Their healing was so sweet and tender.  I'm glad the others left them alone.

This is the third time and site I've read this on and I still love it.  :)

I can't wait for Star and her minions to get theirs.

Bella seems to be going along with Edward, Alice and Rose even though she seems to be a nervous wreck about it.

That was too kind and adorable that he pitched in and helped.

The family meeting was sooooo sweet as well.

That was a wonderful story.  I loved it!  :)

Human Edward is slimy??  That's new and I hope he and his dad get theirs.

I'm starting to think Carlisle may be more than stupid, he maybe an ass as well.  Poor Bella.......

Well I am glad that Emmett and Demetri didn't forget about Bella......I was going to be mad at them too.

So we know some of the crooks are worse than others, but I really despise crooked cops.  I'm getting that feeling from Carlisle's desparation.

I wonder if Bella knows Peter has 'claimed' her.  hmmmm.....   I'm glad Nahuel and his sister will be safer now.

Hopefully Carlisle and Esme will kick Edward's dumb ass in different ways.  

Still am glad that Bella has Jade in all this cluster fuck.  Carlisle seems smarmy.  ugh......

I can't wait to read how this came about.  I loved that Edward was beaten to a bloody mess.  Does that mean I am a secret sicko???  nah....  LOL

Carlisle was a little evil troll and his kid was just like him.  ugh...

Oh hell....You're gonna give us another twist.  Can't wait to see who else dies before James gets given to Billy Black.

I still don't like the idea of them separating.   Esp when Bella is human and the stupid cray cray twins are out and about.

So Esme is using creepy Denali too.  She is probably sleeping with Tanya.  They are both so gross.  Esme's will is probably made to Tanya.  Or not changed at all.   Hmmm....

Well I'm still worried about that crazy hag!   LOL    Emmett, Alice, Edward and Carlisle will have to work through their feelings eventually.   It will be harder for Emmett it seems.   poor guy.....     

I'm so pleased that Edward decided to fully confide in Bella and that she is planning on supporting and helping him.   Poor Emmett just can't handle crime life.   Poor Edward for feeling like he is all alone.   Maybe Bella will change that.

I love that Esme's little dramatic escape plan isn't going to work.   I'm still pondering if Esme is in love with Tanya or Carmen.......  hmmmmm...........  

I'm thrilled that Bella is planning on proposing to Edward.

I'm beginning to think Denali was just too dumb to lie.   He didn't een see that he was being used in the end.    

Edward needs to get on the ball with marrying Bella.   LOL   It sounds like it;s what they both want.     Alice and Bella's bonding was sweet and natural.     I can't wait to see how they tsake down Esme, Tanya and that scummy fed.

Wow!  I don't know which of them is more delusional.  I hope Edward is still having both of them followed.

I'm skeptical.   Is she really dead?   I'm sure bitchy Esme figured it out and got away some how.   hmmmm.......   Esme's character made me dam angry and paranoid.    I hope she is gone.  I would've loved to read her POV knowing the jig is up.   It being a total surprise and not knowing she was bested and gonna die kind of rubs me the wrong way.   In a story, I would be one of those villains who give long speeches before I did my deeds.   LOL

I think Denali needs to squirm with fear and finally feel the betrayal of Esme.    I still think Esme and Denali's wife are having an affair.     hmmmm.......

Esme and fucking Elezar are probably trying to black mail Rose.   I hate people like that th at would turn on their own family.  ugh....  

Women scorned sure make worthy enemies.  He needs to watch out for skanya and her family.

Well crap!  I don't know who I was more annoyed with in this chapter.   Esme for her meddling and bossiness, Edward for his rudeness or Jasper for his bossiness.......       Esme definitely......  She needs to mind her own dam business and someone needs to tell her that.  :)

Well I am happy they are having yummy sexy times.  And that they are both compromising a little.

I mostly saw fast tempered and bad tempered, mouthy, yelling, snippy rude Edward.  I didn't see 1 anything I would want a second date with.  The only thing (sort of) he did nice was pick up on Bella's discomfort to go to that restaurant and brought a picnic to her instead (that someone else packed.)

The are just too night and day personality wise.  And I hope Bella isn't the one to change anything.  That would be sad.

That's exactly why I hate those type of restaurants too.  Edward needs to loosen up and tell Bella some truths on this date or I fear Bella won't be going out with him anymore.

I'm still strongly disliking Esme in this.  ugh........

poor Bella .....  I would be spooked as hell also if I knew someone was following me.

Esme is creepy as all fuck.

I really like 'take charge' Bella.  I do hope Esme gets put in her place soon.  

So what the hell does Esme think???  Edward is going to get back with that stealing whore bag Tanya???   What kind of mother would want that???   You would think everyone in Edward's family would hate Tanya, despite Elezar.

We'll great!!  I do hope those 2 finally understand each other.    I love Esme's confusion.  LOL

Tanya and apparently Michael are both morons.   They need to 'disappear' I think.    I would be pissed if I was Bella as well.

Well they cleaned up the only biters to try and hit Edward and  Carlisle.   I can't wait until Elezar, Esme and Aro go down as well.     I liked Edward's thoughts of a double wedding.

Too many scumbags (yes, I am including Esme) wanting to kill Bella.  It mzkes me uncomfortable.   If you plan for your story to enter sexual assault or rape territory, could you warn me please?   I am very sensitive to that part of my past and would really appreciate any tip offs to this kind of crime coming up.  Thanks for your consideration.

It sounds like Edward and Bella both need to admit their feelings.   Esme and Elezar both need to go.   ugh.......

Time for Esme, Denali and his daughter and Aro to die......   I hope Edward really likes Bella's shrewdness.

I'm glad Bella finally asked specifically for Jasper.  It sure sounds like a lot of dam fools need some torture time before death.

It looks like Esme is even stepping out on who she is already  cheating  with.  Dam!!  I would love to read her panic when she finds out Denali and Jacob are dead.   I hope that Edward proposes to Bella soon.  

Bella is going to 'playfully' kick Edward's ass.  LOL

The thought of Mike and Tyler watching if it was me having sex totally grosses me out.  I could never do anything  at all in a place where everything is recored and seen by others.  --shivers --

With the diner being blown up, I wonder if the whole 'attack the women' plan was a distraction by the bad guys,  hmmmm

misdirected anger.......  sigh.........

I bet Bella didn't expect that.  Holy cliffy Batman indeed........

I can't believe Rose is trying to hide so much shit of her own and being all rude to people at the same time.   If I did all of that much wrong stuff, I would be pretty meek and quiet around people who could kill me basically.  She is so dumb.

Emmett is going to be hurt so badly....poor guy.

Esme and Alice are sure welcoming to Bella though.  

I liked that Bella could help Emmett and Bella and Edward's New Year and first time were yummy.