Jacob is way over his head.First he lost his mind,is this what he think love is some game  what stupid boy. I don't believe any one can get into his mind or talk him out of it. I think jacob is long gone.

I love this story!

Jacob should learn to shut up.

So I guess the wolves lost some of there pack.

I always wonder if bella would regret kissing jacob and hurting edward as while? 

I'm happy bella got see her dad one more time. Jacob final gets the pointed of real love.

Bella your boyfriend only has sex on his brain. Can't wait see what happens next.

Charlie should mind his own business. Bella don't love jacob got over it.

There getting close to catching the bad person but there could be more then one person.

Charlie sure can't make up his mind. The messages where funny.

I have two more questions.

1 would give bella and edward twin or just one baby?

2 which characters did you hate and what did you hate about them?

Hope don't mind me asking some questions,I think there were some people not very happy with bella in the eclipse book. Look fort to reading more of your stories.

Charlie sure is confusing I think him and Carlisle have thing for control everything around them even the people in there live's.Guess no one telled them children want there own life.

1 Did you think bella should have called her mother,ask her advice on what to do with jacob?

2 would love see bella kick jacob ass,when she got turn into a vampire?

3 when jacob said that he wish bella was dead when she gets change into a vampire would say Bella should have left and never came back to lane push after that being said?

Your right about Alice,I think because she can see the future try to have everything her way.She not really a good friend either her and jacob are both the same.I Rosalie let her past human life and the night she lose everything,think let past eat away at her,she maybe beautiful but her parents used her I think Rosalie should have made sure this was the man of her dream before getting married.IT time for her let go of the old life you can't get back what you lose you can let past get you down or moved on tried to have a happy life.

Jasper always let Alice have her way,he always controlling people emotions make Alice happy that not right. I think he should allow someone to voice there emotions.He did to bella on eighteen birthday just so Alice can have her way,that wrong to did that to someone I think he too easy with his wife.

What did you think.

Did believe Rosalie want to be human again?

Jasper used his gift too much just so Alice can be happy?

And also would have made bella different supernatural creature?

Remember bella at end of the eclipse movie said it was a choice between who I should be and who I am.everyone was telling bella who should be not the who I am part.same of them were making her into someone she wasn't.

I also felt the book author forget what most important about the books which was the star cross lovers not about one guy. If cared about the one guy then way have two people in relationship if you can't fix the problems between edward and bella quit worry about poor jacob.

First book when great but I felt the book author made a lot of mistakes with bella character and edward character too second,third,and the fourth book's,she made thing happened too fast and cause huge mess in some area.

Carlisle a control freak and Carmen she really scary when she quite.

Bella sure had a good time with edward. And her dad Charlie is so stupid he doesn't get bella does not want to marry jacob,boy some people need a good slap in the face.

Thank God jacob find another girl.

That a shocker to find out about there dad.

Going to be a long day.

Yeah bella and edward are going to have a baby.

Oh no that not good.

Charlie need pull his head out of his ass and Carlisle too. I'm glad bella and edward are there for Renee when she sick and of course her stepfather too.

Tanya mom is a real piece of work.

Carlisle sure like controlling thing's doesn't he.

Way to tell them bella and edward.

Edward and Bella are having a girl yeah.

I think Carmen husband is disappointed in her and heartbroken.

I think Carlisle isn't going to be happy when he found out his son edward want to do less work.

I'll email you soon.

Tanya and Stefan sure now how to become a pain the ass. Jasper really need learn how to stand up for himself against Lauren. Carmen something not right there. Charlie need to get a life, his daughter has enough problems to worry about. Now as for the woman following bella it's either Katie,Carmen, Lauren, or Victoria. 

Kate got fired, Carmen is acting suspicious by the minute, and Tanya is don't need words for her.

Yes I'm sure Jacob shocked Charlie and now we knew where got the car from Kate of all people, Charlie made a fool out of himself. James sure spill the beans about Carmen wonder what her husband going to be thinking.

Now that a way to tell people I'm going did what makes me happy and not you.

Jacob is jealous of the barbarian edward for getting bella.

Bella dad is really crazy son of a bitch,that daughter Leah need a good slap in the face,sue need leave Charlie because he crazy,seth think God he left the heartless bitch,that no good shit dad of his,mom needs a wake-up call. James plan yes.

Jacob is a scared cat how act tough, but is neven but a bully.

Yes everyone lose something. Charlie guess what Leah not your daughter. Ha,ha. Jacob and Paul are in deep shit now. Thank you for letting everyone get even.

I'm happy for everyone.

It a good story!!!

I love it!!!

Thank you!!! For writing a wonderful story.

I'm ready to see what happens next. Charlie sure dig a deep hole for himself.

More to come in the next chapter. I go with let talk about bree. 

What did I think about Tanya? I think she lonely sometime she doesn't have a mate to keep company. Just her family.

Do I hate her? No not really! Just don't know her that while,see why people used her for a bad person maybe it her beauty.

What characters did I dislike?

Charlie because he isn't a real father to bella.I can't picture Charlie ever leaving forks,Washington for another state,because I believe he stay in forks because he someone down there with the people.He doesn't fight for his daughter which he should have done from the start, I think he only love his job,fishing, sport's,food,beer,not having to clean-up the house,not cooking any meals,Sue,Seth,Leah,his friends,Billy and Jacob Black.

Mike Newton is a black sheep how more of follow the crowd,manwhore.I think he more dog then man.

Jessica Stanley backstabbing bitch,whore,more in to me then other people.

Tyler Crowley trying to get laid,go after the popular girl's.

Eric Yorkie too helpful,full of shit,and anything to be popular.

Lauren Mallory biggest bitch on the planet,backstabbing bitch,I believe she been with how knew how many guy's.

Most of the La Push Pack there too prejudiced thinking they know everything when you don't know.Ok we get it your hotter in body temperature and can go without a shirt we know what your trying to say we're all hot and shit,ok whatever.you don't know all about the vampire world,the only place you been in is the Washington state's not around the world.Think your going to win against all the vampire wrong you would only get the other killed.

Sue Clearwater don't trust her or the tribe.She don't help her daughter after her break-up with Sam. Sure she was there for Emily but not her daughter,I think she been in love with Charlie before being married.I think she doesn't like bella at all.

Billy Black he goes around telling bella how to live her life,your not bella father it none of his business.You and Charlie pick bella as jacob bride what happen when he imprint leave her just like Sam left Leah for Emily.He and his tribe are selfish assholes.Think he love Jacob more then his twin daughters.

Jacob Black your selfish,jerk,childish,and immature brat.You always say edward a monster,maybe you should look in the mirror.Grew-up your nothing but a man child in the body of a man.Just too much in himself believe he the better man when he not,must have one thick skull.

The only characters I like are edward,bella,carlisle,esme,Renee',Emmett,Alice,Angela,Ben,Leah,and Seth. I'm not sure about Rosalie and Jasper.

Have some questions too.

1 What would you have change about bella character or her personality?

2 did think bella was missing a backbone?

3 did you think bella was way too forgiving about jacob action?

4 would have bella question about her acting about edward and jacob sooner then later?

5 should bella have moved out of her father house after the force kiss?

6 would you have made the pregnancy less painful?

7 would have made the wedding for important people in bella live or have the whole town with the Wolves invited?

8 would you have let jacob imprint on bella and edward daughter?

9 should the Cullen's have moved out of town after the wedding?

10 should Charlie,Billy,and Jacob work for bella forgiveness?

I think the book author made bella into a cold hearted person, author love jacob more then bella and edward. Plus she was too busy giving jacob a happily after that forget about her star cross lovers and don't let them fix there problem,how does giving jacob a soulmate in the form of bella and edward daughter doesn't solved anything at all. IT just too mess he was chasing after bella then have him kiss bella later her daughter in the future that just wrong in so many ways. 

Glad Tanya killed Angela she shouldn't have hurt Felix.

Thank You!!!For answer my questions.

What would I have changed about the books?

Twilight-Made edward about nineteen or twenty years old.Keep bella looks the same,have made her stand up for herself,she would be stronger,tougher,conflicted,no insecurities,and who took no one bull shit.Wouldn't have made bella friend's with Mike Newton,Jessica Stanley,Tyler Crowley,Eric Yorkie,and Lauren Mallory.Made sure bella and edward had more alone time and made a stronger love bond between them.

New Moon-Edward would have stayed.No friendship with the quileute tribe.Have bella moved out of Charlie house after her eighteen birthday.Bella and Edward riding a motorcycle together,giving bella and edward there own place to live.Have some drama with the Jacob,Billy,and Charlie.Always have people on the edge of there sit.

Eclipse-Bella and Edward going to their meadow.If Jacob tried to kiss bella against her will,I will have Edward,Emmett,Jasper broke his jaw,nose,leg,and arm hell I'll even let Rosalie kick him in the balls for fun. The Cullen's wouldn't be asking the wolves for help against the newborn fight.Don't mind bella and edward sleeping in a tent as long as there in a sleeping bag together.Then if jacob show up,only telling bella to choice him again,bella would say to him "How many time most I tell you.There will never be an US, I don't love you and never will.Get it through your thick skull.I have a mate and real man in edward he wonderful and loving plus we have a lot of sex over and over again.Don't getting your ass kick make a good enough point.Your here bitching and whiney about yourself being the better man.Please I knew that one day you will imprint leave forget all about me." She pause for a minute "I don't like Forks,Washington I hate the rain and cold.I love the heat and Sun,the only realizing I stayed here was because of edward I only stay for him and him only.You'll never be my man because your nothing to me only reason I got stuck with you was because of Charlie.Will never be lover's.Who want to be stuck in one place forever,I don't oh and by the way go head and get yourself killed then I'll know who the real jacob black is nothing but a coward,who could not match up to the man I love and if you die,who gives a shit!!!because I won't." Then make the engagement more romantic.

Breaking Dawn-Have bella and edward plan there own wedding,no Alice planning the wedding.No Jacob,Billy,Sue,and Charlie invited to the wedding,only Seth and Leah,only a small wedding.Honeymoon the same,I'll have bella get pregnant with twins with a boy and girl.I would name the boy Alex Scott Masen Cullen and Elizabeth Anne Masen Cullen.Have the Cullen's move after the wedding.Have bella and edward get their own place for them and their children.The family can visit them.And if jacob show up I'll have vampire bella kicked his ass.

That some of the things I would change. What speech would have given to Jacob,Billy,and Charlie?

It was good see jacob get punch noise GOOD for you.

Yay Alice has arrived. But I agree with her I wouldn't put my faith in Charlie for second at all there more to ever story and I think bella will find out the truth.

I don't blame bella for being scared of jacob. Jacob is an asshole how think of one thing himself, never care about anything other then what he wants. Sorry never been jacob fan in my life. I'm more of a team edward girl. But the only wolf I like is Seth.

While that explains some of the story. Jacob could be dangerous with his mind and violence temper I watch my back if I were bella. Because jacob never think of the consequence before acting like a big asshole with any brain in his head.

It was funny jacob tried again with bella, but jacob boy I think bella like a real man like edward in her life not a stupid mind child man like you. While he did act that way in eclipse book.

Jacob may love bella but she doesn't love him back. He too blind to see that for what it is which is the truth.

Now thing are adding up some want money,lust,and power.

Jacob sure doesn't give up does he. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Bella trying to figure out the mystery of why she the missing puzzle piece a long with edward and jacob. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Now we know what happen to Vicky and Harry that night. But still have to wait on questions about why bella there.