!

I actually DO feel bad for CC, but as a parent I also understand Edward's frustration. But at the same time Edward didn't even bother to get any other persons side of the story. 

I am truly sad to see these stories end. I loved both of them and I feel like part of my life will be different without reading them every day! I'm going to read A Hard Day's Night next. Loved the STORM series too by the way. LOVE YOU! Reading on... 

My goodness! That one was fun. He shoulda let Bella kick all their butts! She probably could have. Loved this chapter. I thought maybe Edward would invite Eric to check out Upstate and his practice to get away from Jersey. Just a thought. Reading on...

What are you talking about? That chapter wasn't boring at all. It was actually great perfect filler chapter. Even if it's a set up for the next ones still loving the story after all these chapters and looking forward to more.

Wow! That was an unexpected twist. I have to admit I'm really surprised at EJ and his reaction. I truly thought he was in love with Roni and just didn't really know it. I hope Jake's change is genuine too. If he hurts them again that will not be cool, but then again he would go back to prison if he did. Very emotional chapter - I cried a lot reading it.

LOVED IT!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Just wonderful. What an amazing story. Loved it.

You are a WONDERFUL writer. NEVER listen to the cyber trolls. They are TROLLS! You on the other hand are a QUEEN! I love you! Thank you so much for being brave and sharing your work with us. I feel privileged. I love ALL of your work.

Loved this story immensely! Starting the Next Chapter right now!! Love ALL of your work.

So now that I've read this account of Alec's Death involving Aro I'm not sure why Edward was so mad at him for killing him. I know Edward had other plans but Aro Kinda had no choice and if Edward knew this, there's no reason for him to be so upset and stop talking to him when he did, and because of what he did under the circumstances.

WOW! Oh My Fuck!! I love this dirty, sexy Charlie!! Such a turn on. Dirty mind, dirty mouth- he actually is a sexual being- oh my, and yummy.

Um, ...WOW!?! I don't even know what to say. Thank goodness he didn't kill Aro or Bella for that matter.

Just...SO INTENSE. I couldn't stop reading even though I had to pee! 

I may be in shock!

  I'm kinda worried about Esme plotting to kill Edward or Bella or both! She seems spoiled rotten and hellbent on getting what she wants and getting away with murder literally. 

I can't believe he'd tap that after Edward and Alec... Blech!!

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

Wonderful Story. Loved it.

I thought this chapter was hilarious! I woke my husband up with my laughing out loud. I loved her reactions and they got even better when she took the meds. His proposal was just fine, (what does Carlisle know) and definitely so them. The only thing I'm wondering now is if as doctors they'll still remember that Antibiotics cause birth control to fail!?! Let's not remind them though.

Ok, James is a sicko, but if I know you ladies, he will get his just rewards. Rose, unfortunately I think is irredeemable. She just has serious issues against Edward, and therefore everyone else that he loves. She doesn't accept that maybe Bella is NOT evil. Alice, I feel is just realizing how much of a bitch she was to Bella and hopefully she will now see why Jazz wanted to help her so much. She will come around soon if she hasn't already. 

Reading on......

     Wow, that was great. So I took the poll on FFnet and I've decided that even though I could only vote for 2 of your stories to continue, I would LOVE to see ALL FOUR continue! I realise that that will require ALOT of work on your part, but then I am a selfish creature and I want what I want! If I could do it myself I would, but I can't, so I will be completly undignified and beg!! (:D)

     I rarely review because I read hundreds of stories, so when I do it is because I need to tell an author that I love thier work. Sooo... I love your work! I am slowly but surely reading through all of it annd I love everything I've read so far. I've read all the 1 Shots except M & M and 1st 4 Everything. LOVED Thump & a Little Retrebution. I'm on ch 21 of Late Late Show w/ EC and can't get enough of that. Then I'll start The Good & Bad series. Also looking forward to when Hangover & Red Devil are finished. I'm also impatient in addition to being selfish, so I wait 'til they are comeplete to read them! Oh, glad you got to see my Eclipse ribbon tattoo. (If you looked) Funny thing, My Hubs said quote "Over my dead body" yet he's still alive & I'm marked! However, HIS tat says "SITH"!! ....Reading on....

~ Jen D Thorn

At first I had no idea who posted Charlie’s bail, but now I’m thinking more and more it had to be Jasper. He’s the only one out of the antagonists that has that kind of money.

My theory is Jasper is going to Aro, the owner of the club and find out who pays for Riley’s membership and while he’s at it, hopefully get both of their memberships revoked. As for who, maybe Jacob Black? 

I’m glad Jasper didn’t drag it out. They needed reconciliation so they can move on and so Bella won’t be stressed out.

Great surprise!

I live in Surprise, AZ and I’m pretty certain that WE also have spring training here. Do they have it in Peoria too? 

I absolutely love this story. It's one of my favorites and I reread it every couple of years. Thank you so much for sharing it.

I absolutely love this story. It's one of my favorites and I reread it every couple of years. Thank you so much for sharing it. 

A wedding!!!!

I am REALLY liking this 3rd installment. It's great to see these kids all grown up. I had a feeling about what sonny would be doing as an adult, but I have to say Damion totally surprised me and I really love him too. I am always an Edward girl, but I gotta say, in this one I'm liking Damion so so much. He's definitely my favorite character in this story. I really love Sonny too. Reading on...

I just wanted to let you know that I actually like the different POV's. It seems you worry about whether we are just wanting E/B pov, but it's really a nice change to get ALL of the characters thoughts. Be aware that your writing is VERY GOOD. You shouldn't question yourself so much. If we didn't like what you are doing then most probably wouldn't read. Unless they are anonymous shrews that just want to break you down because they're disgusting cowards and can't let you write how you want to without unnecessary harsh criticism. Don't listen to them. Listen to the true fan who loves and accepts whatever you write and enjoys it thoroughly. It's takes a lot of chutzpah to put your writing out there. Don't forget that you are way braver than those anonymous swine who try to cut you down. 

Carmen's story is obviously a one sided exaggeration on Carmen and Emil6's parts. I'm sure Emily left out the part where she was sleeping with Jacob and it was HIS baby. I think Bella should and will give him a chance but I hope she goes slowly so she can learn to trust him again. Her instincts are pretty good as far as he goes but I really hope she doesn't run again when he makes an inevitable mistake. He's a man, he will. He also really disenfranchised Bella by not giving her a chance to not be like Emily. I really don't care what he went through, the girls are NOT the same and he should have talked to Bella instead of attacking her and her character without even really getting to know anything about her. And how about starting with telling her that Tanya was a lying tramp. 

And I am assuming that Kate is lying about having Edward in her bed many times. It was once and he didn't even remember her name. That's probably because he was drunk. But you know whatever she has to tell herself.

The lemon was just fine. Great even. I think Edward is not too concerned with who could be hurt with his actions. I'm not sure I like his attitude about women right now. I know he'll change eventually but for now I think he needs to do a little bit of growing up. He hasn't even asked her how old she is or much more about her. It's like he's just concerned with getting her into bed. I hope he's not so selfish and gets his act together.

I know you kinda moved away from the subject and our couple hasn't talked about it yet, but I'm worried about this Jimmy character. Could he be Alice's James. I know he's supposed to be in jail, but people get out early for good behavior. He was way to interested in the resort. Is he gonna stalk Alice there and is Emmett and Jasper gonna kick his ever lovin' ass? Just wonderin'!!

I know you kinda moved away from the subject and our couple hasn't talked about it yet, but I'm worried about this Jimmy character. Could he be Alice's James. I know he's supposed to be in jail, but people get out early for good behavior. He was way to interested in the resort. Is he gonna stalk Alice there and is Emmett and Jasper gonna kick his ever lovin' ass? Just wonderin'!!

Um... Tyler and Eric live in San Fran... will we be running into them? Ugh!

Another sweet awesome love story. 🎄🎅🏼💜🤗

So sad and sweet, but an amazingly happy ending. a86;a039; 

This is an AWESOME story. Loved it to pieces.

They are fooling themselves, and he is making excuses. They are never gonna be comfortable seeing other people either. I guess that is what makes a story a story, right?

Awesome work BTW ~ LOVE IT!

Just fucking awesome! 

My theory: Jacob (Marmaduke) found out Ursula fired Bella & had the crap kicked out of her. The 

Ok, so I've had all day to think about it and I have a new theory. I thing the government wants Bella cause she's "Einstein" smart and they'll do anything to get her, even kill her parents. I have not figured out about who put the hit on her. Yet.

What does BIM stand for? I know that IM = Iron Man (the vibrator) and BIM references Edwards cock, but what does the B stand for?

This is such a great and wonderful story. Another of my VERY favorites. Love it to pieces!