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Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
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Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

good chapter as always the green eyes edwards mother? thanks



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WOW!!!! You little mInX you.... How in the hell did you guess that!!!!!! hehehehe... Yes it is E's mum.... You are truly in tune with my thoughts and this story.... Good for you!!!!

Next update will be around friday.... Give yourself a big hug from me..... hehehehe

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Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

thanks as always awsome chapter



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As always you are too good to me... Thanks for the review

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Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

thanks another great chapter



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Thanks heaps.... YAY more cups... hehehehe

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Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

thanks as always good chapter ;)



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Thanks a bunch

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

thanks good chapter as alweays



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YAY!!!!!!!!!! MWAH

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Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Thanks sooooooo much

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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

hmmm good chapter thanks



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YAY!!!!! I'm glad you finally got too read it, after the stuff up hehehehe

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

thanks awsome chapter as always



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thanks sooooo much for your review!!!!! MWAH

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Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks heaps

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Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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thank you very much :)

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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YAY!!! thanks heaps

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Thanks a bunch

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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YAY!!!! thanks, Don't forget to check your email for the link to see what Bella was wearing in this chapter...

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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YAY!!! Thanks a bunch MWAH!!!

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Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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YAY!!!!! Thanks so much, tour ace!!!!

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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MWAH!!! I can always count on you taking the time to push that little button.... thanks a bunch...

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

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MWAH!!! Thanks, make sure you chack your email for the link

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Date: 14 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings

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Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Enigmas

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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24756
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
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Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

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Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

thaanks short but good chapter

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Jagged Turns & Twisted Fates

yeah but im for edward anyway good two chapters thanks

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Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

crap thanks good two chapters

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start

thanks pretty good story

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: leaving hatred

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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86080
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Nineteen- The Hale Inquisition

thanks as always awsome chapter



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Thanks, hon!

*mwah*

K

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Five - Desire The Fire

wow awesome chaapter as always thanks



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Thanks for reading :))

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Epilogue

Thanks awesome chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, hun!! xoxo

~K

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45295
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 2 Let the Games Begin

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Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 4 Game Fucking On

wow good chapter thanks

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Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

thanks awsome chapter

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Epilogue

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Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1255235
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

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Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml

 

Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.

 

“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.

 

“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.

 

“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.

 

“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”

 

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

thanks as always asome chapter

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

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Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, here’s your treat

     a little teaser

 

“Baby, I’m going to have to hear all your shit. I need to know. Because I need to be able to know what’s ok and what’s not. I need to know how far to push you, without causing damage either physically or emotionally and I don’t ever want to hurt you. You are going to have to trust me with everything you have in you. It’s a process, we start out slow, when I can trust you, and you can trust me, without any doubt” He smiled “Baby, that’s when we made it to the top. But it’s a long way up there. There’s going to be lots of tears and letting go.” He took a deep breath, glanced around the street then looked back into my eyes “My question for you is, do you want to climb up that ladder with me?”

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Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hmm whats with him thanks awsome chapter can't wait for a new update.

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Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

thanks awsome chapter she already got him wraped i love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review....lml

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Date: 02 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

awsome chapter thanks i knew a guy pinky size i swear and he was tall you would have though it a least came adult size, when he got married me and his wife use to leaugh about it but he knew how to use other things.



Author's Response:

Pinky...oh man, that poor woman. He better have been good at other things ... thanks for the review ..lml

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Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

thanks good chapter i think they might be funny together



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review, here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

“What are you thinking about?” I turned to face his voice; he was sitting in one of the chairs, watching me. His face was relaxed but he had an intense look in his eyes. I released the lip I didn’t realize I was biting “I was just imagining being restrained and blindfolded”

 

He didn’t say anything at first, he just shifted in the chair, before asking “What was happening to you?”

 

“Mmm...”I hummed “....nameless, faceless people were sitting in those chairs, watching me struggle not to cum.” I blushed with the last word.

 

“Ahhh... and that would be something you would enjoy?”

 

 I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, I didn’t realize before but the room had a smell of Jasmine and Lavender. “Yes...I think I would enjoy that very much.”

 

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Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

thanks as always great chapter can't wait for the next



Author's Response:

Thanks, Thursday wil be here before you know it. Yummy stuff starts happening really soon...lml

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Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

thanks as always awssome chapter



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thanks for reading. I have your teaser ..lml.....

“Hey” my thoughts had taken over my attention so much that Edward’s voice startled me causing me to flinch.

 

“I’m sorry babe…” he chuckled “…I didn’t mean to scare you” My eyes moved towards his they were warm and bright making me smile.

 

“It’s ok. Where have you been?” Edward sighed

 

“Ahhh…well while some of us get to lay around in the tub others leave the dog out, hang up their clothes and talk to irate fathers from Forks” the auditable gasp left my throat and I couldn’t mask the horror in my voice.

 

“You talked to Charlie?”

 

“Hmm...Yes I did” Edward sat down on the floor with his back against the wall of the tub pulling the cork out of a bottle of wine that I didn’t see he had.

 

“What did he want?”

 

As I sat up straight turning with my arm lying on the wall by his head, Edward handed me a glass before he started talking. “He was just concerned about you Bella and he wanted to make sure that after what happened you were safe.”

 

“And?” I knew there had to be more

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Date: 12 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

thanks as always good chapter



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Thanks for leaving a review… here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

After checking the front door - out of habit - and closing the blinds in the living room, we were back in my room, naked sitting on the bed talking. He asked about birth control.

 

“I’m not on anything. There was no reason for it.” Edward tilted his head to the side. “I figure you weren’t unless you had some medical condition. I mean you haven’t had sex in what...How many years?” He grinned mischievously.

 

 “I’ve had sex.” I stated mater-of-factly. His face was full of confusion “But you said you haven’t been with a man in a long time.”

 

 “I haven’t” His eyebrows raised “A woman?”

 

“No!” Now he was really confused, he looked around the room, eyeing my night stand. “Oh...self-induced sex. What do you have in here Isabella?” His hand was heading for said night stand.

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

no never did, but i liked that kitchen sex thanks awsome chapter

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Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

thanks reallygood chapter



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Thanks for reading and leaving a comment…here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

            “Hello.”

 

             “Hello to you how is your day?” Alice was loading the dishwasher.

 

            “Good, I had my last class today, and now I am at your sisters.” Alice looked up “Hello Edward, I stole your girrrllfriend.” she yelled stretching out the girl. He chuckled, but didn’t reply to her comment.  

 

            “Good, I’m glad you’re having a nice day. Did you sleep well?” I could hear the amusement in his voice, and I narrowed my eyes speaking softly “Once I got to sleep, I did”

 

            “Why couldn’t you sleep?” I could feel the heat in my face from the blush “Because somebody was being mean.” He chuckled. I looked at Alice; she smiled and winked at me.

 

            “Well if it’s any consolation, I’m sorry I was mean.”

 

            “Liar!” He laughed “Ah, my Bella, you know me already.”

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

as always awsome chapter i can't wait until thurday for the next update thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm glad you liked it...lml

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Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

thanks as always awsome chapter also can't wait until monday



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...

Here's a teaser for you...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” the other end of the phone was completly quiet.

“Edward you still there?”

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

 

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Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

i loved it i though it wa perfect thanks as always awsome chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks, for an awsome comment...lml

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Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

as always awsome chapter thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you...lml

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Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

thanks as always awsome chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks,,,I'm glad you like it...BTW I would have chosen 'You Lost That Lov'n Feeling' for the men to sing...

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment I have a teaser for you...lml

I stood in front of Edward’s door waiting for him to answer. The eleven o’clock appointment with Mr. Tanner gave me an extra hour. The door opened to a confused Edward

 

“Isabella?” I couldn’t help myself he was so handsome standing there and I was so gitty that I threw my arms around his neck and practically jumped in his arms, kissing his surprised lips.

 

            It only took him a second to respond as he held me closer to him. When he pulled away he had a smirk on his face.

 

 “What was that for?” I kissed him again “Thank you for the roses, they are beautiful”

 

           

“Is that all it takes to get you to jump me?” I giggled “Oh, I don’t need a reason to jump you”

 

            I was going to kiss him again, but a loud throat clearing from our left caught my attention. Edward patted my bottom, setting me down. When I looked over his shoulder I saw four sets of curious eyes watching me, and a woman on her knees looking at the floor. Oh my god, I can’t believe I just threw myself at him in front of his company, of course my face heated up with my embarrassment causing Edward to chuckle.

 

 “Come on I’ll introduce you” he said as his arm wrapped around my waist guiding me into the room.

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Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

thanks as always awsome chapter



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Thanks...lml

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Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

as always awsome chapter



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Thanks for reading and leaving a comment...I have a teaser for you ...lml

The quick shower I took felt amazing, and if I had time I would have stayed in there longer and let the water wash away all the stress from the day along with the grunge. Edward was sitting on the bed when I came out of the bathroom wrapped in a towel.

 

“Where are we going?” I wanted to know what to wear. I was hoping for casual, I just didn’t feel like dressing up.

 

 “No where fancy, just a quick bite to eat and then we have somewhere else I want to stop at.”

 

            I pulled my bra and panties out of the drawer along with a pair of dark blue skinny jeans. When I came out of the closet holding a red fitted t-shirt Edward had my hair brush in his hand.

 

“Come here” he motioned to the bed,

 

 I got a tight feeling in my stomach and my girly parts practically begged me to hurry to him. He sat back spreading his legs pulling me onto the bed so I sat between his thighs. Edward unraveled the towel on my head and began running the brush through my hair

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Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

thanks awsome chapter as always



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Thanks  glad you liked it,,,thanks for the comment...lml

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Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

thanks as always awsome chapter



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Because it's thursday i do have a teaser for you...thanks for the comment...lmlx8


I listened to what he said and then a thought occured to me. “You know what I think?”

He raised his eyebrows, “No I don’t, but I would love to hear it.”

“I think you are wrong…” Edward raised his eyebrows in disbelief, but I went on to explain before he could interrupt my train of thought. “ …about us needing to go to the club more often just to let people see us. I think we should go as you have already planned, but not any extra times just to appease your adoring public.”

Edward got that perplexed look on his face again.

“Think about it. All anyone really knows is that I showed up one night with Aro’s card. You yourself were kind of intrigued about how I knew him.”

Edward nodded, “You’re right I was. Aro doesn’t give them out.”

I went on with my theory while Edward’s hands moved down to rub my bottom. “Then the next thing anyone knows is that sometime within the next week you and I got together, and then when they see us I’m sporting your collar around my neck. Now, in order to justify why that happened they come up with all sorts of circumstances that would explain it. Which is alright, but then like an arrogant child who is looking for attention from their daddy, they start spouting it to others, knowing it’s going to get back to you.”

“Is that the psychologist talking? Because let me get this straight. They…” he pointed to my computer “… are the arrogant child and I am the daddy, and they are doing this to get a rise out of me?”

I nodded.

“And it’s working.”

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Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

umm yeah so sweet the ending i hope jaames get wahts coming to him ass thanks awsome chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you and as far as James is concerned I guess you will just have to wait and see..lml

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

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Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you

“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.

 

“I turned it off”

 

“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.

 

“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.

 

“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

yeah i figure he had to be like that because i don't think right now spanking will cut it. I also know he is just as hurt thanks as always awsome chapter



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Thanks...Edward told her he would never spank her, becasue of the abuse she suffered through, but he had to do something about her behavior...lml

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

thanks good chapter



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thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you..lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

 

 

 

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

thanks good chapter i see no reason to be mad at edward and i though jane gave a good talk thanks



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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

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While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.

 

“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.

 

“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”

 

“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”

 

I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.

 

“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.

 

“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.

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Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

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The music was playing in the background and either Emmett or Alice complained about the selection. Personally it didn’t matter to me, I had an eclectic taste when it came to music, and it appeared Bella did too. Because it didn’t matter if it was country or rap she sang along to almost every song. It was great to see her so relaxed and as I thought about it, I was very relaxed myself.

 

“Oh, you guys must all like this song” Alice blurted out when Eminem’s, Love the way you lie came on. 

 

Bella played her double six then looked to my sister but Rose was the one who asked. “Why would we like this song?”

 

She looked up from the dominos in front of her “It’s all about S&M”

 

Bella laughed Rose just stared at her I had to admit I was dumbfounded. “Alice” Jasper interrupted “This song is not about S&M”

 

Alice started singing the refrain. ‘That’s alright, because I like the way it hurts…She likes it” she then turned to look at Bella “You like when it hurts, right?”

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

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Author's Response: Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her. “Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw. “Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her “You do. Are you hungry?” “Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch” “Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?” “I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled. “That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear “You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.” “Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

ok the slut thing i though was hot too i'm good with that i like the talk and yeah sisters, the dressing thing i at first didn't like but when i reread it i got it it was acttually hot too so no problems loved it awsome as ever thanks



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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

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After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my discomfort. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.

 

Fucking great…

 

She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.

 

“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.

 

“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.

 

“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

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We sat a little longer talking about some of the things she would like to do there. I had not been to Victoria in a long time and there were some new attractions that were possibilities for us to see. I thought it was a good time to bring up the extended stay at the beach. Bella seemed very opened to that possibility, made all the more attractive because both hotels allowed pets.

 

“When you talk to Alice would you get the name of the hotel so I can sort of figure out what the cost is going to be” The statement was harmless enough but my answer must not have been.

 

“I got it Bella you don’t have to worry about paying” her eyes narrowed

 

“Edward I’m not going to let you pay for the whole thing. We’re both going we’ll both pay”

 

“I’m the one that suggested the long trip, I got it” I watched as the resentfulness rolled across her face.

 

“This is not up for discussion, I’m paying my half”

 

What does she mean half are we going to split the cost of meals?  

 

“Isabella be…” I didn’t get to finish, Bella’s eyes turned to pure fury

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

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Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

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Bella pulled back after placing one more soft kiss against my lips to look in my eyes while her hips wiggled against my dick. She smiled as the hiss left my mouth. “Little Eddie wants to play hide and seek”

 

“Oh he’s not hiding…” my hips thrust forward “…and he defiantly knows where to look”

 

“Well then…let him come find it” Her legs loss their grip as she slide down my body but I held her back firmly keeping her against my chest.

 

“Are you teasing me again?” the last time she tried this I ended up giving her a spanking over the kitchen counter, the memory alone made me throb.

 

“I wouldn’t think of it” stepping away the hint of a smile formed on her face, my girl was up to something. I eyed her speculatively but she gave nothing away as she moved towards the house telling me she was chilly and going in to get ready for bed. 

 

While Bella opened the door to go back in the house she stopped “Edward…” the somber look on her face was a direct contrast to the playful one she held just a minute before. “…do you trust me?”

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

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Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

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Picking up the first box I actually grunted because it was heavier than I thought it would be. After putting it on the table I turned around to see Bella carrying another one of the boxes.

 

“Isabella what are you doing?” I asked her while taking the box from her hand then realized the one she had was heavier then the first.

 

“I was carri…” I cut her off before she could finish

 

“I thought you had a fifteen pound weight limit”

 

“I do…” I stared at her in bewilderment

 

“This box has to be at least forty pounds” she looked at me like a deer caught in the head lights. I wasn’t mad –much- it was more concern for her wellbeing. Once the box was on the table I pulled Bella in for a hug. “I don’t want you to hurt yourself, so don’t do that anymore”

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

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I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”  

 

“Don’t say that!”

 

I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”

 

Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”

 

Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”

 

“No…” why the hell would I think that?  

 

“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

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Walking into the house all the cares that had been forgotten came crashing back as he told me that the locksmith would be there in about a half-hour. I used that time to tell him what I had learned about Heather.

 

“Do you think that could have been her on the video?” He asked me as we sat outback playing fetch with Seth and a tennis ball.

 

“It could have been. But how would she know where you lived. I mean really Edward if she knew where I was why go to the center?” He thought about that for a few seconds as he once again threw the ball into the grass.

 

“I’m going to call Mr. Weiss and let him check on it, I’m also going to see if he can check on your Officer Hawk.”

 

“My Officer Hawk?”

 

He smirked “Well he’s not mine besides he didn’t really care until he found out who you were, and I’m not taking any chances. I don’t know how it will work with him being a cop and all but…” I cut him off because I had gotten an ingenious idea.

 

“I could have Charlie do it.

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Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

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“It’s just the food” I told him as he followed me to the door barking the whole time “Seth!” I admonished while shutting down the alarm and opening the door to a very stunned Irena.

 

“Since when do you have a dog Edward?”

 

I didn’t respond to her question instead sighing heavily “What can I do for you Irena?”

 

“You can invite me in” She said as if it should be obvious.

 

Hesitantly I moved to the side to allow her entrance locking the door but leaving the alarm off, I wasn’t taking any chances. She stood in my living room watching Seth as he sat by my feet.

 

“I never thought you to be a dog lover” The sweetness in her voice confused me because the last time we spoke it was anything but friendly. That was the day she and Caius attacked Bella for which I found their actions deplorable.

 

“Cut the crap Irena why are you here?” My tone was rude but she deserved it and I didn’t trust her.

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Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

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Edward was pulling into the parking lot that was across the street from the main entrance. He didn’t say anything else until he held my door open for me taking my hand and pulling me closer to him. “I am sorry about my behavior”

 

I smiled at him “You girl forgives you”

 

His face moved closer to mine as he spoke “My girl is more tolerant then I deserve”

 

“Never” as I said the word his lips brushed against mine, it was a sweet chaste kiss. When he pulled back his eyes held a tenderness in them as he palmed the side of my face. 

 

“Remember your task and speak to no one other then family members”

 

“Yes Sir”

 

“Come let’s get this over with so we can get home” I nodded in agreement following behind him with my eyes down. As we approached the entrance Edward spoke with the guy at the door.

 

“Tyler, how is the night going?”

 

“Edward, actually it’s been busy, it’s game night”

 

Edward groaned “damn I forget about that”

 

Tyler chuckled as we moved into the club telling us to have fun, I wasn’t sure what game night was but it appeared I was about to find out.

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

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“Are we going to talk about it?”

 

“About what?” she truly didn’t know what I meant, so I held up her arm. Bella’s face fell “Oh”

 

I kept staring at her while she sat back down in her seat, waiting for her to start talking. Whatever happened she didn’t want to tell me, but I wasn’t giving her a choice I wanted, no I needed to know. Finally she sighed and started talking.

 

“I don’t know what you want me to say Edward I handled it, ingeniously I thought, I let her know that I wasn’t going to take any of her shit while still obeying you. Did I do wrong? Were you mad at me?”

 

Was I mad at her?

 

I figured I would let her answer her own question “Did you get punished?”

 

Bella shook her head at my question so I asked another one “Were you rewarded?”

 

The sweetest smile and blush broke out over her face “Several times” she admitted, making me chuckle, but I needed her to know something.

 

My fingers laced with hers on top of the table while I explained “The fact of the matter is…” I looked in her eyes “…Bella you shouldn’t have to handle shit.”

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Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

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Edward took the lid off his coffee while I took a bite of the danish moaning as the sweet gooey goodness melted in my mouth. The mixture of berries was a perfect balance between sweet and tangy with a thin layer of warm yummy cheese and sweet drizzle.

 

“MMMmmmmnnnn” I think my eyes rolled to the back of my head. When I opened my eyes Edward was looking at me licking his bottom lip. “What?”

 

He kind of shook his head as if trying to come out of a daze before taking a drink of coffee. “Last night was good?”

 

“Uh huh…” I nodded as I swallowed “…last night was great. I was a little worried when I saw the leash”

 

Edward cleared his throat “Well you shouldn’t have been looking, your eyes are to remain down not searching the room.”

I sighed “I know but when you put it down on the table all I could think about was when you were going to put it on me.” He looked…stunned, so I figured it would be a good idea to explain. “ Not that I wanted to walk around in public and I will admit it panicked me a little but it kind of excited me too.” taking a drink of coffee I asked the question I really wanted to know.

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Excusing myself I went into the kitchen to check in dinner, everything was done so after pulling the chicken out of the oven - to allow it to rest - I started putting the other stuff into serving bowls. The sound of the kitchen door swinging open made me turn to see who was there, and I smiled as Aro joined me.

 

“Isabella I don’t wish to disturb you, but may I speak with you for a minute?”

 

Not wanting to be rude I stopped what I was doing. “Yes Sir, do you need something?”

 

“No..no, please continue, I can talk while you work.”  I asked him to give me a second while I took the Corn Pie out of the oven because I didn’t want him talking to my back. Once it was out I gave him my attention. 

 

Eyeing the pie I had just removed he smiled at me warmly “It’s nice to see you so carefree around everyone. You seem much more confident and I must admit it does me good to see that. You are young and need to laugh more.”

 

I giggled “Emmett is easy to laugh with”

 

Aro agreed with me with a slight nod of his head “And Edward?”

 

“Edward is easy to laugh with too.”

 

“Good, it truly brings me joy to see you happy and carefree.”

 

“Well I don’t know about carefree…”

 

Aro spoke before I could finish “Yes well that is wanted to talk to you about.

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

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Taking another drink of coffee I didn’t say anything, but that was twice now that something was not put on the calendar. The lunch with Jane yesterday- which I found out about accidentally - that was ultimately cancelled and now the waxing, I guess my submissive will have some explaining to do. But at the moment I thought of something else.

 

“If you are waxing have them remove the remaining patch of hair” Bella’s hand stopped mid-way to her mouth as she just stared at me and I wondered what had caused the reaction I was getting. 

 

“W..Why? You said I could keep it”

 

Taking a drink of coffee I thought over my words to her on the subject “If I remember correctly I said you could keep it for the time-being but I would like it gone now”

 

“Can we talk about this?” her eyes stayed focused on the few pieces of bagel that were still on the paper towel. I didn’t understand what the problem was; we were talking about a tiny little patch of neatly trimmed hair.

 

“What’s the big deal?” I watched as she sat there quietly staring at the table chewing her bottom lip. “Bella?”

 

Devastation is the only word that came to my mind when she looked into my eyes “I know this is really stupid, but can I please keep it until next time?”

 

My eyes narrowed in confusion what did it matter if it was now or later? “Why?”

 

“Do you know why I kept a small patch?”

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Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

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Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

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“You did your father’s wash?” that sounded like something a kid shouldn’t do.

 

“Yeah…since I was ten or eleven.” there must have been some kind of bewilderment on my face because she justified herself. “I told you this. Charlie worked all kinds of weird hours; mostly he would sleep during the day and …”

 

Breaking in to her train of thought I made the assumption “You did all the chores”

 

She shrugged “Someone had too”

 

I truly couldn’t imagine any ten year old taking it upon themselves to be responsible for keeping a house. I suppose that would be another reason why at the tender age of eighteen Bella thought herself ready for marriage. It seems so clear to me that she had hopes and dreams for a regular life, college, career and all the other things that eighteen year olds dream about. However in her advanced maturity she pushed her own happiness aside and took on the responsibility of trying to please someone else. I had thought Bella to be a natural submissive and it would seem like she was.

 

The mistake she made was in her choice of partners. I have no doubt that had he not been abusive she would have been a perfect wife. Bella did everything within her power to see to his happiness even to the point of losing her own.

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

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Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”