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I'm 27 year old.I have autism.I love reading books,watching tv shows and movies.I love to read fanfiction stories.My favorite books are inuyasha,chronocrusade,tactics,sailormoon,water for elephants,the host,the hunger games,fifty shades of grey,vampire academy,bloodlines,the dark series and the twilight saga.My favorite music is florence and the machine,the runways,movie soundtracks,music scores and anime music.My favorite tv shows are mighty morphine power rangers,true blood,games of thrones,crime shows,sailormoon,Scooby doo,dragonball z,monster rancher,ronin warriors and family matters.As for movies I like anything.
People came to Eclipse Island to leave their troubles behind, at least that was Jasper thought. Too bad for him the other guests have other plans on mind. Drugs, sex, blackmail, murder... this wasn't the paradise they promised him. A story narrated by Jasper. AH, OOC, HEA.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45931 Read Count: 5889
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Very few clue to go on and very few answer to the three murdered.
Author's Response:
Hi!
It all come clear soon :)
Thanks, because I know you're really busy.
Date: 15 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
The bad guy sure is going to fool everyone but the only one who will know the truth is jasper.
Author's Response:
Yeah, and he feels bad aobut it :)
I'll write you later, I didn't have the chance to answer your mail :( I was a bit.... under the weather ;)
Date: 27 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
That explained a lot about bella and edward. Now all we have to do is wait found out about the handwriting.
Author's Response:
Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Jasper sure doesn't like Mike,but I think there more then one reason bella is staying married to Mike Newton.
Yes I like Robert Pattinson he did a real good job.
1 Which book would you have rewritten?
2 Did you get mad when bella keep telling jacob sorry over and over again?
3 How do you think Renee knew bella and edward would get married soon?
4 Do you think bella and edward should have moved before there wedding day?
5 Why do you think bella let herself get treated like a doormat?
6 Would you have liked to meet Seth and Leah sooner then later?
7 Think was going through Jacob and Charlie mind when bella choice edward?
8 Where there other things beside the tent scene in the eclipse book you hated?
9 Did you think someone should have telled bella no matter what bella was going to hurt jacob one way or another?
10 Think the pack knew that things were going to end badly for jacob?
Author's Response:
Yeah, we only started to know about Bella and Mike. Next we will meet Edward. He will be nice, I promise.
1 Breaking dawn, and you?
2 Yeah, and don't let me get started with the night she spent crying after she told him she chose Edward in eclipse. Poor Edward.
3 I'm sure she was too perceptive, she noticed the obvious bond between them .I think she may had a poer like Marcus.
4 Hmm, maybe. I think they really should had move when they came back from the honeymoon.
5 I could think of millions of reasons, but I think the biggest one was the way her parents treated her. Why do you think she acted like that?
6 Sooner. Maybe they would have been friends.
7 Oh crap! He, he. I think in their minds they threw a tantrum of the size of Texas. What do you think?
8 The night she cried after she told Jacob she chose Edward. What did she expect Edward to think after all that crying? What did you hate?
9 Yeah. Someone would had made her see, how she affected Jacob and Edward.
10 Yeah, but they were all inmature and thought they knew better.
What scenes did you loved in the books but they weren't on the films? Mine was when they told Charlie they were engaged.
Thanks :)
May
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Tanya look more like a gold digger,Mike only looked guilty because someone saw his hands all over another woman body.The other girls look like they want some action,bella is more hurt by Mike action then she let on,Edward and Bella looked comfortable with each other.
1 How do you think bella and edward relationship would have want,if bella cut ties with jacob sooner?
2 Which books in the twilight saga would not change?
3 Was there anything else you would have changed about breaking dawn,other than Jacob imprinting on bella and edward daughter?
1 I think jacob was more into bella;but I think bella only saw friendship with jacob then a boyfriend.
2 In eclipse book I wouldn't have let bella asked jacob to kiss on top of the mountain that night of the newborn fight.
3 I think I would made some small changes in twilight and new moon,then some big changes to eclipse and breaking dawn.
I was wondering if you could email me I have something to ask you.
Author's Response:
Hi! Could you believe that I was sure that I already answered you? Sorry for that.
Tanya iand Michael are awful. About Edward and Bella you'll see ;)
1 That would have been awesome. Their problems would be just the Volturi or Victoria.
2 Just Twilight. I would had made a few things different on New Moon and Eclipse.
3 A few things, maybe have the Cullens moving to a new town, a different approach to the confrontation with the Volturi. And you?
May
Date: 07 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
It's hard to pick who to hate more between Mike and Tanya,jasper should be happy to get away from home to rethink everything,and Alice crush will be just that a crush.
What did I like?In twilight I love how bella life wasn't going to be same ever again,like when bella and edward both are in their meadow,liked when edward invited bella to come and meet his family,and I really love prom at the end of the book.New moon like when bella and edward got back together in Italy.Eclipse love how we got to knew Rosalie and Jasper back stories,the engagement,the newborn fight,meeting Seth,and that jacob lose.Breaking dawn love the wedding,the honeymoon,that bella and edward were going to be parent's,meeting new vampires,and that bella and edward get their happily ever after.
If bella had a backbone?I guess we would have meet a different bella.
I never would have invited jacob to the wedding and I would have given bella and edward a son and daughter.
1 What would you have changed in New Moon?
2 Did you think the pack was getting sick and tried of jacob always thinking about bella?
3 Who would you not invited to edward and bella wedding?
If you have time could you email me I have something I need to tell you.
Author's Response:
Oh God I thought I answered you!
I'm so glad this keeps the record of my asnwers :(
1 Edward leaving. Or maybe he leaves, but he comes back begging for forgiveness, because as much as I like him, he was awful with Bella when he left. No closeness with Jacob too.
2 Yeah. and maybe that added to their hate toward the Cullens.
3 A part of me thinks Mike, Jessica and Jacob; but on the other hand, it was good to make them watch how they got married.
I promise to write you tomorrow and talk a bit (I also have something to talk about :) I have an early meeting, so I promise towrite after that.
May
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Wonder what jasper find out about Tanya,it most be bad.Plus there were this two people who were talking about something.
1 If Tanya had shown up would bella have changed her behavior through edward?
2 Even if jacob hadn't imprint on renesmee,did you think jacob would still kill her?
3 Who did you think Leah hate most the Cullen's or bella?
Author's Response:
The plot thickens!
1 Oh yeah. Jealousy is a powerful emotion. Maybe then she would had some idea of what Edward felt with jacob.
2 No, he was kind of a wuss. He would had thrown a tantrum.
3 Bella. Imagine all day hearing Jacob's lustful and elusional thoughts... I feel bad for Leah.
Oh, I already asked you on my other answer. i have to put some order in my life ;)
May
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
The more people hear about Mike and Tanya the worst it get.
My favorite edward story are? My personal possession by my baby blues it on twcs.
1 Did you think edward vampire side should have claimed bella?
2 Have you read any stories were edward bullied bella and what are your feeling on that subject?
I know your busy some days when really to email me that fine.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I don't think jasper and Alice were in love with bella and edward,think it had more to do with lust then love.
1 Which couple in the twilight saga,did you think Don't belong together?
2 Did you think jacob and Leah would have never work as a couple?
Author's Response:
Hi!
You're right, they're just infatuated. You know I'll never pair Bella with anyone but Edward ;)
1 Hmm, that's a difficult one. Sometimes I think Rosalie made Emmett felt bad, but to think they didn't belong together... No, i think the pairing was fine, except Renesmee /Jacob. But you know my issues with imprinting. What couples you think don't belong together?
2 No, Leah probably would put him in his place. At the first sign of a tantrum Leah probably would kick his ass ;)
I'm writing you a mail :)
May
Date: 20 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Jacob sure is an asshole,but at least bella and edward are free from their worthless marriages. Now the real question is who killed Mike Newton and Tanya Denali? Could be anyone.
1 Do you think Leah was very happy,when she left Sam pack?
2 Think jacob wish he left bella alone?
3 If Jacob had never found out about the baby,did you think the pack would have bella and the Cullen's family alone?
Author's Response:
You know I wouldn't write a nice Jacob ;)
1 Well, at least she didn't have to hear Sam's thoughts about Emily. I think her character was always misuderstood. The author had something against strong women.
2 No. He's so self centered that he probably thinks Bella would had crumbled without him.
3 No, but then maybe the Cullens had left.
Thanks and I'm writing you a mial. You kept me thinking the whole day :)
Date: 23 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
That jacob what an asshole why did that two people make them look at the dead bodies. Could be anyone maybe somebody from both Tanya and Mike past let face it both of them aren't that GOOD of a person anyway.
I will soon you an email soon.
Author's Response:
Hi!
I was so sure I already had answered you :(
I'll post the new chapter tonight, hope you'll like it.
May
Date: 25 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Think somebody hate both Mike and Tanya really bad to kill them.
Spend some time with my nephews.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, they weren't nice to anybody.
May
Date: 09 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
There is more going on then what the police knew everyone else. Something tell me that Alice found out about some important information.
Thank You for the emails.
Author's Response:
Hi! There's a lot more going on, we're just looking at the tip of the iceberg ;)
Thanks to you. I'll write you assoon as I get home :)
May
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Tanya and Mike sure cause a lot trouble.
Author's Response:
Sure, but they got what they deserved ;)
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 32448 Read Count: 10646
Date: 16 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Post BD. Two years had passed since the encounter with Volturi. The Cullen moved to another town to start a new cycle leaving Forks behind. What if Jacob wasn't completely sincere with the story of what he did when he ran away before Bella's wedding? What if there are other covens hiding their different food choice?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38077 Read Count: 2964
Date: 24 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
I'm glad everybody talk about Jacob. Now the Cullen's get to meet the mysterious coven.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Now everybody wants to kick his ass.
Thanks, you know why :) May
Date: 19 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11
Sound like they have more school bullies then at forks. I'm happy that Tanya,Leah,and Seth are happy with the Cullen's family. It's too bad that the La Push tribe pushed them both away, I guess when you push people away you lose more then you knew.
Author's Response:
It's more like now the Cullens care and they are more social :)
Yeah, I'm sure Sue misses them and she will have to work a lot to earn their forgiveness.
:)
Date: 22 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17
Took time for nestor to trust other people.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's a bit wary but he'll do anything for his brother.
Thanks :)
Oh, I may write you later because I want your opinion on something :)
Date: 07 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
This is another good chapter. I think edward has a bad feeling about something.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Edward is a bit overwhelmed, you'll see.
Thanks for your support :) It means a lot to me.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Look like Renny has found her true mate.
Sorry I don't review been busy spend time with my nephews.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Don't worry, I appeciate our conversation through mails, and I know you've been busy; but I'm glad you're having a god time with them :)
Date: 04 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
It will took time for both group to trust each other.
Thank you again for the message.
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
I guess bella eyes are wide open about Jacob.
Author's Response:
There will be more. She wil want to hit him ;)
May
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
I guess no one in the packed knew what jacob was up to. I have to agree with Sam that it will be hard to go to Billy and Sue both because I think both of them could never see jacob betrayal anyway possible, both are so blind to what going on around them. Jacob I think need a good kick in the ass.
Author's Response:
He's going to have it.
The tribe won't be happy with him. Do you like how I finally post the chapter? I really rewrote it several times.
May
Date: 06 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
New coven sound interesting.
Author's Response:
Hi! Hope they look fine. They're part of the good ones.
May
Date: 14 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Jacob sure is angry with the La Push Pack. Sue and Charlie are both a disgrace when it come to begin a parent.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'm getting ready for him leaving ;)
You know what I think about Charlie, and now also about Sue.
Thanks.
May
Date: 02 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
It's sad that Seth tribe bullied, but at least he better off with the Cullen's family he was the only one who supported them when no else would, i think Seth is a better person then most of the tribe's. I don't blame renesmee for not when to be close to Jacob at all.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, I knew you would like it. You know my opinion on the Quilleutes.
Thanks.
May
Date: 27 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18
If I we're this bullies I watch my back. And Jacob just doesn't understand how wrong he was for doing what he did.
Author's Response:
Hi!
That will be fun.
And about Jacob... he will understand ;)
Thanks
Date: 25 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Jacob sure knew how to mess everything up.
Thank you for the message.
Author's Response:
He, he. I'm not on team Jacob ;)
You're welcome.
May
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
ARO power hungry and that is no lie.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that he is. And he's also full of pride and he feels like the Cullens embarrassed him.
Thanks, as always you're there for me :)
May
Date: 22 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I guess Charlie has regret but that his own fault, sue she was just as bad too never giving Seth and Leah a second thought, and Jacob he something else.
Author's Response:
Hi!
You opened my eyes to Sue's selfishness. You know that now I admire Leah a lot. ;)
Thanks for always being there for me :)
May
Date: 29 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Now I'm ready for a new adventure.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I really appreciate your support.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
I'm looking forward to heard about Alice planned.
Author's Response:
Hi! For once, she's going to let the others choose :)
Thanks my friend.
May
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
Yeah there leaving forks,Washington. Not that I blame them I think jacob sister Rachel has it all wrong it was jacob own fault as while he was the one who don't want to give up. Everything sure has getting a lot worse for the Cullen's family, the tribe don't know anything they lose two of their tribe members. The La Push Pack are nothing but full of hate and prejudices.
Author's Response:
Hi! Well, not all of them, but the mayority.
Next chapter will be on Jacob POV and will explain a lot more.
Thanks
May
Date: 29 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
That old man sure laid it into Jacob, he right bella saw Jacob nothing more then a brother. That just goes to show you that some people don't know everything.
Your welcome!!!
Author's Response:
And there's more the old man has to say ;)
May
Date: 12 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
Now things have gotten more interesting by the minute.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but they have to train before the action comes.
Thanks :)
During twenty years, the old lighthouse on Long Beach remained abandoned. Now, on behalf of the owner, Edward led a group of his friends here to repair it in the hopes to sell the property. Edward wants to use this opportunity to finally declare his feelings to Bella. Will he have the chance? Who is crying at night? What are those noises that kept the locals away? EXB OOC
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36182 Read Count: 6219
Date: 07 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Tanya get her revenge against Carlisle and Esme. I think it was justice server. Carlisle and Esme both where heartless.
Author's Response:
You're right. I'm always for bad guys getting what they deserved :)
Thanks for always being there and listening to me :) XOXO
Date: 05 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Now this time Tanya get to face Carlisle.
Author's Response:
Yes! This is the moment we were waiting for :)
Date: 29 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Tanya isn't afraid to help Bella out. I like ghost Tanya, I think Tanya has some unfinished business with Carlisle and Esme.
Author's Response:
Hmm, yes, she has something...
Date: 05 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Jacob sure can be a pain in the ass.
Author's Response:
Yeah, you know I don't like him :)
Date: 30 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
We got to meet Alice and her sister.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think by now I introduced all the characters. now let's the scares begin ;)
Date: 28 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I'm glad they talked about everything both need to say something about why they weren't in each other live's.
Author's Response:
Hi! They have more to talk, Edward has to woo her, and then they have the lighthouse ;)
Date: 18 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Intersect first start.
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 20 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Edward really want ask bella out on a date.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but I'm sure you'll like what Bella has to say and how it will turn out :)
Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Edward finally asked bella out. Jacob and Irina were dating I guess not anymore, jacob sure has some angry problems.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but it will take a few chapters for them to be together-together ;)
Oh, you'll see what's the deal with Irina, I promise she's a good girl.
Thanks for always being here for me :)
Date: 10 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Alice sister need help she doesn't understand the different between someone wanted to help her and thinking she in love. I think there is a ghost spirit's living there.
Author's Response:
Oh, and Alice will have a few words with her.
For the ghost part... it's kind of living there.
Thanks :)
Date: 14 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Now we get to found out are mystery ghost.
Author's Response:
At least a bit more, soon they'll find out the whole story.
Thanks :)
Date: 17 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Hope ghost scared Jacob and Angela away.
Author's Response:
The ghost will make a bit more than that ;)
Author's Response:
The ghost will make a bit more than that ;)
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Carlisle past hide a lot of dark secrets.
Author's Response:
You'll be surprised ;)
Date: 25 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
That one cop acted like a jerk. Jacob i wouldn't trusts him as far as I can tosses someone.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, you'll like they way I'll deal with them :)
Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Edward going to confront Carlisle.
Author's Response:
Yeah! It's going to get interesting.
Author's Response:
Yeah! It's going to get interesting.
Date: 03 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Tanya was pregnant that most not be only reason she got killed. Carlisle you have a lot of explaining to do.
Author's Response:
;) ;) I'm sure you read my mind.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I feel bad for edward founding out about his uncle Carlisle and aunt Esme were both evil people. I hope bella and edward never see jacob again after what he did.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but otherwise he would never had found about his grandmother and Tanya.
Oh, I got more for Jacob ;)
Date: 15 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Epilogue
Carlisle ghost, would hate to be next person alone in the lighthouse with him.
Author's Response:
Not really; he's just making amends. He's protecting them... alone, just the way he had to end.
Thanks
Volturi's banquet hall prides in offering the perfect setting for your event. Whether it's a princess themed kid party or the wedding of your dreams. They just have what you need, even when you haven't realized you need it. Let's see what happens in a busy Saturday afternoon at Volturi's.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13338 Read Count: 1793
Date: 19 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Rosalie is going to be in a loveless marriage and now two Cinderella theme parties.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, it looks like they are all not related, let's see what happens :)
Date: 19 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
All the men wanted to watched a game while the girls are taking care of there children. It was very funny that kid puke on Alice.
Author's Response:
I don't know if that's common in your country, but here, they always have screens with the game so the Dads watch the game while watching their kids.
I always wanted someone puking on Alice :)
Date: 19 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Everything going to be a mess.
Author's Response:
That's the fun part :)
Date: 19 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Poor girls I knew what feel like to be afraid of the dark.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that's the only angst that will be on the story. There wasn't a way those girls would remain inside that room.
Date: 21 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Bella aren't going to be happy to see Lauren there.
Author's Response:
Bella isn't aware of Lauren, but she's nothing to Edward... or to anybody else ;)
Thanks for always supporting me and listening.
Date: 22 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Now that what call a happy ending for two parties and a wedding that never should have been planned in the first place. Lol!!!
Have Happy Thanksgiving!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was all for the giggles.
It really surprised me when you mentioned Thanksgiving, I wasn't aware... Happy thanksgiving to you and your family!
Date: 28 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue
Very happy ending for everyone while expected Mike Newton mom.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I wanted to write one sweet story.
I based Michael's mom in my ex-mother in law :(
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Beta: EdwardsFirstKiss
COMPLETE. When Bella asked the ruby-eyed vampire to end her life, she never expected him to 'kidnap' her instead. Who is he, and where is he taking her? A crazy adventure begins, unravelling unprecedented secrets. World travel. AU/OOC. NC17 for strong language, some violence and mild BDSM.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131671 Read Count: 94017
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 25 - An Unravelling
Bella gets to see her dad and jacob again.
Jacob may not like bella has to say about edward being her mate,but then again he has no say in her life anymore.
Charlie he may look happy to see bella alive he going to be angry too.
Jacob is going have to learn move on with his life,he can't have it both ways trying have a relationship with nessie and expat to have bella in his life too over guilt.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella will see her dad and Jacob in the next chapter!
And yes, you're right, Jacob will have to move on with his life, and knowing that Bella is well will help him do that :)
Thank you for always commenting <3
Love,
Ara
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31 - Request
Edward has a lot on his plate to deal with.
Date: 31 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 38 - Ad Infinitum
Bella and Edward got there happily ever after.
Bella forgive both jacob and nessie.
Author's Response:
Thank you for being such a consistent supporter for the story :) I hope you liked the ending!
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part II)
It will take time for bella to heal but she going have to confront nessie, jacob, dad, and everyone who add to her pain she need to let knew how much it hurt for her to be there and why she feel she can't be around jacob and nessie anymore.
Author's Response:
They need to communicate better, you're right again! We will see if Bella eventually manages to confront her demons. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29 - Tick Tock
There something weird going on.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Ravioli and Kink (Part I)
I'm bella enjoying being away from home, but I think that what she need right now time to heal and I don't think she can did it with jacob pack, her father, and doctors watching her. Billy knew this is what bella need in order to heal. But both nessie and jacob need to leave her alone I know they never meant to hurt her but they are by making her stay where she feel more uncomfortable then anything else. I'm glad Leah voiced her thoughts on the matter.
Author's Response:
That's true - Edward is taking her on holidays for that very purpose. Thank you for your thoughtful comments :) Love reading your observations.
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Where are we going?
Jacob must feel pretty guilty for what he to bella, but I feel he hurting her more then he think.
Author's Response:
You are right, he is hurting her far more than he realises. Jacob is trying to protect Bella from external threats - more to be revealed in the later chapters :)
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap
Poor bella to have that happen on your wedding day of all things.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it was the ultimate disaster for poor Bella... Let's see if Edward will cheer her up :)
Date: 17 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - A Hidden World
Edward sure taking bella around the world, I'm glad she on the road to recovery. Bella will get knew edward more about his past. But something tell me bella going have to talk to her dad sooner or later.
Author's Response:
That's sharp of you, Bella will have to talk to her dad in the future. Thanks again for taking the time to comment :)
Date: 21 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15 - Impetus
Bella and Edward have moved forward with them sayin I love you to each other.
Jacob and Nessie May never like edward because he is a vampire, but it's not there decision what bella does with her life now.
Charlie will have a lot to say, as will bella but they both will have open up at some point.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your last two reviews. I really enjoy reading them. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the following chapters :D
Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 27 - A Better World
Bella have better watch out there some people out that want her and her mate Edward dead too.
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 - Welcome
I can't wait for bella to confronted Charlie and Jacob both I have a feeling this will be good and heartbreaking for bella,but it had to happen sometime better late then never.
Author's Response:
Hello!
Thank you so much! I have attempted to write this scene several times since it is pivotal, and I find it one of the most challenging ones so far! I really hope you will like it when it comes out :-)
Love,
Ara
Date: 18 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32 - The Runaway Princess
Bella is stronger then she looks.
Author's Response:
She is indeed! :) Thanks for commenting! <3
Date: 26 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 16 - Ingress
Bella is getting more better by the minute, I'm really glad she left La Push. Sound like leaving the place that brought you pain, was better medication for bella health.
I really hope bella let everyone knew what they put her through. She needed help but some idiots that better to let her stay were the people who brought her pain live.
Author's Response:
Yes, she definitely is getting better! It's so nice that you noticed her improvement!
Thanks so much for your consistent reviews, I really appreciate them!
Love,
Ara
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26 - Man in the Meadow
Something are still not addicted up I feel we got more questions then answer.
I don't think Charlie tell bella everything.
Date: 14 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 - Fainting, Fingers & Fountains
Bella had some bad things happen to her, I think with edward she feels more comfortable with him then she did with jacob. Bella starring to feel more lighter than darkness, she changing some.
Author's Response:
Yes, she definitely is lightening up :) Thank you for commenting! <3 ~Ara
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part II)
At least bella trying something new that different. It got jacob and her trouble life out of her mind at least a while.
Author's Response:
Yeah :) Thanks for commenting!
Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Donor (Part I)
Bella made the right decision to stay with edward, I think it would be very good for her health.
Jacob head must be in overload all the trouble that started three years ago and bella deciding to stay with a vampire. But there isn't anything he could do about it if he kept forcing bella back she could very while hurt herself worse then he think.
Author's Response:
I agree with you, Bella definitely needs time away from La Push to clear her head. Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 11 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 - The Volturi
Bella got a curious mind wanting to hear about edward weathered its good or bad. And Edward he wanted to knew about bella too.
Author's Response:
Yes, they're discovering more and more about each other. Thanks so much for your consistent reviews, I really appreciate them :)
Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 28 - Metamorphosis
Bella now has began the change.
Date: 03 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 36 - Two Covens
This is a real good, I love reading ever chapter's of this story!
I would love to see a jacob, nessie, and Charlie point of view after bella tell jacob to leave, the kidnapping, the rescue, and when bella tell them edward her mate.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reviewing every chapter <3 I'll keep your request in mind, if I manage to write it I'll definitely post it :)
Date: 22 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 23 - Operation Rescue-the-Hostages
Edward think the only way to free bella family is to give up his freedom.
Author's Response:
Hi, sorry for the late reply! Thank you for commenting. Yes, that's what Edward is thinking :) We'll see if Bella can save him from sacrificing his freedom.
Love,
Ara
Date: 08 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14 - Crossroads
Bella wasn't being selfish she need an escape from the pain. But I guess if she has to go back to La Push face her pain and the heartbreak of the past. I know Charlie, Jacob, and Nessie were worried about bella, but they all want about it the wrong way helping her. Bella being protected by man she was to be married too was even a worse mistake by jacob himself. I believe jacob still trying protect bella because he feel guilty about breaking bella heart. I'm trying to be mean say this I feel jacob is bad reminder of what bella lose with him. Jacob can't charge the past no matter how much he wants to protect bella because of his guilt in order for bella to be free he has let her go the life they plan together is gone there no getting it back it's lost forever in a cloud of dust.
Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9 - Ambush
There more going on then bella knew about. Edward admitted he care about bella.
Author's Response:
Yes, there definitely is a lot of things going on that Bella doesn't know about. And yes, he finally did :)
Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17 - Circuses and Semicircles
Things have getting more interesting by the minute.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you think so! :)
Date: 09 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18 - Propositions
Victoria has no clue that bella mother is Renee.
Author's Response:
More to be revealed soon! :)
Date: 11 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 19 - A Lover's Lie
Bella and Edward had sex there first time.
Bella still has a lot to learn.
I can't wait for bella to see her dad and jacob again,something tells me the only way for bella to be free of jacob is to leave La Push,but I think she will still visits her dad.
Author's Response:
Love hearing your thoughts and guesses! More to be revealed soon~
Date: 16 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20 - Family
I'm looking forward to bella seen Charlie and Jacob. I'm sure bella has a lot to say to jacob when she see him.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's something she definitely has to come to terms with :) Thank you for your consistent comments, I truly appreciate them!
Date: 18 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 21 - "For the Best"
Bella meeting new people and she has a journal belong to her mother I hope bella find some answer from her mother past.
Author's Response:
Yes! She will definitely get answers soon :) Thank you for your review!
Date: 20 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22 - Letting Go
Bella has accepted edward,and letting go of jacob black too.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 29 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10 - Two Histories
Bella is getting a little more taste of the world of BDSM with edward. Bella, must be feeling more freedom then she did in La Push and Forks. Even with the vampires coming after bella especially founding out a little bit about her mother. I have agree with bella her and edward are more alike then she thought, both felt like prisoners edward gets live forever and bella had so much happen to her first with James and Jacob imprinting on her best friend on her wedding day. I think jacob,nessie,her father,and the wolves were wrong with keeping her there I understand they don't want her to kill herself, but they could have done something different to help her. I agree edward did the right about not killing bella taking her away from the pain. I have a feeling if bella ever see her dad Charlie, nessie, and jacob she going have to be opened with them about everything she being feeling. Even if bella forgive jacob and nessie I don't think bella will ever be as close them as she was once before.
Author's Response:
Hello, thank you for your detailed reviews! :) Yes, some hurts are impossible to heal completely, and I think this is one of them. The freedom and fresh air is indeed good for Bella, and the two are getting closer :) We shall see what happens in the future~
Date: 02 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11 - Escape and Escapism
I can understand why she doesn't want to see her dad or anyone from La Push, she must still be having a hard time to face them. But if bella wants the answer to her questions about her mother, while it mighty her to understand why the vampires are after her in the first place.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is having a hard time facing them after everything that happened. But she will have to face her fears, eventually. Thank you for taking the time to comment!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 - Reunion
I knew bella feels guilty for not calling Charlie, but I feel it was wrong of Charlie to be friends with jacob after the whole imprinting mess. As for jacob I believe it's time for him to let bella go he only hurt himself and bella more by holding on because of guilty he carry for imprinting on bella friend. I have a feeling bella doesn't want be back in La Push anytime soon.
Author's Response:
They are in a difficult situation - there's a reason why Charlie and Jacob remained friends which will be explained more in the later chapters. You're definitely right about Bella not wanting to be back in La Push! I think nobody would, in her situation. Thanks for commenting :-)
Date: 20 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - Of Vampires and Alcohol
Bella surprises edward in a lot of ways.
Author's Response:
She sure does :D
Date: 28 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 35 - The Aftermath
Bella and Edward are okay!!
Bella know she will have to have a heart to heart with Charlie and Jacob both.
Author's Response:
Yes, they are!! And yes, we are coming full circle soon :)
Thank you for taking the time to comment :D
Date: 13 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 37 - Full Circle
Edward is so sure killing ARO is the right thing to do.
Date: 01 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33 - Through Smoke and Mirrors
Edward going to get bella.
Bella will have to fight back, I know whatever happened; if bella and edward survival. Bella going have to talk to both jacob and nessie, let them know she found happiness.
IT safe to say bella moved on with her life.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella has definitely moved on! :)
Thanks for taking the time to comment - I really appreciate it!
Love,
Ara
Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces
Some the trouble is over with for now.
Author's Response:
You're right! Finally little breather :)
The Cullens relied too much on Alice's visions to make decisions about their future. They never believed she could make a decision taking one vision out of context. What if one misguided effort on Alice's part to make her lonely brother happy changed everything? EXB, a bit OOC.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5513 Read Count: 1556
Date: 04 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Alice must really had to make up for her part in edward pain and him leaving.
All always be here as friend to listen to you and have your back always your friend vampireGirl1!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! *insert big hug*
Date: 03 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Both edward and bella are having problems with there families.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but they will solve them. You know me HEA, always.
Thanks!