Reviews by Roon1
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

Wow is all I can say.  Aro is one sick you know what.  Why on earth would you put up with that shit?

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123484
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
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Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Waves. I'm still here.  I really enjoyed hearing Charlie's POV.  Thank you for updating. :)

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Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I am so intrigued what has Carlisle found out?  I cannot even begin to guess.  I am looking forward to the next chapter when you can. 

 

I am very glad to hear that your husband's surgery went well. Here's wishing for a speedy recovery. 



Author's Response:

Right now Carlisle doesn't know, but he does suspect something...

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Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What a wonderful chapter I loved it.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. I'll be updating soon.

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Date: 09 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh wow. She can read his mind!  I love, just love the twist.   I really like your Edward and Bella by the way. :-))

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Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh my, what is happening to Bella. Has all that kissing somehow changed her?  I was so very please to see an update to this story, I enjoy it so. 



Author's Response:

Could be...next chapter will explain

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Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Firstly, of course I will remember you and yours in my prayers.  I hope everything goes really well. 

I loved this chapter so much. All that growly thing was just so sweet. When you can I hope to read more.  

In the meantime take great care of your self and family. 

hugs.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Everyone seems to love the 'growly thing'. I think it's very sexy. I wish real men could growl.  :)

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Date: 01 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires

All done. 

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Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh wow, Edward is just so very smexy. Poor Bella confused and excited by turns I bet. Wonderful chapter as always. 

 Hope you and yours are well. Have a great thanks giving.

 



Author's Response:

I'm really getting into this Edward. I was grinning like a fool when I wrote it. I may be a little "feverish"

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Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That was totally worth the wait. Fantastic as always. Thank you.

I will wish you and yours a Merry Christmas and very happy and healthy New Year!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! New chapter and Carlisle's pov in Jan.

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Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

dun dun dun. I loved being in Edward's head.  The referece to the feather made me smile.

I am always so happy when this updates.  So looking forward to the next installment.

I hope 2012 is treating you and yours well so far.  All the best.

 



Author's Response:

I'm working on the next chapter now. Hopefully in a couple of weeks it'll be ready.

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Date: 11 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Welcome back.  I thoughly enjoyed this chapter.  Edward and Bella really are the perfect couple.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Drama is coming.

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Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

Oh wow now I was not expecting that.  Awesome update, so glad to have you back.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

 

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Date: 15 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I echo that sentiment welcome back indeed moreover, the chapter was well worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

Alice and Jasper have an idea for a night with Bella.  Will Bella agree?  Mature situations and themes throughout.  Please be warned.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7865 Read Count: 5218
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2010
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Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - I Want You Both

Hot hot hot.  Lucky Bella!

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108560
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
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Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am glad I found you.  I am really looking forward to the next update this is one hot and scary story:)

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Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Fantastic chapter.  Bella and Charlotte are so hot together.  Its so nice to have this back

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Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Its good to see Jasper/Major is as hot and as hot headed as ever. I am also glad to see Isabella is not a complete doormat. 

 

I am so sorry to hear about your grand-mother. My thoughts are with you both.

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Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wonderful to have an update. I love this story so much.  Thank you.

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Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89795
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
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Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella

Great start to your story.  Looking forward to more.

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Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Reunion

Another excellent chapter.  Is Felix going to be a "Love" interest?

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Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: How To Make An Entrance

Intense.  What's up with Felix?  Is being a bit of a creep.

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Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Turbulent Affair

Wow poor Edward.

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53866
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan

Loved it.  Really looking forward to reading more.

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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Beginning

Great first meeting with Edward LOL.

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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen

Go on Bella sock it to him.  

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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

She wasted no time in wanting his hands on her LOL.  How long before she falls?

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Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Junior

Tanya gone, yay.  What's with Aro and Edward?

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Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Nice to have you back.  Poor Bella, what did he mean he couldn't?  Looking forward to finding out.

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
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Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33. Meeting the Volturi

Wow that was an exciting chapter.  Bella, Edward and Jasper are now on the run.  Really looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37. Succubae?

Lovely chapter.  Naughty Edward.  Bella has some awesome powers.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39. The Coven

Good chapter.  I am so glad they got back together.

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Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40. Where Do We Go From Here?

Wow great chapter

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
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Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Trapped

Poor Bella.  I like her fighting spirit though.  Can Edward read her mind?

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Bella finds out she's pregnant, but Edward wants nothing to do with it...it doesn't fit his plans! She moves on...Will time make Edward want to be in their lives before the baby is born? Will they find their way back to each other - AH/lemons later  NC-17 RATING FOR VOILENCE IN LATER CHAPTERS.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56874 Read Count: 60946
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Apr 2010
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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow this is some start to your story.

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Goodbye to You

Edward is being such a dipshit.  Great chapter.

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Glimpses of Insanity

So Bella really fell in love with this Edward?  Hard to believe.

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pregnancy Hormones: Hot and Horny!

Bella has wasted no time either.  lol

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Images of Perfection

At least Bella is no wimp.

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Heart to Heart

Great chapter

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - You've been Served

Another fantastic chapter.

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Manholes and Baby Steps

Its good to see Edward starting to work towards fixing things with Bella.

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Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - One Flew over the CooCoo Nest

Oh no Jessica is nuts. 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Aww that's better.  Bella was magnificent.   She told the people she needed to tell, that their behaviour was not on.  She did not let Edward get away with being an ass and in the end they made up and agreed to work on a few things.  Wonderful.  I am so proud of her.



Author's Response:

me too! thanks so much for your review and comments

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Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

These two are so hilarious. Wonderful as always. 

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Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Good chapter but I really do not like the idea of a too docile Bella, what's with the eye rolling threat?   Really looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

hey there Roon,

Well, it's not a threat per se, I read about it on one of the websites that I have used for research.  A Tick list is more of a suggestion box as such.  The Dom and sometimes the sub take a few 'bad' or undesirable habits and put them on the list. it could be something significant like climaxing without permission, or forgetting to check the oil in the car! Not taking make up off before bed time or rolling ones eyes...

The Dom then attaches some attention grabbers to those things - warnings as such and so, with time, the sub modifies her or his behaviour while he or she is wearing the Dom's collar. So Bella will never, EVER become docile or weak, indeed, she is only going to get stronger, but her goal is to be a good submissive to Edward's Dom side.  We'll see what happens...

Thanks for the review.

xoxo

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Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I thought this was an excellent chapter.  Full of tension and excitement.  Wonderful work.



Author's Response:

thank you so much

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Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

So glad the girls are well.  Happy news for R & E.  Glad Edward could spank the blues out of Bella:-)

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Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Well they had a good weekend.  25 smacks that's a lot but it made her happy.  TTFN.



Author's Response:

thank you

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Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

Really enjoyed this chapter.  



Author's Response:

thanks so much

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45

This was a really intense chapter and very well written.  

The only thing that didn't sound right to me was Bella, telling Charlie,  she was into BDSM Edward and was her Dom .  I am sorry but who the hell tells their parent what they like in bed or on a whipping bench????



Author's Response:

hey there Roon, 

Well thank you so much for your comments. Bella will explain her reasoning in the next chapter to Edward. Yeah she tells him and he has pretty much the same reaction as you...

:)

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Well it looks like Bella is even more kinky than I thought.  LOL



Author's Response:

I KNOW!!!! I was as shocked as you were. Seriously.

:)

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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Stack of wood piled up and ready to go.

OK, I understand why Jasper and Edward are angry but Alice was going to tell Jasper before they went.  Besides which, why was Jasper not more aware of Alice's discomfort around his family?  Where was his head at?

As for this whole punishment thing, I cannot get my head around it but if the girls accept being beaten, good luck to them.  

The thing that was really hard was Edward's punishment of Bella. She is so insecure anyway and Edward completely ignoring comes under the banner of cruel and unusual punishments.  She would put up with anything as long as he stays with her and that a bit fucked up if you ask me.

I am looking forward to your next chapter to see how this one plays out.

 



Author's Response:

I'm feeling the heat on my toes...ouch!

Thanks for your review and comments - you are right, Edward has screwed up here and so did Jasper and Esme.

Next chapter is written...

:)

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

This was a wonderful chapter.  I was so pleased that the party went well and Bella enjoyed herself.  I was also glad that Edward dealt with the harpies and defended his Bella.

I was a bit worried when Bella had earlier said that she thought she would like  public displays and humiliation because frankly, I could not read that shit.  However,  you handled the crawling thing really well.

My favourites bits are always the bits where they are just Edward and Bella, because when they do that right, its perfect. 

Until next time.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for the review and your comments. I'm glad that you liked it.

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

What a cliffie.  Absolutely wonderful chapter.  In a way I am glad that Bella is still angry with Edward, he deserves it.  However, I am even happier that they are trying to work it out.  

Loved Edward trying to help Jasper and Alice, it just shows how much Edward has grown 

On a lighter note I was glad to see Bella's kitty was not permanently broken. LOL

I also loved you had the therapist called Dr Banner-Jones.

I am always happy when I get an update for this.  Until the next time.  

 



Author's Response:

THANKS FOR THE REVIEW - SENDING YOU SOME SPECIAL LOVE FROM J & A

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Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Another totally excellent chapter.   It started out all tense and sad and ended all fluffy and sexy.  

Edward seems to be making a good slave but then again she is a very lenient mistress.  Fancy implying she was fat when he has been hounding her to eat for months. Men really. LOL

Contrats on your 2000+ reviews.  They are well deserved and really there should be more.  

Take care until next time



Author's Response:

thanks so much roon - when i wrote that comment about her weight - i could just see him getting all panicky and stuff - good laugh

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I love your story mainly because it is a love story but when the person you love knowingly inflicts "suffering and pain" on you and you want it to make you feel better, I just have to think you are a bit "sick in the head" but then that's why I would never want to be a sub, sod that!  

Bella was foolish but if you ask me Edward is as very bit manipulate as Bella was trying to be.  To me it seems, the perfect sub has to give up huge parts of themselves to be truly submissive.  No wonder most BDMS relationships are purely physical.   Kicky sex is fine but the rest is not so fine, as far as I am concerned. I guess I am saying I don't get it.  Your couple love it and that's the main thing. LOL



Author's Response:

thanks for your review and your comments. I've been writing this story for about a year now and I am still wrapping my head around some aspects of this lifestyle. Talking with subs and Doms that live the lifestyle has helped me to see that most of the time there is a lot of affection between the Dom and the sub. As for who has all the power - hmmm - for the Dom, the submissive holds the power as she/he is the primary concern of the Dominant. For the submissive, well a true sub does give some of her/himself away - but that is all part of the consensual part of play.

Thanks again R1,

Michele

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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Loved this chapter.  Bella seems to be settling down to being a good little sub and Edward is happy about it.  Its all good.

Looking forward to the next chapter as always.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it!

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

It certainly was a rollercoaster of a chapter.  Her poor arse must have been so sore. I am not keen on the "punishments" it just makes me want to hit him!  Oh well, she can always tell him to stick it.

I must say  I thought there would be no penetration in the scene witnessed by Kate and Garrett.  Is not sticking his dick in her mouth, being orally penetrated? LOL

 I have to agree with Bella, a woman needs her own money.  I bet there were be more "punishments" when she starts insisting she works.  I am looking forward to the next chapter.

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I really do love it when Bella and Edward are just themselves.  I was so happy that this chapter was mainly about them and their love.  Awww.  

Edward being all encouraging and demanding ordinary time with Bella, was so sweet.  Poor grumpy Bella. LOL.

Its going to be a hard few months for the pair of them. I really do hope that Bella, pursue her career as an artist.  It would do wonders for her confidence.  

I am looking forward to the Carlisle & Esme outtake.:-)

I was sad to hear you will be only updating fortnightly but can understand.

I want to wish you and yours a very happy Christmas and a happy and healthy New Year.

All the best.



Author's Response:

thanks honey! for the encouraging words and the review. the out take will be out before christmas

xoxo

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Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

I loved the time Bella spends With Charlie and Sue.  Her relationship with Seth is really sweet. I found her meeting with Billy rather moving.

As for the punishment, I have to say I absolutely hate that Edward thinks he has the right to inflict such pain on her and she feels that she deserves that he does.  I understand it is the nature of their relationship but how do you claim you love someone and then repeatedly physically hurt them and say its for their own good?  I would be out that door before you could say spank. OK rant over.  I still love your story just don't love that aspect of their relationship. LOL.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

thanks for your honest review roon. You know what, I think that all of us that are not in that lifestyle struggle with this aspect of BDSM. Because it's not just about hot, kinky sex. In fact the more that I have learned about it, sex has little to do with it. It's 90% mindset and 10% sex. It's all about control, submission and the balance between the two.

 

thanks again xoxo

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Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

It was an exciting chapter and well worth the wait.  The last thing I expected was for Victoria to shoot him.  In truth I had forgotten all about her.  I have that for most of this chapter I thought Edward was being an monumental ass.  I really was not getting Edward's self loathing for marking Bella.  This is the same man, who had whipped her, beat her with impliments, tied her up and punished her (65 beats or did he forget that) and will do the same again at some point.  It just doesn't ring true, unless he decended into mental illness.  Bella was very good, his arse should of been paddled and good.  I suppose now that he's been shoot he will have to be let off. :-D



Author's Response:

Hey roon - THANK YOU FOR SAYING WHAT WE WERE ALL THINKING - WHAT THE HELL IS HE ON ABOUT??????!!!  Our boy got a stupid sense of protectivness - I was so pissed off with him that I wanted to shoot him myself!! I couldn't stop writing until it was over.  Now, just a head's up - he is NOT a good patient and no, Bella is NOT going to let him get away with it.  Thanks for the review, babe - update next week xoxo

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Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

After all the upset of the last chapter because of the punishment scene, this chapter was perfect.  

Emmett was sweet, silly and funny but turns.  Glad its sorted out between them.

I very much enjoyed how your wove Mr Jackson into your storey.  Jealous Edward is such fun.

Bella and Edward are always great when they are themselves.  I must admit at one point I was beginning to worry that Bella, was going to be turned into a sort of Stepford sub.  I would have hated that for her. LOL.

Now they are going to get married.  How cool is that?

 Chapters are only ever too long if they are not enjoyable and yours was very enjoyable. Thank you for such a fun read. 

Take Care.

I will be making a donation to the Australians and the Brazilians, both of whom are suffering at the moment.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

hey Roon,

thanks so much for the review - I'm glad you liked it. will up date soon - yeah the kids are growing up! xoxo

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I have been keeping an eye out for this all weekend. It was worth me checking my email like an idiot as it was another amazing and lovely chapter.    I am always so happy when these two are happy. I just love your characters and Seth is another winner.  I am so glad that Bella managed to deal with her art show well.  Like Bella I am not ready to let go, so 10 chapter is good.  A sequel would be even better. LOL.  Until the next time.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and your review - I'll post an outtake this week okay?

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Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

Another fantastic chapter.  Bella’s insecurities led her to made a few bad decisions but hey Edward is no angel himself.   I love how they have grown enough to work through their problems.  There is going to be a little manic Alice. How amusing.  This must mean that Bella is not too far behind getting pregnant cause they all seem to follow one another. LOL

Sorry you had a hard time but so glad you got this chapter out.  Very selfish of me I know. 

Take care until next time.



Author's Response:

Hey Roon, 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review and comments. Okay, I hate to burst the bubble Darling, but there won't be a baby right now for B & E. They need to get married soon and there are some issues to sort out and things to resolve.  it will become clearer in good time, honey, I promise.

But they WILL have children! Oh yes, there will be lots of younger Cullen/Whitlock offspring in the future....

sh!

xoxo

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Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Wonderful chapter.  I also love it so when these two are just happy together.  It was a little rocky at the start of that chapter but I guess deep grain insecurities just don't disappear.  You did a great job on this and just look how Edward has grown.

As for the comments of your Beta.  She is damn right, someone would be sporting a flogger in their bottom and it wouldn't be me. LOL

 



Author's Response:

oh my word Roon, thank you for your comments and your review xoxo

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Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Wonderful chapter.  Its always a pleasure to catch up with these two.  I still don't really get the attraction of being a sub but if that is your Bella's thing good luck to her.  I am wondering how the hell Bella's mum turns out not to be her mum.  My mind is bogglering.

Until the next time.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Roon, I love hearing from you - you are like the voice of reason in the madness!  I know that you don't get the whole 'sub' thing and that's okay  - just as long as you are still enjoying the story!  don't think too hard about  the puzzle - all will be revealed soon xoxo

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Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

What a stunning chapter.  Such a rollercoaster of a ride. Those two are always at the centre of some crisis or another. I love it.   I loved that Bella punched Renee. She totally deserved it. You should be so proud of your chickens. They are growing up. The Cullens are going to be over run with babies soon.  That should be fun.  You can write really long chapters anytime.  Its only ever a problem if they are not enjoyable. Your work is very readable and enjoyble.  Until next time.

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Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

As usual I just loved this chapter.  It does still surprises me when Bella, agrees to do sub things and then forgets or ignores them. Silly girl, esp., as she is so into it, just look at her mini outburst to Edward. She basically told him he was not been enough of a Dom for her. How very amusing.

I loved how it was Bella who come to Alice's rescue and again I am surprised Alice was allowed to get away with that behaviour.  I am glad Bella, told them all off.  The uncles were a scream.

I am not really sure how I feel about Rosalie breastfeeding Emmett, my first reaction is ewww. lol 

I really look forward to your updates and am already excited about the next.

Until then take care.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey Roon, Okay so I am so with you about the breastfeeding thing - ew, ew, ew, but then again, Emmett closing in on my nipple for a sip.... um, sorry, getting carried away there for a second, Edward and Bella? They are a lost cause sometimes, the little buggers write their own stupid story line!! Glad you loved the uncles, they were fun to think up!

 

Thanks so much for your review and words, babe.

xoxo

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Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

A fantastic chapter.  No matter how long your chapters are, they are always such a pleasure to read. What do you mean no sex, there were scenes, butt plugs and all sorts. lol .  I loved the scene at the party.  You have some imagination. lol.  

I look forward to the wedding.  

Take care and thank you for sharing.

 

 



Author's Response:

Well, I meant no sex for the week before the wedding - thanks so much for reading so faithfully.

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Happy Easter to you.

I don't know, that Edward does need a good arse smacking sometimes.  He certainly puts Bella through some stuff but then Bella puts up with it.  Her sub nature I suppose.   I am glad they are getting sorted.  Can you imagine poor Edward without a boner.  Bella's enthusamsim for the playroom and sex in general is hysterical. lol

PS  I have been reading We Come to Life Beneath the Stars by Lillybellis & The Education of Professor Cullen by sheviking, both are two excellent fics. The updates have been slow but they are nearing their end.



Author's Response:

Hey Roon, Thanks darling for the recs - I love sheviking!  And I will be sure to check out the one by lillybellis!

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Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

It is a measure of how much I admire your writing skills that I have not thrown a wobbly over Edward's behaviour in the playroom. He worries about hurting her after the event?  Would she ever red him?  Go on just once do it, lets see how the big baby would cope. lmao.  I think Bella is getting broody, time will tell.  I loved how you dealt with the Renee thing, very inventive.  As always looking forward to reading more. 

Until the next time.

hugs Caro.

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Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

You know it is a testment to your writing that I adore your story.  Edward's bruised heart?  Pleeeeease, he acts like a total ass a fair amount of the time, I have no patience for it.  Personally I think their "lifestyle" clouds the issue of their marriage. Anyway I will shut up about that.     By the way why is Alice a sub?  She does not see suited to it.  As for Bella she only really wants someone to love her and take control. That person does not have to be a dom.  So she going to give birth to a future sub/dom. Yay.  Lets see what drama these too can make of that.  As always I look forward to the next installment. 



Author's Response:

Oh my god, Roon, you do my heart glad! I love hearing from you because I know that you will keep things real and tell it like it is!  Okay, Alice is actually a great submissive, you've only seen her at 'the wrong time'.  When I was giving birth to my first child, I told my husband that I would personally ram his head up his ass if he didn't tell me to 'breathe, Baby, breathe!' !  Yeah, it happens like that!

Now don't be so hard on our Edward, he was hurt and you know that he has a fragile ego (I would love to stroke his - um, ego).  You know there is going to be drama all the way - I am the queen of drama! and so are my characters.

thank you for your review and your wonderful comments :)

Michele

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Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

 

Your kidding me, she felt ill because of little goo?  All the pervy things she does with Edward and in front of others does not make her ill but that does.? LMAO

These two are always in trouble.  They never react to anything like normal people.  I cannot believe he actually left her in the car. lol.  Not only that she has not been eating and over working. Last time she did that he went postal and gave her 65 beats. I have not gotten over that yet (I doubt I ever will). 

I am glad to see Esme and Carlisle are as insane as Edward and Bella.   I think them having twins is wonderful.  Maybe the pair of them will then grow up a bit.  Harsh I know and though I love them they are the silliest people sometimes. :-)) 

I see you have been pimped by Twilight Fic Zone: 
 I am really pleased for you. You deserve more 
attention.

 



Author's Response:

Hey Roon,

Thanks so much for your review and comments - and please god, I hope that these two will become slightly "normal" in the ensuing months!  As for C and E - well as always, there will be twists and turns!

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

I am fairly sure I am not going to be able to review again but just wanted to say. Wonderful stuff.  They are all totally bonkers. 



Author's Response:

completely insane, I agree with you!

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Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

You never, never disappoint. Your characters are totally barking but adorable nethertheless.  If its not one going off the rails its another.  All I can say it makes a change from Edward beeing an arse. lol  I also want to say outtake, outtake, outtake! 

 While the thought is in my head, I have to say and I am sorry for saying it but  I have always found your Garrett to be an unsympathetic character he comes across to me, as a rather harsh demanding Dom and has a sort of dysfunctional parent/child relationship with Kate.  One example of what I mean by this is when Garrett tells Carlisle that he has spolit his wife. She is a grown woman not a two year old or a dog.  Now that there will be children underfoot  and given the needs of your men to be dominant and in control, I wonder they are all going to cope, esp., said control freak like Garrett?.  

I started thinking about this because I was reading the blog of a woman who is a sub/slave to her husband.  She will kneel at his side during meal times and evenings in front of their children. I cannot help thing that this gives the children a very damaging view of how woman fit into the world and quite frankly it appalls me. I know you would never write anything so crass. I really shouldn't read stuff like that, it annoys the bejesus out of me.  I will stop with the word vomit now. 

 

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Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Excellent chapter.  Their new home sounds idyllic.  Looking forward to the next chapter.  

Take care. hugs.

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Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

As always a pleasure to read about these two crazy lovebirds.  

I was very proud of Bella for standing up to those biatches, about time she stood up for herself.

That spa place sounded amazing,. If I ever win the lotto I am going to find one just as luxurious and stay for weeks, hell I might even move in. lol 

Thank you for clarifying the relationship Kate and Garrick have, it was good to see him being "nice" to his Mrs.  It will be interesting to see how their D/s relationship works after the baby is born and grows into a child.  He will need to moderate his Dom behaviour and she will need to keep her kink confined. 

Once again thank you for the chapter.

Take care.

Hugs Caro.

 

 

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Date: 12 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Firstly how sad its coming to an end but you have done us proud.  Poor Bella never learns does she?  Come to that neither does Alice. lol  It will be interesting to see how this slave/master thing works out.  Excellet as always.

PS 

I wish that were my house. lol 

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Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Alice and Bella are hilarious. I am glad Bella has not gone done the slave route. shudders.  lol  As always a wonderful chapter. 



Author's Response:

Hey Roon, yeah I love the kink but slave???  I don't think that I could write it!  Thanks so much for the review.

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Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

As always a stunning chapter but you could just smell trouble brewing. I am surprised at Garrick & Kate but then maybe not.  Hmmm its not going to be pretty when Bella finds out about Irina but then again  whose going to tell her?  lol I loved the addition of new babies. 

Looking forward to the next update. 



Author's Response:

Hey Roon, Thanks as always for a wonderful review and I'm sure that you will love the next chapter! xoxo

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

I can always trust you to make it right. I love how you show people tend to make the same mistakes over and over again.  Edward and Bella are fine examples but they have both grown up and that is nice to see.  As always I love your chapter and you can go on forever and that would be fine with me.

All the best

Hugs Caroline.

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Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Wonderful totally wonderful. It was hilarious to see Bella in trouble but at least her arse was saved. lol  The Great uncles were brilliant. How can you not love them. I don't want you to ever end. So just go for it hun. Hugs.

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Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

It seems like its just possible our Edward and Bella are finally growing up.  I am glad that the uncles had been invited into the mix, they are so naughty and funny. I adore how they adore the children. I was also moved by the Carlisle and Edward scene's. Wonderful, totally wonderful.

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Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

wipes away a tear.  That was a perfect ending to the first part of your amazing story. Thank you do much for sharing. 

I am really looking forward to the second part of your wonderful story.

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84597
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Fantastic ending to a fantastic story.  Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48849
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Leave me alone

She seems not to mind that the rest of the Cullen's are back and has forgiven them.  Interesting.

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

Ooh could it have been Edward in Bella's old room?  Cannot wait to find out who it was.

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Difficult Conversations

"silly teenage crush." is that what Edward is feeling?  I don't think so but I don't blame Bella for not rushing back into his arms.  It will be interesting to see how this pans out.

Summary:

Bella is on her honeymoon when a storm hits and she is tossed off the boat along with her husband. When she awakens on a desert island she is rescued by a beautiful angel with crimson eyes. Lemon included.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4808 Read Count: 891
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Honeymoon in Paradise

I love the twist you placed in the story.  Wonderful stuff.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
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Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Great chapter and nice lemon.  Carlisle is a dark horse isn't he?

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Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22:

Excellent chapter.

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29032
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good chapter.  It seems Bella was very lucky she could have ended up with James, shudder.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this story so far.  Edward is so sweet to Bella.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yay they did the deed.  I cannot help wonder why James now wants Bella?  I hope he and Jessica are not going to make trouble but I think they might. LOL.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Bella.  Jessica should be sent down the mine.  Lets hope Bella hears Edwards declaration and recovers soon.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it.  Good chapter.  Is Leah going to tell them who she is looking for?

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, everyone seems to be pregnant.  Wonderful stuff.

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Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dear me these two need to work on their communication skills.