Reviews by IBelongToAVampire
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624810
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Damn. Charlie and James are twisted. But very interesting story. I have a feeling that it will get much worse for Bella. I'm going to continue reading.



Author's Response:

It's going to get a whole lot worse before it gets better. If you decide you want to skip ch 3-10 shoot me an email and I'll summarize.  Just keep in mind I promise a happy ending for Bella.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

No worries rmcrms5, I read lots of dark fics so I can stomach it. I'm definitely interested in Bella's happy ending. *Okay zips mouth and reads* lol



Author's Response:

See you on the other side!

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Wow your Daddy C is twisted. And here I thought that he was going to be a good guy. lol I guess that's how it usually is in most fics, Carlisle is  always the good guy. I like to see Carlisle portrayed differently for once, and you did that really well. OOC's are interesting to read. I think he's probably worse than James and Charlie. Just a feeling...he's creepy.



Author's Response:

I like taking a character and seeing how far I can twist him.  I took the loving head of the coven father figure and turned him into a tyranical monster.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

Wow so much happening! Poor Bella.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Awesome chapter! It's amazing how many conflicting emotions I have concerning Edward.  LOL It was sweet of him to take her to the bookstore though. Oh my and Carlisle....hmmm...I don't trust him. Does he want Bella?

 

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

Oh crap...punishment!

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Wow...I didn't expect that. Great chapter!

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Glad to see that Edward realised what he did was wrong.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Stepford wives indeed.

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

 Jasper is awesome!

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Loved this chapter!!!

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Really lovin' this

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Yes! She finally told Edward what she really feels, and didn't hold back! Great chapter!

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

Awww so happy about Edward and Esme

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

Absolutely loved this chapter!

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

I'm baaaaack! RL was kicking my behind!

Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

I know the feeling very well.  I've been buried under deadlines for my novel that was released Oct 28. And just finalized everything for my next novel coming out next spring.  Exciting, but very time consuming.

Happy Thanksgiving!

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

OMG!!! I didn't expect that....so awesome! That was hot and sweet all wrapped up in one! Loved it!!! =D

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

I absolutely loved this chapter! I enjoyed the flashback scene. I thought it was so sweet of Edward to stand up for Bella, and how he took care of her.

Loved this-->"Can I tell you a secret?” she asked. She cupped her hand to my ear and whispered, “I know what I’m gonna wish for when I blow out my candles.  I’m gonna marry you when I grow up.”  She then quickly hugged me and kissed my cheek before running away from me toward the house.

Who would have thought she would have gotten her wish. But man, Bella went through a lot to get there. I'm happy that Edward is changing. He really sees the difference between love and lust now.

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Awesome chapter! =D

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

OMG!!!!! Great chapter!!! Oh noes! Poor Bella. Demetri, Marcus and Carlisle are monsters!

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Damn. That was some chapter. Loved it!

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Awww poor Esme.

Loved this--> He taught me that you could survive anything if you have somewhere to focus your love and energy!~ I believe that so much =)

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you like!

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Awesome chapter! I hope Edward gets to her in time =)

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

OMG! That chapter ROCKED!!!

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Loved this chapter!

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I absolutely LOVED this story! I never wanted this to end. Bella is a hero, she saved them all. This story definitely had it all. Thank you for sharing. This will always be one of my favorites.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
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Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awesome chapter! I need answers!!! lol Can't wait!

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Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This definitely has to be one of my favorite stories. Will you post more soon?



Author's Response:

I actually have most of the next chapter written.  I've been focused on an original project all summer and my deadline is today.  As soon as it's out of my hands I'll finish the chapter and get it posted.  It should be this week once my beta goes over it.  Thanks for your patience.  I'm enjoying your new story as well.

Mic

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update! This is one of my favorite stories that I've been following on FF.net since you posted the first chapter.

I loved the chapter. I can't wait until Edward marks Bella. You know that I LOVE marking. LOL It's hot, isn't it?

Congrats on your book too.

Looking forward to your next chappy.



Author's Response:

I laughed when I realized your story that I follow talked about Edward marking Bella the same day I was posting the same concept.  I liked the idea you have of the venom being a different color for the marking.  I still haven't worked out the details how Edward is going to mark Bella in CAM.  I can scratch out red venom.  LOL

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved it! I can't wait for more!

I'll be looking forward to your book as well.

Thanks for the update =)

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter! Looking forward to another!

Thanks for the update =)

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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG!!! Cliffy!!! You couldn't resist, could you? LOL I loved the chapter.

 I adore Emmett and his witty remarks. He's too funny.

Oh and the marking is awesome. =) I thought it was cool how she ingests his venom when they kiss, marking her. =D

Now I'm wondering who could have yelled that....Paul? I know it's not Sam because he has Emily...and I definitely don't think it's Billy. LOL But then there's Jacob too...hmm...I'm just going to go with Paul. LOL

Thanks for the update! Hope you had a great day!

 



Author's Response:

You're one of only a few people who thought outside the box.  Very good!

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awesome chapter!  I thought it was sexy that the purring was a calling. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I wanted to try out something new with the mating call. (Like you have with marking venom) I'm glad it's being well recieved. Thanks for reading.

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

*gasp* Ugh! Paul! I can't wait to see how this will play out. Loved it!

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Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it!!! I'm loooving the mating call. OMG! That's so hot! Lol @ Bella saying the growly thing. *giggles*



Author's Response:

Glad you like! I loved your update tonight also! Is it bad to beg you for another update when I'm so slow? LMAO!

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Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awesome chapter! So I'm guessing Bella is turning. Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I guess there is a bright side in being late. *nods* I get to read another chapter *grins*

awesome chappy btw =)

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Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I just love medical mysterious, fascinating. I wonder what Carlisle will find out, can't wait.

lmao --> I shuddered again as the image of Emmett dancing, dressed only in a gold thong refused to leave my brain. -- While Edward shuddered I drooled. Now I can't get that image outta my head. lol

Awesome chappy! Thanks.

I hope your hubby's feeling better.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I'm donating for Texas Wildfire Relief which is Carlisle's pov after ch 22. You'll find out what he knows.

I had to throw in something humorous to keep the element of lighthearted from disappearing and the story becoming completely angsty.

Hubby had some complications, but he's doing good.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108580
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG is right!!! You updated!!! So happy. Great chapter!! Can't wait for more! Will be reading your other stories tonight too.

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awesome chapter! =) Plz post more soon.

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it! I'm anxious for more =)

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved this chapter!!!! =D

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Lovely =)

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! very interesting!

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So different love it

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hmmm... Alice has a bad feeling

loved it!

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

The lemon was amazing! So hot!

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Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Loved everything!!! I'll be back for some more later =)

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG! James is such a monster!!! Great chapter!

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

loved it !

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMG! *speechless* That James is such a monster! Ugh! I hate him! Great chapter!

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

loved it!

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter! I wonder if the plan will work.

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Loved it!

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter =) I'm s'cited to see what happens next!

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Awesome!

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Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Hmmm I wonder what Edward has planned for James.

Loved it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Galen bids you read

When a six-hundred year old vampire enters the lives of three best friends, a marriage, a molestation, and a betrayal follow. Kira is a hit-and-miss author, Katen works as a theatrical makeup artist, and Anya's living carefree on a trust fund. Each twisted step is a turning point that will spell the fate of their ultimate ends and determine if their friendship is strong enough to survive.

Warning: Thematic elements of sexual assault, kidnapping, and consensual citrus may be disturbing to some readers. Viewer discretion is advised.


Categories: Original Fiction, Supernatural
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186151 Read Count: 2497
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2012
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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome! Loved it!

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Awesome! Loved it! I'll be back later!

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

awww so sad! I wonder who that stranger was...hmm...

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awesome! I wonder what Kat would say if Galen to Kira as his vamp bride. Hmmm...

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I so wasn't expecting him to bite her all of a sudden. Awesome!!!

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He stole her car!!! OMG! LOL



Author's Response:

Those were Kira's thoughts exactly! :D

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved it! =)

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm totally hooked. Loooooooving it! I'll be back for more later! =)

~Jells

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thaigher Lillie rec'd this story! I'm really liking it!! =)  I'll be reading and commenting. But it'll take me some time to catch up, classes are a pain. lol

~Jells



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving it a try! Yes, that is always the question, study or read updates.... far too often I choose updates :P

~Kitty

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129728
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Tygssssss!!! OMG! Imma comment on your chapter!!!!!!! It was my fave so far!! I reread it four timessss! Just fucking serious!

I couldn't do it without you!!

Thanks for writing with me!



Author's Response:

Bitch! lmao commenting on your own fucking story lmao!!!!!! of course you've read it 4 times. i send it to you multiple times before i even structured it lmao

The Cut by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary:

cut

Re-write Of Not So Average.

Isabella Swans' Life at home is no fairytale. She struggles with her weight, depression and family. Eager to get away from her verbally abusive mother and start afresh, Isabella journeys to her first year of college, where she experiences hardships, friendships and Greeks. After seeing her first  Greek step-show and eyeing the most popular guy on campus Edward Cullen for the first time, the burn inside her to belong boils to the surface, but there is one obsticle in her way. Rosalie Hale...

Warning: This fic contains: Hazing, Bulimia, Sex,teasing, child abuse, Negligance, suicidal thoughts,OOC, and angst.

All actions that occur in this story are purely fictional.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13368 Read Count: 3341
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Nov 2011
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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.

This was so goood! I love the new start! And ugh! Rose is a royal bitch with a capital B! I'm looking forward to more so write, write, effin WRITE! like NOW! lmao

~Jells

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Somewhere I can Be Myself.

This chapter was amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!! Damn Renee is an effin bitch! I feel for Bella! I loved it! This new version kicks ass.

I can't wait for more! F**kawesome job!

~Jells

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Somewhere I rather be…

Loved the chapter! Gaaaahhhh@ Renee and Charlie! Poor Bella! I'm looking forward to more. Thanks for the update!

Keep rockin'!

~Jells

 

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Somewhere I'm Placed

I'm really not liking this chapter, you probably won't either <--- Damn Tygs! You're a little harsh there on yourself. I liked it!!! You can't write a bad chapter if you tried, you nut! Anyways, feels like I haven't talked to you in yrs. RL is keeping me busy!

Laters Tygs!

~Jells

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hiya!

I just found your story and I love it! I can't wait to read more =)

~Jells

Summary:

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Santa was a Prick, or should i say Edward. What kind of creep breaks into your house looking for a Christmas list? Rather than ask questions first, i did what Charlie always taught me to do if the house had a intruder. I SHOT HIM.

Warning: Mention of child abuse, domestic violence, rude humor, small ooc, and  Blitzen being a ass. You've been warned.

Not your average Christmas story, Give it a chance. Daily Updates.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8395 Read Count: 927
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: T-was the Night Before December 18th

LMAOOOOOOOO!!!

Tygggg!!! That was effin' awesome!

Blitzen is my fave reindeer! He's funneh! I love how all the reindeer talk back. The scene where Edward wanted to beat some reindeer arse was effin hilarious!

I love this Santa Edward, he's hilarious! Oh and imagining Edward tip-toeing <--lmao and getting ash in his face! Tooo funneh! But OMG! When he was dangling upside down was my fave!!! I have to agree, who goes commando in freezing cold weather? lmao I could just imagine Edward Santa devouring all the sugar cookies MINE! LOLOLOL!

I can't wait for more...NOW!

~Jells



Author's Response:

it's here it's heres it's here!

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Plumbers Butt....

TYG!!!

Loved chapter 2! Paul is a mofo! I felt so bad for Jake. That must have been tough to write the child abuse scene. But you did an amazing job, like always! It was so sweet that Bella took Jake in, adopting him and treating him as her own. I'm glad that Jake has such a caring family.

LMAO@ Edward's ass crack. Too funny! The ending scene was too effin hilarious! Gotdammitt I LOVED it! Damn Cookieward, eating all of Bella's cookies. Pfft who the F*** does he think he is? Oh yeah, Santa! *giggles*

Love the pics you posted, ass crack Santa and Team Blitzen! *giggles* Hell Yeah for TB! Love the smart ass reindeer =D

Can't wait for more, betch!

~Jells

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Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Crazy Wench

OMG!!! I LOVED the chapter! LMFAO! Gotta love Father Time, Jasper, and of course Blitzen!!! I enjoyed how Edward is starting to fall for Bella. I wonder what she'll think of him, prolly nothing goog huh? LOL LMAO@ the bullet scene. Edward Santa thought for sure he was gonna get it! The time stopping was fuckawesome, loved how you explained that. Brilliant!!! LMAOOOO@ Cullen 1 and Blitzen 0 *giggles* The banter between him and Blitzen is priceless!
I can't get enuff of this story!
 
All I can say is MORE MORE MORE!! EFFFIN NOW!! =D
Keep Rockin'!
 
~Jells

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Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mashed Taters

LMAOOOOOOOOOO!!! Loved this chapter! The announcement was hilarious!!!

Keep on rockin'!

~Jells

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Retrieve

Cover your ears bitch, cuz ima squee! *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lmao I'm sooooo effin happy that you updated. How long has it been? lmao You know that this is my favorite story. It's the most darkest I've ever had the pleasure of reading. And some of the stuff you've told me is going to make this story unforgettable. I couldn't wait til you posted more. I'm never gonna stop bothering you to post asap.lol

Tyggy, seriously. This story rocks. It only keeps on getting better and better. You're an awesome authour-no-fuckawesome and I'm so glad we can collab together. You taught me so much shit, and I'm thankful for that.

Keep rockin', bb!

Xxoo

Jells 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Blood And Ice

Tygs! This was brilliant!!!! The rewrite is bad ass!

I love how Keres has a back story. I thought it was awesome how Edward named her too, very clever. Edward himself is extremely dark- he's the darkest Edward I have read (even from your previous chapters).

The siren song scene was fuckawesome. And I know what language that is and what he says *wink* lol

Loved the tone of the chapter and the flow. All the details were amazing. It was like a movie in my head. 

His daughters are frightening, just as he his. I can tell that they will wreak havoc, not only among his vessels and humankind, but amongst vampires as well. So watch out! Edward's on a prowl, looking for...Bella. =)

I can't wait to read more. This story has always been one of my favorites, and will continue to be. I'm s'cited for more! Truly amazing!

Keep rockin'

~Jells



Author's Response:

i won't even entertain how biased you are lmao!!!!!!!!!!! and how you're teasing ppl about you knowing the language. you big meanie! what youshould be doing is finishing up that chapter to Living amongst vampires. i'm still waiting on that....for 3 weeks lmao

 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

Looooved it!!! Your Edward is the meanest mofo I've EVER read!! I love it! hehe And the daugthers are effin vicious!!! LOL, yeah I know, Edward isn't gay. He's psychotic =D lol I can't wait for more! Looking forward to the next chapter.

~Jells



Author's Response:

{Insert Tyggy like insult here}  lmao. why thank you bitch. chapter 3 is next then it's living amongst hell. Then it's Not so average

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Who're You Really?/Actual Chapter, Enjoy

Oh sweet you posted here too. Fuckawesome chappy, but you already know that!! I can't wait 4 more!!!

PS. This beggining scene for LAH is gonna make me cry lmao  

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Throne

Fuckawesome chapter Tyggy!!! I can't wait to read what Edward will do to Mania. She's effin screwed. Mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzz

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Take my life and Fuck it Up/Birthday Blues

Tyggy!!!! Loved this chapter! I don't care what anyone says or thinks, I LOVE your darkward!!! he's one HAWT mean mofo. lmao

Anyways, Happy Birthdayyyyyyyyyyyy. So you're 51 now? *gasp* Check for wrinkles. lmao

Keep rockin!

Jells 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Birthday Chapter

Another awesome chapter. I enjoyed this one as well. Love all the details you put into this. It makes it feel like I'm watching a movie in my mind. I can picture everything. And the Alice scene was fantastically creepy!! I had questions but you answered them already so thank you.

I can't wait for more! PLzzzzzz post asap

xxoo

Jells

Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

image made by GSRgirlforever

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187854
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Retrieval and Arrival of the New Girls

awesome chappy!! 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Matching up Mates

Another great chapter!!! 

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Rosalie, What are You Doing?

OMG! Yeah, Rose made a big mistake. I wonder if they'll get her back. I'm liking all the different humanoid species! Loved the chapter. I'll be back for more =)



Author's Response:

Rose is making one last ditch effort to escape.  Thanks so much for all the reviews and ratings!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Charilie's POV, Clinic Time, Little Bit of Lovin'

 I enjoyed Charlie's POV. And I'm s'cited for Angela. She's one of my favorite characters. The arrival of Lauren and Jessica make me nervous. lol Loved the chapter and the pics too.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and I like Angela too.  Lauren and Jessica would make anyone nervous....lol.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Breakfast and House Tour with Charlie, Town Council Meeting

It's been ages since I watched the Aristocats. I love Disney classics. lol I enjoyed the piano scene when Addy was purring. Too sweet. Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

I love Disney and Pixar.  Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Blue Sparks and Addy Has a New Granddaddy

I'm happy that Charlie and Sue will become mates! I'm glad that Charlie will be staying on Planet Twilight. The Addy and Charlie scene was too cute. Awesome chapter and I like the pics too.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the new developments and pics and thanks so much for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The New Age Begins

Very interesting! =)

 



Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy the story!  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: He Picked Me

Awesome chapter! It's very original.

I'll be back 2mrw to continue. Juts give me time to catch up. lol

~Jells



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!  I won't be around the computer til mid to later tomorrow afternoon, but I will respond to all your reviews and questions when I get online.

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

Awesome chapter! I'm lovin' this planet you've created. Question: Does planet Twilight resemble Earth?

On to the next chappy =)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  I would say it resembles Earth's landscape.  It has 2 moons and where Forks Community is located, there is only fair weather.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Edward's POV of 1st Day

I enjoyed Edward's POV =) The kinka sounds cute. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review and rating!!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Walked Grounds, Met Emily, Began Gown

Great chapter! I'm loving this new world! I enjoyed their first kiss =)



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks again for the review and rating!!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Tattoos and Gowns

Yeah, that's totally hot --> "That the enzymes in our expulsion fluid* bind the female to the male." And the fact that males don't have to produce expulsion fluid is also really intriguing!  Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks for the review and rating!! I really appreciate them!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Rosalie and Royce; Alice, Bella, and Rosalie's Past

Good thing Rosalie ended up on Planet Twilight. I guess things do happen for a reason. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

None of the girls had wonderful lives on Earth.  Alice had to be taken early, because she was going to be institutionalized.  Thanks again, so much!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Esme's Sex Talk, Finish Gowns

I loved the birds and the bees talk. hehe And I LOVE an animalistic Edward. That growl was HOT! And the height differences between him and her I like too. I like how the water flows up instead of down also. I can't say it enough, I love this world you've created. Awesome chapter! =)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for the review and rating.  I like an animalistic Edward too!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction

Loving it! Oh boy, That Tanya is just horrible! Awesome chapter once again! I'm totally addicted to this planet! I'm s'cited for the binding ceremony. =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the compliments, review and rating!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Rape

OMG! O.O That Tanya is just...*speechless* Poor Edward! I must say....I love love love a purring Edward. Hot! Awesome chapter! I'm in love with this story! Okay I'm off to the next. I wonder if Tanya was preggers.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoying it and thanks so much for the review and rating!!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Introduction to Adanna Esme, I Have a Daughter

Awesome chapter! I'm liking all these different types of humanoid species. Very interesting. I wonder how Addy and Bella will get along.



Author's Response:

They will take to each other great!  Thanks so much for the review and rating!