Reviews by canislupusfamiliaris
Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

*Chuckle* that's really mean how you are developing a habit of cliff hangers.

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I just found this story a few days ago and I have to say, out of all the stories I have read with the same base line of Bella and Edward meeting like this, this is the best one by far. The others were decent in the begining but quickly unravlled when they met in the present. So far you have done excellent in weaving this story fluently. I also believe that the attention to detail you place in this story is a major part in making this story flow. Overall, excellently executed and I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  The big meeting is coming up very soon, I hope you'll like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

So far this is my favorite sotry out of all the fanfiction I have read. Thank you for your brilliance and I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm your favorite?  Wow, thanks!

A teaser for chapter 30 can be found on: Fictionators – Teaser Mondays, Twi fic central – Wednesdays, Twi & VD Fic Recs – Tuesday, and Twilight Fic Zone – Saturday (already posted).  I will also try to visit the Sneak Peek campfire on A Different Forest on Monday night.  It's the same teaser regardless of which site you see it on.  But before you check it out, fair warning: I'm evil.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Happy Thanksgiving!!!!!!!!! =)



Author's Response:

It was very happy, thanks.  Thanks for reviewing!  I'm so sorry for not responding to your review sooner.  I'm behind on responding to reviews on all the sites I'm posting on.  I have no real excuse other than life is just really busy right now--of course, there's also the 15 pounds of pure cute sitting next to me in his little bouncer seat and trying to stick both of his feet in his mouth.

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

I was wondering if it would be alright with you if I printed out this story so that I could have a hard copy of the story. I have an acount with fanfiction under the pen name of "canis lupus lover" if you would please sent me a reply. Thank you. This story and "I Live" are my all time favorite fanfic stories.



Author's Response:

I guess it's okay, but why would you want to?  I really can't see myself ever taking it down.  My Microsoft Word document is roughly 1300 pages altogether, I have idea how many pages it would be printed from FFn, TWCS, or Twilighted, but it'd have to be a lot.  I'll get the epilogue up as soon as possible.  Thanks for reviewing!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Bella Swan was the reincarnation of Isabella Salvatore, Damon and Stefan's beloved sister that had died tragically? She not only looks exact but due to a spell cast years ago, she has begun to remember her former life. What will the Salvatore brothers do when they find out she exists? How will this affect Bella's relationships, especially with Edward? How do Katherine, Victoria and Klaus factor in?

AU: Takes place at the end of New Moon (Twilight) and the end of Season 2 Vampire Diaries.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 68 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244615 Read Count: 75586
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Oct 2012
Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: History Lessons

I really enjoy this story and I was wondering if you would add an extra chapter or write a longer chapter when you update this story on the 10th of this month as it is my birthday. Even if you do not, I really enjoy this story and thank you for finally writing a decent crossover of Twilight and Vampire Diaries.

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 68: The Choices We Made

Bravo on the ending. It was nicely done.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Finally fed up Bella snaps from her Zombie State, she goes to the Volturi in seek of help to kill Victoria and to protect all those she loves... But she finds love in an unlikely person, a grandfather she has never met, littered with scars and a life with Immortality. Caius/Bella, Ra: M

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Unyielding Series, Cruel King and Clumsy Human
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 24003
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 05 Jan 2013
Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

haha, really good chapter and an excellent story.

Summary:

After a drunken night, Isabella fell pregnant by an unknown man. With her brother's help, she raises her child, but what happen when two little boys with green-eyes show up at her day-care? Will all her questions finally be answered? All-human


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85507 Read Count: 27006
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2012 Updated: 18 Dec 2015
Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

This was a good chapter and you have a good story line going for you but periodically during the story, expecially during the dialogue, it feels choppy. Sometimes overstating the obvious can lead to the choppy feeling. Other than that, it was a pretty good chapter.

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

well here is one review, really good chapter by the way.

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

This was an OK chapter. There were some gramatical errors, but they mostly had to do with the tenses, eg. past tense or present tense. But overall not bad.



Author's Response:

Sorry, I have all my chapters beta'd but we tend to miss a few here and there. If you would let to help me with my chapters I'd love your help! Just contact me through email :)

I Live by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary:

 

Rebelling against Edward's crushing protectiveness, Bella raced for La Push. Goal in sight, she crashed, shattering her truck and her body. Jasper, discovering Bella gravely injured and bleeding profusely, pulled her from the wreckage. Fighting the lust for her blood was only the first battle. Violence, language, adult themes. Jasper/Bella

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Alice/None, Bella/Jasper, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Peter/Charlotte
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 374713 Read Count: 56484
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2015
Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 29: I Mark

You are fuckin brilliant and funny as hell.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Hon. I don't get called "brilliant" very often. LOL

Glad you like it, and get the humor. What I think is funny doesn't always translate very well.

Thanks for reviewing!

~MizzRick~

 

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Chapter 30 has been accepted by the betas. They did not hate chapter 29. However, the commas and the dialog tags ...

 

*growl* is NOT a dialog tag. You'd think I'd learn.

 

*sigh*

 

An excerpt from

 

Chapter 30, I Fit

 

Jasper's POV

 

 Bella taking off into the wilds again worried me, despite the fact she was chasing Emmett. I knew he would look out for her - when he wasn't too preoccupied with trying to keep her from biting him or removing parts.

 

Trouble was you never knew where a human might happen to show up; even at night. They were always getting themselves hopelessly lost, stuck in crevasses, attacked by wild animals, caught in avalanches, drained by vampires ...

 

One good thing about chasing her down was it gave me the opportunity to check for the presence of any other vampires. Each time we had run through the national forest, I hadn't picked up any trace of another. If anyone else had, they would have mentioned it. We didn't perform perimeter checks like we should, and I couldn't currently do it, unless I took Bella with me. It didn't really seem like an option for me.

 

Though it became dark quickly as we entered the cover of the trees, Rosalie veered off to the right and grabbed what looked like a rag out of a clump low bushes. "Emmett's t-shirt ripped to shreds," she said with annoyance and tossed it away. "I wonder if we'll find an arm or a foot out here." She grumbled. "Or maybe even his head."

 

"Serves him right for being a stupid d*ck. I told him to get the hell out." Remembering his attempts at interrupting Bella and me was cranking up the anger a notch or two. I did recall our little birds-n-bees talk, and he had made a few valid points, but when your mate, who had been rejecting you, came right out and said she wanted you ... well, you didn't pass that sh*t up, I didn't care who you were. I couldn't get my hands on her fast enough. Though, next time, I thought I might start ripping clothes off first thing. I expected a next time very soon, too.

 

Well, I hoped there was a next time in the near future.

 

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Summary:

Damage, deep and lasting, was inflicted when they left her and there is only one who can save her; Damon Salvatore, her biological father. Many surprises are in store for a recovering Bella, including a love that she never pictured in a million years, especially since she was merely waiting for her real life to begin. Human/Vamp New Moon AU Crossover Twi/Vamp.Diaries


Categories: Twilight, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Crossover, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Drama, Historical, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58839 Read Count: 16136
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2014 Updated: 05 Jan 2015
Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 29 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

this just became my favorite story, keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

To know that you enjoy it that much means very much to me.  Thank you for letting me know and for the encouragement.

 

As always, thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

very good chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Happy you enjoyed it!  Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!

~Spudz

Reviewer: canislupusfamiliaris Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

one of the best Damon/Bella/Jasper stories.



Author's Response:

You just made my week.  Thank you for your kind words.  I appreciate them more than you know.

 

~Spudz/Laura