Reviews by aerobee82
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108580
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well...I don't think I expected that, and it was different. Good chapter, though.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Once Upon a Vampire

Oh, hell. That's NOT good. Was it Carlisle? That's the only person I can thin kof who would be stupid enough to try something like that. I've missed this story, thanks for the update!

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Same In The End

I have to say, I don't like Edward's demon. At all. I am trying to believe 'Edward' won't hurt Bella, but his demon definitely will if Edward can't keep the leash on him.

 

And the ending...my God. How sad and depressing and just, hjkagsgfaouiaod. Will it get worse before it gets better? It sure seems like it...

 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: I Trusted You

It was dangerous to be around Bella when I was like this, I may not hurt her in the same way that I had hurt Paul or Seth, but she was still very much in danger.

 ^ if he 'may' not hurt her, he really doesn't know. God, I'm really anxious right now. Please don't let him hurt Bella. I feel sick...

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Sin

Such a good chapter, and I'm so relieved Alice is giving Edward another chance! I have a feeling this ball is going to be epic, however.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing and I was relieved too! LOL

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

Oh hell. Excellent chapter, please update soon! Bella makes *me* pissy too.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: We Gonna Run This Town

Have I not read this chapter before? I think I have...

At any rate, it was good.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: I'll Always Come Home

Lets hope those words ring true 100% of the time. It just feels like such a tumultuous time, with so much going on. Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: None So Corrupt as Those with Power

Such a good chapter. I could have sworn I read the part where he stayed with the target while she died before, though.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Good to be Home

Good chapter. Loved the whole Edward/Demon/Carlisle action. I kind of want him out of the picture, too. And damn, Aro's 'family' is fucked up. But worse that Edward's. I think.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Silent Night

Oh, wow. This was more depressing than anything. I feel so bad for those children. Demitri and Felix are sick fucks, and I hope they get theirs. Soon.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Holy Night

Poor Charlotte. I can only imagine the rage Edward is feeling right now. God Felix is sick. Both he and Demitri. I want them dead just as much.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Blood is pumping

I suppose you could take the boy out of the asylum, but you couldn't take the asylum out of the boy.

^ I loved this. I don't know why.

 

"A little girl could hold her tongue and yet here you are! Screaming like a fucking little bitch. A little girl is braver than 'Felix of The Volturi'".

^ Hahaha, epic.

And knowing they're going to use Charlie to bait Bella is making me nervous as hell. I don't want her, or Edward, hurt. :-(

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: My December

Yeah, I remember this. THIS is where I started REALLY freaking out and worrying. I'm super mega anxious about Bella leaving Edward. I just REALLY don't want her to be stupid enough to do it. And if she does, I don't want Edward to be stupid enough to believe that it would be because she didn't love him or something. :-(

I can feel the angst coming. Please, please tell me it won't last long. I don't do well with drawn out angst at all.



Author's Response:

There WILL be a HEA. It's pretty much all I can tell anyone at this point.

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

Hahaha, Edward doing laundry. I can't wait for that. I also cannot imagine growing up the way Edward did. Makes it so very complicated. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

We needed to add it to the clothes. I walked past Bella with my container of powder and gave her a smirk. I knew what the fuck I was doing.

^^ LOL. I laughed out loud.

Excellent chapter. I'm still nervous, even more so with Demitri/Felix on the loose, and currently torturing Charlie. I feel so bad for Charlie.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

Great chapter. I smiled at Edward's inner monologue (at how smooth he is, being able to kill a man with Bella in the room) lol. He IS smooth. I feel badly for Bella, and how she misses her parents, even if she didn't really know them. Unfortunately, I have a feeling what I think is going to happen will happen. Not happy about it, but I will stick around. I'm thinking she will voluntarily leave Edward, when Demetri contacts her about her father... and that Edward won't know *why* she did it. Definitely don't expect, or want you to, change your story. But. I hate angst. I hate that it's coming. And I hate knowing that it's going to last for more than one chapter. Sorry, but you like honest. And I can't promise you my reviews will be nice.



Author's Response:

LOL , thank you for your honesty. It's all I ask. I hate not making you happy though, you've been such an awesome reader/reviewer, but you WILL get a happy ending to this story. PROMISE. I hope to write all the angsty chaps together so i can post them together quite quickly. I dont wanna drag out anyones torture. Thats Demetri's thing. LOL. thanks again for the review and for choosing to stick with the story. Greenaway

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Difficult Choices We Make

Wow. Just, wow. Edward is going to lose his shit. And Esme. She just needs to die already. I feel nothing but rage towards her. And at this point, I don't care if Edward kills his own mother. She's not been a mother to him in a long time, anyways. Hard to read, but very good. And I'm wondering if Carlisle will change his tune about his wife one he finds out what she did. I feel sick.



Author's Response:

Well we were both worried about what your reaction would be to this chappie and I don't know about you but I'm relieved. lol. I think the hate you have for Esme is far outweighing anything else, so thats good! Hold onto your esme hate! LOL. thanks for reviewing and sticking with me aerobee82. I really do appreciate it as well as your reviews. :-)

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

Holy shit. I barely have words. Very well done twist with the pregnancy. And I really hope the angst ends, soon. I want Edward off his ass, rescuing Bella NOW. God, I feel sick with worry. Is it bad of me to hope that Esme offs herself after she spills all to Edward? And she's BETTER spill all. I hate thiking about how depressed and lifeless Edward has been... and how hopeless Bella has been.

I'm glad you're feeling better, it sucks being sick. PLEASE update again soon! I'm dying, here.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and kind thoughts. I am better now and it certainly does suck being sick. You know I love you and your reviews. I hope to update about the same time next week. Thanks again. :-)

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: The Rescue - Part One: Farewells

Wow. Awesome chapter. Full of action and pondering thought. There were quite a few one liners in this chapter that I smiled at. Now I'm worried that Edward won't forgive Bella for leaving the way she did, that he won't be able to trust her anymore. That makes me sad. I'll definitely be eagerly anticipating the next chapter!

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Edward's Clan

This was the saddest, angstiest chapter yet! I really want to beat the shit out of Edward for his treatment of Bella. He's being such an idiot. I just feel so depressed, so sad for Bella right now. I mean, it takes two to make a baby. And just because he grew up as he did, doesn't mean HIS child will have to do the same. Just, WTF? Is he not smart enough to realize that? Bella does *not* deserve to be treated like she doesn't matter, like she and the baby don't exist. I hope you update again soon, because I'm frantically upset, here.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

I commented last night, I don't know where my review went...

I thought this was an excellent chapter, but I'm really wanting to kick Edward's ass for treating Bella the way he has (or hasn't, as the case may be.) I understand that he has no idea wtf to do with a child, but to treat her and the baby as if they don't exist is really not helping or endearing me to him, at all. It takes two, you know? AND just because he grew up the way he did doesn't mean *his* child has to. He can be such an idiot for as smart as he is.

I can even understand that he's still hurt over the fact that Bella left him the way she did. But when you're backed into a corner as she was, you'd think he'd realize she didn't WANT to. I hope he pulls his head out of his ass, and soon. I'm just incredibly sad for Bella right now. :-(

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: – the Rescue: Part Three – Home is Where the Broken Hearts Lay

Wow, this was an angstfest. Brought me to tears, again. I wish I could say I understand what Edward's doing, but I don't. I just keep feeling so horrible and sad for Bella in all of this, really. She doesn't deserve it, and neither does their child. It just seems, to me, that Edward really hasn't *tried* to see her point of view on why she left. Please update again soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and I will update as soon as possible. :-) HEA. Promise

 

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

Excellent chapter. It hurt so much to read Edward's angst over Bella and Aidan, (Beautiful name, by the way) as well as knowing Bella's having her own hurt and angst over Edward. I just want them to talk. I so want Edward to fix this, soon. You're making me nuts!

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Finding Purpose

The first 3/4ths of this chapter was so depressing, I was losing hope, again, that Edward would ever make it right. Now, I feel MUCH better. Good chapter. Thank you for ending this one on a more positive note.

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Happier Times

Emmett and the Irish priest cracked me up something fierce! I was so excited to see this update! I'm so anxious about Demitri, though. Will he be killed in the next chapter? If the last chapter is the wedding, I'm wondering if he won't be dealt with... or if you're going to write a sequel. *CURIOUS*

Thanks for the update!

-R

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74014
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

I can be petient. Lol, seriously. Loved the chapter. And it was really cool what Bella was able to do with her shield.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

Yeah. That was pretty steamy. Thanks for such a lemony chapter! Now, I hope they talk soon about changing her. I mean, I think she should wait a few years so she looks closer to Carlisle's physical age, but it would put me at ease if they talked about it.



Author's Response:

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

Only Bella would bite a vampire he thought

^ LOL, I liked this. Of course she would.

I really liked Bella's hug with Jasper, too. It was sweet and touching. I just loved it. I felt the same about Bella and Emmett's moment, with her asking him to walk her down the aisle. They love each other so much.

Really good chapter, as always. And congrats on the nominations! That's awesome!

Rachel



Author's Response:

Rachel,

Thanks so much for the review!  Jasper's hug surprised me when it came to me.  But I love how much he is effected by her emotions.

Thanks again!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City

Happy birthday, Nickey! Hope you ahd a great day, and were able to do whatever you wanted to!

I loved this chapter. I like how you had Jasper speak to Carlisle about the fact that Bella is his true mate, and Esme wasn't. It really made sense to me, how you wrote it.

Can I be a perv and say I can't wait for the lingerie scenes to commence, especially if leather is like an aphrodisiac to their men? Hehehe!

Rachel



Author's Response:

Rachel,

Perv away my good friend!  I am excited to write them.  You will have to wait a little while for the leather, but it will be well. worth. the. wait.!!!  I promise!

I'm glad you got where I was going with the whole 'mate' thing.  Not everyone did.  I just felt that Carlisle has such a connection to Bella that it made sense.  He and Esme never seemed to be that bonded in any of the books.  And poor Edward was so mixed up between his blood lust and love, he could have easily mistaken Bella for his mate when she wasn't.

Thanks for the love! 

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Lollipop, Lollipop, Oh Lolli-lollipop

Would it be too much if I said I liked both sides of Carlisle. But holy shit I like animalistic Carlisle. A lot. He's fucking sexy. Srs. Bsns. I definitely liked his reaction to Bella's lingerie, that's for sure. Makes me wonder what they'll be like once she's a vampire.

And he's always so loving with her. Sigh. And swoon. The family really compliments them well, too. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  And don't feel bad cause I love both Carlisle's too (but Domisle gets my final vote).

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

Wow, what a cliffhanger. I was surprised to see Vicky and Riley enter the fold, and I'm just hoping Bella can be stay human a little longer, as she wanted. If that can't happen, I hope she's changed immediately. I cannot WAIT to see feral, pissed off Carlisle. :)



Author's Response:

All your questions will be answered in the next half hour when I post Chapter 22.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

I can't believe I missed this chapter when it posted! It was excellent, so I'm off to read the next!



Author's Response:

I can't believe it either!  LOL.  Well, look at it this way...you get a double dose tonight. ;)

Thanks for the review.

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

I really liked this!

A hunting trip with Carlisle, yes. Bet that would be sexy. Games with newborn Bella vs. Emmett - and one in which Emmett actually bests Bella, for once.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, I like that idea of Emmett having something to be better at than her.  I will have to think on that a while.  Thanks for the ideas!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

Awesome chapter, bb! I've missed this story. I think it's also badass that you got to meet Jackson! *dreamy sigh*

I actually love Carlisle's dominant side, even if it was a bit harder to read their emotions during the punishment/submission stage. They were both hurting emotionally, and Carlisle could do nothing but stick to his guns. It made sense, and you wrote it well. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Rachel



Author's Response:

Rachel,

Thank you so much for the wonderful review.  I know not everyone will see it the same way, but Carlisle was in a difficult place and needed to break her without actually breaking her.

Thanks again!

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Very enjoyable chapter, bb. I hardly argue with lemons. Especially Carlisle lemons, lol. ;)

I'm looking forward to the wedding and the bitch showdown, though.



Author's Response:

LOL, the 'bitch showdown' is brewing in my brain as we speak.  Hopefully I will find sometime this weekend to put it to paper (or pc in my case).

Thanks for the love and for sticking with me through the dry spell.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: aerobee82 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27- Reunited

Ahh, it seems Kate met Garrett. Now she can GTFO with trying to get Carlisle over and over again!



Author's Response:

LOL.  Yes, the nomad was Garrett, but she was too far lost in her own head to realize what she REALLY saw in the field that day. ;)

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey