Reviews by msliss8
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

Big fat thanks to Selita for making me this AWESOME banner!!

The Virgin Swan and the Cullen Intuition Banner fs

michelleab09 from ff.net made me this fantastic banner!!! 

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michelleab09 is at it again with another lovely banner for the waterfall!!

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The lovely Selita made this for me!! I'm so proud of it!! :D :D

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57009
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

He’s a bit weird 

is it the 17 yr thing? 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I don't know how she is doing this

at least she acknowledged the discrepancy between he's behaviour and his I love you.

I would want to dig Into that

and I don't buy that a woman can get in to his exclusive aprtment  like that 

if what he says is true.


Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I don't know how she is doing this

at least she acknowledged the discrepancy between he's behaviour and his I love you.

I would want to dig Ainto that

and I don't buy that a woman can get in to his exclusive aprtment  like that 

if what he says is true.

pure bs 


Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I don't know how she is doing this

at least she acknowledged the discrepancy between he's behaviour and his I love you.

I would want to dig into that

and I don't buy that a woman can get in to his exclusive aprtment  like that 

if what he says is true.

pure bs

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134479
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Great story

i did think it was ripe for a sequel so I’m so glad to hear you are writing one 

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Great story

i did think it was ripe for a sequel so I’m so glad to hear you are writing one 

thank you

Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141809
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is a bit weird

whyon earth is she letting him do this stuff

oh yes., fiction duh lol 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is a bit weird

whyon earth is she letting him do this stuff

oh yes., fiction duh lol 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I would have asked when he realised sending the email was a mistake 

To me that would factor in 

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159843
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

These two are a bit disfunctional, or just young and dumb.

 Thank you 

Summary:

Sequel to Fighting for Love: Edward and Bella are at UCLA. On their own for the first time, will they be able to handle everything that is thrown at them? Will their past come back to haunt them? Canon coupling, NC-17 and AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Fighterward, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136048 Read Count: 81565
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2011 Updated: 11 Aug 2016
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Btw I’m loved ng this sequel 

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I think the brothers are really stupid and immature 

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

fs Banner Fictionators  Blinkie

 

Nominee Banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Brilliant 

please carlise tell Edward! 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Great story thank you 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella and Edward met when she was 18. Now 4 and a half yrs later they meet again. Bella is a teacher and Edward works for the fire department. Will they let love in or be burned? AH. M for language/lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44330 Read Count: 41614
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

So what happened to that flame? 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412089
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i really love this transition for Bella.

I came across as very natural for her.

i know there is still a lot to sort out.

it's hopeful

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135539
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm so sad this is not complete

but I'm reading anyway!

lol

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 23

i'm so sad you havent finished this stroy.

but you will note i started reading it anyway

thank you

Handled With Care by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Handled With Care by Soapy Mayhem

 

It's Edward's birthday, and Bella is determined to make it special for him, but when a package arrives at the door, it's Bella who will receive the most special gift of all. O/S.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2808 Read Count: 1012
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Handled With Care

Cute and sweet 

thank you 

Isabella Volturi by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After being left by Edward, I couldn't stand the thought of him controlling me even in his absence. I admit it was an act of defiance, but it was a decision that brought me more happiness than I'd ever thought I'd experience. New Moon AU/Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93367 Read Count: 39566
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 31 May 2020 Title: Isabella Volturi

Thank you 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Young women can act silly, but men... Men make bold gestures." I opened the trunk for Bella. The man inside ended up on the pavement. Bella's eyes widened, and she covered her mouth.

 

* Period fic. Takes place in 1958/GangsterWard. 

 

*Not so canon couples, but a few are. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115343 Read Count: 76899
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2013 Updated: 20 Sep 2013
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I’m cant blame a girl for working a no win situation 

well done Bella 

thank you 

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272385
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh men are so stupid sometimes 

i was hoping Beni would wed them! 

#sadface

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh men are so stupid sometimes 

i was hoping Beni would wed them! 

#sadface

The Body by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 403]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has a fetish that no one else in the world knows about. Except the thousands of followers on his anonymous blog. What happens when Bella works out who 'The Body ' is.

Ths was my submission to the twkink 2015 fest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 121593 Read Count: 145727
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2015 Updated: 19 May 2017
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yes! Very cruel! Lol



Author's Response:

I know sorry x

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Omg

incant wait for part two of this convo.

handled very well 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Give him an inch and he takes a mile. Lol

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 19 May 2017 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Thank you!! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 Bella is a good, Christian girl with a dark secret. She wants the pierced, tattooed, and foul-mouthed tattoo artist who lives across the hall from her. Will she ever get him to notice her without compromising her beliefs?

 

Thanks to the LOVELY heartfortwilight for my banner!  I LOVE it!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74153 Read Count: 99337
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2015 Updated: 24 Nov 2017
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The Whole World Stops

Thank yo very sweet 



Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32509
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i'm so conflicted

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Dr. Edward Masen is in for a surprise when his best friend and fellow colleague Dr. Carlisle Cullen invites him out to spend an evening with him at an exclusive member's only club. What Edward does not know, is that the club caters to a select few who share in a unique fetish within a certain lifestyle choice. He meets a brave little girl named Bella Swan who is more than happy to pull him into her world and introduce him to the wonderful lifestyle of Bondage, Discipline, Sadism, and Masochism.

 

It is a story about two consenting adults who venture into the relationship of a Dominant Daddy/little girl.  

 

If you do not fully understand the dynamics of this type of lifestyle I can only inform you that this story has nothing to do with incest, nor are the characters role playing / age playing in any way. It is a relationship where they practice total power exchange in and out of the bedroom on a 24/7 basis.  

 

If any of what you have read so far freaks you out in any way, then I must warn you now...this story may not be for you.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35176 Read Count: 172103
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2016 Updated: 28 May 2016
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh wow lots of rules!

I don't  know about the choosing friends one. Lol

and that belt! 

 

Thank yiu 

 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 May 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh good about the viagra

i had the same thought 

lit was weird

thanks

Summary:

Prompt: #46: Pleasure/Pain. E/B. Bella is tiny. Like, 5ft tall on a good day. Edward is at least 6'2. The height difference is a turn on for them both. She loves looking up at her big strong man. He loves protecting his little girl. Problem is, Bella's tiny everywhere. Edward has trouble fitting inside her. Maybe there are a few tears. It hurts so good.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12462 Read Count: 7044
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2016 Updated: 12 Mar 2016
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Too Busy Being Yours (To Fall For Somebody New)

That was amazing 

I've never read a kissing scene that long

phew

 

is this fir a contest? Where did the prompt come from ? 

Thank yiu 



Author's Response:

I cannot begin to tell you how long it took me to write that kissing scene. It was actually split into three parts and extensive research was put into making it just right :P 

It wasn't for a contest, but early last year there was a kink challenge put out for people to request writers to write stories based on prompts. It didn't really take off, but there were so many intersting prompts that I couldn't help but write them anyway. I have a list on my facebook page: Welcome2myworldxoxo of all the prompts I want to write where you can request which one you want to see first

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: This is My Hell

I missed you! 

Thank you great chapter



Author's Response:

I missed all of you too! It's been a lot of traveling and family stuff that has kept me away, but I'm doing my best to continue updating.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 08 May 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Confessions

Thank you 



Author's Response:

No - thank you for the time you took to not only read, but also to leave me kind words in review,

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

I really like the pace of things 

so enjoying this story

thank you 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad. I tried to make the pace more realistic so that there would be the time to build the trust again and really get to know each other. Thank you for the continued reviews.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

Wow big steps in heart and mind 

woo



Author's Response:

Haha that might just be an understatement! ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Fists and Fur

Thank you!

well dwarf has his answer about how he feels about changing Bella.



Author's Response:

Exactly. When it comes down it he will not live without her. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Pendulum

I'm really interested on where you'll take this

i like the idea of Bella getting pissed and standing up for herself

thank you 



Author's Response:

Hi there: I'm so glad you're giving this story a chance. :) I appreciate the time you are taking to read and review and look forward to hearing more from you soon.

 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Pixie versus the Kitten

I like this idea

edward won't be able to help himself and he'll open them all even if he resists at first

thank you 



Author's Response:

Haha - you're definitely right about that. And what Bella has in mind will definitely intrigue him even further. She's going to surprise him yet again. ;)

 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

Oh god don't keave it there!! Lol

youre killing me! More please



Author's Response:

So the "torture device" chapter is killing you to not know more, huh? Haha, don't worry. I'm posting a few more chapters today. :) I'm thrilled you're enjoying it. Thank you for continuing to read and review. I appreciate it so much.

 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

Well a lot going on there.

Rose sure will be humbled to see Bella has a cut representing her too.

This shows the typical trust the Cullen's have in Alice and her visions. 

Thank you

 



Author's Response:

I think it will definitely shock the hell out of Rose, but I also don't think it will thaw her out right away. Bella definitely has her own plans for how to deal with Rosalie, and yes, I snickered a lot when writing out her plan and then laughed out loud when I actually to Rose's reactions. I also found your comment interesting about the typical trust the Cullens have in Alice's visions, because Rose did question her motives. Honestly, I wasn't expecting that at all as the family always just completely relies on both Alice and Edward's gifts for what they need to do as a family. So when Rose burst out with her doubt I was caught completely off guard, and yet it made perfect sense to me as well. Sorry if that all sounds a bit strange since I'm speaking about it as if I am not the one that wrote it, but the story often takes me in a completely different direction than I planned. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for the review.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Skipping Rocks

It seems Jacob is a friend without other complications at the moment.

He did come across as being a little smitten. And I'm assuming he is not a wolf as yet.

im glad she is standing up for herself again.

thank you 



Author's Response:

He is a friend, but is smitten. I was never a love triangle fan though, so Bella makes it pretty clear (well after it's pointed out to her that Jacob wants more than friendship) to him that nothing will happen between them. ;)  Doesn't mean he'll get along any better with Edward though. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

I like that Bella will continue to needle Rose. 

She gave the Cullen's a lot to think about 

thank you 



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm not sure that she will ever completely stop needling Rose now that she knows how easily she can do it. I find it hilarious.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

I think you did a great job on these tricky conversations 

thank you



Author's Response:

Thanks. Each of these characters has a lot to say that has never been said, or at least never heard (as in Edward's refusal to really listen to Bella). I am proud of Bella for making sure she doesn't allow herself to just fall in with the Cullens so easily again. This time they both get a voice in the relationship or there is nothing to save.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Moves and Countermoves

She is a clever young woman



Author's Response:

I agree and always felt she was in the books too, but that it wasn't utilized as well as it could've been. I mean she so obviously realized the Cullen family was something different than human almost the first moment she laid eyes on them. And then she just let him leave her? Never made sense to me.

 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

I enjoyed the underwear conversation very much

what I did miss and. Was waiting for was Edwards reaction to Charlie remembering broken Bella. It seems odd he woulnt acknowledge or react to those thoughts 

especially as you described Charlie remembering 

but lved it overall thank you 



Author's Response:

I appreciate you pointing that out, because it probably does seem a bit odd that Edward doesn't show more of a reaction - even if it was just internally. However, you have to realize that he has already been beating himself up for what's he done to Bella not just since he left, but in reality since he first met her. In his mind, he agrees with everything Charlie is feeling and doesn't blame Charlie's reaction to him at all. Also, he doesn't "hear" Charlie all that well. He gets bits and pieces, but he doesn't get the full emotional onslaught the way he would've if he could hear Charlie clearly. Still, I love your noticing that detail and commenting on it. It allows me to further explain things that sometimes make complete sense in my head, but don't necessarily always translate. ;) Look forward to hearing more from you soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

I loved to hear from Esme

thank you 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I had such writer's block when I originally tried to write this chapter, and I truly believe it was because Esme wanted to be heard. Once I threw my outline out the window and let her speak it just all flowed from there. I didn't even know Bella had the ability to draw until that showed up in the chapter. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Summary: Past Featured Story

ilck

 

Edward Cullen is a probation officer. He is used to handling some of the toughest hardened criminals out there. That is until he meets his new proby...Isabella Swan.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54473 Read Count: 43905
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Apr 2016
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 26 Edward vs. Innocence

I don't ever remember reading a Virginiity taken from behind!

so hot. Great story

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 29: The Epilogue Innocent vs. Guilty vs. Innocent

Thank you 

 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24 He said vs. She said

Thank you 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella had it all, until she lost it. When life offers you a dream so far beyond any of your expectations, is it reasonable to grieve when it comes to an end?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88307 Read Count: 38297
[Report This] Published: 14 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Aug 2016
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Edward is so confused 

my heart breaks for both of them 

thank you



Author's Response: Outtake RPOV I went quietly into the master bedroom, which was in a shambles. Edward told me how Bella had thrown a fit and tossed the room, and he wasn't kidding. A hand mirror was smashed, broken pieces of glass scattered on the dresser and spilling onto the carpet. There were clothes strewn everywhere, the bed linens had been torn off and balled up in a corner. The curtains were hanging askew, and a few pictures were at drunken angles on the wall. Bella was sitting in an armchair, her knees drawn up to her chest, rocking. She was disheveled, tears staining her face as she rolled her desolate eyes to mine. “Bella, you have to listen to me,” I urged. “I was wrong. You know how much I’ve grown to love you, and I’d have to be blind not to see how good you and Edward are together. Don’t give up on yourself. I know shit is hard right now, but you can work through it. Let Edward help you.” “I can’t, Rose,” she sobbed. “I’ll ruin him, like you said in the beginning. You saw it more clearly than even I did. I’m toxic for him. I’m dragging him down, I’m useless!” The idea that she believed that had shame stabbing me in the gut. “No, sweetie. You’re hurting, and that’s okay. But so is Edward. Just hang in there, please?” I wasn’t above begging. “You’re perfect for him, no matter what I said when I met you. You don't have to try to be anybody you’re not. You’re perfect the way you are.” I wanted to help, but it seemed that Edward was right; she was beyond casual help. “You know I don't bullshit, Bella. Just think about it, okay?” I pulled her stiff body into my arms, holding on as tears came to my own eyes. She softened enough to hug me back briefly, then stepped away and sat back in her chair by the window. I sighed heavily, knowing I had failed to fix anything.

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

I don't understand the whole wedding thing 

I think it's inappropriate to have these types of reunions , and conversations at someone's special event.

they should meet just before on neutral ground 

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1017]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
Banner By: CaiteexxGraphics

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 332962
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This is agonising 

like watching a crash you can't turn your head away from 

Bella has real issues but Edward really has no excuse 

he hasn't once asked Bella anything directly 

assume assume assume makes an ass out if you and me! 

I want to grab them both and mediate a sit down.

grrr lol

thanks 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow

 I didn't even know of this 

mum guessing it's Edward who is chemira

othewise Bella would be pushing for more of her dna tests? 

 

Fascinsting hut heartbreaking

what an awful start for them all

thank you 

Summary:

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Banner by CloRodeffer

Photographer Bella Swan loves everything about living in Hawaii. The beach, the surf, the warmth. Everything but the two weeks when Professional Beach Volleyball takes over. Now, she's been cast with the joy of capturing every moment with her camera. Only, a tall, auburn haired player isn't making it easy for her to stay professional. Cannon Couples. UA and MA


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102425 Read Count: 41255
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2016 Updated: 19 Dec 2022
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Was this inspired hy a fb request? 

I saw someone mention the Olympic volleyball comp and fic.

 

anyway that was very rude of Edward 

thank yiu 

Whats Love? by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is the smartest con artist with dark past.  She's tired of the con and wants to go home. Will Edward be what she has been looking for back home in Forks?

Extreme Angst and Tigger’s. 

 

An amazing author and beta wrote a summary of my story that I just had to share here. I really hope she doesn’t mind. PS (MeteorOnAMoonlessNight). 

Another new author with her first fic,  Bella is a hard hearted con artist, 4 times divorced. As things unravel for her in New York, she makes the decision to go back to Forks to start over, moving in with her foster brother Jasper. Flashbacks reveal that this genius has had a tough childhood with both of her parents dying, leading to a disaster of a foster home. She's really just trying to survive in a cruel world.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41336 Read Count: 23136
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2016 Updated: 08 Jun 2017
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank you 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I thought they only  found out when esme told them?

Summary:

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When a mysterious bad boy meets a spoiled princess, is it a recipe for disaster or are they just what the other needs?

*** Mase is Dark, Possessive, and really Cocksure... maybe quite a dick... But I luv him this way!!!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 21481 Read Count: 6478
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2017 Updated: 21 Sep 2020
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Sex

I don’t think I know the answer to that either

lol

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - and Obsessed

Oh wow

lol

didnt see him doing that 

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Intrigued

Bella had trouble escaping I guess lol 

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: ... and Angel

I love the high society boy who turned his back on it and the high society girl suffocating 

bribg it on! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review !!! I am hoping to have chapter 3 up Monday!!! 

Summary:

Love That Dirty Water Banner

Edward is the new pitcher for the Boston Red Sox in 2013.  He hears the voice of an angel as she sings the National Anthem.  He is immediately smitten.  He asks the manager to find out who she is so he can find out more about her.   Bella is a vocal student at Berklee.  How will she balance college and being the girlfriend of a major-league baseball player?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6484 Read Count: 2316
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2017 Updated: 06 Jul 2020
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Game Day, Date Night

Thank you 

Summary:

ATTT

 

This is my extended imagination running wild on the basis of Twilight. You know how it starts, but in this tale Edward is a more possessive and a bit violent because be I am obsessed with a darker, and dominant Edward. Not always the gentleman. Warning! OOC, AU, Etc...

 

Thanks to  SnoopyLover60, who asked to have this story back, BitterHarpy for helping keep me crusing along and guiding me and EdwardsFirstKiss who helped make me readable... Love ya, darlins!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35547 Read Count: 13713
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2019 Updated: 21 Nov 2021
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 8: The Aftermath

Thank you 

Summary:

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Bella and Edward don't speak to each other after the van incident, yet their paths still converge. When Bella is attacked by James' coven in her own home, she is rescued by the Cullen family in the nick of time. Now, Bella must come to terms with her new life as a vampire and her growing attraction to Edward. AU.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90206 Read Count: 6456
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2020 Updated: 01 Jun 2020
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Cogs in the Machine of Destiny

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 12 May 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Rain Sows a Promise

Thank you 

Summary:

Bella unearths a long buried truth that sends her halfway across the world to reclaim her heart. New moon alternate ending.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7879 Read Count: 4048
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2020 Updated: 24 Jun 2020
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Waiting

She is so lost 

 I hope bleeding 9Now the road will help Edward find her 

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Location

On edge of my seat

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Preparations

I wonder what Alice is not saying 

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 3: The Call

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Nothing Left

Oh I’m interested to see Bella’s plan

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Remember

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Everything

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Darkness

What is she thinking? 

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Darkness

What is she thinking? 

Thank you 

Summary:

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Summary: Edward Cullen, the Grand Duke and second son of the King, must find a bride. Isabella Sinclair, daughter of Countess Catherine and Duke Charles, was born out of wedlock and has neither titles nor land to her name. Could she be the bride Edward's looking for? But how is Isabella to marry a man of the royal family without a proper dowry? Plot adopted from the Twi-Fic Plot Bunny Farm on Facebook and credit goes to Nicole M Santiago


To give you some context, this story takes place in an imaginary country and the titles (royal, noble, gentle) are a mix of different monarchies.

This is the rank of title for this story:

Royalty

King/Queen - His/Her Majesty

Crown Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Grand Duke/Duchess - His/Her Royal Highness

Grand Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Duke/Duchess - His/Her Grace

Nobility

Marquess/Marchioness - His/Her Grace

Earl/Countess - His/Her Excellency

Viscount/Viscountess - Lord/Lady

Baron/Baroness - Lord/Lady

Gentry

Lord/Lady

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70918 Read Count: 31262
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2020 Updated: 21 Oct 2021
Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh I hope the king inky wishes for Edward's happiest and grants permission 

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Congratulations 

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh we were hoping for that

what is the next move then ?

 Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh we were hoping for that

what is the next move then ?

 Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward reaction to the quandary will confuse and hurt Bella I think

thank You 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Woo hoo

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh wonderful!

 Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh the plot thickens 

what is she up to

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 09 May 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thank you 

she is brave allowing them to see her alone

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Omg fantastic!

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really like this story thank you for updating 

I really hope they were married.

then they can marry and stick it to the family 

 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

So exciting 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thank you 

im glad Bella is pissed

i hooe she gives them hell

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh Edward dramatic much!

I bet she does it

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh Edward dramatic much!

I bet she does it

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I wish Edward success in his endeavour 

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm so glad I saw this update on fb. I missed my alert

interes development 

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm so glad I saw this update on fb. I missed my alert

interes development 

thank you

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Oh dear

thank you 

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2021 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

These kids deserve a break

i hope it's soon

 

thank you