Reviews by TheLadyKT
Dead and Dating by EricDreamer Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Eric surprises Sookie after 4 weeks of not speaking. He wants the chance to prove he can give her all that she needs. Rating is M for later chapters.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45733 Read Count: 6508
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sounds like its time for FdC to die.  Oh no....not again.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh my. Poor Eric.   FdC attacked your bonded.  Pretty sure that is an instant death warrant for FdC anyway.  hmm maybe its my too logical brain but if it missed the lung, what did it get that she was bleeding so much she almost died?    Oh well I'll just shut up and go with it. 


Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Why do I get the feeling that her leaving the house is not going to be a good thing, esp with Eric killing FdC up in the air?  hmmm Arlene or one of her cronies leave the note I bet.  

Waiting for the other shoe to drop now.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

aww for a wedding. Wow  Sam doing something nice for her and Eric. Ah there is Scumbill.  Was wondering if he was going to make an appearance.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow  Scumbill has real nerves.  Sam, Amelia, and Pam were real nice gifts. Oh wow Niall's is a surprise.   She really need to rethink this "barmaid" thing.    Italy sounds good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ugh  where is the freakin King???    Who ratted them out to Victor?   Why can't Eric find her with the bond?  Ack you are killing me here!!!!

ugh scumbill...he's probably the one who ratted them out.  Thought the king was supposed to meet them when they arrived?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Sookie needs to just quit the job.   Glad he brought the DVD with them

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Clothes costing that much are just insane. At least she is getting better at accepting gifts.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

again, she really needs to quit waitressing.  Eric is right and she's going to wear herself at with the schedule she is keeping.  And with this FoTS crap, even more so.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

She really needs to control her temper.  The car thing is smart on his part if she'd stop to think about it.

Hmm dunno if getting Scumbill to play along is smart.    What a jerk he is.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

She really needs to quit.  Ah well.  at least her and pam are getting girl time.

Buh Bye Scumbill!!

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Entitlement by Morgaine Swann Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

What would have happened if Eric followed Sookie home that first night she went to Fangtasia? Started as a one shot - has taken on a life of its own.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 180741 Read Count: 21105
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 A Whole New Direction

awwwww

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Once More, With Feeling

awww sweet eric is nice

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 'Til Death Do Us Part

Jason is such a hypocryte

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Zero to Sixty

uh oh   great-grandpa is here.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 'Tis Almost Fairy Time

hmmm   grandpa wanting to meet both. hmmm

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 An Ounce of Blood

eric is being so sweet

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooooh great start.   Love this snarky sookie  too bad CH and AB  ruined her

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 If Only

Awww nice talk and dream.   Too bad she didn't get rid of scumbill at this point in the books.    Nice ending dream 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Revelations

sweet meeting with gran Arlene is so pathetic yummy and loving them together first and not Scumbill 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 A New Dawn

Loving Margaret.  Hope that he tells her everything before he completes the bond though.  Ah Amelia appears.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 'Til Death Do Us Part

Aww Margaret is so sweet.  Would love to get Gran to his house and in the Library.  hee hee.   LOVED her bragging to Arlene.  Jason is a goober.  hmmm Wonder what he and sam are gonna "talk" about.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Zero to Sixty

zero to sixty indeed.    Arlene is annoying.  Hope Kim isn't a plant or something. uh oh for car and Maenad I assume

oooh Niall appears.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 'Tis Almost Fairy Time

Well isnt NIall a demanding thing.  Poor gran left to tell Sookie alone.  Wonder if Sookie will want Eric there too?

 

Ugh Love how Jason thinks his opinion matters. So easily distracted too.  Hoyt is so sweet.

 

Glad Gran broached the subject at least. Glad Sookie is a bit ticked that Niall thinks he has rights.  LOL.  kinda sucks that she told her right before work though.  Her mind won't be there thats for sure.  hope kim isn't a fake or something.

 

Yea Skanky Anne isn't going to be happy.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 My Heart Is True as Steel

Yea  I think Niall meeting with him first was a smart idea.    Aww sweet proposal

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - My Very Art Itself

Ludwig is a trip.  Alicia seems real nice.  Amelia too.   Skanky Anne and Andre are gonna pull something....maybe conspire with Niall?   Guess we'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: CHAPTER 13 - DETOUR Up Ahead

Interesting talk and theories with amelia 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Part 14 At First Sight

Dunno why people don't like Bobbie  SHe seems really nice and knowledgeable.   Wonder if Jason is going to put up a stink about Uncle B?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - A Force of Nature

Bobbie is giving her lots to think about.  Glad she didn't get as sick today.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - A Rose in Bloom

Bobbie is such a cool addition to their growing little family.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Such Pure and Immaculate Strength

ah  Love that they got the baby and will be able to have it with her always  Niall is gonna be pissssed.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Every Lusty Heart

Glad Dr Ludwig is being firm about it and Bobbie is doing reading about danger signs.

Summary: Past Featured Story

WHAT IF: During Dead to the World, Eric never regained his memories? What would life be like for Sookie and Eric if he stayed Her Eric instead of going back to being Sheriff of Area 5? What would this mean for everyone else involved?

Lemons & Language: It has that rating for a reason kids

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59865 Read Count: 4177
[Report This] Published: 16 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Mar 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Not so bad.....until he does get his memories back

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

awww poor sookie.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

lol   Poor Bill...... NOT

Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

hmmm yummy

Avoidance by ineedcoffee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Following the Nevada takeover, Sookie has had little contact from any vampires, including Eric.  She wants Eric, but is confused by her feelings so she does what she does best.  She avoids it.  Soon, as always someone is out to get her.  Will Eric save the day once again?

This is a Dead and Gone Alternative, written before D&G was released, but somewhat based on rumors of D&G.  Spoilers for all books, Gift Wrap short story, and the first chapter of D&G that was posted on CH's website.  This was my first fanfiction and my first writing in a very long time.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113048 Read Count: 9045
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: theladykt Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

enjoyed the story alot.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  Thanks for reading!

Traditions by Malanna Rated: T [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Just a little holiday gift. This is a stand alone piece with a small tie-in to my other one shot, "Black Balloon". Eric's POV. Happy Holidays to you all


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 690 Read Count: 100
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww poor eric

Black Balloon by Malanna Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Short one-shot from Eric's POV. Takes place during the bonding in Rhodes. Enjoy!


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Canon
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1105 Read Count: 203
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice seeing his POV.    He deserved so much better than what he got in the books (and the show)

Absolution by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Support Stacie Auction Winner Ficlet. A 'What Should Have Been' Eric and Sookie moment set during All Together Dead, book 7 . Contains MATURE content.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1754 Read Count: 285
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Now that is what SHOULD have happened.   Stupid CH

Escape by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Support Stacie Auction Winner Ficlet. A Viking fantasy for his devoted minions. Sookie? Who's that? Ha! Contains MATURE content.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1754 Read Count: 148
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooh Yumminess

Dead to Rights by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

LA has a new King, things with Eric are as yet unresolved, and new dangers lurk around the corner for Sookie. She’s always been lucky, but is her luck about to run out?

Takes place immediately following the short story "Gift Wrap" in Wolfsbane and Mistletoe – spoilers for books 1-8.

First story in my "Dead" series.

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37361 Read Count: 3455
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yumminess...... ack then he had to pour ice water at the end

 

TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

hmmm now is that a side effect of the blood, a new bond effect or something more.  Interesting.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

hmmm dunno if I trust Tricky Vicky.  and who is the new POV?  the AP??? or someone else.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wonderful chapter.  Glad she finally is going to be open to all of him like never before.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Gotta love Grease.    lol  Love that the girls got one over on him

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Victor is such an arsehole.    Hope Sookie gets to stake the fangrapist.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well at least Victor didn't betray them.  FdC got off easy.   Arsehole.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

wowsers  she's going to be having a heavy guilt trip for awhile I think.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Glad she took Amelia with her on her errands.   She does need to think about security more.

hmmm Scumbill......hope everything ends up ok with her going over there

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'd get niall involved.  Maybe a threat of war would have kept FdC from doing something stupid.

I don't trust Tricky Vicky.  He's not going to be happy letting Eric and Russell take over.  Hope he doesn't double cross them and get sookie hurt.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Sigh.  He does tend to underestimate her....as do many.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hmmm to trust tricky vicky or not to trust him.   I wonder.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow  does Felipe really think that no one will raise a stink if she just disappears?   All mainstreaming efforts will be nil if word gets out the public about kidnappings and forced turnings.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow  Pam, Scumbill, Someone should have gotten a message to her.   Sookie really needs to get some media backup with this.  Niall for goodness sake or the AP

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ugh  Wonder if Eric knows that Scumbill escorted her.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow  Felipe really doesn't know her well does he with all the expensive stuff.   If I were sookie, I'd be making a video saying if I didn't return by a certain time, I was being blackmailed or kidnapped.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow  Eric's got balls sending it with a messenger.   I think Sookie has reason to be snarky with Pam and everyone.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh wow  Creepy Felipe.   You know the way to start a story.   Wonder what FdC is up too.  No good thats for sure.

In Between by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Companion short story for Dead to Rights, containing some set up for the sequel.  Think of it as similar to one of Ms. Harris' anthology pieces. Oh yes, it's told from Bill's POV, which I hope I'm getting at least somewhat right. Bill doesn't 'speak' to me like Eric does, and I find myself struggling to get inside his head, but it was important for this piece to be from his POV (which will make sense down the road). If you haven't read Dead to Rights, I highly suggest doing so first.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6040 Read Count: 460
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hmmm   Elena hun.   Wonder if she is gonna be friend, foe, or spy for another state?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hmmm now who is this Skank Elena working for I wonder.    Scumbill is utterly pathetic.  Respect is earned, not demanded.   He's never learned that lesson.

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Scumbill needs to just die.  He's going to use any opportunity to get Eric out of the way...... Like sookie would even look at him that way again.  Moron

Left for Dead by Malanna Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 62]
Summary:

Sequel to Dead to Rights. After the battle for Sookie's survival, a tribunal has been called, and the vampire community is facing threats to their very existence.

Spoilers for books 1-8 and the short story "Gift Wrap" from the Wolfsbane and Mistletoe anthology.

If you have not read my prior pieces, Dead to Rights and In Between, this story will make little sense.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62411 Read Count: 3617
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Avel needs to die.  Wonder if he's going to hide behind the AP's skirts now.   what an arsehole

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

hmmm wonder if Giacomo is a fae?    Poor Sookie.  Wow  Sounds like some powerful witches or sorcerers haveSookie all warded up.   Hope Eric can get through is all before she gets hurt further.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

If this Council of Seven was so important, why wouldn't they have dealt with the crap FdC was trying to stir up with the rape and turning of an unwilling party.  Sookie wasn't just going to go away.  Ah well.

 

hmmm wondering if Elena or Scumbill have something to do with this?   Wonder if they are going to end up making sookie go since FdC's crap with her was part of the reason they did things.  

 

Wouldn't Eric have smelt Scumbill on his car?  Arlene needed a real punch in the face.  What a biatch.  hmm dunno if I trust Elena to poke around Sookie's mind, esp if she's banging Scumbill.  

 

Grrrr now I really don't trust Elena.

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Not his enemy?   Still don't trust Avel at all.   Separating them and doing this to Sookie is cruel.   Guessing Niall wants her as his brood mare?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

WTF!!! Where is the AP.  Why is she allowing Avel to do everything his way?   This is still rape if he makes her go through with it.  He/It needs to die.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well at least the Romani seems to be on his side...sorta.   LOL.   Yeah I'm even more convinced that Avel is Giacomo.  My guess Sookie hasn't truly given in so she can't get pregnant, so he's manufactured this to get her to give in, abeit unknowingly.  

Wonder what Giacomo is gonna do now that Eric is there?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yeah  I don't buy that Giacomo is human.  I bet its Avel in disguise.  I could def see him wanting to be the baby daddy so he'd have some "legitamate" claim on the child.  

Pfft like phenome is going to help now.   

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow  Avel is a cruel SOB.   what is pheronme thinking allowing all this nonsence.    Of course he's stealing her child or is trying to, so I guess her not knowing about it makes his life easier.  Dear lord can you imagine a child raised by that arsehole?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm with Amelia.   Elena is gonna get Sookie killed or worse.  

Somewhat reasonable plan, but I'm still not sure I trust Elena.

Ack for Dream.....although I wonder if it really was.  Wonder if her "Sybil" powers are coming out?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Phemonoe is a coward. Amun's plan was to allow the rape and forced impregnation of a girl probably every day for almost 7 years. How pathetic she is then. Glad Quinn is dead. Hope Sookie gets to off Avel in the end.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Avel is def one to watch if that is his plan.  What an arse.  Hope Eric's plan works. 

Eek.   Mickey Mouse roll call for all the important people in Sookie's life.....except Jason....hmmmm.  Ugh for Scumbill

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Can't blame Sookie for being a little nutso over it all, esp with the way they just dumped it all on her at once.  And Victor isn't much help.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

ooh wow.  she's a descendent.   Interesting backstory.  Love the details.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow  he is really tormented.   Sigh 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oooh a sister.   Can't wait to meet the maker

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Poor Sookie with all the passing out.    I like that the AP is his maker and not the raping pedophile (ALO).

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oooh a frozen moment in time then.    More and more interesting this is getting.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hope they get to fix everything that went wrong the last time.    Wonder when V will show up.  I'm sure he's around.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh wow.  She's teleporting and now seems to be time traveling as well.  Interesing twists.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Cant wait to hear the explanation of why they are all there.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

hmmm   Not a good thing going off after Sam.  Me thinks that Aval  is up to no good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Glad she's finally figuring things out.     Ah Preston.   Fairy being manipulated too?  or is he part of it? hmmm

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oooh the plot thickens.   So Rachel is Bella in Sookie's body?  interesting.   What does Niall have to gain?  All this to just keep the Fae world hidden?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Woo Hoo Go Eric!!!!  Get your girl!.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Sookie def had quite the experience.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Hope Niall pays along with Apate.   So sad that evil wins so easily often times.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wowser you def have the supernatural running wild.  If only the evil could be bannished into a box.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great ending.   I would love to see the third installment someday.  Hope you continue it.

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Cullen and her family aren't the only one's in Forks with a secret.
Will Bella be able to withstand the tempting blood of newcomer Edward Masen, while unravelling the mystery behind his facade? 
OOC, AU, Future Citrus

Twilight...with a twist...

~COMPLETE~

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90926 Read Count: 12221
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2011
Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Time Passes

OMG.  Still say Aro needs to die.  But at least they are together. Ty for writing and sharing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: First Sight

Interesting start.  Can't wait to see where you take it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Open Book

lol for her going to Tanya for advice.  Allergies indeed.  B is a bit darker and mouthier than E seemed to be in the original.  Interesting twist.

 ah so he can still dazzle her.....

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Phenomenon

ooooh dayum nice car.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Revelations Part 1

ooh is Edward maybe a half breed.....or a shifter? hmmm

Thanks for posting here so I can read.  I don't do FFn.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Revelations Part 2

oh my <waving fan in my face>

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Mind Over Matter

hmmm these two are like oil and water it seems. But Dayum the heat between them....yummy.

Wow Esme is a bitch.  James.....cant wait to hear that story.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Cullen's

hmm some interesting turns.  Esme is such a bitch.  ah so I take it Bella had the hots for James and Esme...killed or fucked and killed him?!?!

hmmm now with her James revalation...

what did Esme do...... ooh did she call James in?

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Recollection

Wow Esme is def a jealous bitch. Ah so it was her fault James got turned.  Hateful thing she is.  Sounds like Esme has been poisoning his mind for a long time. 

 

Guessing Esme called James so he could come back to try to ruin B's life?!?  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Confession Part 1

ooh so we get to hear some of E's backstory.  Why do I get the feeling that James is E's father???  Glad B&E are talking though