Reviews by maymay74
Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218034
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

I HOPE ESME SLAP HIM, POOR BELLA IS LIKE A SCARED DEER OR BUNNY, OF COURSE SHE RAN

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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

POOR BELLA, IT'S SO SAD THAT NOW SHE FOUND A RELIEF SHE'S SO SCARED TO ENJOY IT

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Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

I THINK BELLA NEEDS SOMETHING THAT REMIND ER EDWARD LOVES HER, HER LETTER WAS KINDA 'IF YOU HAVE A DATE'. COULSD SHE BE MORE SWEET WITH THE SCARF? BTW

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

I KNOW THEY HAVE TO TALK A LOT FIRST, BUT COULD EDWARD CHOOSE BETTER WORDS TO STOP BELLA'S ADVANCES WITHOUT HURTING HER?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Princess Isabella is almost sixteen years old and the heiress to the throne of Italy, Her father King Charles wants her to be married, but in the end the descision is entirely hers. With this in mind he invited Lord Edward Cullen and his family to stay at the castle. What will happen between them, will sparks fly? Will Isabella become the next Queen of Italy?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102043 Read Count: 29782
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Jan 2023
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Descision

:) lovely

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324291
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - My Confessions

I WONDER IF SHE TOOK HER RING BACK INTO THE NECKLSGE BEFORE THE PAPZ . LOVELY TIMES WITH ERIC. WHY MAGGIE IS STILL COMING INTO THEIR HOUSE?

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Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Our Downfall

PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S A HEA! 

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

BVC   HE WAS A LITTLE STIFF AND CRYPTIC, BELLA MADE MOST OF THE CONVERSATION. AS FOR RENEE THE SAME HAPPENED TO ME, MY MOM LOVES TO GAMBLE, ME NOT SO MUCH

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Our First Outing

LOVE THIS CHAPTER CAN'T WAIT TO READ THEIR DATE

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Our First Date

WHICH WILL BE WORST, THE HANGOVER OR FINDING THEY ARE MARRIED?

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Our Mess

HOW COULD BELLA BE SO COLD? AT LEAST EDWSRD WAS SAD

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Our Trip Home

BELLA NEEDS TO RELAX, AND TAKE ONE DAYAT THE TIME

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Our First Night

I'M GLAD BELLA IS MAKING AN EFFORT. EDWARD IS REALLY SWEET

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Our Name

NICE TO KNOW SOME BACKGROUND, I LOVE THAT EMMET HAS HIS STUNT COMPANY.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Our Family

I HOPE CARLISLE GIVES BELLA A CHA G CHANCE. DAMN CELL PHONE MAKES ME MISPELLED WORDS

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Our First Argument

POOTR ERIC LOOSING HIS BEST FRIEND AND APARENTLY HIS BOYFRIEND

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Our Full Garage

I'M GLAD SHE ISN'T PREGNANT. LET'S SEE HOW SCHOOL GOES FOR BELLA

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Our Cheesy Quotes

SWEET GREAT CHAPTER. IT'S FUN HOW YOU CAN WIN A MAN WITH COOKIES

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

MAGGIE SOUNDS LIKE TROUBLE, I HOPE SHE WON'TT SPILL THE BEANS OF THEIR MARRIAGE

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Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

I WANT TO B**** SLAP MAGGIE! AND CAN'T WAIT TO SEE EDWARD MEETING ERIC. LOVED THIS CHAPTER

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Our Awkward Thanksgiving

Right now I don't know if I want to kill Maggie first, Ted in one chapter won the 'let's kill him' award. Poor Edward, no wonder how all are so protectivew of him.

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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

PLEASE LET THEM HAVE THEIR HEA!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Our End?

Why didn't he say he love her? I'm so glad Bella is leaving. Please make him grovell ... a lot.

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131803
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

WOW OF COURSE IT IS HOT IN HERE! I LOVED THEIR 'ANGRY SEX'

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

POOR BELLA, AT LEAST EDWARD AND CARMEN ARE TREATING HER BETTER THAN CHARLIE

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH MY! EDWARD IS REALLY OVERPROTECTIVE AND POOR BELLA HER FIRST KISS WAS KINDA OSAD

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I LOVE JASPER! AND STLL HAVE HOPES ON ROSE, MAYBE SHE'S JUST PROTECTIVE OF HER BROTHER. GLAD THAT BELLA PUT THOSE CHEERLEADERS ON THEIR PLACE

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

BELLA IS SUCH A NAUGHTY GIRL ;)

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WHERE'S THE LINE OF PEOPLE READY TO KICK EDWARD BALLS? 

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I REALLY LIKE JASPER HE'S REALLY LIKE A BROTHER TO BELLA

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OK MY HPOES OF ROSALIE BEING JUST APROTECTIVE SISTER JUST DIED

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OH IT WAS SO SAD THE WAY THEY'VE LOST THEIR PARENTS I WONDER IF ROSALIE'S BITCHY ATTITUDE OR JASPER'S LIGHT ONE CAME FOR THAT

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

MAYBE IT'S JUST ME BUT I'M ON EDWARDS SIDE THIS TIME. THE RULE OF THE TEXT JUST TELLING YOU'RE FINE IT'S GRRATT AND WELL HE IS IN CHARGE OF THE HOUSE JASPER AS LOVELY AS HE IS, ACTS TOO IRRESPONSIBLY HE'S AN ADULT

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I LOVE HAPPY BIRTHDAYS, EVEN ROSALIE BEHAVE

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OK SO MUCH FOR ROSALIE BEHAVING. WHAT'S WRONG WITH TANYA? YOU CAN'T GO TO A BIRTHDAY PARTY AND INSULT THE BIRTHDAY GIRL OR EVEN DO IT IN A STRANGERS HOUSE

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

TANYA IS A CRAZY B**CH, I HOPE EDWARD DRIVES LIKE AN ANCIENT MAN

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

IS IT WRONG THAT I WANTED SOMETHING MORE BLOODFILLED TO HAPPEN TO TANYA?

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

SO GREAT THAT THEY'RE BONDING

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

GLAD THEY SAY THE ILY'S

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OH I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT CRAZY EX-GIRLFRIEND

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

LOVED ALICE'S BIRTHDAY BUT I HOPE LAUREN DOEN'T CAUSE ANY TROUBLE LATER

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I GUESS JACOB DIDN'T SEE THE WEDDING BAND

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

BELLA'S EMOTIONS ARE LIKE A ROLLERCOASTER, FIRST THE SEXING THEN CHARLIE'S ALMOST DEATH

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I DON'T LIKE SUE. SHE'S ALRIGHT WITH CHARLVIE AND HIS BIMBOS AROUND BELLA BUT DISLIKES EDWARD WHO TREATS HER WELL AND BROUGHT HER INTO A FAMILY? I HOPE IN TIME SHE SEE EDWARD IS A GOOD MAN

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

ALL I CAN SAY ABOUT THIS CHAPTER IS  HOT

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Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

CALLING THE LITTLE BABY SHABELL... HERE IN MEXICO THE NICKNAME FOR ISABEL (I GUESS LATIN FOR ISABELLA) IS CHABELA, SO CLOSE

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Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

ROSE NEEDS TO HURRY AND MAKE AMMENDS WITH A CONSTRUCTION WORKER AND A COWBOY. AND ALSO ALICE SHOULD APOLOGIZE TO BELLA, SHE WAS ALSO DISMISSING BELLA'S OPONION ON THE WEDDING DRESS

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Date: 26 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I'M GLAD SHE CLEARED WHERE SHE STANDS WITH ROSE. VERY CLEVER FROM EDWARD THE HAWAII FLYERS

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87326
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I THINK  SHE WOULD DUMP BEN EVENTUALLY, SHE'S SO COMFORTABLE WITH EDWARD



Author's Response:

thank you

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE CARLISLE REACTION



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thanks

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

CLEARLY THEY DESERVED SEXY TIME. I GUESS LIZ DOESN'T REMEMBER BUT WITH JASPER AND ALICE I THINK SHE HAS OTHER THINGS IN HER MIND. BTW, I WANT TO KICK JASPER BALL'S



Author's Response:

Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter.  Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions.  Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once.  As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes.  Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father.  Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day.  (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.)  There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~

TEASER:   “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.

“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.

“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.

“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.

“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago.  And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first.  Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control.  Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”

“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.

“Mom…”

“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.

“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.

“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm glad she made up with Alice; and I hope Alice's relationship with Landon stays the same. 

What did Bella expect about labor pains? It hurts.



Author's Response:

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

 I WANT ALICE TO MAKE JASPER GROVEL A LOT. WELL NOW THE CAT IS OUT OF THE BAG, IS IT WRONG THAT I WANT BEN TO KNOW ABOUT EDWARD AND BELLA TOGETHR?



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your kind words and for the wonderful review.  We are so pleased with how this is going.  Kasi and Jess
Teaser:  The reception is in full swing, and we are all having a great time! Jake and Alice have declared themselves best friends. I’m so happy they like each other, but it’s hard not to like Jake. The food is great and I keep eating! We have done more dancing than anything. Edward can’t dance, but he’s still having fun. He excuses himself after a while to head for the bathroom. I’m dancing with Jake when I hear someone ask if they can cut in as soon as a slow song comes on.

“What are you doing here?” I ask.

“I said I would be your date. What kind of friend would I be if I stood you up?” Ben asks as he pulls me into him. I’m too stunned to say no. “You look beautiful.”

“Thanks,” I say, automatically looking around for Edward. “Why are you really here?”

“I told you why.”

“Well, you didn’t have to. I’m here with my boyfriend,” I tell him as he rolls his eyes at me.

 “I think about you all the time. I’ve wanted to call you, but I knew you wouldn’t have answered,” he says while I remain silent.

“Ben, I’m over everything, I promise. It just hurt at the time,” I explain as he looks at his feet. “I’m really happy right now.”

“Huh. I guess my plan has been blown to shit then,” he says with a humorless laugh.

“What was your plan?” I question, needing to know.

“Well, I was hoping you would think I was the sweetest guy for showing up. If that didn’t work, I was going to charm my way back into your life. I miss you, Baby,” he says, pulling me closer.

“Ben, I’m here with my boyfriend,” I say as I pull away from him.

“Who is it?” he asks, sounding annoyed. I realize he thinks I’m bluffing.

 

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I GUESS CARLISLE NOW WILL GET A LITTLE OF GREY HAIR, AND SHE'S JUST STARTING HER TEENAGE YEARS



Author's Response:

I know right?  So fun!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH BEING 14 AND CRUSHING ON SOMEONE OLDER! OH THAT INNOCENT DAYS



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thanks

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Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOVING EDWARD'S REACTION TO BEN



Author's Response:

yeah we loved that too

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I see Liz point, but as a mother of a teenager boy I know that if you forbid something, it will become the most desired thing and they will do anything to get it. This is where you act like an adult and think before talk. Even if Bella wasn't in love with Edward after Liz tirade she would run to him.
I liked more Carlisle attitude, he was aware of what Bella can do and never impossed his pov. He rather negotiate with her.

Author's Response:

Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places.  Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter.  A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not.  A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard.  A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid.  We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:  “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.

“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.

“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”

“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.

“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.

“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”

“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.

 

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'M MORE CONCERNED ABOUT ALICE. POOR GIRL SUFFERS WITH JASPER THEN WITH HER FATHER, WHY CAN SHE STAY WITH ESME?WONDERFUL SEXCY TIMES FOR BELLA AND EDWARD ;)



Author's Response:

I am sorry for the lateness of this review reply, but I am sending it completely as it was written, so that you are not left out on any info at all.   Kasi~ 

Well there was speculation that Alice may have gotten pregnant on purpose, and where I can’t answer that right now, that answer will come with the story.  Some of you are having troubles reading the whole review reply at FFN, if you go directly to FFN and read there, you will get to read the entire thing, if I get wordy... which is most of the time.  Liz is quite a piece of work, and I am assuring you now that the majority of your concerns and questions brought forward from Chapter 9 will be answered in chapter 10.  All about Alice and Assper will come out eventually.  We will also learn more about Garrett/Gary in the future when Bella talks to Esme herself.  There are a lot of things to come yet in the story, and we sure are super stoked that you all are liking it so much.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, and please keep those reviews and questions coming, we love hearing from you.  Kasi & Jess.

Teaser for chapter 10:  “Baby, we need to do something about your mother,” Edward says on his last night with me.

“I know, but I don’t know what else there is to do.”

“Maybe we could go out to dinner with her and Jim?” he asks as I shrug my shoulders. I really didn’t think anything was going to work. “Well, we need to do something.”

“Let’s run away and get married and then she can’t say a word about anything,” I say as he kisses my temple.

“As tempting as that is, I don’t think that would work. She would probably hate me even more,” he says with a laugh.

“We can try, but I don’t see her even being nice about anything.”

“Call her and ask if they want to meet up with us for lunch tomorrow,” he says as I nod. I check the time to make sure that it isn’t too late to call. I would feel bad for waking her up.

“Bella, are you okay?” she answers in a panicky tone.

“Yes, I’m okay.  Are you okay?” I ask with a giggle.

“Why are you calling so late?”

“It’s only ten, Old Lady,” I say as we laugh.

“Oh hush, it feels later than that,” she says with more laughter. “Was there something you needed?”

“Yes, I was wondering if you and Jim would like to have lunch with Edward and me tomorrow,” I say as she sighs.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

IS IT POSSIBLE THAT LIZ IS PREGNANT? SHE'S NOT OLD



Author's Response:

So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant.  Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe.  Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course.  Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon.  Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her.  You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.

Kasi & Jessica

 

Teaser:  I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.

“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”

“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.

“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

AT LEAST WE KNOW A LITTLE MORE ABOUT ALICE



Author's Response:

Sorry for being a bad review replier... I promise to do better the rest of the story.  Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I THINK LIZ HAS SOME GROVEL TO DO, BELLA AND EDWARD ARE SHOWING MORE MATURITY THAN LIZ



Author's Response:

Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree.  Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella.  Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella.  Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy?  There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry.  Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters.  Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow.  We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”

“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.

“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.

“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.

“Am I hurting you?”

“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”

“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.

“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.

“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.

“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42622
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

I'M SO GLAD THEY CAUGHT JAMES BEFORE HE DID ANYTHING ELSE TO BELLA

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Fifteen

ROSE IS A GOOD FRIEND TO EDWARD AFTER ALL. IS IT WRONG THAT I DON'T WANT TANYA OR ANY OTHER  WOMAN NEAR EDWARD?

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Dreams

OH MY BAD, I SHOULD HAVE MORE FAITH IN YOU. SO OFFICER CULLEN IS RELUCTANT TO ADMIT HIS ATTRACTION TO BELLA

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Saved

WOW BELLA IS SO PERCEPTIVE

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Disorderly

I HOPE BLACKS LIL STUNT MAKE EDWARD MORE ASSERTIVE

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Edward Part One

POOR EDWARD

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Edward Part Two

FIRST OF ALL  I WANT JASPER TO BE MY FRIEND, I WANT TO COME TO JASPER FOR ADVICESECONDLY THE NEXT DAY HANGOVER WILL BE REALLY AWKWARD

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: The Buddy System

OH MEN ARE SO CLUELESS!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: The Zoo

I DON'T KNOW IF BELLA INVENTED TIM OR IF HE'S REALLY ASKING HR OUT, BUT IT WAS A GREAT IDEA TO MENTION HIM TO EDWARD. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63246
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

I'M GLADBOTH OF THEM ARE EQUALLY EXCITED FOR THEIR NEW RELATIONSHIP



Author's Response:

Oh yes, they're both on board and very, very excited to jump into the relationship. 

Thank you so much for reviewing.  I love getting the feedback.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

I LIKE VICTORIA, SHE'S A COOL BOSS; WORRIED FOR HER EMPLOYEES (MAYBE ALSO FOR THE GOSSIP)



Author's Response:

Glad you like Victoria, I do, too.  She was a lot of fun to write.  She's definitely concerned for her employees. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Brunch

I LIKE HOW HONEST THEY ARE WITH EACH OTHER; POOR LUCY!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's a good start for them.  They're both really trying to open up and see where this could lead. 

I know!  At least she has her Uncle Edward to keep her calm. 

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Shattered Peace

ON THE BRIGHTSIDE THEY FINALLY SAID ILY



Author's Response:

Yeah, not a good experience, but it did bring them closer.  Hope you liked the I Love You's!  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Something Out of a Fantasy

BELLA SHOULD KEEP AN EYE ON BREE, SHE'S WEIRD ENOUGH TO BE  AN STALKER



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's definitely worrisome, isn't it?  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Exes and Embarrassment

I WAS CURIOUS ABOUT JAKE, GLAD HE ACTS LIKE HER BROTHER. 



Author's Response:

Yep, Bella and Jake have moved on, and are very happy for each other.  Nice that they were able to maintain their friendship, huh? 

Glad you liked the interaction.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - So Much

I HOPE HE TELLS HER SOON AND I LIKE TO SEEHOW JAKE AND LEAH ARE WITH EDWARD



Author's Response:

It won't be toooo much longer.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Girl Talk

I LIKE ALICE AND JASPER'S STORY, I HOPE WHEN THEY TELL THE GRANDCHILDREN THE STORY, THEY OMIT THE BOOK'S NAME



Author's Response:

Glad you liked Alice and Jasper's story.  I might do an outtake of it at the end.  And yes, they might have to make the story a little more PG for their future grandkids.  Then again, E&B will have to do that as well.  ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Meddling

ANOTHER HIT BY ESME AND HER MINION, :)



Author's Response:

Haha, yep, she did pretty well there, didn't she? 


Thanks for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - The Morning After

IT SEEMS THAT BELLA'S RELATIONSHIP WITH JACOB LACKED PASSION AND TRUST



Author's Response:

Not trust so much, but definitely passion.  And the deeper connection that she was looking for.

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Finally

AND THE WEEKEND IT'S JUST BEGINING



Author's Response:

I know! Off to a pretty good start, aren't they?  Hope you enjoyed it!

Thanks for the review!

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 716892
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1813047
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 218: Chapter 218

Swoon! I like this Edward more, before he was a jerk; now he needs to start to woo his little girl

Higher by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summer of 1994: Dial-up internet. Pagers. Walkmans. AOL chat rooms. O.J in a white Bronco. And blazingly hot weather in Brooklyn where eighteen-year-old Bella Swan is filling her days making ice cream sundaes before she starts college. But one long night – full of Ecstasy, subway rides, dark dance clubs, and a boy she doesn't want to stay away from – may change everything. ExB, mostly canon. AH. HEA. 

Banners by KrisMkyStitch and Deebelle1

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155380 Read Count: 126780
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2013 Updated: 01 May 2013
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Misconception

:)

Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 07 May 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Egg Rolls

Go Bella!

Summary:

LMDC

 

They met at Emerson University, fell in love and began their journey. Four years after the release of their first single, Edward and Bella Cullen are still going strong and happy with their lives. Breaking Midnight, the band that had brought them together is on top of the music charts, winning numerous accolades and awards.

Nothing can stop them.

Or so it would seem …

Ghosts from their past rear their ugly heads and will it be too much for this couple? Will their fairy tale happily ever after crumble? Only time will tell, but one thing is steadfast...

Sequel to La Cantante

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 208407 Read Count: 33639
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2016 Updated: 30 Jul 2017
Reviewer: maymay74 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Fame Whore

I really hope Rose finds peace and a better man :(

Great chapter.