Reviews by vampireGIRL1
Out of context by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

The Cullens relied too much on Alice's visions to make decisions about their future. They never believed she could make a decision taking one vision out of context. What if one misguided effort on Alice's part to make her lonely brother happy changed everything? EXB, a bit OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5513 Read Count: 1556
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2016 Updated: 04 Jan 2016
Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Alice really need to mind her own business, she is sticking her nose where it's not wanted.



Author's Response:

You know she isn't my favorite character, but she will learn her lesson ;)

Between women by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 84]
Summary:

Two times a week they reunite after their Zumba class to share their laughs, their secrets. It's the only time they have to be themselves. But life is more than stolen smiles and shared secrets. Four married women bare their souls through cups of coffee.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47623 Read Count: 7312
[Report This] Published: 10 Jan 2016 Updated: 24 Dec 2016
Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Emmett getting what coming to him.



Author's Response:

And we're only starting ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The big drama has arrived.



Author's Response:

So true ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

All the couple's in the story are going have bigger and worse problems then they think.



Author's Response:

Absolutely true. One won't be so 'difficult' as the other though.

thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's good so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll like what will come next.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Trouble not over with yet.



Author's Response:

No, they are really starting now ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Things are bad for Emmett.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 03 May 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Rosalie is going to get even.



Author's Response:

Yes, well, at least she will recover her freedom :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Emmett is really stupid for cheating,jasper has felling out love with Alice,Carlisle has to face reality you will grow old no matter what,Edward I feel bad for him lost of a child can hurt in a lot of ways.

I hope you make Jessica and Jacob both feel very bad for hurting two people.



Author's Response:

You know me, the bad guys always will pay in the end ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Emmett your in big trouble.



Author's Response:

and Rose will get her revenge ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Rosalie marriage is over with for good.



Author's Response:

Sad but true :(

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Something worried is going on with Carlisle.



Author's Response:

We can only hope Esme finds out quickly so she can help him :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Esme trying figure out what going on with Carlisle. Alice need start doing something different with her children. Bella I feel for her I feel uncomfortable too if someone was watching me through the mirrors.



Author's Response:

And Esme will be shocked when she really finds out what really made Carlisle behave like that.

Alice will face some hard truths.

Yeah, poor Bella. But she will find who is the stalker soon.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Alice and Rosalie have lot of problems with there marriages. I don't think one man is going to leave bella alone.



Author's Response:

Yes, they need to have a good talk with their husbands :)

You'll see when the name of the man comes what are his intentions :)

Thank you

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

There more trouble to come.



Author's Response:

Yes, we're just starting. Wait and see ;)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

More drama is on the way for these women.



Author's Response:

Yes, we're only beginning :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Rose is falling apart.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Yep, she's going through her grieving.

Thank you hun, you're always there for me :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Rose is being strong.



Author's Response:

And she will get better :)

Thanks !

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Rosalie got a long battle ahead of her.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but she has not only her family support but her friends too :)

Thanks, hun

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Megalopyge opercularis. A really cute marvel of nature, which in its wisdom made such a venomous creature come in a rather small package. Until man messed with nature. Now the tiny town of Micanopy is at fate's mercy. Remember, don't touch the puss, it's dangerous.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59771 Read Count: 4917
[Report This] Published: 01 Feb 2016 Updated: 31 Mar 2017
Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 12 May 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Almost everyone has agendas.



Author's Response:

Yes; let's see wat happens when the caterpillars intervene :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I vote for jacob.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Now there out.



Author's Response:

And about to make a disaster :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Charlie is an stupid for not listen to bella. Now there going to see Esme.



Author's Response:

You know how is with this kind of stories. The authorities are the last to listen ;)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

The caterpillars blood must be like acid.



Author's Response:

Yes, one more of the mutations :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

More caterpillars are grown big.



Author's Response:

Yes, and soon we'll see more of them.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

ARO is going to meet a bad end,so are Rosalie,Charlie,and Jacob.



Author's Response:

Yes. We'll deal with the first one of them in a couple of chapters ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Jacob saw bella with edward creepily.



Author's Response:

And I can promise something creepier will deal with him ;)

Thanks hun.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Charlie and Jacob are clueless.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they're up to a good surprise ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 03 May 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I don't think Charlie will listen.



Author's Response:

Well, he has other plans for the cave. You'll see. :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Bella see Rosalie again.



Author's Response:

It makes me feel so bad how long I'm taking to answer :(

Thanks hun.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Charlie is the dumbest man on the planet. LOL!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's not the sharpest tool in the shed :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

The caterpillars will grow bigger.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they will. and they'll become a moth ;) 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

ARO,Rosalie,and James are stupid they have no idea what they have unleaded.



Author's Response:

You're right, but they will find out soon :)

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Rose sound mean and something has bit a little girl. I love the story looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it was time I wrote a bad Rosalie ;)

Thanks, you know I really appreciate your friendship and support.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Jacob and Charlie are both jerks I'm glad I'm not married to either of them two. LOL!!!



Author's Response:

There's a reason why both are alone :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Wonder who the caterpillars will kill next?



Author's Response:

Hmm, the next person may not die because of the caterpillars ;)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Bella being kidnapped.

And whoever did it is stupid.



Author's Response:

Well, he's stupid but 'til now, he's been lucky.

Thank yo hun. :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Rose now knows her and James are responsible for this whole mess.



Author's Response:

By now, she figure it out. But there's still some help she can bring.

Thank :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

ARO made a huge mistake.



Author's Response:

Yep, he did it.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

ARO is a heartless man, I hope one of this caterpillars get him.

Rose may have help the child but her, ARO, and James are to blame.



Author's Response:

you know I love to get the bad guys to get what they deserve ;)

Thanks

:)

 

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Caterpillars are attacking everywhere.



Author's Response:

Yes, let's see how the people of Micanopy ends with this mess ;)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Charlie did redeemed himself.

 

Jacob however needs more then his butt kicked.



Author's Response:

And Jacob will get it ;) very soon.

Thanks

The Mating Bond by LailaB Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

It's like tunnel vision. And once eye contact is made, there is absolutely no reversing it. The more physical contact that is made, the more animalistic and primal the bond comes to be. What will it mean when Edward and Bella find out that their bond is unique? What will it mean when they realize that their bond has the power to change the world as we know it?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12251 Read Count: 1927
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2016 Updated: 20 Apr 2016
Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please continue its getting integration.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I don't think the family seen a bond quite like this.

Clarity by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

When you're the son of an ex-boyband member, certain benefits come with the title: A privileged upbringing, money, fame... Some are wanted, some cause more trouble, especially when people wants to be with you to become famous by association. What if you find the one person who wants you for being you? What if, unknowingly, she has more in common with you that you know about?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42983 Read Count: 9842
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2016 Updated: 11 Dec 2017
Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

I don't blame bella for not wanted to be friends with Angela.



Author's Response:

No, as a matter of fact, I think a line is forming to kick Angela's ass. And there's more still to come ;)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Edward when through a lot at a young age.



Author's Response:

Yeah, fame wasn't gentle to him :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Good start!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I'm sure her mom will help her.



Author's Response:

Well, she has to. She's keeping a lot of information for Bella and Charlie's sake :)

Thanks

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Edward really want to ask bella to be his girlfriend.



Author's Response:

We just have to hope he find the courage to do it soon ;)

Thanks my friend :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is getting good so far.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Charlie made a big mistake.



Author's Response:

He's not the brightest parent :)

Thanks :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Bella don't sound happy about edward being with a girl.



Author's Response:

she soon will learn she has nothing to worry about ;)

Thanks

Summary:

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Jacob doesn't get it! What can vampire Edward give human Bella that he couldn't?  Eclipse AU.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2478 Read Count: 1369
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Pack Mind

Sam and the pack members are getting headaches from jacob think about bella.

Jacob forget about his respectability.



Author's Response:

Thanks glad you liked it xx

AAP

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Power Struggle

Billy was full of hate that caused him to loose his mind.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, yes sad for the tribe xx

AAP

Summary:

stories/96487/images/DILLIET-0.jpg

Bella is hurt, Jake's a moron and Charlie finally opens his eyes. Eclipse AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1562 Read Count: 1358
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2016 Updated: 01 Jul 2016
Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jacob when too far this time.



Author's Response:

Thank you, yes he needed more than a slap on the back for that XX

AAP