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Bio:
I'm a Fan Fiction Addict who adores the genre's of Twilight, Harry Potter and Mortal Instruments. I love canon and non canon pairings for Twilight and Harry Potter as well as canon for Mortal Instruments. My favorite non canon pairings are Bella/Jasper, Bella/Caius for Twilight and Hermione/Draco for Harry Potter!!! It's hard to find stories about Bella/Jasper and Bell/Caius. With Harry Potter there are many, many Hermione/Draco or Dramione stories and I love reading them. I also love reading Erotica when I can find it and the pairings are my favorite ones.
I'm a retired/ Senior Internal Auditor and I have tons (28 years to be exact) of professional writing experience. I only wish more imagination so I could author some stores of my own. However, my writing experience makes me an excellent Beta and I do an excellent job when making suggestions to enhance the story or provide assistance with flow and detail when writing erotica or BDSM scenes.
I have several hobbies such as reading, making jewelry, sewing, gardening and spending time on the beach in any season. I love them all!!!! I also have plans to study piano and take up drawing and painting again after I take some classes in technique and style.
Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn.
After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113975
Date: 22 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 22... all of it :)
Snap!!! What a horrid mess!!!! I feel so sad for Bella!!! Her life has been a horror and finally she's got some great things going for her and 'Mr. Jake, the Dead Beat Dad" wants a cut of the pie and is willing to make Bela and Elizabeth's life a misery!!!!
Thanks for the whole chapter in one sitting!!! It was a wonderful read!!!
I hope all is well in your world and Congratulations on your new book!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 17 Part 10
I adore this story!!!! Congratulations on your BOOK!!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 19 Part 18
The last eleven installments were absolutely beyond beautifully amazing!!!!!!
Date: 09 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 139: Chapter 19 part 16
Hi,
Happy New Year!!!!!
I've ben catching up o the last 25 or so updates!!!! It's a lovely, exciting read ad the sex scenes are phenomenal!!!!! It's a pleasure reading each update!!!!!
Thank you!!!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 6 (part 2)
It simply gets better and better!!
Love all the Pics.
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 7 part 3
I love this story! It is a very different approach to a Bella and Edward story. It is also enchanting and sweet. I do hope to see more of Alice and Jasper.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7
Happy Belated Birthday. Another lovely chapter.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9
Wow, hell of a wet cream. Loved the chapter. This story is really such a sweet one.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1
So sweet.
Where are you?
You haven't posted in days and I waned to make sure you're okay.
I check for a posting each day but nothing.
Please let us hear from you soon. This story is marvelous.
Date: 01 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 154: Chapter 21 Part 2
How you handled Bella and Edward on Ellen was adorable!!! I loved how kind she was to help their relationship expand so they could go public.
I'm doing a happy dance because you've starting writing about Alice and Jasper and their more than budding relationship!!!!I've missed reading this story and I'm glad E/B finally got together!!!!
I'm glad Esme is back in the story, too!!!
I'm looing forward to reading more!!!!The ten is for the entire story!!!!!
See you next update!!!!
What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 134561
Date: 31 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
Oh my Lord,this chapter was simply wonderful lovely and included fun time for the girls. I do hope Alice can make the dress in three or four days!
Date: 01 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
I did not have a computer for several day. I so enjoyed catching up to this chapter. It is such a wonderful and amazing story. I do hope you are doing
Jasper and Alice's wedding night as well as Emmett's and Rose's night, too.
This story brings so much pleasure and remind's me of many beautiful times.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
Sexy, sexy chapter... Thanks for doing the honeymoon outakes. I understand your focus but I hope you the others as well. You've wriiten how close the girls the guys are so it would seem weird to exclude them.
Author's Response:
I promise more of the other couples in the coming chapters.. But I will do just in the outtakes for the honeymoon scenes between the other coouples
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Back to Work
Amazing first day back at work and play.
Who's the crazy, delusional stalker I wonder? He really scares me for Bella.
What comes after Betrayal? Revenge. Bella's world has been thrown upside down. Her family has betrayed her, and her brother is missing. Her new husband wants her to move on and forget the past, but some things are harder to forget than others. Revenge - Betrayal Part 2 A Mobward Drabble
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25769 Read Count: 89449
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
I'm really confused regarding Bella's change of heart and attitude. I think she's been an awesome sister fighting for Emmett's life. I don't want anything to happen to Em's child. I hope I understand better soon. Awesome story whether I'm confused or not
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
I'm sad she's so distressed and I hope she wakes up understands she's really loves this child and undestands it might be bad timing. It will work ut for the best and she'll will be a nuturing ad d loving Mom!
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I apologize for missing an update and not reviewing both. Just know, I'm so happy you are back.
For so few words per chapter this story is one hell of a ride! I know if one of my close family was in Bella's position, I wouldn't give up until I found them and my family would do the same. Missed you and I am so happy your back. Love all your stories!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I love this Bella's determination,spunk, ability to confront Edward or anyone else except maybe Esme and her passion in caring about the ones she loves. It was an wonderful chapter and I so happy Emmett is going to be okay physically. I dread his process for dealing with his feelings regarding Rose.
Thanks.
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I love the way you ended it with B & E having four children and Emmett finding love having Izzy.
I have enjoyed every chapter and I grateful for your dedication to your posting schedule. You also recognize your Beta's contributions.
Sherry Rocks but in my humble opinion YOU ROCK, MORE!!!!
Loved it and thanks.
Author's Response:
I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.
Kara x
Banner for this story was made by: Mina
Summary: Between deployments and deaths, will Bella and Edward find their happy place together? When they find their love, will it survive the war they're surrounded by? Tissue warnings are given, but a happy ending is promised. All Human.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26925 Read Count: 34733
Date: 07 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Still crying but not quite so much. I was a good chapter. I still can't get my head around Jasper dying.
Date: 05 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Beautifully done. I think he already loves her as a man loves a woman!
I hope Alice will be okay and have a good lIfe.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
It's a beautiful ending. I 'm happy so many lives became so wonderful!
At least this time the tears are happy ones. You've been murder on my tear ducts.
As always, you guys write a lovely story.
Date: 04 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
And so the heartbreak and my tears begin. It is an excellent story. I look forward to reading it.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
His retirement froqm the Army. Nice plot twist even if we knew it in the prologue. You've got to ztopmaking me cry every chapter. Great job!!!
Date: 08 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Excellent job on this chapter. I didn't cry. Thank you. I'm a little upset with Rose's attitude. I hope Bella gets to tell Edward she's in love with him soon!
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
First chapter I didn't cry. Thanks guys and it a wonderful chapter. I'm so happy
he admitted he is in love with her. YAY!
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I did a review of this chapter then lost it and couldn't get it back. I'm going to try to restate it and hope I don't leave anything out of it. As ever, it was an amazing chapter and of course I cried and yes they were happy tears except for Jasper's lack of physical presence. I LOVE IT from the time he picked her up. The proposal, their meeting with Gen. Aro (love this guy's character and role), Edward sharing his pride in her accomplishments, her promotion and the ceremony with Emmett presenting her new rank and getting promoted(See note at bottom), Nightfall's runaway bride piece, the wedding and processional including each person's role. His Mom was so emotional and loving, Rose and
Emmett walking down the aisle was beautiful, Alice and J.C.'s walk was indescribable and so lovely and the wedding itself was adorable!!!
Thank you and my apologies for the verbose review.
Lana
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I loved the reception especialy Rose's speech and Alice dancing and having a nice time. Her decision to begin to live again and her time of in depth grieving made me so happy for her.
B&E's first time making love so beautiful and I loved it being done from Edward's POV.
Thanks and awesome job.
A Dominant & A Gentleman
Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.
Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.
Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.
Will she take the risk or walk away?
A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.
And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.
I ♥ you hard!
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94276
Date: 06 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Shit Hot
Why did you start over? It is such an amazing story and were close to their reconciliation and compromises. I also want to know what happened with Anthony Bree.
Date: 13 May 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I'm so happy to have found this story again!!!! It's and awesome story and I wish you all the best regarding self-publishing it!!!
This story is qa TEN from beginning to end!!!!
See you guys for the Outtake!!!!!!
Love to you and your Beta!!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!
I tried to find my reviews of this story so I could review what I'd hadn't. I couldn't find them the I recalled you've reposted the entire story. I loved and enjoyed reading it the first time and this time around was just as wonderful!!!!
I'm so happy your Edward and Bella worked their way through their issues. I don't think Edward had much of choice since his feelings for Bella rendered him impotent. I was so happy to read she was going to seek Edward out to tell him she was moving to D.C. before he found her in the employ of the British PM. I loved how Edward managed the situation with Riley as he was 100% correct in calling in the Secret Service. Their reunion was amazing and it's so poetic Bella was the first woman he'd ever made love to in his life!!! I loved it!!!! Everything was so beautiful in the end. I'm so happy things worked out, he retired, bought a house married Bella and they had a beautiful little girl who's an adorable Tom Boy!!!1
I'm so happy and grateful you made it back to the world of Fan Fiction and you're healing and sound happy.
If you and LostinPA self publish this story, would you kindly send me a note on Fanfiction under the pen name Green Eyed Lana Lee as I would love to purchase it!!!
I look forward to reading any new or old stories you write, post or publish. I'm deeply grateful for having the opportunity to get to know you through you through your writing and comments. You're amazing!!!!
A Mafia/BDSM story. A Don who is a Dom; two powerful personalities bound together in one body. Will it be too much for one woman to handle, or is she exactly what is needed to balance this man.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129501 Read Count: 601926
Date: 18 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Wow!!! Lots of sexy times and lemons.
Loved it.
Date: 27 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Wow, what a chapter. Wonderfully written. it was so long. and I loved it.
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
This chapter covered a wide issues and emotions. There were also some very erotic scenes. Bella's jealousy was an interesting twist. Edward has got his work cut for him to convince her she's his one and only.
I liked it when they both realize they loved each other especially the where he knows he's going to marry her.
The ring was beautiful and I really like this characterization of Rose. It reminds me more of her sweetness and care for others in real life.
See you next post.
Author's Response:
When geek medical student Edward meets geek student/librarian Bella. They fall in love in the library. Lies are told and secrets are kept soon rip them apart. Can they endure the events that follow to find each other again.
This story has a happy ever after.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174321 Read Count: 53477
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
What an intersting way to begin a story. I know already I'm going tolove it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing the story. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it goes along.
Isabella is an English woman, trying to escape a marriage she doesn't want. Edward is a Scottish Laird, with a soft spot for a damsel in distress and a hate for the English Redcoats that pursue her, but what does he do with her now that he has saved her? He has no choice, other than to bring her home, but he wasn't counting on falling for the lass on the journey to Castle Menzies.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32098 Read Count: 136771
Date: 20 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Wonderful chapter and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I believe her stubbornness is going to get them both in trouble before she learns some diplomacy.
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
First chapter and I'm caught up in your story. You did a wonderful job.
Happy Scottish Mother'Day. Our celebration of Mother's is not until the second Sunday in May. (USA)
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
This story gets better with each chapter. I completely enjoyed this chapter.
Date: 29 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Poor Bella, she really is having a tough day. Thankfully Jasper is trying to keep her from getting lost or injured.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for all of your reviews. I love reading them xx
Date: 03 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
So sweet even though she I so worried about what will happen.
I'm hoping for some lemony goodness next.
I do hope there isn't a full blown war.
See you next post.
The Family secrets are out now it's time for the family surprises to be revealed. ******Sequel to Family Secrets****** Contains Adult themes.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5646 Read Count: 3020
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one: Final good byes
Oh boy, another story about one of favorites. Yay!!!
What a begining for this sequel. I'm excited to read the next chapter! Question: what does "Termination end of shelf sale item" mean as used in this chapter? I believe I know what it meant but it confused me a little. Thanks for your help with this one.
At the end of WW2
he is a American Captain, saving what is left of her country
she is just a girl, looking for her parents..
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11853 Read Count: 3992
Date: 22 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3a Bella's loss
It's a sad and panful story yet it's so very beautiful and loving between Bella and Edward. I am really enjoying it.
Author's Response:
thank you.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 His present for Bella
Wonderful chapter. I'm so happy for them to find each other, love each other and marry.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you lik it
Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 The Wedding
Lovely, Lovely chapter and so beautifully written, too.
Author's Response:
Wow thank you 😀
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 home is where the heart is
Oh my, what a plot twist the explosion was to this story. They had barely gotten married. I loved how strong and loving Bella was during this ordeal. I know they still have such a long way to go. Love is what will get them through it.
Author's Response:
poor Edward...
poor Bella...
how strong is their love?
People came to Eclipse Island to leave their troubles behind, at least that was Jasper thought. Too bad for him the other guests have other plans on mind. Drugs, sex, blackmail, murder... this wasn't the paradise they promised him. A story narrated by Jasper. AH, OOC, HEA.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45931 Read Count: 5889
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
It's such a mystery about how this story is evolving. I'm enjoying it. I look forward to the next posting.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really appreciate your comment. I'm working on the next chapter, I hope to post it tomorrow.
May
Date: 01 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Michael and Tanya seem made for each other but the jury's still regarding whose worse.
Interesting chapter with many new hotel guests. So many new players.
See you next post.
Author's Response:
Yeah, we could say that all our characters are here now. Though you'll have various chances to decide if M or T is worst. :)
Thanks. I appreciate your comment.
May
Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 109592
Date: 04 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Tanya is trouble with a capital "T". I loved the way Bella handled the tutors, artisans and especially Lady Tanya.
I think she'll perfect for the Prince.
Isabella, desperate for a job after college agrees to move across the country to apply to be governess for two young children. She soon finds out that the Cullen Estate and the Master that resides within are dark and frightening. For the sake of her charges, she must attempt to find a way to reach the heart of the man who looks at her as no more than a servant. Read warning!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81972 Read Count: 48030
Date: 19 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I've not been reading on TWCS for a while and I'm trying to catch up on the stories I'd been reading!!!!
This story is incredibly complex and an excellent mystery story!!!
Edward cares more for Bella than even he can fathom!!!! The daughters, Rosalie and Alice, are really beautiful souls!!!! They are much better people than their upbringing!! They love their father deeply and Isabella too, have great compassion, courage and are beyond intelligent and talented!!!!! I hope Edward comes to love them know how fortunate he is and appreciate them for the women they are becoming!!!! I hope they are able to help him solve the mystery and find Isabella!! I also hope Jasper and Mrs. Cope come through for him, the girls and Bella, too!! I pray they will understand and help him solve the mystery and find Isabella!!!
I'm beginning to think this vendetta against all the townsfolk is all about land the Black's, Uley's etc. believe belongs to them.
While I hope you're able to finish your stories before your labor begins and life as you know it changes dramatically, please, please don't overdo it and cause yourself or your baby any unnecessary pain or harm!!!!!
See you next update!!!!!
Prompt: Forget the holly, the berries, the bows and tinsel. The loveliest sight of the season was the woman standing before him.
Categories: All Human, Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Ginny Weasley, Hermione /Draco Malfoy, Other
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1861 Read Count: 180
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved it. It was such a sweet story. I'm glad Lucius was put in prison for life!
Being with them wasn't the problem, but losing me was. A life filled with sandy beaches and sunshine, I felt safe here. Nothing bad ever happens in SoCal, except maybe bad Mexican food. Or so I thought. This isn't your everyday love story. Based on the movie Savages.
For Annie, an Edward, Bella, Jasper- polyfic
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218114 Read Count: 43822
Date: 26 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I hope with all my heart you haven't given up on this story??????
It's amazing and I love it!!!! You've woven a story which is impossible to put down. I simply adore Bella, Jasper and Edward!!!1 Their love is lie Anthony and Cleopatra without all the death drama!!!!
It's a magnificent tale and I hope I get the opportunity to read more chapters!!! It's a solid ten from chapter one to twenty-five!!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Charlie has truly gone off the grid!!!! How does Renee not know how much being shot changed him!!!!
Jasper's a "Poor" little rich kid!!!!
Bella has found herself on a roller coaster!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Lot's of things going on under the surface!!!!
I wonder what will happen when he learns her age and goes back to school!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I'm confused and not sure what's going on with Edward and Jasper???
The competition is fierce. Dreams are at stake and a budding romance between All-Star, Edward and contestant, Bella are the talk to of the competition. Not to mention jealousy and bitterness from fellow contestants. Will Bella's dream become a reality or will her dreams be dashed before she even gets a chance to compete? Will Edward open his heart to the sweet brunette who captured his attention at the auditions?
"And America's Favorite Dancer is..."
Banner by the talented Mina Rivera
ON HIATUS
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 209773 Read Count: 45870
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Pas de Deux
Awesome chapter!!!!!!
I enjoyed the chatter and the dancing!!!!
Edward is going to be in trouble being a chirographer when he meets Bella and can't date her!!!!
See you next update!!!!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: A Dream Fulfilled
As ever, it's an amazing story!!! I'm totally into reading it!!!!
I'm glad Edward went to Alistair regarding Tanya!!! No one should have to put up with that nightmare!!!1
Hedge fund manager Edward Cullen didn't make the Forbes list this year and thinks he's a failure, just like his father and teachers in small-town Forks always told him. Only one person ever believed in him, but he left her behind to chase his fortune in New York City. Can a longtime Seattle holiday tradition bring magic and love back to his life? AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador, who also made the banner. **TOP TEN COMPLETED FICS OF DEC 2015 on TwiFanfictionRecs **
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9047 Read Count: 5238
Date: 10 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
It was such a pleasure to read this Christmas story!!!! I love it o be continued!!!!! If you decide not continue it, I want you to know, I thank you for writing t!!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you loved it and thanks for the feedback. :)
Love can be found in the most unusual places—a zombie apocalypse certainly counts as one. Join Caius Volturi as he conquers zombies and falls in love with the gun-wielding girl of his dreams.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15609 Read Count: 6031
Date: 18 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Hell of beginning but then you're awesome with them!!!
I hate Edward and Carlisle, already!!!!
Date: 18 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1
Oh, such fun!!!! IT'S a hilarious story!!!! I love it!!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Epilogue
I'm delighted to have found this story!!!! It was hilarious and wonderful to read!!!!
I'm with you regarding Zombies!!!! Yuck!!!
After abruptly leaving Forks, Jasper’s utter detachment from life shows Alice he is already gone. Leaving the Cullens, Jasper wanders aimlessly. Eventually returning to Forks, he discovers the orphan that was raised by wolves. Written for the 2016 Straight thru the Heart anonymous story contest.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7061 Read Count: 4817
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Raised by Wolves Chapter 1
My heart aches for all of them even though Edward was the culprit!!!! Alice
is an innocent bystander (except for forcing the party on Bella. I was never Jasper's fault or responsibility!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Raised by Wolves Chapter 2
His emptiness is painful in itself and painful to read as it's sad enough I she tears!!!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Raised by Wolves Chapter 3
He seems a little more positive and he still has all of his well bred Southern Manners!!!! The story doesn't feel so sad!!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Raised by Wolves Chapter 4
Now, this story is absolutely a blast and oh, so much fun!!!!
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Raised by Wolves Chapter 5
Awesome ending and fantastic short story!!!!!! I cried I the beginning, laughed uproariously in the middle and simply smiled at the sexy ending.
If you didn't win your contest, the judges were bind and a little dense!!!!
Thanks!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for all of your reviews! Nice to see them all in the email.
Yeah, I blame it all on Edward, and Alice being so pushy and thinking because SHE would want a birthday party, that Bella would, too. Both of them railroaded her.
No winnings for this one. In those open Twilight contests, like this one was, Edward stories always win. Now, in noncanon contests, I tend to do a little better.
Thanks!
GeezerWench
The story of two women in a constant struggle against time, and the two men that adore them. Will Fate be on their side, or will time run out like sand in an hourglass?
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3817 Read Count: 236
Date: 21 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It's a absolutely beautiful story!!! To be given and receive such love and devotion is a gift from God. I wish I'd been granted one too.
Thank You!!!
Twilight. Jasper/Bella, Some Paul/OC. Not a typical Edward and Bella break up and she gets with Jasper story. In this story, Jasper and his family, including Riley are out hunting one day when he sees a girl running through the forest with an infant child. Thinking she needs help, they follow her. Turns out, Jasper is the infant’s father. But how? Read and find out! Mentions of rape and abuse, read at your own risk. Multi-chapter. COMPLETE
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27766 Read Count: 6360
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Epilogue
Finally!!!!!! It's Beautiful!!!!!
Summary/Prompt used: The House That Built Me by Miranda Lambert
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2131 Read Count: 771
Date: 24 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I hope they become friends if not more. She's helping him heal on this particular day!!!!
This story was beautifully written.
Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 333062
Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
This story was an amazing piece of literature. I loved, hated, laughed and cried my way through it.
What Angela, Alice and Ben did to Bella and the other rape victims through should have been punishable by death or life with no parole. Angela's parents were so out of touch with reality is was sad.
I was astounded Alice's parents didn't know she aw mentally ill from childhood. I'm glad Emmett and Edward visited her because they facilitated the removal of her incompetent therapist.
Bella was a most incredible character I've ever read. I don't know how it happened but I do know she was very brave, loving and unselfish.
When Edward got his head out of his bottom and became the man he should be was spectacular!!!
All of the other characters were awesome, too. I didn't like the way Jasper was written in this story though the need for this type of character portrayal was needed for the story.
Pops,Elizabeth and Granny Tia were show stoppers and I loved them all so much. I cried a river when I earned al three passed on to heaven.
This review should give you number 1000. Every story you've written has been a pleasure to read.
Thank You!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Edward's being fed a bunch of lies by his sister whose mission in life is to destroy Bella. Angela is just a nasty as Alice!!!
Regarding C & E, the jury's still out on them. I think they won't give Bella a kind word will fake caring because their high society and snobbish!!!!
Also, My gut is telling me what happened on 10/11 was planned and executed by Alice and Angela. I believe the drink contain the rape drug and she may have been raped by more than one man and I think Alice and Angela were present when it happened!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Edward's being fed a bunch of lies by his sister whose mission in life is to destroy Bella. Angela is just a nasty as Alice!!!
Regarding C & E, the jury's still out on them. I think they won't give Bella a kind word will fake caring because their high society and snobbish!!!!
Also, My gut is telling me what happened on 10/11 was planned and executed by Alice and Angela. I believe the drink contain the rape drug and she may have been raped by more than one man and I think Alice and Angela were present when it happened!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
II believe what Alice and Angela did was beyond cruel!!!! I am beginning Esme is stupid or she's in on the plot to destroy Bella!!!! Bella was right Jessica and Laure weren't invited and it was a compete setup to hurt or kill her one.
II also think Edward is blind and stupid!!!!
I cried through most of this chapter because of how painful it was for Bella!!! I don't know if Bella will ever be able to trust Edward!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Benjamin and Angela work in different labs and I bet she did the first test and switched up the DNA samples then when the second test came through she had Benjamin do the same thing!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I was wrong and seems Edward has two sets of DNA. So maybe Angela and Benjamin didn't mess with the DNA tests!!!
I love how Edward Senior and Bella met and became friends. It was so sweet!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I never imagined Edward would find out about Bella's rape the way he did!!!!! I'm glad Mike was thereto help Bela and I'm glad he understood Bella's being overwhelmed on earning who her rapist was!!!!
Awesome chapter!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I feel happy they are talking and beginning to realize what happened during and after Bella's pregnancy!!!!
Right now they seem to each be really broken yet I'm hopeful they'll start talking more often and it will help to heal both of them!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Edward really was stupid yet he made the right decision when planned to go back to Bella before fate and Benjamin stepped in to separate them!!!!
Bella is simply amazing and as ever very kind!!!
I knew Benjamin messed with first DNA test!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Edward really was stupid yet he made the right decision when planned to go back to Bella before fate and Benjamin stepped in to separate them!!!!
Bella is simply amazing and as ever very kind!!!
I knew Benjamin messed with first DNA test!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Edward really was stupid yet he made the right decision when planned to go back to Bella before fate and Benjamin stepped in to separate them!!!!
Bella is simply amazing and as ever very kind!!!
I knew Benjamin messed with first DNA test!!!
You know that sayin' 'Don't judge a book by its cover', Well they did! So I let her run with it, damn, I hope I've not made a mistake. Twilight AU Jasper's P.O.V One-Shot
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Couldn't Help It!
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3392 Read Count: 925
Date: 26 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It was quite a fascinating story!!! I enjoyed reading it and I love it when Jasper takes control as the Major!!!
My guess is Emmett's mate is Bella!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Me too, like that he can be two sides of the same coin easily,
he has nothing to prove to anyone but himself, that's why he can be Jasper Hale so easily xx
Alexis
Date: 26 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It was quite a fascinating story!!! I enjoyed reading it and I love it when Jasper takes control as the Major!!!
My guess is Emmett's mate is Bella!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It was quite a fascinating story!!! I enjoyed reading it and I love it when Jasper takes control as the Major!!!
My guess is Emmett's mate is Bella!!!
Date: 26 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It was quite a fascinating story!!! I enjoyed reading it and I love it when Jasper takes control as the Major!!!
My guess is Emmett's mate is Bella!!!
Date: 19 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Yes I loved the clue!!!!
Excellent story!!! It was wonderful to read how respected the Major is!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks,
Glad you enjoyed it xx
Alexis
What if Bella had reacted differently after she saved Edward in Italy? Abandoned by the family, Bella slowly grew stronger in their absence and, even though she loves them all, Bella decides to hold the family responsible for their actions when she returns from Italy. Bella teaches them all that their choices have real consequences, ones that just might change everything… JxB O/S
Choices and Consequences
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4646 Read Count: 812
Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I loved your little plot bunny and it was a doe story which touched my heart!!!!
You also wrote my favorite pairing and there are simply not enough stories which pair them!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I’ve begun posting two more Jasper/Bella stories if you’re interested. Beacon of Light and Thrill Seeker. They’re more intense, but I’m keeping with the stronger Bella idea, lol. It seems I like my Bella with a backbone.
Once she was old enough, N’essie joined Galaxy Fleet. She went through her training and became a healer, a doctor, the first in her class in Galaxy Fleet Medical. Aboard the ship, Valiant, N'essie, along with her fellow crew mates are deployed to a battle along the Solarian/Romulan border. They are there to provide medical relief for the Solari people and help end the battle.
On one of the Solarian colonies, along the edge of Romulan territory, N'essie and her team of doctors, nurses and medics transport down to provide aide to the injured Solarian, Human, Talaxian and Cygnarian people living on the planet. In the midst of a raging battle, N'essie finds an injured man and instantly, her heart stopped, recognized the unconscious, broken Solari man as her mate. With the help of her staff, they do their best to stabilize him, but he's fallen into a deep coma.
Transporting aboard the Valiant, N'essie heals the man's wounds, but his mind is a jumble of memories, horrors of battle and a sweet voice, trying to calm him. N'essie begins her vigil by his side, trying to heal the injuries in his mind. However, she gets lured into his dreams, his mind, his memories. Will it be too late for N'essie, lost in the man's Fractured Dreams?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6939 Read Count: 542
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
When you ere writing "Star Crossed" I would wait impatiently for another chapter!!!! I loved you story so much!!!!This Future Take is a huge treat for me!!! it was exciting, chilling and loving!!!! I fell in love with Nessie and Oliver as well as all of the traditions and ceremonies of Forx!!!!! Thank you for such and intriguing and delightful read.
Date: 21 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
When you ere writing "Star Crossed" I would wait impatiently for another chapter!!!! I loved you story so much!!!!This Future Take is a huge treat for me!!! it was exciting, chilling and loving!!!! I fell in love with Nessie and Oliver as well as all of the traditions and ceremonies of Forx!!!!! Thank you for such and intriguing and delightful read.
Bella and Jasper feel trapped in their marriages and stifled living with the Cullens. When a mysterious note is sent to them urging them to go, do they take the bait and leave? Of course they do. Join Bella and Jasper as they go on an excellent adventure and perhaps discover a few surprises along the way.
Banner by Sparkling Fae
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14219 Read Count: 1264
Date: 24 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Bella and Jasper's Excellent Adventure
I loved this story!!! It really was quite an adventure!!!!
I'm so glad Peter got them out of the Cullen family!!!!
When Mr. Masen finds a beautiful brunette in a deteriorating strip club he feels instantly drawn to her. Bella wants a new life, but lacks self-control and discipline. Which Mr. Masen can easily teach her with his heavy hand and controlling nature. Will Bella let this mysterious man take her down a dark path? Can Mr. Masen save Bella from her horrid reality? NC-17, BDSM, All human.
Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35637 Read Count: 37554
Date: 30 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Aftercare
Overall, this story is incredibly well written!!!! Your writing is beautifully well written!!!! I've been able to picture everything in my head as I am reading!!!!!! Your descriptions of Isabella's thoughts and feelings have been amazing to read!!!!! her life since her Dad was murdered has been dramatically painful and very horrific!!!!!
I'll be back to read more once more chapters are posted!!!
Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53533
Date: 23 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I can hardly wait to see what Edward does to take out the threat of Laurent, James and Victoria!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Poor Bella, she can't seem to catch a break when it comes to James.
Where's Edward!!! I can't imagine him leaving her on her own when James is such a nasty threat!!!
Happy Writing and I hope RL gets better for you!!!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Edward shocked Bella, again!!!! I'm glad she told him what was on her mind!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I hope they're both okay!!!! I wouldn't want t be the person who hit the car, deliberate or not!!!!!
Happy writing!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I'm glad things are better and she thanked him!!! I'm sad she didn't give him the portrait she'd drawn of him. I thin he'd of really lied and appreciated it!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I'm glad the girls made peace with one another!!! There are still more questions then answers for both of them!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Poor Bella, she only wants an education!!!! Rose is gutsy and I love her!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Edward is a first class asshat!!!!