Reviews by Feminine Archetype
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366631
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Feminine Archetype Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

oh now you have done it!! You made me cry the ugly cry so few authors can make me cry...the one that makes my husbad think I have lost my mind or something terrible has happened.

your story is beautiful and realistic at the same time. thanks for allowing us to enjoy your talent.

 



Author's Response:

I would really like to apologize for making you cry, but I can't because it means you felt so deeply for our characters and that's the real goal of any author - to make characters feel so relatable that you care about what happens to them. Thank you!!

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2672697
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Feminine Archetype Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Round Two

I am reading the series again because...well, because I love your stories. I read a quite a bit of FF,  as well as continuing to read published works (kindle, hard/soft cover and listen to audio books). I probably consume about 8-10 books/stories per month. And, yes, I work full time at a job that is a hour commute (hence the audio books). I have been reading this much for a couple of decades - I love fiction. Your sroties are some of the best I have read. You caracters are incredible and way you weave a tale just blows me away. i am constanly impressed by the development in the plot and of each of the characters. The people grow and change - they have feelings that are so real and complex and you do such a good job of communicating that to the audience. i love them and hate them, cry and laugh with/at them. i even get so angry at them and feel disappointed in them. I feel all of it and that makes a great story. Thank you again for sharing you talents with us.  

Reviewer: Feminine Archetype Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Stars in the Sky Outtake

Woah! The first time I read this story I did not read this Outake. It is so strange now to read about Ray Rrook FCI. I travelled from FL to NY to visit my brother in Ray Brook FCI this past summer. Many things were different from what you wrote, but of course, that's fiction for ya...

Summary:

OOTD

 

Edward Cullen is a fallen angel, living among humans. He’s dark, snarky, tattooed and a total badass. However, he still has his wings and angelic powers because the ‘powers that be’ believe that he is capable of redemption, despite being cast out of heaven. His exile was due to the fact that he was interacting with an unknown evil that tempted him over sixty years ago. Because of his mistake, he’s resigned to live out his immortal existence as a bitter angel, caught in limbo.

 

Isabella Swan, a human, is in the wrong place at the wrong time. In her innocence, she manages to worm her way into his heart, bringing him back into the light and out of the darkness.

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Gelesen, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108687 Read Count: 68145
[Report This] Published: 03 Dec 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Feminine Archetype Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Well, this is an interesting little depature for you. Seems out of the box for you but maybe i am wrong about that. I would typically not read something like this (angel stories arent typically done well) but I trust you as an author and can imagine you will do a great job with this type of story. As always, thank you for sharing your talents with us/me.

Summary:

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Local lawman Edward Cullen knows there's more to his job than glad-handing and being quick on the draw, he just hasn't seen it yet. Bella Black arrives in Rosewood, Colorado ready to move on from her past with the freedom being a woman of means affords. Can the good marshal be the fresh start she needs, or will the Wild West be too much for both of them to handle?

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 60463 Read Count: 12545
[Report This] Published: 25 Mar 2022 Updated: 30 Sep 2022
Reviewer: Feminine Archetype Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Overall, this was a lovely story. However, the writing needs a great deal of work. It lacks descriptors and details, so I had no idea what the characters were thinking or feeling, how we got from one point to another, or what the location(s) were like. Descriptive Words: Adjectives, Adverbs, & Participles.... https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/word-lists/list-of-descriptive-words.html