Reviews by LBD
Summary:

BANNER

Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53533
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Got to love Alice!!! As least, she doesn't seem mean!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

He's got a heart???? Maybe????

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella really loves Rose and is scared for her. She doesn't want her hurt in any way, shape or form!!!!

Edward truly seems concerned for Bella's well being. Maybe he's not a complete arse!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bella's trying to do the right thing and she's got a lot to learn even with her very kind and loving heart!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Emmett, he needs a Doctor, stitching up, tetanus shot and some pain meds.

Edward, as ever, is overbearing and Bella's terrified and in shock!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella's so afraid ad doesn't know which way to turn. She's afraid of Edward what's going to happen next!!!!

Edward seems sincerely trying to help her!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It seems things are getting better and I hope they continue to do so. I also hope she tells Edward thank you!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It seems things are getting better and I hope they continue to do so. I also hope she tells Edward thank you!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I hope Bella does say than you to Edward!!!

I really hate for Jasper to be upset!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I hope Bella does say than you to Edward!!!

I really hate for Jasper to be upset!

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Date: 19 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Where the Hell is Edward and why aren't there guards to protect Bella. Something is very wrong with the entire situation!!!!

Summary:

Altered Paths

 

 

 

What happens when Jasper makes a discovery he simply can’t ignore?

 

Will contain: language, violence, explicit sex, drinking, smoking, gambling

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Family, Horror, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 119498 Read Count: 17474
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Fall

Excellent chapter!!!Sexy, loving and a bit of fun!!!!!

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul

WOW!!! Alice has a mind controlling power no one knew she had!!!! She's also viciously murdered Charlie,cut off his head and sent it to the Whitlock's!!! Poor Bella, the blows keep coming!!

Edward is still a spoiled brat!!!!

Carlisle is clueless!!

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-You Move Me

It was very sweet when Bella cared for the horse, sexy when they made love in the field and scary when Bella "Died".

I do hope Edward stays gone.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm

Jasper really doesn't quite get the "Swan Will or Stubbornness". Although, he will in time!!!

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes

Well,
Alice got a bit of what was coming to her!!!! Happy Dance!!!!!

Bella's change, her giving Alice more than Alice gave her was hot!!!

Bella and Jasper's after change six was incredibly HOT!!!!

The Volturi intervening, Not Good!!!!

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Date: 17 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Fall

I was a little confused in the beginning as the story seemed to taking so many different directions!!!! Once I figured it out the rest of the chapter was awesome!!!

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Date: 19 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 – Shackles, Ropes, and Chains

It's amazing what Jasper and Bella feel for each other!!! They're so dedicated and totally committed with a love beyond anything I can fathom!!!!

I'd been waiting for Evil, Mean and Nasty Maria to make an appearance!!!

I hope Jasper is able to make quick work of killing her and destroying her remains!!!!

Happy Writing!!!!

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Date: 19 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 10: CHAPTER 10 WHAT I WANT

Great Chapter!!!!!!

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Date: 19 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 – Remember Me

It's a fascinating yet a little bit crazy story!!! It's one you can't put down because you want to know what happens next!!!!!

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Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Devil Gets Your Soul

incredible chapter and full of surprises!!!!!!

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Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-You Move Me

I knew was a powerful Empath but his method to get Edward to leave he & Bella alone was very scary and it too an incredible toll on he and Bella!!!!!

It's a fascinating chapter!!!!

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Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-The Perfect Storm

The tough love he's giving Bella was a bit scary at times ad was amazed how well she handled the situation and Jasper!!! She's a really strong and compassionate woman!!!!!!

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Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - In Another's Eyes

Hella of a chapter!!!! I loved Bella's last day!!!!

Alice is very dangerous and I hope Bella and Jasper get to tell their side of the story!!!!!

I adore your lemons!!!!!

Summary:

Banner

Edward and Isabella Cullen run MC Enterprises and the Cullen mafia, making them Seattle's most important power couple. But what will become of them all when she's sick of the business?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12695 Read Count: 16978
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2017 Updated: 21 Dec 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Futuretake

You responded to each of my reviews and I really appreciated it as I giggled through most of the responses.

Author's Response:

 Lol, I always respond. I'm glad you liked what I said, sometimes I'm not even sure what I'm saying!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Futuretake

Delightful ending!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm happy Edward realized how much he loves and cherishes Bella as she should be!!

I hope the lesson wasn't to difficult!!!

Author's Response:

They've figured it all out.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm glad they've alienated the Volturi's except for Marcus and the traitor named Jacob Black!!!!!

I'm also happy Bella's pregnant and she now knows what was causing her vomiting!!! I hope Edward will be happy, too!!!!

Author's Response:

Oh, he's ecstatic!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward's finally found and rescued Bella!!! He's really angry with her, and is giving her no comfort when she needs it!!!

Author's Response:

He's guarding his heart for now.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is having a really rough job trying to obtain Bella's location!!!! He's going nuts without Bela!!!!

Author's Response:

He's going insane.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is frustrated, Angrier than he's ever been and scared out of his mind!!!!

I can hardly wait until Edward gets his hands on Jacob!!!!!!

Author's Response:

He's terrified, and rightly so!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella is in a heap of trouble!!!! I hope Edward and his team will be ab e to figure it out and save her in time!!!!

Author's Response:

She'll have to work to get herself out of it if he's not fast enough.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The plot thickens. I don't think Mike was in on Jacob's plans!!!! Bella did a good job handling herself except for not have an extra clip on her body!!!!

Jacob is a great big douche bag!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Poor Mike was not in on it. She was right about him, just not about Jake.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella's gut is telling her things aren't right with their story!!! I hope she figures it out and calls for backup soon!!!

Author's Response:

It's true, she really should have listened to her gut.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Feisty Bella is the Best!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It was some really hot and erotic stuff!!!!

Author's Response:

Yes it was! LOL

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I really admire her!!!! She stands by her convictions!!!!

Author's Response:

That was really important to me.

Summary:

tu-bannner-long


Years have passed since the reclaiming of Erebor and Bilbo’s ring forgotten…till now.


Categories: Lord of the Rings, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Legolas
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Changing of Tales
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45709 Read Count: 3828
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2017 Updated: 18 Mar 2019
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: The Fellowship of the Ring IX

Where's Alice and Charlotte? Are they not Jasper's and Peter's true mates?

My apologies for beginning with a question.

Your blending Bella into the "Lord of the Rings" is quite brilliant.

I've found these two stories to be fascinating, intriguing, evil and full of love, duty, courage and kindness which will overcome evil in the end of this trilogy!!

Legolas has always been my favorite Elf and now his wife, Moriel, Princess Canadriel and Isabella (Bella)is very much included in my favorites. I've also always loved Lord Elrond, Arwen, Galadriel a Celeron!!!

Happy Writing!!!!

Summary:

IWJW

Now I know what you're thinkin'! But he stole that line from me, honestly. Ian Fleming, the author I mean. Twilight AU One-Shot, Jasper's P.O.V


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3997 Read Count: 302
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2017 Updated: 03 Jul 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your descriptions of everyone and everything were wonderful!!! I really enjoyed your very original plot!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks,

I really liked doing that one, who knows who else they could have met xx

Alexis

Ever After by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 370]
Summary: Past Featured Story

EverAfter

Princess isabella has been hidden away for her own safety since she was a child, but once she returns to the world she once knew, all bets are off. The fairytale ending is just the beginning of her tale.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 116 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32503 Read Count: 92673
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2017 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 86

Interesting chapter and I love how intuitive Bell is!!!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 91

They've made it home and I hope Jane was honest with them!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 89

I really like how well the get along!!!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 90

It's wonderful Rose and Emmett re going back to the Castle with Bella and Edward!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 90

It's wonderful Rose and Emmett re going back to the Castle with Bella and Edward!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 87

Bella is also very thoughtful and kind. I think she's going to be much loved by her people and a magnificent queen.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 88

The King is quite brilliant.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 90

I loved it!!! Emmett always adds fun to the mix!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 82

Adorable!!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 83

It seems they have their work cut out for them.

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 84

A little bit scary for Bella!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 85

The plot thickens!!!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 86

Bella is very intelligent when working on all the complexities of obtaining the items to remove the curses.

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Intriguing!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

AH! Poor Jasper's been caught by a stranger!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Fascinating!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 81

This story is quite fascinating and I'm enjoying this read immensely!!!! It's delightful!!!!!

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Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 106

I love Sansa!!!She's one of my favorites in GOT. I hope they decide so Teddy can see his daddy and stop crying!!!

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Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 107

WOW!!! It sounds so exciting!!!

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Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 108

My very brave and angry Isabella is about to unleash hell on Caius and Phillip!!!!!

Summary:

 Just a little bit of fun on All Hallows eve…


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1687 Read Count: 485
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2017 Updated: 06 Sep 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Delightful!!!!

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Date: 17 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a delightfully cry and sensual little tale and I quite loved it!!!!!!!
You did a wonderful job building suspense and although Bella was a Sith, she seemed to have a true soft spot for little Thomas!!!!!
Your Jasper was absolutely perfect!!!!

Summary:

That's What You Get Banner

 

Jasper's best friend, Bella, is in an abusive relationship. What will it take to save her? AH, OOC


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2654 Read Count: 257
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2017 Updated: 29 Sep 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's so sad but ends so sweetly!!!

I was so glad when he finally told her how he really felt about her regardless of whether or not she loved him, too!!!
It's took a lot of guts!!!

My only sadness it this story is a one shot!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful and so true!!! We often don't see the love in front of us!!! I'm happy they'll have a real chance at happiness!!!!

Summary:

star


Starlight, star bright,


First star I see tonight,


I wish I may, I wish I might,


Have this wish I wish tonight.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11915 Read Count: 4307
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2017 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW, simply WOW!!!!! What a hell of wish and a Jasper fantasy to boot!!!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW, simply WOW!!!!! What a hell of wish and a Jasper fantasy to boot!!!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW, simply WOW!!!!! What a hell of wish and a Jasper fantasy to boot!!!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW, simply WOW!!!!! What a hell of wish and a Jasper fantasy to boot!!!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, Sam's not any where near as smart or powerful as he thinks he is!!!! He's is in for a rude awakening because he's going up against the Prince of Darkness himself!!!!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I ca hardly wait to learn who the King of Darkness is???

Whether tenacious or not, Alexis is a about to get her ass handed to her!!!!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I ca hardly wait to learn who the King of Darkness is???

Whether tenacious or not, Alexis is a about to get her ass handed to her!!!!

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So, Bella's q Queen and Succubus Demon!!! She feeds through sexual contact!!! Jasper's going to a very busy Prince with keeping her fed and satisfied!!!

I don't know who the screeching girl is but I think she may get her ass handed to her in the next ten seconds!!!!

I wonder who's talking in the background!!!!
!!!
Happy Writing!!!

Summary:

gullible

 

Those bastard's, I'll get them back for this if it's the last thing I do. How could I be so blind? I was just an object for them to fight over, neither actually wanted or loved me! Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46329 Read Count: 12578
[Report This] Published: 05 Nov 2017 Updated: 10 Feb 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Bend Or Break, Little Darlin'

This story is fascinating and amazing!!!! I've really enjoyed all the plot twist!!!

I'm happy Jacob is dead!!!! What a sadistic and cruel prick was he!!!

I'm also very pleased Edward finally saw the light and grew up into what appears to be the beginning of a good man!!!!

Charlotte has really betrayed Jasper, Peter and Bella!!!! I'm not sure exactly what her actions mean and she broke a Cardinal rule when she lied to Bella. So I don't think Bella will ever forget or forgive the lie and I don't believe Bella or Jasper will ever trust Charlotte again!!!!!

Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Bend Or Break, Little Darlin'

This story is fascinating and amazing!!!! I've really enjoyed all the plot twist!!!

I'm happy Jacob is dead!!!! What a sadistic and cruel prick was he!!!

I'm also very pleased Edward finally saw the light and grew up into what appears to be the beginning of a good man!!!!

Charlotte has really betrayed Jasper, Peter and Bella!!!! I'm not sure exactly what her actions mean and she broke a Cardinal rule when she lied to Bella. So I don't think Bella will ever forget or forgive the lie and I don't believe Bella or Jasper will ever trust Charlotte again!!!!!

Happy Writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad you're enjoying it xx

Alexis

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Date: 13 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Violet Heels!

An Amazing and Fascinating story!!!!!!! I was so intrigued I cold not stop reading!!!!!! It's a ten from the start until now!!! Thank you!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks,

That's very kind of you to say so, I'm really glad you enjoyed it xx

Alexis

Summary:

Testing Faith Cover

 

Summary:  Edward Cullen thought his life in the playroom was over, when his leg was amputated from the knee down due to an car accident. Could a submissive with her own ghosts be the one to show him that he is more than enough to take complete control of her body and her heart?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53532 Read Count: 84414
[Report This] Published: 24 Nov 2017 Updated: 26 Nov 2019
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Not What He Expected

I found it interesting and educational.

I'm glad Marcus gifted Angela with his confidence in her ability to mentor Edward!!

I thought Angela did a really good job with their first lesson.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Ready to Learn

This story is quite wonderful!!! I love the tone of it, the humor and the fascination with the community!!!!

Happy Writing

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So horrific and so sad!!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Unraveling a Mystery

WOW!!!!! Edward seems to have had the shock of his life!!!!

I hope Alice doesn't get punished for tipping Edward off about his brother!!!!

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Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Escaping an Nightmare

I'm s happy Charlie is sending her away!!!! She's so much better than Aro!!! I hope she'll be okay and safe!!!!

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57078
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm disappointed. I would think your readers would know what the Prologue said. Instead of you repeating it, you could have written a real chapter!!!!

Are you planning to repeat chapters in the future? I would sincerely appreciate if you would tell me and your other readers. I'm not rating this one as I already have.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It was interesting to read Edward's day before he gave her the Claddagh ring he purchased for her!

Bella really is smarter than the average young woman of her age and she still adherers to everything he Daid taught her!!!!

I really don't like Carlisle!!!

Beautifully written!!!!

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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Carlisle is being a first class arse!!!

I loved how they both had the same day!!! It was sweet and beautiful!!!

I hope what happens next is not to horribly painful for either of them!!!!

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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's an intriguing and a bit of romantic chapter!!!

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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I forgot to say how much I love the Gaelic you've added to the story and I'm grateful for the definitions.

Well, Carlisle was a lousy example of a father!!!! I truly hope he didn't take out a hit on Edward's Mom.

I happy he loved his Ma Esme and his half brothers.

Excellently written.

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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He certainly knows how to turn into a bitchy little girl!!!

Excellent job writing this one!!!!

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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It's a hell of a introduction chapter!!!
I'm really sad they end up parting ways forever!!!

Beautifully written!!!!!!

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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Your sex scenes are HOT!!!

I'm looking to more of it ad some plot!!!

Beautifully Written!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I haven't got a clue why they're parting permanently. Their words and actions are simply heartbreaking!!!!

Author's Response:

I know, they are just a little crazy 

Summary:

Banner

 

Doctor Edward Cullen has never really enjoyed Christmas holidays.  His entire life is wrapped around his job and nothing else.  Walking out of hospital one snowy December night, he is drawn to the large decorated tree with tags with a number and gifts that are required.  What happens when he allows his heart to open back up and give this family a Christmas to remember?  Or will he get a surprise gift that will tear down all the walls around his heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9129 Read Count: 2824
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2017 Updated: 12 Dec 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

It was so sad and beautiful!!!! I so happy he found Bella and his beautiful daughter!!!!

Thank You so much and sometimes Christmas extends into January as it has this year!!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Short Story

It was so sad and beautiful!!!! I so happy he found Bella and his beautiful daughter!!!!

Thank You so much and sometimes Christmas extends into January as it has this year!!!!!!

Summary:

puss in boots

You know that saying, 'The straw that broke the camel's back!' Well, they didn't listen to me. A girl, no, a woman can only take so much teasing and cold shoulder, before she grows up and leaves you behind!  Coming of Age, One-Shot in Bella's POV


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Boots
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6157 Read Count: 984
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2017 Updated: 18 Dec 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Crunch Time

It's a wonderful coming of age story!!! I really enjoyed the vision of Bella dressed as "Puss n' Boots"!!!

Thank you!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks,

So pleased you liked it xx

Alexis

Summary:

Perfectly Reckless and Totally Defenseless Banner

 

Wherein Bella receives a mysterious note that alters the course of her future.  Written using/inspired by the prompt:  The lyrics to ‘Break In’ by Halestorm.  Number One in a Series of Unrelated One-Shots.  Rated M to be safe.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3101 Read Count: 867
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2017 Updated: 21 Dec 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Perfectly Reckless and Totally Defenseless

Marvelous story and just as it should be!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.  Thank you for taking the time to leave a review.  I appreciate you and your support of my writing.

 

-Lilly

Summary:

TMTIC

Would you like to know what Christmas means to me now, this year? Well, in that case, I'm gonna have to tell what it used to mean, before, so you get a comparison, so to speak! (Jasper's musing P.O.V)  J/ B pairing

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5058 Read Count: 387
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Naughty Or Nice

I loved it and it made me happy to read about someone finally getting their HEA!!!! It was amazing!!!! I'm still celebrating Christmas ad my 70th Birthday during the month of January!!! So thank you for making my extended Christmas a happy one!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks,

My pleasure, it was my 6oth in December so, I know what you mean,

thanks for reading my bit of Xmas fun xx

Alexis

Baby Daddy by merri92 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a first grade teacher at Oakwood Elementary School. She had pined over her Reading Buddy room teacher Edward Cullen since she first started at the school. After a year of wishing Edward was single, he breaks up with his long time girlfriend Tanya Denali which opens the door for Bella and Edward to become friends with benefits as Edward figures out what he wants. What happens when Bella finds out she is pregnant when the news breaks out that Edward and Tanya are not only back together but engaged to be married? Will Bella tell Edward the truth or keep her future child from it's father?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3092 Read Count: 3040
[Report This] Published: 14 Jan 2018 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I'm glad your "Plain Jane" has some fire!!!! I say good for her!!!

Happy Writing!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It sounds delectable with lots of angst!!!! As ever, Edward's an idiot!!!!!

L'Arène by cathy29jes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Traduction : Jasper est capturé et contraint de se battre dans une arène. Il refuse de se battre jusqu'à ce que quelqu'un est amené à lui, quelqu'un qu'il doit protéger à tout prix. AU. OOC. Jasper et Bella. L'histoire est traduite avec la permission de l'auteur.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58267 Read Count: 596
[Report This] Published: 19 Jan 2018 Updated: 17 Jun 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fascinating beginning to your story!!! Your description of Jaspers physical and emotional pain was incredible.

Happy Writing!!!

Summary:

There will always be a rivalry between them until that day where everything nearly burnt down around them.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23812 Read Count: 5135
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2018 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome start to this story!!! It was frightening and scary with all the risks and injuries. You really made it come alive!!!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Steaming doesn't even begin to cover it!!!!

I'm so happy E. Cullen is a jerk in this story!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, My, My, My what a rush and it's so very, hot!!!!!!!!

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It's not!!!!

Fun chapter!!! Loved it!!!!