Reviews by TheLadyKT
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love?  Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55115
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing

love this story on you FF page.   Sure you will get lots of great reviews here too.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I am moving all of my stories over here slowly but surely!

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chaper 1. A New Lesson

hmmm interesting so far

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Jessica Gets Initiated

ewwww jess stanley

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Over Indulging

lol   on jazz and em

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4. The Breeding Meeting

hmmm me thinks carlisle is up to something else.  where do the babies go

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

temper temper eddie.   but tayna deserved something. she sounds like she wants to start trouble

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8. The Breeding Begins

yea duh...now you are going to ask about the babies

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. The Boys Get Caught

nah confronting them wouldnt have went with the story.lol   catch them in the act is better

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. Avoiding and Consequences

hmmm makes me wonder if the females are actually let go or made to breed over and over

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11. New Competiton

oh boy.  this is not good

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12. The Burn Begins

uh oh

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Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13. Feeling The Burn Twice

awww poor boys...but i dont want the girls hurt/involved though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

awww man.  i know alice was on the pill but what about the other grils.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your response!  To answer your question, in the first part of chapter 7 (14 paragraphs down) Alice kids Bella about her viginity and mentions that she is on the pill.

For Alice it's in chapter 9 (paragraph 10).Which also mentions that Rose is not on the pill.

A brief explanation in chapter 15 end notes gives the reason why the girls take birth control to begin with.

So sorry about the confusion. (gulp)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15. Lured In The Trap

hmm wonder what carlisle will say when the volturi boys are caught in their lie.  and im assuming that the mind hold will not hold bella at least not for long.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16. It's All About The Girls (Part 1)

hmmm  I think all three boys should have stayed and made carlisle squirm.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. It's All About The Girls (Part 2)

guess garrett isnt as good as he thought.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19. Taking the First Step

Hmm short filler chapter but kewl.

I'd wait just a little to see how he is acting and then pounce.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21. The Twilight Zone

ok that chapter was kinda confusing at the end.



Author's Response:

There were a few things going on at the end so I'm not sure what your exactly confused about.

Bella and Alice manipulate Emmett into meeting them for lunch in hopes that they can get information from him about Demetri etc.

When the girls are at their lockers Bella searches in hers for her lost journal that was missing from her bedroom the night before. Hmm wonder where it went?

Edward gets Jasper away from Alice before she rips him a new one. If your queston is why?  Simple.  Edward read Alice's mind.

Hope that helps.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22. The Truth Hurts ( Part 1 )

get em girls

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Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23. The Truth Hurts ( Part 2 )

ok going to the boys house was stupid.

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24. The Confrontation

Go strong Bella

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Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25. Emmett's Decision

makes me wonder if its really em setting up the meeting.

And I'd be warning every female posssible about eddie boy.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt

ok  where are the werewolves.....

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Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27. Mission Accomplished

he's still an asshole.....hmmm what's Carlisle been up to.

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Date: 09 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28. The Compound

ok the boys need to get daddy involved and breakout the girls.   emma is an idiot who is going to get them into trouble.

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Date: 11 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29. Kidnapped

well duh bella.  they've all been glamoured or whatever.

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Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30. The Pain of Torture

poor eddie.   ANd Alice too.

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Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31. Escape

good   now bella can kill dem, and felix, and the V brothers hopefully.  

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Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32. Bella's New World

hmmm but is rose really dead...... I'm thinking no.

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Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34. What About Alice?

yea  they got alice.

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Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

eddie deserves it.  needs to know how b and all the other women feel.

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Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36. Lost Souls

wow   5 years have passed.

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Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37. Succubae?

oh wow.  Bella has some cool powers.

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Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38. Finding Edward

hmmm glad eddie got away at least for a little bit

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39. The Coven

Well at least she left before D saw her.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 76224
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - A Day at the Cullen's

well the chapter gave a few more hints into her background.



Author's Response:

a few hints about her background, but not too much ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Where are we now?

Poor confused Eddie.   lol



Author's Response:

he is confused isn't he.  Good thing we love him all the more for it.  At least that's what I tell myself to keep from smacking him!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Homecoming

oh dear.  hope she just went to church or something, not something diabolicle.



Author's Response:

diabolicle . . . hummmm might be fun . . . no not to diabolical. I promise

 

Thanks for the review, here's your tease for next week, I hope it helps!

Finally she had finished her nightly rituals and climbed in bed sighing.  I listened steadily to her and her heart rate dropped indicating she was asleep quickly.  I went to her room and walked to her in wonder. In sleep she looked so much more at peace than she did when awake. The worries of the day no longer causing her jaw to clench. As I looked though the tension was diminished but not gone.
 
My angel’s brow was not smooth but slightly furrowed. I tried to resist, but I found my fingers reaching out, seemingly of their own accord, to caress her brow hoping to smooth out the tension. I breathed out a breath I hadn’t been aware of holding. As I touched her the connection I felt to this diminutive human girl was again complete.  Now my brow furrowed in confusion as to why this human girl affected me so.  Slowly the tension seemed to ease from her as I continued to softly caress her.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Aftermath

yea alice made him stay.



Author's Response:

Trust me, if Alice hadn't made him stay the others would have sat on him making him stay!  The cullen's won't let him be an idiot!

 

Thanks for the review, here's a tease for next week:
“Edward,” she said into the silence.

“Hum?”

“May I ask you something?” I looked down at the top of her head.

“Of course. What’s on your mind?”

“You know homecoming night?”

“Yeah, what about it?”

She took a deep breath. “Well, you kissed me.”

I smiled. “Yeah, I remember that.”

“You haven’t kissed me since.”

“No, but that isn’t a question.” I didn’t want to play games, I wanted to know exactly what was on her mind.

“I was wondering why you haven’t. Kissed me again, that is.”

My body tightened in anticipation. “Do you want me to?”

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Being Left Alone

ugh.  wish she wouls let one of them go.  rose at least



Author's Response:

In some ways it would be better if someone went with in others worse.  They both need this time apart to get how much they need each other and to move to the next level.  It will be good, I promise!!!

 

Thank you for the review and here's a tease that should make you happy for in two weeks:

I smiled. I was mated, to Bella. I let the idea sit with me and I felt lighter and happier just thinking of it. I was mated to Bella.  The phrase played over and over in my head. The more I thought on it the more obvious it was and I felt like the biggest idiot for not seeing it sooner.  Bella was my mate and I loved her. How could I have not seen it?  I loved Bella. Now that I considered the idea I wanted to kick myself for not realizing sooner.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Mated

awwww  poor eddie



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Here's a tease for next week:

I hadn’t been off the phone with Bella for long when I heard Emmett and Jasper coming up to get me for a hunting trip.  I groaned before they made it to my room calling out, “I went hunting with Carlisle yesterday! I don’t need to hunt again.”

“Get up brother! I don’t care if you went hunting. We need manly brother time together. Now that you’re admitting to being mated we need to make sure you’re not going to fuck with our little sister! So get up and get moving!” Emmett bellowed as he plowed into my room.

“Language” Esme called up the stairs.

Emmett smiled. “See, that’s why we need to have this conversation elsewhere.  Don’t need to upset the ‘rents.”

I rolled my eyes. “Seriously, Emmett, can’t you say parents, or better yet Esme and Carlisle? Or the best idea, ignore it all and leave me alone!”

Jasper interrupted before Emmett and I bickered and nothing got accomplished. “Just come with us Edward.  We want to talk to you about a few things. I promise to keep Emmett in line.” As much as I can. He finished.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Being Away from Her

AGHHH   Poor bella.    Damn what has this girl been through.



Author's Response:

She has been through hell on Earth and the story is coming!  I promise!!!!

 

Thanks for the review, here's a tease for next chapter.  Don't hurt me!

Emmett spoke up. “Will she be ok Carlisle?”

He nodded. “She should be fine. She’s dehydrated, and has lost a lot of weight.  From the look of it she hasn’t slept and it looks like her body just gave out. It happens to people that push themselves past the point . . . “

Carlisle cut off when Esme gasped and Rose called out, “What the fuck!”

I had been avoiding the thoughts of the women to give Bella as much privacy as I could, but immediately I saw what they had seen.  I shot off the couch yelling. “What kind of sick sadist did that? What happened to her?”

I started pacing and was growling. Jasper put a hand on my arm to calm me.  I wrenched away from him. “Leave me alone!”

He didn’t take offense but spoke in a calm voice. “Talk to me brother. What did you see? What happened to Bella?  Is she ok?”

I tugged at my hair. “Yes, no, I don’t know. She’s . . . marked.” I couldn’t bring myself to say more.

Emmett came up to me. “What’d you me marked?”

I swallowed and put my hands on my hips trying to get the vision out of my head, but it was burned there and would never leave.

“On her stomach . . . it looks like she was cut with a knife . . . multiple times . . .” I took a deep breath.  I couldn’t even say it.

Carlisle spoke. “What else son?”

I looked at him and whispered, “Someone branded the word ‘MINE’ over it.”

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Now that She's Home

Wow.  Just the marking had me cringing.   Hate to think about the next chapter but it is necessary to see why B is the way she is.



Author's Response:

gggrrr isn't that marking gross!!!  yeah I put that in to kinda prepare people that this won't be a sunshine and happy past, not that anyone thought that I'n surem but yeah.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Bella's Story

ummmm yeah..... b needs a lot of therapy



Author's Response:

lol, just a little therapy! 

 

Thanks for reading, I know it was difficult.

Rose kissed Emmett and told him she would be right back. As she came up to my room she was already thinking to me. "I know that had to be hard for you to hear Edward, but you really blew it!"

Huh? What was she talking about?  I didn’t do anything?
Rose came in and saw the confusion on my face. "Don’t look confused. You did nothing for Bella. You gave her no comfort!"

“What do you mean?” I asked. “I was holding her the whole time! Giving her every comfort I could!” I was livid at the accusation that I hadn’t been there for Bella. Of course I had.
Don’t get pissed at me. Tell me oh supportive one.  In all the rounds of hugs and comforting what did you say to Bella?

I searched through my memory trying to figure out what I’d said that had Rose so mad. As I searched the reason for Rose’s anger became apparent. I hadn’t said anything to Bella the entire time. I was so focused on not blowing up I didn’t speak to her. I wasn’t a total failure, I had given her strength through my touch, but I couldn’t believe I hadn’t spoken one word to her. I cursed myself for the idiot I was.

"I see you got it.  Listen it isn’t the end of the world but tomorrow when she wakes up you had better start sucking up! Seriously, she needs to know you don’t hate her, blame her, or think less of her."

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Into the Night

bree should have gotten more since she drugged her and led her there knowing what wass going 2 happen.ya know they could hqve an accident in jaqil



Author's Response:

true, she did ddrug ehr, but didnt' physically bind her or rape her.  lol I could be wrong as honeslty I haven't studied law. 

Most readers would like ot hear that Bree died from to much butt sex with a guard.  I might find a way to put that in!  We'll see!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Returning Home

LOL  Not a guard.   A fellow inmate and a plunger sounds good though.



Author's Response:

LMFAO!!!!!   I will pass teh suggestion on the Emmett and Rose!! I'll see what they can do!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Important Conversations

sweet chapter



Author's Response:

thank you!

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Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - What's Next?

Can't blame B



Author's Response:

nope you can't balme her at all!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34 continued

Gotta love Jazz.  ANd those other psychiatrists need to dissappear before they hurt someone else.



Author's Response:

amen, those shrinks need a foot int he butt or something! 

Jazz is awesome!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Balancing Relationships

lol for the intervention.  Rose is such a biatch sometimes though



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked teh intervention.  Eddie needed it to a point, but you'r eright Rose, asusual, took it to far. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Ignoring the Holidays

awww they are sweet



Author's Response:

hee hee they are . . .

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Trying New Things

poor eddie.   Em has got to be hard to live with sometimes.  At least Jasper and Carlisle are the voices of male reason



Author's Response:

ok, I admit I LOVE writing Em, he keeps the story from being depressing.  BUT I do admit I wouldn't want to live with him!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 - Her Dimonds

rough chapter.   wonder what was in the letter.



Author's Response:

Don't freak to much about the letter.  It isn't that bad, just an added hardship on a bad week.  But it isn't bad.  Promise!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Moving Forward

no giving up......

 

Great chapter and sweet date.



Author's Response:

I won't give up.  I won't!!!!!   I have plans for these two and I need to see it through.  Thank you that you still read adn care!  Seriously, thank you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - A Time of Healing

awww glad she is doing better.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - part 1

Jasper is such a cool character.

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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Getaway

glad they got away for a bit and had a great time.

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Giving her Closure

Go strong bella.   cant blame eddie for wanting P dead.

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 - Fixing the Details

bella has a long ay to go.  Glad he got her to talk to him though.  Hee hee for messing with alice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - What have I done

ugh   Poor Bella.   Pissing off Jasper was a stupid idea james.

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Thoughts of the Aftermath

wow  Rose talking sense into the boy.  whoda thought

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - The Perfect Proposal

she prob heard him say the not wanting her to be a vamp with the james thing and misunderstood. awww for proposal

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 - Blissful Interlude

wonderful honeymoon and first time

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - How Eternity came to be

Well at least Aro was somewhat reasonable

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Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

sweet end

 

Thank you for writing and sharing

snile

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

dont like mean carlisle

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Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

ugh.....evil wolved too?   Jeez.    Hmmm  I'm guess the evil woman being eluded to is Tanya.



Author's Response:

well you shal have to read on and find out, thanks for reviewing, and im hoping your enjoying the story :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions

ugh   Carlisle needs to get laid.



Author's Response:

haha i dont know when that will happen, or if it will, but yeh he dus haha xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

Yeah  Bite me too.....but I prefer my southern boys......  lol   Well at least it explains Carlisle.



Author's Response:

hehe i love them too :) and yes tht is the little carlisle explanation :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom

guessing Em makes an appearance next.



Author's Response:

he will be coming very soon yes :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

Naughty Jazz

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

hmmm  Rose is so stupid sometimes.



Author's Response:

yup she is a bitch :/ xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

OK Bella was an idiot in this chapter....but Carlisle knows how to push her buttons, thats for sure.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

ewwww  jake is really delusiional  and bella is an idiot



Author's Response:

yeh she can be like that alot haha and jake is my little evil creation, bless him lol xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Trust

gee eddie.....can you blame her though?



Author's Response:

thank you!!! finally someone sticks up for bella lol :) thank you xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic

poor alice.  wonder why bella is a vision trigger like that.



Author's Response:

i know, and its just because her future is rather bleak at the moment, but dont worry it will pick up, just not anytime soon :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

hmmm does jasper know her real name?  how does paul?



Author's Response:

yes jasper does know her real name, he knows everything about little alice, and paul is just very curious haha, he is a little bit of a stalker :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Truth Hurts

oh god.  You are killing me!!!!   PLEASE dont leave it there for long.



Author's Response:

dont worry, you shant be left waitin for long, i promise :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One

ugh.   how jake and tanya dies soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two

hmmm hope Aro didnt promise her to Jacob.



Author's Response:

Ermm well he kinda did but dont worry, everything will be ok :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 29: New Home

ugh    Hope Jake Aro and Tanya all die soon.



Author's Response:

hehe dont worry they will :) xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri

ugh.   they need to rip of jacob's dick and shove it down tanya's throat and then behaed them both.



Author's Response:

sounds like an amazingly graphic little chapter :) I shall give it some serious thought, and just for you, I think I will make a big deal out of their deaths, I already have Jacobs lined up, but I'm still thinking about Tanyas :)

thank you for the review and your support xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Mute

poor bella



Author's Response:

don't worry she is going to be more than fine :) thanks for the review and your support xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball

Ugh.   Such a slime ball Aro is.   Hope she kills him first thing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Gratitude

oh please let Jazz kill Felix....please please please.



Author's Response:

Well it could still be a possibility, I still haven't decided who kills who :] but its gonna be exciting :] xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Like a Moth to the Flame

go eddie.  scheme away



Author's Response:

hehe there is more sheming to come :] xx

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Oblivion

go bad ass bella.

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Final Piece

Glad they got back together again.   Die jake die.

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

short but sweet ending.   Thanks for taking the time to write and share.

LOVING EDWARD by Cullenfest Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 47]
Summary:

Loving Edward

Set during Breaking Dawn from September to December, this is my story of Edward and Bella’s voyage of sexual discovery from the first night they go to their cottage in the woods.  Follow Bella's first night as a vampire after her tumultuous introduction to vampirehood, motherhood and meeting the Cullen family as an equal. 

Told mostly from Bella's POV, it will take you on their journey of learning about each other, loving each other as they've craved since the beginning.  Watch their tender bonding with beautiful Nessie and their interaction with the Cullen family through the weeks that follow until the arrival of the Volturi.  All the Cullens are in the story, helping them adapt, as is Jacob's wolf pack.

Rated NC-17: Explicit lemony scenes and language almost from the start.
Note:  This story has migrated across from the FanFiction site and is now up to date.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 93814 Read Count: 13398
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2012
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - CARPET BURN

hmmmm hawt hawt hawt



Author's Response:

thank you!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - SHOWERING WITH LOVE

yummy yummy yummy



Author's Response:

thank you very much!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - WILD ABANDON

oh lord  im panting



Author's Response:

thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - GUARDIAN ANGEL

i love that song!!!



Author's Response:

thank you very much!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - SATISFACTION

hmm can't wait to read the next chapter.  Hmmm



Author's Response:

thanks very much for this and all your other reviews.  it is really sweet of you.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - SUGARCANE

sexy bella is cool

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - IN TOO DEEP

hmmm hawt doggie style/

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - A NEW MOON

I personally think they picked some really wierd songs for the movie too.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - MOTHER

So sweet

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR

so sweet  but ya keep saying mrsc and i keep thinking that thefonz is coming out to play.lol   am i showing my age, 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - FIRE & ICE

lol with the ice cubes



Author's Response:

thanks very much for reviewing. hope you've been enjoying the story.