Reviews by goldseadragon
John Doe by Lolo Eighty-Four Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

He scrunches up his nose. "You know, you seemed to like me more when you thought I was dying." I gasp, shocked and embarrassed. "I didn't think you were dying." He's smiling. Like a big toothy smile. Ugh! I can already tell he likes to mess with people. "No, but you sure thought I was in a coma and had amnesia." Dammit! He had me there. BPOV. AH. No Angst


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20465 Read Count: 6777
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2012 Updated: 27 Dec 2012
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Regarding your glee at the naming...not sure if this is widely known or if it's only an East Coast thing, but there's a serial killing nurse named Cullen from New Jersey. When Twilight got big, at first I thought his case had come up again or something, because I hadn't realized the book used the same name.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"my coma boo" is just dying to be made into a parody song, a la Weird Al.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I hope Edward redeems himself next time, because he's kinda a dick in this chapter.

A Yuletide Romance by Lurker123 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A Yuletide Romance

Best friends Bella and Edward discover that when they "just go with it" the holiday season is filled with sweet-tasting citrusy goodness. AH. Loosely inspired by the 1990s television program Northern Exposure, with each chapter representing the equivalent of a one-hour, stand-alone show within a season's storyline.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Holiday, Pure Romance, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32794 Read Count: 1477
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2012 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story! Would love to see more if you have the time.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!

More Than Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bestselling author, Edward Cullen is newly divorced and sworn off women until Bella Swan comes into his life and turns everything upside down. However, his ex is still pining after him and will do all she can to get him back. Can Edward and Bella have their happily ever after?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85675 Read Count: 43885
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Tanya needs to die. People like that never stop.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I always enjoy a psycho Tanya. She just suits the role.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Can't wait to find out what Charlie supposedly did...I bet Renee lied.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Okay, dude needs bars on the windows and a rabid guard dog. Ex be crazy.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Time for Alice to get the hell out of town!

Regarding Tanya et al, I bet Bella knows someone who knows someone who can take the thing to the place, if ya know what I mean.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I cannot wait until these bitches get what's coming to them.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Looks like a cut and paste mishap up there....Charlie is an honorary member of the member?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Their voices once sang in harmony, but a misunderstanding pulled them apart. Can two broken hearts be healed and sing a new song? AH M for future lemons. E/B A/J Em/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51857 Read Count: 32104
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 21 Jul 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Edward should not have put himself in that situation, innocent or not. You don't take an unknown underage person into private locations that lack witnesses. What if she was a fame whore and decided to cry rape? It would have been her word against his.

Raising Ashlynn by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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thanks to teamalltwilight and le crepuscule for the awesome banners!

 

Bella meets a man who in one night leaves her body humming for more. What should she do when the next time she sees him, he is dropping off his daughter, begging her to keep her. With an odd sense of obligation, a person who never saw herself as a parent—is now moving across country with a child who thinks Bella is her mother.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30699 Read Count: 31986
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, Bella's doing a bank robber! Ha!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814518
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

That's from Coyote Ugly. TBH, I didn't think the main character in that movie was all that hot. The brunette with the mean right hook was smokin' though.

Burned (Two-shot) by sa-ma Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

There is no such thing as getting burned in love, for those who get burned are either blessed or cursed.

Jasper/Edward - Non-slash

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8975 Read Count: 1271
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Feb 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Poor Jasper! A scumbag E & B makes for interesting reading. Jasper was NUTS to let them get away with it, though. I'd have bought out a two-page ad in the New York Times.



Author's Response:

Your review made me lol :). Thank you.

Isabella Volturi by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After being left by Edward, I couldn't stand the thought of him controlling me even in his absence. I admit it was an act of defiance, but it was a decision that brought me more happiness than I'd ever thought I'd experience. New Moon AU/Canon

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93367 Read Count: 39594
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love that killing Victoria was underwhelming; she doesn't deserve a big dramatic battle. Just pop her head off like a dandelion and boom--done.



Author's Response:

I totally agree with you and that's why it went so easy :-) And I don't think that even Victoria would be able to go against The Volturi and cause a big scene :-)

A Noble Heart by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Carlisle is the Viceroy on the island of Pushla, happy to be out of sight and out of mind for his nephew, the soon to be crowned King Edward II. His solitary life is changed when he meets young Isabella and he must find way into her noble heart.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Angst, Drama, Historical, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wanna read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16159 Read Count: 1190
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2013 Updated: 20 Feb 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Douchebag King Edward! He's easily believable, perhaps because it's a common royal name and I've read way too many crappy historical romances.

Summary:

Something is happening to me and I'm not exactly sure what it is. Let's go back shall we? It all started when my dumb ass mother, Renee, left my father shortly after I was born. The f*@^ing bi*@h ruined my life before it even began. Now, I don't remember what happened when I was a toddler, but when I started kindergarten, that's when it all started going downhill.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23297 Read Count: 2175
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Your chapter six is blank and seems to have disappeared from the drop-down menu. Strange!



Author's Response: I am fixing the problem as we speak! Sorry it too so long....but it's been a long weekend! Thank you for letting me know!! Tess

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A homeless boy, hitch-hiking in the snow, a woman on her own, running from an abusive relationship. Is she crazy to stop, or are their paths destined to cross? Can this mismatched pair find succour and salvation together, or will their pasts intrude and drive them apart?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119972 Read Count: 27846
[Report This] Published: 27 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Apr 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Job

Yay for Edward! A hot guy who can cook....jackpot!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Joined

God they are so damned sweet!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Izzy's a successful woman in her own right. She's also a Hollywood heiress whose life gets flipped upside down as a result of an unfortunate event. Tired of the paparazzi, she flees from the limelight in search of who she is on her own. Sometimes you have to leave the world of make believe behind to find a snowmobiling prince you never knew you needed.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79271 Read Count: 44106
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2013 Updated: 22 Apr 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: The Trouble With Women *THE CORRECT CHAPTER*

Holy christmas, Alice acts like a manic depressive.



Author's Response:

Summary: Past Featured Story

She's lost her muse. He's missing inspiration. When Bella and Edward meet, will they be able to heal the tattered pieces of their hearts? Or will they forever be alone?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131985 Read Count: 92180
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Happy 83rd birthday!

*ducks and runs*

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Hope RL stops kicking you around! *sends good vibes*

Give Me Love by bee1982 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 158]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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One shy virgin Edward, one confident Bella who wants to help Edward out. When sexual boundaries are crossed between these two friends, what will happen? (DRABBLE FIC Updated daily.)    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19286 Read Count: 50602
[Report This] Published: 11 Jul 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I vote for natural talent...thinking this sweetie Edward is a total liar makes my tummy hurt.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I hope these two sort themselves out so he doesn't actually sleep with Tanya.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

O I C WAT U DID THAR

Enough by brown2eyes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 37]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bolt of lightening over a beach with the title Enough

Bella is the caretaker of her group of friends. They take advantage of that and treat her like a doormat. Her low self-esteem has her scared she will lose them if she speaks up. One day Bella had enough and snapped. Now she is missing. Can they find her? A/H. Canon couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Friendship
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103037 Read Count: 36117
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Unfortunately, the "not accepting open drinks" rule does not go away once you're a grown up. This summer a buddy of mine took a mixed drink from a neighboring group during a concert tailgating party, and based on his subsequent behavior we're pretty sure they gave him hallucinogens. How sad is that, when you're in your forties and STILL can't trust people not to do that dumb shit?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23448
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I feel terrible for real Bella. This guy forced her to have kids when she was clear that she didn't want any, then she suffered from serious mental illness, so she's killed off and Edward gets a "better" version of her? Harsh.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 10 May 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Even if Alice wanted Bella to wear newer clothing, she had no right to throw Bella's old clothing away. Just pack it in boxes and store it in the attic, for heaven's sake!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I wish they would just kill Renee. It would be easy for the Cullens to sabotage her car or something. She's a waste of oxygen.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Ignore me for a second while I vent. You are a fantastic writer, but this "you have to go to school until the second you turn 18" thing really sticks in my craw. It makes no sense and I can't get past how artificial it seems. People graduate early all the time, and there's no way this would ever hold up to even the slightest legal challenge. It's frustrating because it feels like a big wart on an otherwise amazing story.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Good lord, was Charlie trying to die so that Renee would stay in jail? The Cullens could have handled her on their own, and now Bella will feel even more guilty and worthless.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

So quick to think the worst of Bella, you Cullens! She's just curious, I bet.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love that Alice screwed things up with Edward! Her visions always going picture perfect seemed unrealistic to me. Such tiny spur-of-the-moment thoughts and actions can knock a situation so off kilter, and this story shows the truth of that.

It's a shame that Bella feels like she's being used, though. I bet that will be an issue later.



Author's Response: As another reviewer pointed out, Edward may be 50 years old or so but he's still 17 and how many 17 year olds would stand a stranger coming in and displacing them in the family without throwing some sort of tantrum? Really, with Bella's history she couldn't believe anything else. You will see other effects from her upbringing too later.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Is it realistic that she would have to go to school even though she already graduated? The idea absolutely horrifies me. In her place I would have just become a wanderer or something.



Author's Response: In the UK our rules say you attend school until a certain age rather than passing certain tests. I needed an excuse for Bella to not only HAVE to attend school to start but a way out for her to leave later (not telling you how though)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I'd love to see Renee in jail and finally see consequences for her behavior. I really hope she doesn't weasel out of this one.



Author's Response: It may not be quite so easy! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*desperate flailing*

Noooooo, evil cliffie!



Author's Response: *Sits on Goldseadragon to prevent her hurting herself* (Rather sexist of me to presume you are female....) Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I'm surprised Bella isn't throwing a fit yet. There will always be a reason to interrupt them, always a crisis to be handled...she and Edward should run away for a decade or so to make sure they will be left alone.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 72371
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

This is one of the most logical and emotionally healthy discussions of the "changing Bella" issue I've seen in the fandom. Nicely done.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 ~ I'm a Detective

Yikes! Bella's bedroom stalker has been reading her private notes.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 ~ He’s a Comedian

I thought for sure the cologne guy was a wolf!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Has that ever worked, anywhere? Somebody stares at their date, then looks at their passive-aggressive server, realizes their destiny, and pushes their date aside to fall into the server's arms after tossing aside the tray of drinks?

Didn't think so.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Why does Bella seem to think they should get an award for leaving a tip, like it's an original idea their drunken brains thought up? If they got a new server, the old one's behavior isn't his fault, and he shouldn't be penalized for her actions. They left twenty percent, which is considered appropriate for great service. Okay, sorry. Rant over. Once a server, always a server!

The story isn't suffering for your block. Everything seems to be running smoothly. If you need more time between chapters, do what you have to do!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change.  Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress.  Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?

(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)


Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159748
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2014 Updated: 16 Mar 2014
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I hope Jessica the lazy ass gets written up!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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NM-AU. Edward is gone and Bella learns about a family secret and herself. Rated M for language, violence and adult content. Only read if over 18

 

Banner by Astrid Greeneyes!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 80084 Read Count: 24103
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2015
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This story is fun! Don't worry so much about the accent...people can hear it in their head, once they get into the story and know the background of the characters.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's weird that Bella us suddenly speaking in an Irish accent...is she supposed to be a reincarnation of the great grandmother, and it's starting to bleed through? Otherwise it would be crazy to pick up an accent that fast.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ha, I spoke too soon about the accent! I bet she is Elizabeth!

I hope she gets carted before the Volturi for not being allowed to know about vampires, then schools them all with her awesome witch powers.

So did the Laurent thing really happen? It was hard to tell if her being there was a hallucination through the tapestry or not, even though Jake pointed out that the pack did actually kill him.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This is so cool, I'm starting to think I'm psychic! Ha! Okay next chapter...*presses fingers to temples in deep thought*...I get sent a check for a million dollars!

I hope Bella gets to be the one to off Victoria. And, if the witches are basically immortal, then she wouldn't need to be turned, right?

Buried by ericastwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Summary: Past Featured Story

buried

His reality was made of nightmares. Hers were plagued by them. Can she conquer her fears in time? Can he protect her?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72544 Read Count: 27017
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2014 Updated: 02 Jul 2014
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I think the wolf is my favorite character. I hope they adopt him and make him furry and healthy and rub his belly. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This Edward is such a douche that I'm still cheering Bella on. I'm also pissed off at Mike. If he thinks Edward deserved this, then he shouldn't have clued him in beforehand. Dumbass!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is all Mike's fault. If he would have kept his giant flapping gums shut, Bella would have been out the window and gone. If I was Bella, I'd make sure that Mike's boss knows he's got a history of blabbermouth behavior. That's not especially desirable in an FBI agent!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward is a complete douchenozzle. This carrying on about how she must not have ever had sex and her child was immaculately conceived...does it not register within his egotistical skull that he's mocking a dead man? Bella isn't a bitter divorcee, she's a mourning widow. Edward might have intended only to tease her about being uptight, but the wording he used and the direction he took it is incredibly cruel and hateful.

Summary: Past Featured Story

I was irredeemable. I was lost, and then ... she found me. A story of discovering yourself ... a story of resumption. OOC vampires, Canon couples. Edward x Bella. Rated for language and adult situations.

 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74961 Read Count: 22725
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2015 Updated: 09 Oct 2015
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter-27: Game Plan

I love this story. The site is seriously screwing up your spacing, though.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Coughing really does f*ck you up. When my gram was near the end she was cautioned about keeping her coughing under control, because her years of bone loss meant she was at risk for breaking ribs by coughing too hard.



Author's Response:

Yes, it certainly does, and it can be miserable when you're as sick as Edward is.  In his case, he needs to cough to keep his lungs clear, but it can do all sorts of damage to his healing wounds.  Not a good situation at all.  :(

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

You could always put the warning at the end. That way, people could scroll to the bottom without reading to check for a warning if they want to, and anyone who doesn't want spoilers can just dive right in.



Author's Response:

LOL!!  Interesting suggestion, because that's exactly what I'd decided to do!  Hopefully that will keep everyone happy!  :)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

You are either an amazing researcher, or have been through this yourself. Kudos if it's the former, and *hugs* if it's the latter.



Author's Response:

Believe it or not, it's the former.  I work in clinical trials, so in a sense I'm "writing what I know", but it's not from direct experience.  Thank you for the awesome compliment!  :)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

Thank you for using "nauseated" properly. Pet peeve of mine.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

So sorry to hear about your loss. *hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kinds words.  I really appreciate them.  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 7 Part 2

Alice stared at who? Are we supposed to think this is Edward? She doesn't seem to recognize him.

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 109592
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

My first impression of Edward is that he's a whiny little brat. I hope to develop a better opinion later!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

How sad, to think they'll never see each other again. :(

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Edward is a controlling, abusive dirtbag manchild. Anyone who pouts because they believe a gift should be appreciated according to its pricetag is a rotten shell themselves. I hope he gets poisoned.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I would have thrown Edward's present into the trash. She has infinite patience with this jerk.

Buying Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2001]
Summary:

Buying Love

Edward Masen is the most popular escort working for Esme Platt. He’s the best at what he does and no woman ever goes unsatisfied. He’s smooth, sexy, dangerous and in control. In many ways. His employer holds him to this job due to the debt he needs to repay her. He’s a slave to the job in more ways than one. He lives in the best apartments, dresses in the nicest clothes and drives the best cars. All of it, though, can disappear in a moment’s notice all because Esme knows Edward’s secret. 

Isabella Swan is an heiress to the Swan fortune. Her father, Charlie Swan, owns a string of high end hotels and resorts all over the world. Bella, as her friends call her, is also going through a nasty divorce from her husband, Riley. He cheated on Bella with the limo driver, the gardener, the pool boy and Bella’s assistant, Maggie. She’s bitter and angry, hating all men and abhorring her soon-to-be ex-husband. 

Charlie is having a grand opening for his newest hotel in Seattle, Swan Towers. Bella is expected there, with a date for the lavish party. Rose, Bella’s best friend, suggested that she use a male escort, handing her Esme Platt’s card. Bella calls and asks for the best. Edward arrives, all suave and debonair, but detached and cold. However, the attraction between the two is palpable. 

 

Will they succumb to their attraction? Will Edward pull Bella down the dark path in his need for control? Or will Bella be his light? Or is all of this a ploy for Buying Love?

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Spicy
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 101 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 196696 Read Count: 307437
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2015 Updated: 30 Sep 2016
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

More, more, more! The eagerness and the horror are fighting each other in my brain!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 57

It was pretty clear that Bella picked this facility for its good reputation and high standard of care. I'm so glad to see their security is also top-notch. /s

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

I'm thinking a Seven Pounds ending for Esme. Parcel out her body parts to people who need them. Keep her alive as long as possible by taking minor pieces first, so the most vital parts stay fresh.

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

If Bella figures out who is in the nursing home, she certainly has the cash to move Edward's mom someplace nicer. I hope her inappropriate nosiness holds out a bit longer!

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 89

Lassiter should spend some time in prison himself, since he doesn't believe men can be raped. I'm sure it would be a useful education for his bigoted ignorance.

Six by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sixth sense: a special ability to know something that cannot be learned by using the five senses. Humans use 10% of their brain, but it's been proven that those with a sixth sense use more. Some wish to harness that power. With a target on us, sixxers are hunted as we try to stay hidden, blending in with the average world around us...when we are anything but average.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 151831 Read Count: 41062
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2016 Updated: 23 Aug 2017
Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella reminds me of the movie Jumper, which is funny b/c KStew was in it! Was that intentional?



Author's Response:

No, not at all. lol I've never seen or heard of it. heh Cool. :)

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

If Bella could hone her skill to jump through time as well as from place to place, she could save Mr. Jackson!