I read the complete story before submitting a review. Your story deals with abuse and I have seen and dealt with the results of sexual abuse and know how serious this is. My problem with fanfics involves using photos of the actors from the movies to represent the characters you write about. Do you obtain permisssion to use the actors likeness or are the photos copyrighted? If you don't have the actors' consent, the photos shouldn't be used. Would you use a photo of your father or uncle to represent Charlie, Carlisle? Your brothers' or cousins' photo for James or Demetri? I know most Twilight fanfiction authors use the movie actors' likeness and some get very graphic using photoshop, doesn't make it right. Personally, I see a different person for every story I read and just think more consideration should be given to the actors, cause let me tell ya... you've written lot of crazy to be putting someone's pic to it.