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Married to the Mob by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

MOTM

 

Edward Cullen is the heir-apparent to the most infamous crime families in Chicago. He was notorious for his time with his enemies, his many dates and his ruthless skill in the board room, the front for the illicit dealings of the Cullen Crime Consortium. However, to take over the family, his father reminded him about the stipulation that Edward needed to be married. Edward hated that stipulation, but he agreed to it and he had less than a year to make it a reality.

 

 

 

Isabella Swan is a struggling graduate student, working as a waitress in a local diner, The Swan Dive. On a chance meeting, Edward finds Bella to be enchanting and the perfect woman to marry. He makes an indecent proposal, suggesting marriage and paying for Bella’s tuition, and then some. Will Bella accept his proposal, with the possibility of having her dreams come true, but married to a sexy, enigmatic rich businessman? Or will she figure out the truth, that her future-husband is Married to the Mob?

 

Banner by Clo! Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 221384 Read Count: 146351
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2017 Updated: 16 Jan 2018
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Date: 20 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I really liked the addition of Anthony and Nina with their kids.  The sexy bachelorette party was fun reading all about the characters banter and teasing.

I'm really anxious to read the teacher/student sexy times, the wedding and the honeymoon.    

But I am NOT looking forward to any angst.  I can handle violence, but angst??  ugh...  just upsets my stomach.....

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Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm glad that Alice is getting better.  Stephan and Royce are really causing lots of crap.

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

It seems like Marcus would want to team up with Edward's crew to go against Stephan and Royce.  hmmm....  I wonder why that wasn't brought up.   I feel so bad about Demetri.  He seemed really sweet in his conversations with Bella.

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Date: 27 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

All of that stress would be so horrible.  They won't have to wait for a war.  The bad guys are just taking the Cullens out 1 at a time.

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I don't think Rose thought she would be treated like that.  She was kind of dumb and naive about everything.

I loved the teacher/student sexy time.  ;)

 

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Date: 23 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hate bullies and rapists.  ugh.....

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Date: 10 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

:)   Excellent

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Date: 29 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I don't know how Edward and Bella don't change their names and run  away and hide after all of that bullshit.  

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Date: 06 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Everyone seems to be helping in a loving way except Alice.  She was just a little too pushy for me.  I hope Bella and Edward stand their ground on all their wedding wants etc.... with her.

 

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Date: 08 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I cried feeling so sad for Felix.

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Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I knew they shouldn't have done those bachelor and bachlorette parties......  Dam!   

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Date: 22 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

How horrible.......

The Undecided by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary:

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Bella thought she knew what her life looked like. It was normal teenage angst and high school boredom. However, one night proves her very wrong and she realizes everyone has been lying through their teeth. Bella isn't normal. Bella is a Witch. And she has a very important choice to make. B/E, Mature Content, AU/A(H)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107893 Read Count: 27080
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2017 Updated: 28 Nov 2019
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Date: 23 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Talk about intense......    Dam!    That Chelsea was a complete bitch.   I'm glad that she's gone.    That is pretty sad about their baby though.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 25 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

It seems like Edward is learning more than Bella.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 25 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well Chelsea has already killed her brother.   It's not that much further to imagine her killing her son and his mate.    I wouldn't be that upset at the thought of killing her if I was Edward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 25 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well Chelsea has already killed her brother.   It's not that much further to imagine her killing her son and his mate.    I wouldn't be that upset at the thought of killing her if I was Edward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 25 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Well Chelsea has already killed her brother.   It's not that much further to imagine her killing her son and his mate.    I wouldn't be that upset at the thought of killing her if I was Edward.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 06 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm sure that violent crap happened in the past even more than we think.

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Date: 24 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well this chapter was really interesting....   I curious to learn what Bella will find out.  And I hope Edward can protect her while she is 'out'.     

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Date: 24 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well this chapter was really interesting....   I curious to learn what Bella will find out.  And I hope Edward can protect her while she is 'out'.     

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Date: 06 May 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well one of the good things going for our couple is that they have complete honesty now, I hope.    I'm dying to know who put that weak curse on them and who the real seer will be.    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing.

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Date: 07 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I haven't read your one shot, but Charlie seems like he is probably an abusive bastard to Renee and will be soon to Bella.    ugh....  I wonder who the banshee is.....  And I wonder if they are witches.............  hmmm

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I don't like Marcus or Chelsea at all.   

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Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved how Bella handled Marcus and that bitch Chelsea too.    Edward and Bella both deserved some really hawt sexy times.  Dam!   

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Date: 16 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Poor Bella.....But at least she knows or seems to know what to keep to herself for now.

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Date: 11 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is so interesting.    I think it might refer to the pronipal or Marcus .   Hmmm.....

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 19 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I like boss bad ass Bella.    Angela and the principal were both being douches.

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Date: 25 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I think it might be about Edward and his ass if a dad.  He is sure evil.  Lol

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Date: 15 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

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Date: 15 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

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Date: 15 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Hopefully Bella will communicate and be able to relate to all of the beings.

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Date: 10 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank goodness Bella stuck to her guns and that Edward was there to help and believe in her.   Even though he was a sulker at times, he was a great help.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 26 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Hell, Alec had made me hella scared of Chelsea too.  I really hope Bella and Edward have trained well enough.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Post BD. A vision foretelling the Volturis return, a secret life revealed opens up a whole new world to the Cullen's.  A prophecy made decades before. Dumbledore convinces the Cullen's to join him in Hogwarts, but is this magical sanctuary a real safe haven or an even bigger fire for them to fall into?

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Categories: Harry Potter, Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: None
Genre: Adventure
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 157747 Read Count: 28824
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2017 Updated: 18 May 2018
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Date: 27 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

I wonder if they will be dumb asses and go off to rescue Jacob the moron.

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Date: 18 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 – The Oracle.

The group is getting so big.......

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Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 – First strike.

ugh...  I hate the wolf shapeshifters in every story, esp Jacob.  ugh....

I loved the banter between Charlie, Remus and Moody.

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Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17– A vampire calls.

I like the differences the vampires are makin g to the original story.

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Date: 21 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 -Feeling Lucky.

I like the changes concerning Dumbledores hand, the vanishing cabinet and Rose's new brooms esp.

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Date: 30 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Surprising Allies.

I like that Leah and Seth are comfortable allies as well now.

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Date: 13 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Well that chapter was a shock... a great one, but a shock!!!

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Date: 21 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - If Vampires could faint.

Well they should be able to prove it soon enough.  I sure am glad that Esme overheard the death eaters so her and Renesme could get away.

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13– summer sun and an update from Charlie.

I so hate the shape shifters.  ugh......

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Date: 19 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Swooping Evil, Caipora and Brazilian wizard shops.

I like how they are getting along and respecting each others' talents and space.

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

I loved Dumbledore's idea of where to put the vanishing cabinet.  LOL   Happy that Jasper destroyed another horcrux found by Edward.   Now how are they going to get that necklace from the pink bitch?  hmmm.....

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Date: 18 May 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

Love Jacob getting permanently dissed.   LOL

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Date: 30 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 – Fight or Flight

It certainly appears there is little time for questions and answers.   I hope Alistair doesn't turn on them.

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Date: 12 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

I like how Umbridge got all huffy.

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Date: 20 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 – This means war.

I like the new allies and the changes that it makes to the plans.

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Date: 26 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

Intense battle and of course, sad as well............

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Date: 18 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 – A History of Magic.

I loved the new astronomy tower scene.  :)

Summary:

tu-bannner-long


Years have passed since the reclaiming of Erebor and Bilbo’s ring forgotten…till now.


Categories: Lord of the Rings, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Legolas
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Changing of Tales
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45709 Read Count: 3842
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2017 Updated: 18 Mar 2019
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Date: 24 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Fellowship of the Ring I

can't wait for Legolas.....  :)

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Date: 24 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: The Fellowship of the Ring II

I liked the way you blended things.

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Date: 15 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 8: The Fellowship of the Ring VIII

I'm glad they are with their signifigant others now for a while so as to soothe each other.

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Date: 15 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 9: The Fellowship of the Ring IX

Interesting.....  this is going to be some fellowship :)

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Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 10: The Fellowship of the Ring X

I think the new wrinkle just made the story even more intriguing.

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Date: 20 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 12: The Fellowship of the Ring XII

So so sad.... 

Your Man by theadosia57 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

YM


I looked at her with that damn song running through my head, I don't know who she is or where she came from. But I do know I want to be her man!  Peter's P.O.V with a twist at the end. Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3102 Read Count: 778
[Report This] Published: 28 May 2017 Updated: 28 May 2017
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Date: 29 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well that was sexy as hell.  Hopefully Jasper WILL find his mate and get away from Malice.  Peter and Bella are all kinds of sexy though.  Jasper will have more fun waing on his mate with them than Malice.  ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, first little poly and I enjoyed writing it very much xx

Alexis

Summary:

WIIDFH


Bella doesn’t like that Edward tells her to be wary of Jasper and him to stay away from Bella, Well that’s not going to happen, Why is he so cruel, he’s his brother? (Film version of meeting the family) Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Why?
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3476 Read Count: 602
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2017 Updated: 14 Jun 2017
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Read this on FFN first and I really enjoyed it there too.  You have an amazing talent of getting us to see and empathize with all sides.   Really good.



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked it xx

Alexis

Shaky Ground by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Shaky Ground

Dr. Edward Masen lived a lonely, miserable existence as an emergency room attending at Harborview Medical Center. He ate, breathed and lived for his job. He refused to even think about women. To him, they were only distractions and he didn't trust anyone, except his mother. 

Dr. Isabella Swan just moved to Seattle, after completing her residency in Chicago. She was hired as a pediatrician at Harborview, becoming a pediatric emergency room fellow. She was not looking for a relationship, only focusing on her job. It was hate at first sight for both. Or was it? But, their attraction could not be denied. 

Unfortunately, a natural disaster rattles their lives ... the world was turned upside down when escalating earthquakes plagued the Seattle area. Will they able to survive the danger of being on 
Shaky Ground

 

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Banner by 67Original_1901 from Wattpad!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120201 Read Count: 123928
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2017 Updated: 01 Dec 2017
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Date: 15 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I hope they don't go back to treating each other like shit.

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Date: 12 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hopefully Jake's abusers think Jake is dead at the moment and won't come looking.   If Edward starts woring at the new hospital, I hope Bella will too after her physical therapy.  It might take her a while though.

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Date: 29 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I thought Edward might tell her some stuff.  But even drunk, he is tight lipped.  

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Date: 25 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward needs some therapy I believe.  

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Date: 28 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That seemed gut wrenchingly sad or at least bitter sweet.   I couldn't work in a hospital around all of that sadness all of the time.   I'm glad that some people can.

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Date: 05 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Edward understood her shitty day at least and went above and beyond to take care of Bella.  Everyone else needs to butt out and let them figure out things for themselves.  That poor little boy is probably dead now, because of slow Heidi and slow DHS workers.

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Date: 08 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yeah, dam!   I am ready for Heidi to be fucking gone already.  I wonder about that boy, if his dad didn't even give his real address....it must be bad.

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Date: 05 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

poor kids..... i hate abusers

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Elizabeth kind of pushed.  You would think a professional would realize that.  hmp.....   I can imagine that Bella feels as if she is going to get left behind.

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Date: 01 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Something sure has made Edward a grouch.  But if I had to file a complaint every dam day about co workers, I'd be pissed too.  Hopefully Bella will get along with everyone else besides Alice.

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Date: 01 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well Edward was rude as fuck to Bella.  Dam!  She doesn't know whatever his hystory is.

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Date: 04 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm not sure if he would have apologized if he didn't get caught.   hmmmm.....

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Date: 08 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wish Edward and Bella would at least get civil with each other.  They were close this chapter.

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Date: 11 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well that is one way to calm someone down Edward....  LOL

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Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm glad that Edward and Bella are on the same page.  If Charlie is going to tease and slightly banter with Bella and Edward, I'm going to like him.

In near future I see them attending funerals, emotional and physical therapy and maybe court if they find Jake's dad.  They have a lot to deal with.

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Date: 19 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I do hope Charlie doesn't get too over protective or intrusive on Bella and Edward.  Bella is going to be pissed when she hears Edward's story.  She might want to kill Tanya more than Edward.

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Everything about that situation would be so difficult.

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Date: 05 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Everyone has to have been so afraid.   I hope Jake's family were killed in the quake.  Does that make me a bad person.   It should have been those evil fuckers instead of Riley.

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Date: 09 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Jake is probably freaking out being taken away from Edward and Bella.   I'm glad that Edward got a hold of Charlie and his parents.

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Date: 25 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Bella seems physically miserable, but emotionally loves her new place of work.  Edward supportiveness and sweetness is so lovely.

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Date: 29 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

So Edward seems to be getting along.  I'm glad he is letting women know right away that he is taken.   Hopefully Bella will get better soon, start working and they will move in together.  

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Date: 30 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Even though everyone is aafe, I understand Bella feels like a leech and like crap.

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Date: 07 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I liked how Edward handled everything.  But I'm nervous about Elizabeth butting in and thinking SHE needs to be the one to help Bella when she has just enflamed her issues.

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Date: 10 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm glad that they seem to be weathering things together.

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Date: 24 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Renee is just horrible.  ugh.....   Jake shows how resilient children can be at times.   I really do hope thbat Bella's leg gets better.

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Date: 12 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Edward always seems to go a step forward then 3 steps back.

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Date: 15 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I hate that the whole family is shit bags.  Dam!  That poor little boy must be being tortured now.

On a positive note, glad that whore Heidi is gone.