Reviews by misticbutterfly
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624923
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

I love that you are showing a piece of their past.. The Birthday wish was so adorable... It hard to think of Carlisle as the loving 'Uncle' when he has his own motives...

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Dear God I was on the edge of my seat woundering what was happening next. I was yelling at my computer (literally) trying to make Edward tell Bella what he was doing (knowing after the fact that she needed to be convincing)

I was shocked that she finally told him about Carlisle. Good for her.

Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Poor Esme.. I feel so bad for her, but to have her be so strong for her son, daughters is simply amazing.. I didn't realize her garden was so big, I thought is was small... make total sense. she has a big heart.

I always wanted to know what happened to Esme..and now I know..

Also, wow I can't believe that Edward has fallen back into some of his old ways...even in false pretenses. Poor Bella I hate to see her so defeated.

Great job hon..can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Oh sweet lord.... why must you torture us so???  Love the cliffy, I'm wondering who is behind the door... Carlisle?? 

 

Is it next week yet?

Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Yay! it's next week already...

WOW what a chapter hon.  I'm literally doing a happy dance about Carlisle. I knew he was crazy but him calling Bella, Renee, was just pure genius.  I'm so happy Everyone evil is dead or gone.  Poor Bella and Edward

I am curious myself as to what Esme did with the ashes... My guess is that she buried them underneath something she reserved only for Carlisle (maybe a spot designated for when she fell in love with, before he became a monster) either that or she went to her happy place, deep within the garden, and danced on his ashes.. either one makes me happy.

Oh, my I want to know why Bella says 'let me go'..... my heart just droped...

Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow I can't believe that Bella left, like actually left Edward. But in so many ways I'm glad... she needed her childhood back, to find herself.  I'm so excited to read the epi... wonder how everything turned out.

I like the idea of TPW as an original novel.  It has kept me on my seat, wondering what will happen next. I felt for each character and what they went through. It was facinating to see how the boys slowly transformed into the men they are now..

Great job with this story hon. 

I am very interested in reading Esme's and Renee's story.. I can't even imagine what they went through or how they delt with Charlie or Carlisle.

Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Awesome end to a great story. I wish you luck on publishing this... I know I'd buy a copie. :D

 

Broken by ysar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I wasn't like the women in those movies.  You know, the ones you catch on the Lifetime network when you're channel surfing over a pint of ice cream at two in the morning?  Everything was perfect.  My grades were good, my college was paid for, and the future of my dreams was set.  Until it wasn't.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33666 Read Count: 15692
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 13 Dec 2011
Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Tramp Abroad

LOL!!! The Pink Ruffle room from hell. Priceless.

Oh Edward, what are we going to do with you.

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: misticbutterfly Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Distractions: Jacob's POV

I've missed these updates.. any clues as to when there will be an update?