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I'm 27 year old.I have autism.I love reading books,watching tv shows and movies.I love to read fanfiction stories.My favorite books are inuyasha,chronocrusade,tactics,sailormoon,water for elephants,the host,the hunger games,fifty shades of grey,vampire academy,bloodlines,the dark series and the twilight saga.My favorite music is florence and the machine,the runways,movie soundtracks,music scores and anime music.My favorite tv shows are mighty morphine power rangers,true blood,games of thrones,crime shows,sailormoon,Scooby doo,dragonball z,monster rancher,ronin warriors and family matters.As for movies I like anything.
Twenty five years ago the quiet town of Forks witnessed the massacre of the Cullen's cult. Now the FBI has a new lead, and rookie agent Isabella Swan comes to investigate. What will she find?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46161 Read Count: 21802
Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
Having esme there help a lot. Charlie sure is a scared cat, jacob is a dumbass bella never lead him on it Charlie get a brain stupid.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Esme and the others will help lots ;) Charlie is terrified but his greed pushes him to continue and Jacob... I consider him a waste of space an oxigen
Thanks hun ;)
May
Date: 15 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24
We're getting close to the truth. Jacob is too far gone he still has it in his mind bella is going to be his, I think he listened to Charlie way too much.
Author's Response:
Yeah! They're almost there.
Jacob was delusional by himself, but now with two voices imagine how crazy he will get!
Thanks!
May
Date: 21 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25
I'm guessing these most be the person voice they been hearing. Now will get to find out why bella need to be there as while.
Author's Response:
Hi! I just posted the chapter, and yes, you wil get the answers ;)
Thanks.
May
Date: 23 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26
Can't wait for the next chapter. Having bella there help a lot they got answer to some of there questions,love the way zafrina tell jacob off, because she right bella will never love jacob ever. He so childish, hard head, asshole.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Zafrina doesn't have any kind of patience for Jacob ;) I'm so glad you'reon the same team as me, the 'Boo Jacob' team :)
Thanks
May
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27
Charlie judgement day coming for you. I love your stories about bella and edward and some other people too, they show how edward and bella can grow together as a couple, more then the books I felt that some things were rush or don't get worked on. And that Charlie keep pushing for bella and jacob to be together ever minute. I wish bella knew early on that holding on to jacob was wrong, because you can't give everyone what they want, because that make them think in there head there hope when there not. Then again jacob,Charlie,and Billy won't much help either you can't plan someone future think there perfect for each other what happen if the other doesn't feel that way it could blow up in your face. I believe that Destiny find you or you make your own. I like bella better in fanfiction because there her and edward are so much stronger. I did love twilight but some thing I don't. What was some of your favorite twilight parts and ones you don't like. I will always be a team edward fan. Oh Charlie, Jacob, and Billy here one for you get a life outside of Forks,Washington no one like living in one place sometimes.
Author's Response:
Hi! You're so right, I got so desperate with Bella allowing Jacob to push her to be with him. Honestly, I was team Edward but I just liked his character, but when I read 'Midnight sun' I fall in love Edward. I love that the Cullens really act like a family, like Edward and Rosalie aren't best friends but they're loyal to each other no matter what.
Things that I don't like: I don't think Charlie was a good father, he just took care of Bella's basic needs, but he was never there for her, and don't let me start with the infamous kiss Jacob stole from Bella! What kind of father doesn't defend his daughter? I really dislike Jacob, he's a whiny, manipulative jerk. (I think you can notice it in my stories, he is the bad one or an idiot).
And that obsesion to keep Bella in Forks... I think Charlie loved Bella as long as she never messed with his routine. The same goes for Jacob and Billy.
I owe you an apology, I said that I would post the next chapter from my other story. Honestly, I'm stuck in the recap. I promise to work in it this long weekend. (This monday is a rest day here in Mexico).
I'm so glad to have the chance to talk to you. If you want to talk more with me, this is my email mayrame@hotmail.com
May
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
Yeah bella becoming a vampire.Jacob better feel sorry for what he did,it's all his fault.
What did I think about the volturi? There kind of creepy and scary,but maybe it just for look.
Is it possible to find redemption for them?For some of them yes,the other half not really.
Yes,I believe Marcus is the only one who has shown respect.Even if he quit most of the time.The only time he spoke was when he saw bella and edward bond and the half-human,half-vampire children were there.
Do you believe that Marcus saw how strong of a love bond bella and edward and what would it look like?
Did you think that if Marcus saw the bond between bella and jacob,what did think he would see?
Which Volturi one did you not trust?
Author's Response:
Hi! Well, this time I'm goping to give Jacob a chance to redeemed himself. I hope you'll like what I'm doing to him ;)
About Marcus, I think he noticed E&B bond, but he was so 'anethezised' that he really couldn't do a thing. I pictured the bond like some colored 'aura' around people, the stronger the bond, the neater the color.
I did not trust Aro, because he was always scheming, Caius was always angry, so we knew what to expect from him. But Aro had a very twisted mind.
Thanks hun.
May
Date: 14 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
Look like jacob got revenge on Stefan,because of him jacob injured bella.
Can't wait to see what happens with edward and bella.I'm a little curious about what your going to did with jacob.I hope he apologies to bella about what happen even if it wasn't some of his fought.
It's less you showed how jacob thought with his brain,not be dumb to listen to the voice over and over again.I'm glad you did jacob trying to make amends for his action,unlike some other authors who always make bella forgive jacob too soon.But sometimes it took time to forgive people like jacob for their actions,hell it even takes year's sometimes to heal.
I think that was always the problem with the twilight saga was bella being too forgiving about jacob action,I think if jacob cared about bella feelings he wouldn't have fight too hard for her,but then again maybe bella wasn't helping any either cause more problems then need.
What did you think did you believe some things bella shouldn't have been to forgiving about?
I think jacob when too far one time,when he telled bella he wishes she was dead,just because she wanted to be with edward.But did you think there was more to his word's?
Would you had called Renee after jacob force kiss,Charlie taking jacob side over his daughter?
Also should bella had stop seen jacob sooner,then later?
Think jacob and bella both had different point of view in eclipse,remember when bella said what might have been and jacob saying what could have been.I don't think there would have been a future for them because of the imprinting thing that just keep happening.Maybe jacob just doesn't get it,I think that why all the imprinted wolves tried to tell him it better to just let them go then to break their hearts.
Charlie was on team jacob too much,don't you just when yell at him or slap him?
Just wish that edward and his family kick wolves butt sometime?
I was happy when edward in the breaking dawn movie got to hurt jacob,one though keep going in my head it about time.
IT too bad edward don't get to did that in eclipse book.Would you have love to seen that?
What would you have done to change about books or characters themselves?
Which characters did you wish had getting there ass kick more,more importantly who should help those characters give the ass kicking to?
Which characters would you write chew out speeches for,and what would you say to each of them? If it were me I say let your angry out and go for it,say what you been die to say to them?
While had fun talk to you about this.
And also IT my mom 49th birthday today.
While can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi!
I hope you'll like what I'm doing to Jacob on the epilogue (hint: he won't have any interaction with Bella ;)
I think the problem with Bella being too forgiving with Jacob, is that she never truly understood is how much she hurt Edward and even Jacob. She needed to think what was to be on Edward's place, just to understand how does it feel. And to Jacob, because he was like a little child. She should had put an end to his tantrums. Jacob telling her she was better off dead, it was an epic tantrum.
Also she was too forgiving with Charlie. The forced kiss, she broke her hand, the time he spent fishing instead of talking to her... I think he would rather had Jacob as a son, than Bella.
I think they kicked the wolves butt in a figurative way. The Cullen showed how closeminded the tribe was. But maybe a more physicall proof was necesary ;)
I would have made different... Renesmee. Ok, E&B have a baby, but why that name? and the imprint... noooo! And obviously that tent scene in Eclipse, it's wrong in so many ways. Oh, I would had made Alice less annoying.
Obviusly Jacob needed an ass kicking. Not necessarily by Edward, maybe Emmett or Jasper. (Who would you want to have his or her ass kicked?)
Honestly, my 'chew out' speech would go for Bella, but then, the story would had ended too quickly ;) Then Edward, to ask him to be more explicit about his feelings and to not leave.
To whom would you make it?
I also have fun talking to you. Sorry for taking so long; hope you and your mother had a wonderful evening on her birthday.
See you soon. (Maybe tomorrow, if work lets me)
May
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue I
Love the first ending,can't wait for the next one.
Get my answers
1 Who did think should have his or her asses kicked?Charlie,Jacob,Billy,Mike,Jessica,Lauren,Alice,and the La Push Pack.
2 Who I would write chew out speeches for?Lauren,Mike,and Jessica would be first because they won't bella friend's.Second Alice for trying to control thing's.Third the La Push Pack,and finally Charlie,Billy,and Jacob because they need to mind there own business quit worrying about bella moving away,having her own boyfriend,or a life of her own.
1 What would have changed about the books?
2 Which book don't you like the most and which book is your very favorite?
3 Did you think jacob transformed too young into a wolf?
Author's Response:
Hi!
Now that we've discussing the book, I'm rethinking some of my old ideas.
1 I've been thinking and maybe I wouldn't made Edward leave and I think I would brought the Denali clan sooner. To even a bit the number of vampires VS wolf pack. Oh and that tent scene. That's my biggest no no.
2 My favorite in the saga is the bit of midnight sun, that's what mademe love Edward. Breaking dawn is the one I could do without, Renesmee and a third part narrated by Jacob, no.
3 No, I think part of the temperament of the wolves in general, depended on thier raging hormones. See Paul, he phased always. I think it was to make the elders teach them how to control their temper, though the elders didn't take their job so seriously.
What do you think about Rosalie? And Emmett? And poor Esme who only has like three lines in the whole saga but is a very important character.
May
Date: 25 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue II
Great way to end the story!!!
What did I think of Rosalie?Rosalie has a lot of anger and pain that she held in sometime,then her angry come out in full force.Think some people see her as a cold hearted bitch,who doesn't see what she has like a wonderful husband in Emmett,a family that love her.Think Rosalie past made her into a different person,who past still haunted her in many ways,I think her angry hide how she really feels.
Emmett who wouldn't love having him for a brother,who make joke's,but is a scared looking man,and has a good heart.
Esme is a good mom,wonderful person,love to cook,and take care of her family even bella.Wish we get see mom bear claws come out which would have been more fun.
IT too bad we don't get to knew all the characters in the books,make you feel something is missing in a lot of area.There more to the story then we know about.
1 Did you think Emily should had more time in the books?
2 Did you like a good edward or a bad boy edward?
3 Who did you think could understand edward and bella bond?
4 Did you think edward vampire side would have been more open to bella about how he felt?
5 Did you think Renee should have had more time in the books?
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm glad you liked it :)
1 Yeah, Emily is another character with an interesting story. How did she feel about Leah? After all they were cousins
2 Depends, I'm a sucker for mobward, but because I'm a nerd I love cute nerdwards. So I think it depends of my mood. And you?
3 Marcus without a doubt.
4 Yeah, Edward was so used to bottle everything inside, they had terrible communications problems.
5 Maybe. I feel defensive of Renee because she ends as the bad parent in many fics and i think Charlie was a worst parent. At least Renee tried to give her best for Bella.
I've been reading my favorite fics, and I'm looking for new ones to read. What are you favorites?
May
England, 1926. Edward just came back after his father's death. Isabella Higginbotham just finished her education. Both came back to the little town of Forkshire to begin what they consider will be a boring life, or so they believe...
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31537 Read Count: 9580
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Alice sure took a turn for the worse she lose her mind.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I think Alice is the killer.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I'm sure there are a lot of people how wanted kill Carlisle but hey he gone now so he in hell where he belong. Alice she knew how to go below the belt.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Esme sure get in too deep with Carlisle but at least he left his daughter and esme the house.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
There more to the murders of Carmen and Carlisle someone how hate them both so badly.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Kate sure is dumb edward Doesn't love her get over it.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Carmen died so how could the killer be. Alice she not brightest person jasper want uneven to did with her.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
WoW some will he left behind. Sure that was a shocker.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Still a lot of mystery to the murder. Yet not many clues.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Jacob sure is stupid and Seth is nice I like him better then jacob.
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Tanya Doesn't know the only reason Carlisle agree to a divorce because he wanted bella.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Carlisle dead so how killed him everyone must have reason to kill should a heartless man.
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Alice sure know how act her age being a bitch get you no where bet Carlisle wishes he where somewhere else about now.
Author's Response:
Well, with that father, she was bound to be immature.
May
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Tanya sure doesn't like been married to Carlisle.
Author's Response:
Hi! I want to thank you for reading the whole fic and reviewing. I'm glad to hear from you.
Now that you finished, you know why she really doesn't like it.
May
Date: 16 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Both edward and bella sure like each other but Carlisle looks angry he must be mess-up.
Author's Response:
I love when Edward and Bella find each other in the beginning of a story. There's something magical, or I like to think of it that way
May
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Sounds like everyone is in everybody's business there.
Author's Response:
Yeah. I love Agatha Christie's stories and also Father Brown mysteries. Most happen in England in little towns, and people is always in each other businesses. I find it funny, because it is like that here in Mexico
May
Date: 15 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I have a bad feeling about Carlisle I don't think he a nice guy maybe an evil bastard if you know what I mean.
Author's Response:
You have a really good eye to get who's going to be the evil character, in all my stories you get them right away. :)
May
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue
Love the happy ending. Too bad Alice through murder would help her, I hope she regretted everything in the end. But then again you don't always get what you want in life.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, I guess Alice couldn't live with the regrets; but the others got their happy ending, even people like Kate who really needed just a push into the right direction.
Thanks so much for reading and sharing your opinion with me.
May
Tanya is a lonely girl, working on her confidence and trying to move on with her life, she thinks she found her future with a new man. Bella and Edward moved to make a fresh start in a new enviroment. Will they get it? AH OCC EXB
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21001 Read Count: 6731
Date: 22 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue
Now that what I call happy end. Thank for the story and heartfelt messages. Good job!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for taking time to read and for trusting me.
I hope you and your mother are fine. I'm still sending you my good vibes.
May
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15
I'm happy Tanya made it out alive that the ghost help. Can't wait to see the next chapter with bella and edward hope at last they never have to see the evil bitch esme again.
Author's Response:
I'm glad youlike it. Tanya deserves to live well.
May
PS Hugs!
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14
Omg esme should be lock away somewhere,she pure evil. I hope edward goes back home soon. It her own fault that her greed over money get to her. Something tells me that if she goes to the house there going be a ghost waiting for her to arrive. My mom doing a little better the funeral for her dad is on Monday. While can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hun, you're in my prayers. I hope with time she finds solace.
I'm posting the new chapter, I really hop you like it.
May
Date: 19 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16
Esme went nuts but she should have left her son and wife alone now she at the bottom of the ocean with all the two bad soul. They might find her body then again maybe not. Hey the evil bitch esme is dead. Wish I know what going through esme and Jacob mind when they meet there end. By the way thank for your message on my review to my mother and me. But my mother got some good news from job a raised and a start p sorry I have autism can't spell have time.
Author's Response:
I'm glad things are going up for you and your mother.
Thank you for reading, commenting and sharing a bit of your life with me.
May
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10
Nice job on the history of the house. WOW the bitch has landed in forks. Bet she has a lot to say to her son. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the history of the house. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Tanya better be careful first her best friend goes missing and now her aunt dies have a feeling that her aunt Irina tried to tell her that drink had something in it.
Author's Response:
Things are going to change for Tanya
May
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13
Omg I hope Tanya survives. Thank you for the chapter, my mother is close to losing her father, I'm doing ok I just worried for my mother. P.S your doing a good job with the story thank you.
Author's Response:
Oh honey, your family will be in my prayers. I'll send all my good vibes to you and your mother.
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12
Look like esme hadn't given up yet. She most really want to live off her son money that badly, can't wait for the ghost come out and play. Now what will esme think now that edward knew about the money his father left him. There going to be some words between edward and his evil mother. P.S. thank you for the chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks to you for reading. I hope you like the next chapter, I'll try to post it tomorrow.
May
Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Oh no now esme will truly be piss. What kind of a mother is she? It always about the damn money not her son happiness, I hate say this again but I have say it what an evil bitch. I hope someone does go and get scared to there core that they never return to the house again. Afraid ghosts mighty come after them.
Author's Response:
She's used to control everything, and Edward never stood against her, until Bella. But yeah, she's an evil bitch.
The house... I can't tell you the deal about the house, but soon you'll see. ;)
May
Date: 24 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Jacob becoming too needy tanya should be careful around him and watched her back. Good see Tanya stand up to Emily. Enjoying the chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Tanya is a bit naive, but she´s learning.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
May
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Sound scary. But interesting.
Author's Response:
:) Thanks
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
WOW I guess it for a new bed.
Author's Response:
And a new floor :) Thanks
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I wouldn't trusts jacob black just yet there something off about him.
Author's Response:
Thanks. You're very clever ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks. You're very clever ;)
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Boy edward mom sounds like a bitch and a bully.
Author's Response:
That she is, thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Author's Response:
That she is, thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Enjoying the story so far. But I still don't trust jacob,and Heidi missing there something wrong I think something bad happen to her plus the telegram must be a lie.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes Heidi's telegram is kinda phishy :S
Date: 19 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Edward mom is evil,she doesn't know what real love is only money. Jenks is going have his hands full with esme no question there and she will be piss off when she found out that bella and edward are married. Your doing a great job with the story. P.S. could you please when esme goes to bella house have a ghost scared her.
Author's Response:
I'm a firm believer in HEA, in my fics, the bads will get their 'just desserts'. Trust me ;)
Bella decides to move in with Charlie, when she realizes that her mom is missing her husband Phil. Once Bella moves and settles in with Charlie on the first night she begins to have weird dreams of the supernatural and a goddess, telling her the stories of the supernatural. Council meetings, vampires, werewolves, witches, warlocks, and many more… The goddess leaves Bella a gift the night before she starts school. “Yeah, a council meeting, things changed Bells. Forks, isn’t the same anymore.” AU
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Happily Ever After, Supernatural, YA - High School
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12393 Read Count: 2081
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:
So bella is very different from all the creatures of forks. Bella going on a wild ride.
Author's Response:
She's different yes, but then again Forks in my story isn't the same. :)
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
We meet shapeshifters, will we see the Cullen anytime soon? Will there be more danger for bella to face?
It's been 60 years since the Cullens heard that Bella died, and 60 years since Edward ran off. They don't know where he's been or what he's been doing. Perhaps a small lead will help the family find him.
~ Written for the Halloween one shot request over on BetterinTexasFiction. Warning - Character death, language.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Horror, Mystery, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5448 Read Count: 998
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Tell-Tale Heart
Wow bella was find died and edward too I guess there more to story then they knew. Because no one had seen edward in 60 year. What happened there did edward keep bella as a captive all years? I guess that is the question isn't it. You lefty a mystery to be solved too which people love.
Author's Response:
Hello!
Yes, as I see it, Edward captured her not long after the Cullens heard she had jumped off the cliff. He held her as a prisoner for the rest of her life.
Thanks for reading and for reviewing!
Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench
Summary: Edward Cullen has been haunted by a nightmare since childhood when a mysterious beast killed his best friend. Now, a decade later, he learns the truth resides in a strange Alabama town in the form of a beautiful woman named Bella Swan. Contest Entry 4
Author is J. L. Darling
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Get Your Southern On Contest
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4497 Read Count: 120
When Bella Swan signed away her life to a man nineteen years her senior, she never once imagined that she would win his heart. Never once did she think that she would be the only woman that could truly say she won the heart of the billionaire, Edward Anthony Masen Cullen. She gave him everything she had, regardless of his lies, his callousness and his vindictiveness. She loved him for he was but more importantly she loved him for who he wasn't. Regardless of his imperfections and coldness, she broke down every wall. She showed him that even he could be loved.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10091 Read Count: 15519
Date: 14 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Can you all say that Rosalie and Alice were shock. Alice and Rosalie are heartless bitches to leave there children the way they did,while they were enjoying the good life. Bella had to raised them with her husband edward. Guest payback a bitch.
When Bella Volturi, daughter of the famed mob boss Aro Volturi, decided to sneak out of the house and use a fake ID at a bar, she never dreamed she’d meet the man of her dreams. However, both of them have secrets that could ruin the other’s life.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32714 Read Count: 39476
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Interesting start can't wait for edward pov.
Author's Response:
Glad you think so! I hope you'll like this Edward :)
Date: 03 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Can't wait for edward and bella to meet each other
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! They'll meet soon, I PROMISE :D
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Edward sure doesn't like going out much.
Author's Response:
Well, he's 35, had only 4 hours worth of sleep, is going to work a full day, and then his brothers are dragging him to a club...how would you feel?
Date: 07 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Edward work for law enforcement and Bella is a mob bosses daughter. This two sure are going have a lot of trouble.
Author's Response:
;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Now bella in deep trouble with her dad.
Author's Response:
;)
Edward never thought he would find happiness with Bella, a medium. If only he could convince her to retire... Esme is a devoted mother who would do everything for her daughter Bree, EVERYTHING. Based on Agatha Christie's tale 'The last seance'. EXB OOC
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54601 Read Count: 8584
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
If Alice call edward to warning him it can't be good.
Do I think you need to wait another five chapter post your other STORY? I'm sure you'll decide what best.
What do I think would be the better end for jacob?I think he should have stayed away from bella.I knew bella hurt jacob,but he also made his own choice so he will have live with the pain of his actions.
What would I have done with jacob?I guess I could see jacob betrayal everyone,some other things there is lot anyone could did with him.
1 Why did you think Charlie and Renee married don't workout?
2 Who are some of the characters you would have wanted to see more of?
3 What some of the things hated about Charlie house and bella bedroom?
4 What are some of the things you like and hated about the Cullen's family?
5 If you could change anything about the wedding what would it be?
6 Why did you think jacob couldn't imprint on bella?
7 Who do you think would have made a better soulmate for bella and edward daughter?
8 If bella and edward had a son what would you have name him?
9 Did you think jacob shouldn't have telled bella about Sam,Emily and Leah STORY?
10 Which female characters would you have chosen to yell at Charlie,Billy,and Jacob?
Have you read my sweet angel by kiseger,retribution by Ivtwilight 09,and the stench wars by BookishQua?
If so what did you like and hated about each of the stories?
I have read two stories by 2Brown-eyes on fanfiction.net, if you haven't read yet Written in the stars and Will things change?
While can't wait for the last chapter and for your new STORY.
Author's Response:
Hi! Sorry for taking so long to answer, my computer crashed and it was difficult to get time at work to answer. Now I'm on my mother's old computer :)
1 I think both let the marriage die. Charlie didn't made the effort and I think Renee got bored. But I'm glad she took Bella with her, it gave Bella a different perspective on life.
2 Esme. She had so much to say being with Edward and Carlisle almost from the beginning but somehow she never got the chance. And maybe Eleazar and Carmen, he left the Volturi after all and met her. It must be interesting.
3 The fact that he never changed it a bit. He was supposed to be happy to welcome her, but he only cleaned and bought her sheets and a duvet. :(
4 I hated the way everybody was on everybody's business. I liked the way they were so united, but I was a bit too much for me.
5 When Jacob came into the wedding. I felt so bad for Edward.And maybe I would have do something more with Mike and Jessica
6 Because she wasn't his soulmate. It was only in his mind.
7 A new character. If imprinting was made to guarantee to pass the wolf genes to the next generation, what was the point to make him imprint in Renesmee?
8 Any name non related to their fathers. Maybe Matthew, Ethan or Jason.
9 I thinkit was one of the few things he did right.
10 Esme and Renee.
I read The stench wars. I like BookishQua style. The toher twoa re going to my list :) I'm not sosure about the ones of 2Browneyes, because I read some of her stories.
I decided to begin to post the next story when this one reaches chapter 10. It gives me time to get more detailed the other one.
Thanks hun.
May
Date: 19 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Esme might when watch her back with Harry and Sue.
I read your new STORY it nice hearing something different.
1 Do you really think eclipse was not really a love triangle story,what did you think it was more about?
2 What did you think make the quileute tribe and the Cullen's family different from each other?
3 Did you think anyone could have made bella see that jacob was manipulating her the whole time?
4 What would you like to have seen done different to the twilight saga?
5 Did you think the eclipse book was more about jacob then edward?
Author's Response:
Hi again!
You are right! She might need a bodyguard ;)
Thanks, I hope you like the next chapter, this one is full of drama.
1 I think that book let us know the rest of the Cullens, and they really showed how they could work together. But that tent scene :(
2 The Quileuttes were pretty close minded, one would think that the Cullens being older would be the difficult ones but no. What do you think?
3 Hmm, maybe if Esme would had made her put in his shoes... really no one did it.
4 Renesmee and the imprint thing! what would have you made different?
5 Not Eclipse, but she really got madwith Edward and she give himless imortance in the books. What do you think?
May
Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I have a bad feeling about Esme,I she going to did what it took to see bree one more time.
1 How did you feel about James,Victoria,and Laurent?
2 Why do you think Seth was the only one,who saw good in the Cullen's,plus he was only wolf who understood bella and edward relationship?
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hi! I can't tell you what will happen with Esme ;) But she will behave better... for a while.
1 I liked them, well the part they took in the story. The 'weird' vampires were the Cullens, so it was expected to find others who acted more like a vampire.
2 Because Seth was very aware of the complications the whole shapeshifting had. He had Leah's story and he had a kind heart.
What do you think about James, Laurent and Victoria? And about Carmen and Eleazar?
See ya
May
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Sue sure sound like a gold digger who love money more than her own daughter.
1 Who would I have kept as friends for bella and edward?Angela,Seth,and Ben.
2 What would I do with Mike Newton,Jessica Stanley,Tyler Crowley,Eric Yorkie,Lauren Mallory?Mike,Jessica,and Lauren would end up alone.Eric would grow-up sometime later in life,and Tyler did whatever he pleased with his life.
1 What are your thoughts on the elders?
2 Where you upset that bella tell the tribe about edward,Alice,and jasper power?
3 What did you think was going through edward head when bella asked jacob to kiss her?
4 Which Cullen family member would you have yell at bella for hurting edward feeling?
5 Are Charlie and Sue the worse parents ever?
6 What your thoughts on Rosalie,Emmett,and Esme?
7 What would you have done to fix bella and edward relationship?
8 Would have let bella yell at Charlie and Jacob after the force kiss?
9 Did think jacob tried to fight for bella because he don't want her to be a vampire?
10 Did you think Emily and Edward would have getting along too?
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
If get to go have fun.
Author's Response:
Hi! Yah, Sue it's a horrible woman.
1 I think they must had chang thir ways in order to survive. Too closed minded for my taste, but I'm glad they were forcd to accept Bella and the Cullens
2 A bit. It wasn't her secret to tell. What do you think?
3 I'm sure he flt lik dying. Poor Edward. That part and the tent scene made me want to slap Bella. Oh and the part when she cried a lot for saying goodbye to Jacob. I'm sure Edward should have parade Tanya around Bella to make things even.
4 Esme. It's the only one Bella would have listened. Which one would you pick?
5 Yes, without a doubt. What do you think?
6 I like Rosalie, she was honest, what you see is what you get. No on said she had to nbe kind. Emmet needed more lines on the books. I also like him. Esme is the one forgotten
7 Put Jacob away sooner.
8 Yes, and Rnee too
9 No, he just wantd her as a possssion
10 Yes
:)
May
PS Have you read Cullenary Coupling?
Author's Response:
Hi! Yah, Sue it's a horrible woman.
1 I think they must had chang thir ways in order to survive. Too closed minded for my taste, but I'm glad they were forcd to accept Bella and the Cullens
2 A bit. It wasn't her secret to tell. What do you think?
3 I'm sure he flt lik dying. Poor Edward. That part and the tent scene made me want to slap Bella. Oh and the part when she cried a lot for saying goodbye to Jacob. I'm sure Edward should have parade Tanya around Bella to make things even.
4 Esme. It's the only one Bella would have listened. Which one would you pick?
5 Yes, without a doubt. What do you think?
6 I like Rosalie, she was honest, what you see is what you get. No on said she had to nbe kind. Emmet needed more lines on the books. I also like him. Esme is the one forgotten
7 Put Jacob away sooner.
8 Yes, and Rnee too
9 No, he just wantd her as a possssion
10 Yes
:)
May
PS Have you read Cullenary Coupling?
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Now we knew that esme let the wrong person back Into the land of the living.
Having fun watching movies tonight.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, we have the confirmation, and a bit of what Buffy did ;)
I'm glad you're enjoying some fun times. Here I'm sending some virtual popcorn :)
May
Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Looks like the evil child is out number but will she kill Seth or will someone stop her.
Congratulations on both of your stories!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Don't worry, Seth will be fine.
May
Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Yeah we got hear bree voice,I hope esme find peace.
1 Did you find it worried that Sam change first,before jacob did?
2 Which two books do you think bella cause the most trouble in?
4 Would you have given edward bigger role in the eclipse book,if so what would you have done differently with him?
5 What we're some of the things you hate about breaking dawn?
Author's Response:
Esme was happy to hear it, let's see how long she stays like that ;)
1 No, because he was older. He was supposed to understand better.Do you think it would had been better if Jacob changd first?
2 Twilight, without a doubt. Maybe a bit in Eclipse. Her zombie state in New moon didn't bothered me as much as her parents reaction.
4 Yes. I would had made him be clear with Bella about how he felt whenshe was with Jacob. What would you have done?
5 Hmm, let me see... Jacob's POV. Sorry but to see things through his eyes, no no. Then there's the imprinting and Renesmee. Oh, and don't forget how she prepared us for a big fight and then nothing. Maybe a bit more of drama on the big confrontation... What would you had changed?
I hope you like the next chapter, when I re-read it I felt it dull, but it has some bits that will be important later.
Thanks.
May
Date: 21 May 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Mr. Black is more right then he knew.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yep. If only Rosalie believes him...
May
Date: 25 May 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I guess the old woman wasn't wrong when she telled esme that her daughter isn't there. I think esme is now wondering who this person is? I think this going to come back and haunted esme for life. Esme take away bella life for noting.
Author's Response:
Esme has kind of lost her mind by now. Haunted is the least of her worries. But don'tworry, I would never kill Bella, you know me.
I'll mail you as soon as I get back from my monday meeting :)
May
Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Esme is really stupid that not your daughter wake-up.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Esme is lost in her obssesion to get her daughter back.
Thanks :)
May
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
I guess esme will stop at nothing to keep her daughter bree. Then again knowing esme she doesn't know that not her daughter, what will happen when she see that not really her daughter?
I guess I'll have to wait and see.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, Esme is in denial. But the truth willcome out soon.
Thanks for listening and supporting me :)
May
Date: 18 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue
I'm glad bella and edward got happy ending. As for esme while she will have to live with her choices for all entity.
Author's Response:
Hi!
I'm all for HEA and B&E always have to end together and happy.
Thanks for alays being there for me :)
May
Date: 11 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
GOOD start can't wait to see the next chapter.
Glad see you start a new STORY!
Did you think it was a bad decision to make a treaty with the quileute tribe,when wolves were too prejudiced and trying to find an excuse to broke it?
What did you hate about imprint part?
Feel bad that Emily will have live with scars on her face,sure she put on a brave face for Sam,must hurt have people looking at her face.IT too bad that sue and the elders don't take her to a hospital.
Author's Response:
Hi hun!
Yeah, I was ready since yesterday, but got home late and cranky, so decided to wait for today.
I think the treaty was a good idea, but the Quileuttes that made the treaty were more 'open minded' that the ones in the present.
The imprint part is...so sad. I mean, look at poor Leah. She had a life until Sam imprinted on Emily, and she had to stay and see them happy.
Oh yeah, Emily's scars are proof that wolves weren't so perfect as they like to think. Sam must had lived with so much regret.
Thanks for writing to me. Now I want to ask you, what do you think about the Volturi? Is it possible to find redemption for them?
i think Marcus is the one who gets the respect, the others gain the fear. What do you think?
May
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Bella sure love to help people to find closer.Esme,I have a bad feeling that something has happen to her daughter.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Happy Valentine Day!!!
Did you think bella and edward would had a stronger bond,if they communicate more?
Did you think jacob would have getting over bella so easily?
Who did you think make a way better father edward or Charlie?
Author's Response:
Yeah, Esme story is sad.
I think the bond was there, but they were so bad at trying to convey their feelings to each other that they complicated everything. What do you think?
Yes, because he was only infatuated with her. The moment he 'imprinted' or met another girl, he would had fogotten about her. And you?
Edward was the better father, you know my opinion on Charlie. Now if we talk about mothers... Bella isn't my number one ;) I think Esme and Rosalie were better taking care of Renesmee. What do you think?
See you soon (maybe tomorrow)
May
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
So sad esme lose her daughter.Edward and Bella relationship seem be moving a long nicely,but I think Alice knew bella will be in great danger.
1 What did I think?Think the relationship work both ways there wasn't much communication and them not showing there true feelings for each other that one area think bella and edward need the most help.Plus think this two need help or at least a step in the right direction,don't think bella running off to go see jacob helped out any either.I understand that jacob was there for her;but if someone says their a friend then be a friend,not a jealous boyfriend.
2 Did I believe jacob would have getting over bella easily?Believe once he imprinted,that yes thing between him and bella would be over with in a heartbeat.But jacob should have known better himself;he tell bella all about imprinting between Sam and Emily in the first place,should have been his first clue to just forget about bella and move on with his life.
3 Think esme would have made a good mom,even if she an adopt mother to all the Cullen's children.
1 Why did you think bella wanted edward children more then anyone else?
2 What would you have name the baby?
3 Did you think it was none of jacob businesses,why bella and edward came back from there honeymoon?
Author's Response:
Hi!
yEah, it's sad,but it had to happen.
1 I think deep inside she wanted children, but she was too worried about what everybody would think. Edward's baby gave her the chance, and it also was almost a miracle.
2 I liked more Carlie (the union of Charlie and Carlisle), maybe Elizabeth like Edward's mom.
3 Certainly it wasn't his business, but he even made an scene at the wedding. I really dislike Jacob.
I wanted to ask, what do you think about Rosalie? i think it's another misunderstood character.
May
Date: 27 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Look like esme going to meet bella soon.
Love edward as both good and bad,I mean you get see different side of edward you don't get to see in the books,plus it fun to read about edward being different.
My favorite stories are darkest desire by britchick69,beautiful savage by vampiremama,Irrevocable by miss king at your service,and Reluctant Devotion by JESSANDTAT.
1 Did you think Sam,Emily and Leah love triangle was a warning to bella,when jacob telled her what about them,think that should have been a clue?
2 What some of the things you wouldn't forgive jacob for?
3 Did you think bella regret asking jacob to kiss her on top of the mountain?
4 Should bella have telled jacob about her engagement to edward sooner then later?
5 Think Billy knew that a future between jacob and bella wasn't going to happen and what think was going through his mind?
Your doing a great job!!!
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, they will meet soon, but first Edward has to take her to a beach ;)
From your favorites, I think I read Irrevocable and the JESSANDTAT ones. Seems like I have new fics to read, thanks :) Mine from this site are 'Femme Docs and Kevlar knights by A cullen wannabe and A hard's day night by Sexilexicullen, but I have a gigantic list of pulled fics that I love :)
1 I never thought about it, but you're absolutely right. I guess I was as blind as Jacob on this one :(
2 For existing ;) LOL Not really. I think the way he ignored and dismissed Bella's love to Edward and her friendship to the Cullens. He only saw her as a possesion.
3 Probably not. I think she never realized how manipulative he really was with her. I think she always had a bit of patience for him when he didn't deserved it.
4 Sooner. But the way it played... I loved it. Though then it gave him the chance for the kiss. I'm finding that I can't stand Jacob's character.
5 He knew, but he was so obssessed with keeping Bella away from the Cullens that it never mattered for him.
Now my question for you. What do you think would be the better end for Jacob? (As in if you wrote Twilight, what would you have done with him?
BTW, do you think I should wait another five chapters to post the other story? I'm going to loose the idea and that's why I really want to write that story .
Thanks, it's always so nice to talk with you
May
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
At less Carmen had talk with Esme about the way had been acting.Grief can did lot of thing to you,sometime even the worse way.I hope bella and edward get have a baby,but I'll have to wait and see.
James he love to haunt human,vampires,and animals just for fun.I will say he give me the creep,he just sound really scary.
Victoria she might have love James;but he don't love her.She was very good at keeping everyone guessing about the newborn in the book,at least bella figure it out.Thanks to jasper about the newborn army.
Laurent he was more of followed then a think for myself person.
Carmen she love her mate,Tanya,Kate,and Irina,and the Cullen's family too.
Eleazar he live with the volturi,so he knew everyone power's,but he loyalists laid with Carlisle and his family.
1 Who did you think would have been a better alpha for the quileute tribe?
2 What did you think of Tia and Benjamin?
What did you think about My Sweet Angel by Kiseger?
What did you hate about it?
I really like how she had bella think about the situation she was in really in,then having bella keep run back to jacob.
Retribution by Ivtwilight09
That was a good horror story for Halloween.What did you think was going through everyone head when they saw a different edward and bella?
Author's Response:
Hi! It took me a bit to asnwer you because I re-read My sweet angel. I loved the way she made it clear the wolves could be the monsters but I hated that Bella was so forgiving to Jacob 'til the end.
I read Retribution long time ago, I remember liking it a lot, but I kinda like dark stories.
1 I liked Sam as alpha. Any of the others in the pack would be worst, and Seth, the only nice one, wouldn't get the respect of the others.
2 I really liked Benjamin. He had the coolest power but he still chose to help, maybe because he knew the Volturi would eventually come for him.
I love a story called 'Home' by Clarabella75. Have you read it?
See ya.
May
Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Edward is very worried for bella,esme must knew that bree is there.It going to be interesting to see what bree has to say to her mother.
Happy birthday!!!
1 Why do you think bella stay in forks after edward left?
2 If you had designed bella bedroom or Charlie house what would you did to it?
3 Did you think bella should have thought more of the situation she was in?
4 Should bella have left Charlie out of her life after her wedding?
5 Did you think Emily would understand bella and edward relationship and what think she would see?
P.S. have you seen fifty shades of grey yet or if you don't like it that ok too.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Well, Bree won't speak for a chapter or two. Soon you'll see.
1 I think she stayed because deep inside she knew he or one of the Cullens would come back one day. Why do you think she stayed?
2 I don't know, but if she always loved to read, maybe a little armoire with children books. And maybe a few of her favorite dolls. What would you have changed?
3 Of course, but it was like she just went with the flow.
4 No, but she made her life around Forks. In my opinion a very bad desicion. What do you think?
5 I always thought she was the only one who understood, being the only one who suffered the consequences of choosing someone not human.
I haven't seen the film, but I read Masters Of The Universe not long ago. I discovered Twilight in 2010, after Eclipse film went out. Yeah I know, very late. I tried to read the most famous fics, but there's too many I haven't read. MOTU I read out of curiosity, because all the debate. I don't think it's the best one, but it isn't that bad. I think I'll wait for the movie to come out on DVD, because we kinda go as a family and my mother and my son really dislike the story. Lately I didn't have so much time to go to the movies alone, so I'm waiting for Insurgent. About what I saw about the movie, I like what I heard on the soundtrack, and I think Dakota Johnson did a wonderful work. I don't know about Jamie Dorman. I think he looked better on a series called The Falling. In 50 shades, he doesn't look so handsome or have the air of a CEO. But I want to watch it. Have you seen it? What do you think? Do you recomend it?
Thanks for your good wishes, I spend a really good time.
May
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
WoW sound like Buffy parents are more interested in money then there dead child.Esme going have put up a fight with them.Edward really love bella very much.
1 Why do I think bella stayed?She couldn't leave the place she meet edward,I think if bella leave that edward would never come back.
2 What would I have changed about bella room?Maybe a bigger room with a queen size bed,nightstand,a lamp,a laptop computer,a desk,a closet,a new paint job,and her own bathroom.
3 What do I think?I would have the wedding somewhere else and never let Alice planned it ever.
4 Have I seen it?Yes I have!!
5 What did I think?Felt like the movie want to fast when watching in movie theatre,but at home it feels slow.
6 Did I recommend it?Yes I would.
7 As for Dakota Johnson and Jamie Dorman? She did the part really good,as for him I need to see more the last two movie sequel before I make up my mind.
1 Do you think bella should have talking to Emily about imprinting, so bella could have decided what to do about Jacob?
2 Who would you keep as bella and edward as friends?
3 What would you have done with Mike Newton,Jessica Stanley,Tyler Crowley,Eric Yorkie,Lauren Mallory?
4 Did you think bella had to learn the hard way to all of her decision?
5 What did you think it is about bella and edward bond that couldn't be broken?
Can't wait for the next chapter.
When I was watching fifty shades of grey my dad said have fun you sinner.
Author's Response:
Buffy's parent are awful! Let me tell you that I named Buffy's mother after you gave me your opinion on Sue Clearwater ;) You were absolutely rigt and made me change my opinion on her.
I'm planning on watching the movie with a friend... if we could get early of work this wednesday ;)
1 Yeah, Emily had a better view but Bella diidn't seize the chance to talk to her.
2 Angela... and maybe with Eric. I think he wasn't a bad guy, just misunderstood. Who would you keep as a friend?
3 To Mike and Jessica, I would sent them postcards with greetings... and a reminder that Bella and Edward were absolutely happy ;) Eric wasn't a bad guy in my opinion, just got with the wrong crowd. Lauren deserved something really bad, she was the worst in my opinion; maybe to have her hair burnt by accident or something truly embarrasing. What would you do with them?
4 No, but I don't think she really got the lesson right. Sometimes I wanted to slap some sense to her :)
5 Everything. The problem was that neither knew a thing about communication, if they relied their thoughts and doubts to the other... ok we wouldn't have four books, but still.
At least your fther took it with humour. My son find hilarious that I love twilight and fanfiction, but he never think of funny jokes.
Hope you liked this new chapter :)
May
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I'm so ready to meet Carlisle.
I'm sorry about not review my two nephews are here with us this week.
Eclipse or Breaking Dawn
Why did I think she acted like that?Bella got it in her mind that she doesn't deserve to be happy that wrong but I think bella parents should have done something more with bella.
Hate these two because they think they have a say in bella live.
Their a long list but I'll name two,I hate how she always let jacob walk all over her and how she let him back in her life easily.
Like when edward and seth both bond when they destroy Victoria and Riley.
Sam is a better leader then jacob because he need to grow-up more.
Like edward to show more of his feeling and ask bella if she does really love him.
I would have love to seen edward pov on how he is feeling about fatherhood,I hate that jacob pov took that away.
1 Did think Charlie and Jacob have a bigger bond?
2 Angela could see how jacob look at bella,but why couldn't bella see that?
3 Did you think bella should have yell at Charlie for calling her immature?
4 Did you think jacob has a lot of grow-up to do?
5 Edward pov in breaking dawn was more need then jacob pov?
Author's Response:
Hi! I hope your nephews' visit was awesome.
1 Yeah, he was the son Charlie always wanted.
2 Angela was very observant, and she really cared for Bella, so she gave always a honest opinion. Bella had so low self-steem that she never thought someone would like her
3 No, she would be proving his point. But she had other ways to prove her point.
4 Yeah, no arguing with that one.
5 Of course. I mean, the one who was present in all of Bella's changes was Edward, not Jacob. And i really don't like Jacob, so I think we all would had like it more in Edward's POV
May
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Seth looked breaking heart when he found out bella is no longer single.
1 Did you wish we could of heard more of edward pov?
2 Think jacob is a dumb ass for going after bella every time when all he got was a breaking heart every time?
3 What did you think Quil meant when he tell jacob he need to think about getting a life?
4 Should have been done about Jacob after he found out bella was pregnant with edward baby?
5 How do you think things would have want in New Moon if edward had never left?
I have my own email address if you want talk some more
Sailormoonatcj@Gmail.com
Author's Response:
Hi!
Well, it wasn't like he asked Bella out... he needs to grow some confidence.
1 Yeah, my favorite book on the saga is Midnight Sun. It was what made me fall in love with him. What of Edward's actin made you like him more?
2 Yeah, but I think he never really loved her, he was just obssessed in getting her, like a prize.
3 He voiced the thoughts of lots of readers? ;) Well, his friends wanted him to move on, to grow up. Obviously Jacob never listened.
4 I think that part was kinda right. Edward felt so guilty... but honestly in that part Jacob did right, letting Bella think in Edward for once.
5 Yeah, but then We wouldn't have four books ;) Do you think he should had stayed?
I promise to write to you a mail.
May
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
That was a very funny chapter,I hope edward ask bella to marry him soon.
1 Did you think Charlie and Jacob both emotionally blackmailed bella?
2 What did you think meant have happened if bella had stop seen jacob sooner ?
3 Did you hate how jacob got sympathy during the newborn fight?
Yes I got your email,but I was send a message back,but my mom mess up and deleted my message by mistake.
P.S. Happy Easter.
Author's Response:
Hi! I'm glad you liked it.
1 Yeah, they took advantage of her lack of backbone.
2 I think then Charlie would be pressuring her more to see him. She needed to cut ties with both of them. Or to be clearer with Charlie
3 Kinda, I hated how she cried over him. He didn't deserved it.
Now I received oyur mails. Thanks. It's just I'm so good with my phone, my son gave it to me after I lost my phone :(
Happy easter to you too.
Date: 05 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Must be really funny if there cover in dirt.
1 What some of the things in each of the twilight saga you liked?
2 Should bella have noticed that spending time with jacob was hurting edward?
3 What do you think bella would feel like if she cut ties with Charlie?
Author's Response:
hi!
More like maybe something exploded ;)
1 Twilight/Midnight Sun made me fall in love with Edward.; New Moon despite everything, that's when we knew they were meant to be together forever, Eclipse, the chance to knew about the other's story and the chance to work together with the wolves, Breaking Dawn, The wedding, the posibility of having babies, oh and meeting so many kindsof vampires. This was an excellent question . What did you like?
2 She should had, but she was blinded by Jacob's tantrums and manipulations.
3 She would had felt bad, but maybe then -Charlie would had made the effort. That's my problem with him, he never made the effort, everybody had to move to adjust tothe way he was.
What do you think iwould had happened if Bella had a backbone and she never let anyone push her around, like Alice, Jacob...
See ya.
May
Date: 08 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I guess now we knew what happen at the lab,I think esme is getting to obsessive with the door bree was talking about.
1 Why did you think people make Renee a bad parent over Charlie?
2 What did you like about GOOD guy edward and bad edward?
If you want to email me I'm free at home I have a lot of time some idea that just came through my head.
Author's Response:
Hi! Yeah, Esme is acting crazy again.
1 I think we're more demanding to mothers than we are for fathers. We can't fathom a mother mistreating their child, but we are more used to see it on a father. Wrong, but I thinkthat's the way we think.
2 In general? Well, good Edward is always so cute and sweet, but I guess from time to time, we all love a charming bad boy Edward.
Which fanfic Edward is your favorite? Mine is 'The best I ever had' by WhatsMyNomdePlume.
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Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Esme really need to move on with her life,let her past go. I'm glad bella said yes to edward proposal.
1 What is the best bad boy edward fanfiction you read?
2 Did you still hate it in fanfiction stories were bella keeps forgiving jacob for everything?
IT a little hard to decide which edward fanfiction one I like.
Author's Response:
Hi! Of course Bella said yes, you know how much I love them together.
1 Hmm, I'm thinking of various. The one from Quiet storm/ Sexylexicullen, The princess and the E/CLWN, then bad boy as in player, sideline collision/nolebucgrl and offside but I can't remember the author. and there are a couple I can't remember that were vampires. And yours?
2 Yeah, that and when she never thinks what Edward is feeling, She never puts herself in Edward's shoes to know how it feels.
Yeah, it's difficult to think of only one :)
Date: 15 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I have to agree with edward there only so much that bella could take.
1 Why do you think Charlie stay in forks and not moved away?
2 DiD you think that La Push has too much drama?
When you have free time could you email me. I really appreciate it thank you may!!!
Author's Response:
Hi!
1 I think he's too scared to try something new. But he should had made the effort at least for Bella.
2 Well, they're a very closed community, so any little thing that happens it's bound tobecome drama. They needed to get out more. :)
I wrote you,but I'm sorry for answering so late. I came out of work late and then traffic was awful.
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Date: 19 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Sound like bree want out of the dead world and want to be apart of the living again.
I'll email you when I got something figure out.
Author's Response:
Yes, Bree is acting weird ;)
You know I'm here whenever you need it :)
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Date: 21 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I'm at a lost for word's,but I love it. Hopefully esme will meet her maker.
1 Do you think Leah and Sam would have lasted if Sam never meet Emily?
2 Did you think Rosalie would have been happier as a human then a vampire?
Which couple did I think Don't belong together? It would have to be renesmee and jacob because I think jacob only imprint on her was because renesmee was half bella.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was why I decided towrit the story. To give it a happy ending. Just wait.
1 honestly, no. Leah has a strong personality and Sam seems as close minded as the rest of the tribe. She would had left.
2 No, she said that what she wanted was a kid, but if she stayed human and marrid Royce and had kids, then she would had wanted the love and patience she got from Emmett.
I'm writing you about my bad boys ;)
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Esme sure has lost her dam mind,hopefully edward and the others find her.
1 If bella had listen to esme about how she was treating edward,what do you think she would have done differently?
2 Think bella telling jacob sorry over and over again wasn't going to help her in anyway?
I'll send you an email soon.
Author's Response:
Hi! Again, I was sure I had answered this. I'm terrible.
Esme will get worst.
1 I hope so. She needed someone making her realize how Edward really felt, and she respected Esme enough to believe her.
2 No, it only gave him the wrong idea.
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Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Oh no now sue there I wonder what will happen next.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
:) Thanks
Date: 07 May 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I think sue has found esme,from that message sue sound angry. Then again it's sue own fault she lost her own family because her and Harry both were greedy,you know what they say money will do to you. Esme couldn't let her daughter rest in peace, I believe this isn't her daughter bree I think it someone else esme let out by mistake.
Author's Response:
You're right, you'll see soon. :)
Date: 05 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Bella mom Renee save them from the evil spirited.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she was there to save the day :)
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Date: 10 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Esme landing in a bad place I guess that what happens when greed and grief mixed together, she should have left the spiritual world of the dead alone. Goes to show you what you should never mess with in the first place.
When you get this could I asked you something.
Author's Response:
HI!
Well, we knew after all she made she didn't deserve heaven.
I'm here for whatever you need hun.
May
People came to Eclipse Island to leave their troubles behind, at least that was Jasper thought. Too bad for him the other guests have other plans on mind. Drugs, sex, blackmail, murder... this wasn't the paradise they promised him. A story narrated by Jasper. AH, OOC, HEA.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45931 Read Count: 5889
Date: 18 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Jasper doesn't knew what he in for.
1 What do I think?Thought bella was really stupid for doing that,she just tell the enemy there gift's,bella should have known better than that.
2 Which one would I've picked?I had three choices Esme because I think bella need to see from edward mom of how much she hurt edward with her choices.Rosalie because she wouldn't held back her angry one bit give bella the cold hard reality,Jasper he could sure feel edward pain and give bella a bit of it to show how much she hurt edward.
3 What do I think?I think both Charlie and Sue need to think more about there children then worry about other people.Sue you have two kids who lost their father and your daughter got her heartbreaking by the man she love,you don't even care she has to be a bridesmaid to the two people who caused her pain.Charlie you need to learn how to love your child not tell her how to live her life or tell her who to spend her life with,she doesn't like forks,Washington get it thought your head.
Have I read cullenary coupling?Yeah I read it.IT was different from the vampire love stories.
1 What would you really have done to change both edward and bella attitudes?
2 Did you hate how Alice used bella to got what she wants?
3 What are your thoughts on jasper?
4 In New Moon when jacob at end betrayed bella to Charlie would you let bella say good bye to jacob after that?
5 Would you have change bella birthday party?
I'm excited to heard more about this story.
Author's Response:
Hi! Let me tell you that we didn't have the chance to go to the movies :(
1 Honestly, a few slaps ;) No,I would had forced then to talk. The whole problem was lack of communication. Then I insist if Tanya would had come to visit one book before...
2 Yeah, I'm not an Alice fan. I don't hate her like i hate Jacob, but I don't like her whole 'I'm going to be your best friend' attitude.
3 I really like Jasper. He made so much to contain his thirst... and Alice goes and throw a party ignoring how difficult it would be for him (see I don't like Alice)
4 Of course! He threw a tantrum and betrayed Bella. In that moment she should had know he wasn't a real friend.
5 Yeah, I would had made Alice feel mor guilty. But then, maybe the story would had lasted just two books :)
Let me tell you a secret about this story... t's about Edward and Bella, well, and about a lot of other people. But if I mentioned it i the summary it will lose something. This time we're going tohate Michael and Tanya. I'm not sure if Jacob is going to be nice or not, he's really a secondary character.
1 Which one is your favorite book from the series?
2 Which one character is the one you dislike the most? And which one you like the most?
3 From which character would you like to read more?
Have a nice weekend!
Date: 14 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Poor man lose everything that meant world to him. Guess all come down to what happen to you in life and who you will become.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he so bad after all :)
Date: 14 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Look like there putting all the pieces together.
Date: 14 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Say the killer closed by. That Riley was killed by the killer.
Author's Response:
Hi! You're right, and they don't seem to get closer to who's the killer.
Thanks :)
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Date: 23 May 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Looks like Jasper finally notice that bella and edward are together in these chapter. But I guess the real question that going on in jasper head is how long have bella and edward been together? Look like Jasper sound hurt by the news.
Author's Response:
Hi!
You know me, Edward must have to be with Bella :)
They are going toexplain their relationship in the nxt chapter, but I don't think Jasper will be happy.
Thanks
PS I'm going to write you later :)
Date: 01 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I think it's Riley Biers that killed Tanya and Mike.
Author's Response:
Hmm, we'lll see ;)
Thanks
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Date: 20 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I have a feeling that Bella doesn't like being married to Mike.I hope we meet edward soon,and I hope bella kick Mike in the balls and calls him a worthless piece of shit he is.
1 Which one is my favorite book from the series?I like twilight the best.
2 Which character did I dislike the most?It would have to be Jacob I never like him from start to finish.Which character did I like the most?Edward you just find something in him just love about him.
3 From which character would I have love to read more about?Carmen would be my pick we knew so little about her.
4 What did I think?I think the quileute tribe thought they are way better then the vampire in the world.Hate to tell them this you don't knew everything.
5 What would I have made different?Would have never let bella tell the Cullen's family gifted to the enemy.second I would have made bella look more at her friendship with jacob,third I would never ever let jacob imprint on bella and edward daughter ever.
6 What did I think?I felt bad for edward I feel he was made to look like bella don't want him at all,I agree with you that if Tanya had show up maybe bella would have fight harder for her man and not her best friend.
1 Where do you think the problems first begin in bella and edward relationship?
2 Did you the imprinting on renesmee was a cop out?
3 What are your feeling on Jared,Paul,Embry,Quil,Brady,Collin?
4 If you could yell at Sue Clearwater,What would you say to her face?
5 Would you have send bella and edward away somewhere where they could work out there relationship problems?
while have fun with your family.
Author's Response:
Hi! Finally I have the chance to answer! :)
Hmm, You're going to hate Mike more with the next chapter. Just remember, I always go for the HEA for our favorite couple :)
1 When both assumed what the other wanted. Edward really messed by not talking to Bella, confiding about his doubts and his fears. Yeah, he messed first. But the mistake was from both.
2 Yeah, I felt that the author loved Jacob too much to leave him alone, no matter how absurd the whole imprinting with Renesmee idea was (Suposedly it was to garantee the wolves got descendence from their kind, and Renesmee was another very different especies.)
3 I liked the two who were friendly with Bella at the beginning, Embry? Quil? Paul was the example of what could go wrong with the shapeshifters. I disliked him, but at least he was comletely honest on his reasons to dislike Bella.
4 Go and take care of your daughter! You insensitive mother. (He, she and Charlie would never compete for paren of the year)
5 Yeah, but again, then we wouldn't have a book saga ;)
This weekend I was discussing something with my cousins (his girlfriend loooves Robert Pattinson and he thinks Rob isn't that handsome). Rob is the perfect Edward for you or would had chosen another actor? (Me, I liked him as Edward. I think he portrayed Edward perfectly, but that's me and he's not too young to make me feel bad for liking him *insert blush*)
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Date: 19 May 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Thing have getting more interested by the minute.
Author's Response:
And I hope they're going to get better :)
Thanks
May
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I think the killer is close by.
Author's Response:
He is. You'll see ;)
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Edward and Bella got there happily ever after. Jasper need time to work through his life, but I'm sure some day he will figure it out.
P.S. Can't wait for the new story.
Author's Response:
Thanks hun. And I also want to say thank you for always being there :)
Date: 13 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Tanya and Mike were both evil to the core.
Author's Response:
Yeah, nobody will miss them.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Both of them think there better then everyone else,but their married hall's look unhappy.
I think edward very brave, strong and good to a fault.
Do I think edward should have stayed?Maybe it a little hard to decide.
1Why do you think jacob and bella could never work as a couple?
2 What would you have changed about the tent scene and the newborn fight the next morning?
3 When did you knew that jacob wasn't going to win bella heart?
4 Would have made it hard for bella to forgive jacob?
5 Did you find imprinting creepy?
Author's Response:
Hi!
1 Because there wasn't that little spark that made it work for her and Edward, they lack of passion. They were just friends. What do you think?
2 If I wrote the book, ther wouldn't be a tent scene. No. The fight with the newborns was fine, all of them needed to work together in something, just to make the wolves realize how dumb they were :) And you?
3 From page one? ;) I knew he didn't stand a chance because Bella never stopped thinking bout Edward. The way she dropped everything to save Edward, proved it.
4 Yeah, I still think Bella needed a couple of slaps. Maybe she would had forgave him, but stayed far away from him.
5 Yeah. Worst with the ones with a huge age difference.
If you had the chance, which book would you rwrite? Me, Breaking dawn, without a doubt.
May
PS Did you received my mail?
Date: 23 Jun 2015 Title: Eclipse Island
Alice sure has piss off a lot of people. Jasper must think the killer is still there.
Author's Response:
Hi!
Yeah, Alice has a lot to learn. You'll like Jasper on next chapter. :)
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