Penname: Chocolate lover 82 [Real name: ChocolateLover82
Member Since: 10 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Lover of a lot of things, not just chocolate :-)


Besides here, you can find my stories on Fanfiction.net and on FictionPad.


Forbidden Muse:


- This story was originally written as an entry for the Pick a Pic Challenge and was inspired by a beautiful banner made by the talented Lindz :-) You can see the banner in the story.


- Pics of the Montblanc Greta Garbo Special Edition fountain pen mentioned in Chapter 3 can be found here and here.


- The wonderful phoebes.promise reviewed Forbidden Muse for the Indie Fic Pimp's 'Completed Fic of the Week' (05/09 - 05/15) :-) You can read it here.


- The pretty ladies at The Perv Pack's Smut Shack rec'd 'Forbidden Muse' in their Lemon Report on June 14th :-) You can read it here.


Second Chances:


- This O/S was written as an entry for the Fic A Pic Contest. All stories were inspired by a particular pic, which you can find here.


The Longest Day:


- This O/S was written as an anon entry for the Jukebox Contest and was inspired by the song 'Magic' by Colbie Caillat, which you can find here.


Warm Nights:


- This O/S was inspired by the song 'Sand In My Shoes' by Dido, found here.


- The lovely girls at The Perv Pack's Smut Shack rec'd 'Warm Nights' as part of their Lemon Report on April 5th. You can check it out here.


Little Buttons:


You can find all the pics in the link at the bottom of the profile.


- Chapter 1: Sewing Box.


- Chapter 3: ‘Dying Gladiator’ by Pierre Julien.


- Chapter 6: Brooch.


- Chapter 9: Jardin des Plantes.


- Chapter 10: Key Pendant.


- Chapter 11: Les Jardins Plein Ciel and Theatre du Garde.


- Chapter 18: La Tour Eiffel.


- Chapter 19: Carrousel du Louvre.


- Chapter 20: Grand Palais, Dress and Charm Bracelet.


- Chapter 21: Headband and Starry Night Over the Rhone.


- Chapter 24: Charlie's House, Sue's Dress, The Hall at Fauntleroy and Marshall Park.


- Chapter 26: Bow Tie Pin, Bella's Dress, and Reception Hall.


- Chapter 27: Cufflinks.


- The pretty girls at The Perv Pack's Smut Shack rec'd 'Little Buttons' as part of their Lemon Report on February 7th. :-) You can check it out here.


- The always so lovely girls at the Perv Pack's Smut Shack rec'd LB as part of their Team WussPerv rec on March 26th. You can check out their lovely words here.


- The pretty Ange de l'aube made a beautiful banner for 'Little Buttons' and a said some lovely words on her blog on May 30th. You can check it out here and here as well.


Always You:


- This O/S was inspired by a particular pic, which can be found here.


Between Black and White:


- This O/S was written as an entry for the 'Beyond the Pale 2' Contest. It was inspired by this particular pic.


Thank You, Stranger:


- This was my entry for the 'Twilight Post Secret Challenge' and was based on this particular Post Secret. It also won First place Judges' vote, Third place Public vote, Best Use of Secret and the What Happens Next Award. Thank you to Mcgt for hosting it and to all the judges: Burntcore, Babylopez2008, BlackJackLily and MellyB6 as well as to everyone who read and voted. :-D


- Also, the talented FrozenSoldier made a pretty banner for this story, which you can find in the story. :-)


Down The Hall:


- This was my entry for the 'Season of Our Discontent Anonymous Angst Contest'. It was inspired by this particular pic. Thank you to 22Blue and Katinki for hosting this and to all the judges and people who read and voted.


You can also check all the pics mentioned above in this site, just choose the folder of the story you're looking for.


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Reviews by Chocolate lover 82
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315694
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

I really think Bella should leave town, she has nothing to lose and no reason to stay, until now... but then again, Edward wants to get the hell out too, so maybe there is a way. Fuck them all.

She is so much better than any of them, and so is Edward, they just got caught up in this clusterfuck.

They are so scare having these feeling for each other, can't wait to see how they're gonna manage to be in a relationship or whatever the hell it is they're gonna be in.

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

aaawwww, nice. Finally they showed the world they are taken! The fact that SHE made the grand gesture first only shows that he was even more scare than her, so cute.

Theay really should care fuck about what others say, they'll talk eitherway, at least this will give them something to talk about.

Loved it

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

Well, with everything Bella has been through, no wonder she's expecting the worse. Poor Edward though, maybe he wanted to say I love you :/

I hope she doesn't do anything with James, and that Edward shows up and kicks his ass :)

And Rosalies is a bitch, lies is all she says.

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Echo

Wow, they are in true hell. Of course they love each other and they suffer because of this. Stubborn asses, lol.

So only one more chapter? :( Well, I can't wait for the talk :)

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

Aaawwww, and it's over :(

Beautiful ending, jst perfect for the journey the traveled.

Thanks and good luck

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195557
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I Would Die for You

A married Edward Cullen? wow. He does have a lot to consider though, his lifestyle is not exactly the most normal out there, but he is commited to mae it work, so that helps.

And my God is Demetri a monster or what? he sure deserves what's coming to him.

Edward will be beyond himself once Bella leaves to go to her father, hell sure break loose. Hope nothing bad happens to her.

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Vacations and Nightmares

Edward can be so cute, lol. All the inner monologue about the Cleaning Agent?? LMAO. And Bella's reasoning was just great, she really needs a man, not a superhero. Hell, even the demon was laughing. She's making him vulnerable, but it feels so good, and it maes him HAPPY. like, real happiness and all. Just perfect.

And now with Charlie, Jesus, poor guy, that Demetri guy sure is a monster. This will destroy Edward now, since she will go to her dad. Will he let the monster take full control? 'cause that will be a bloodbath if we ever saw one. And there will be no escape for Esme, I get Carlisle loves her, but come on. And I hate that he says Bella is Edward's weakness, she kind of is, but also she's his best strength and wouldn't Carlisle do the same if it were Esme in that position? isn't Esme Carlisle's weakness too? I just think he's a hypocrite with this.

Nice chapter :)

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Russian Tea Party in Tokyo

Good Lord, Edward is right, this trip will mar the beginning of the end. They'll get Bella when he leaves. He sure will kill Riley for this.

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Friends in Unlikely Places

OMG, he has to find her in time, he has to :'( that poor baby and all the stress he/she's going through.

Don't even want to know what he'll do to Esme now. Jeez, woman, big mistake.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Rescue: Part Two – Reunions

OMG, can't wait to read the next chapter! It sure will be a long drive but Edward has to get over himself and man up! He's gonna be a dad and that was gonna happen even if Bella was not kidnapped. I get his fears, but come on, this baby pretty much has been saving Bella's life for the past 6 months.

And now the others are still out there, Jeez. Hope they are not in the road close to them, I can totally see a car chase or something and with Bella preggers, yeah, that could end very bad.

I really can't wait to read the next chapter. Can't wait, lol.

Summary:

The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement.  FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.

 

 

Return of the King Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15830
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet Jesus, this guy is so fucking sick, sick, sick. And I wanna read more, more, more of this. Very intriguing indeed.

So interesting to read what his motivations are and how is he doing this. It should be one hell of a case to solve for the team.

Also, there seems to be some chemistry between the canon couples already, although I don't know if some of them are already together.

You got me hooked already with this one :)

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106920
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Nice start :)

Edward is already feeling more for her, isn't he? and also Bella, but she doesn't seem to notice what it is yet.

Should be interesting to read considering that it will be frowned upon for them to be together.

Can't wait for more :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101884
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Chocolate lover 82 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Good God, I feel so bad for Bella. I can't even imagine being with someone for so many years, having his kids and then he just... dies. How do you redefine the sketch of your life?

 

So hard to even think about it. :-(

 

And I gotta say that even though I know Alice and Renee have the best intentions, I'm not too happy about them. In grief, we all mourne differently and at different paces. For some it takes months to get to a good place, for others it takes years and sadly, for few it takes forever. So it seems like they think they know better, ya know? Like 'it's time to move on'. Well, we each know when it's time, no way in rushing it. Again, their hearts are in the right place, but they truly don't know. They just don't. What if Jasper or Charlie died like that? Could they honestly say that they would be able to move on?

 

I hope they back off a little and let Bella mourne in peace. I do think that being there for her is great and even getting her to make more friends is ideal, but men? I just don't think so. Not yet, at least.

 

Still, you're showing a beautiful and sad story and I'm looking forward to read more of Bella's journey.