Reviews by trbuie
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward left her in the woods. Bella was destroyed. Here is the reason she fell apart, why their departure hit her so hard. Vampires are the ultimate predator, everything draws you in...


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78406 Read Count: 25025
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
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Date: 19 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well holy fuck...going through the vampire change for four dam years???   That is awful!

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Date: 19 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella is really going into detail with Pete, Char and Jasper, huh?

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Date: 19 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So vamps are like drugs ....... literally in Bella's or any human's case.

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Date: 19 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It sounded like een though Bella was hurting and coping;....she was so confused.

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Date: 19 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm so glad that Charlie was allowed to know and be in on things.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This reads like a sciense text and is fascinating.   You have a brilliant imagination.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Those 4 Cullens sure as hell don't deserve any forgiveness freebies.   Carlisle at least should have known some of the shit Bella went through or would have had to go through.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Since Bella was changing and adapting for 6 dam years, I don't think it's that weird really that she is calm and used to blood lust etc....

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

It sounds like Bella is more pissed or angry about why they ignored Jasper than her own situation.   hmmmm.........

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It sounds like the Cullens are getting more truth than they expected.   But they seem to be accepting it.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bella sure is more mature or more thinking about changes that eeryone else is for sure.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love that Jasper and the 'official' tour guide just left the Culens alone at the house.   LOL

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Poor Jasper....  It's so sad that he has doubted himself for so long.   Bella will be good for him.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I KNEW Bella would be great for Jasper.  I hope that discussion helped him as much as it seems.  :)

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I laughed at Bella sighing at the Cullens retreat.    hahaha

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm glad that they are keeping the new information from Carlisle for right now.   He would be all over that.     Jasper being all worried about Bella and sheepish to bother her is too cute.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I loved their funny training time and also Bella and Jasper's quiet talking time.   :)

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Even Peter's accidents seem to work out.  I am so thrilled that Bella could comfort and talk to Jasper again so easily.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It sounds like Garrett fits right in with the whole group.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm glad they are sharing more with Garrett.  Hopefully soon, he'll get the full story.   I have good feelings about him.   Jasper and Bella keeping each other calm is pretty swoony.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love that they are so great together as a group and that they realize their great luck and are so appreciative of it......  That's just so sweet.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I love their tricky confuse and disable plan.  ;)

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love that Bella and Garrett knew how to support the 3 through their shock of becoming free for the first time in their lives.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love that Bella and Garrett knew how to support the 3 through their shock of becoming free for the first time in their lives.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved how they dealt with Vicki, the body swapper and the hordes.   Aro better play nice.   They won't fall for his bull shit.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

The olturi kings are being very thoughtful and nice.   Carlisle's attitude about Edward and Alice is kind of annoying.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I don't know if I could have been as mature as Bella.   I would probably be like Garrett, ready to kick some ass.  And what the hell is up Tanya's ass?   That hussy has no pony in this race, so to speak.  ugh..........

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Well it sounded really tough on Alice and Edward, but their dumb asses CHOSE it.   All of the others who had a rough life didn't have a choice.   sigh......

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I definitely agree with all of Bella's worries and her hurry to get Jasper alone away from the crazy.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Dam!   It sounds like a week was way too long to agree to.   LOL

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I would love not to have to go through any planning bull crap.   LOL

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Aro is almost like a creepy stalker in trying to wrangle out Jasper and Bella's phone number and where abouts.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I'm glad that Bella got to go make peace with her dad, family and the wolves.  That was really sweet of Jasper.

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That sounds like a sexy and wonderful honeymoon.   I am officially jealous of fictional characters.   LOL

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Date: 20 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I am so happy that Jasper and Bella are both so at peace with themselves and each other.  :)     I loved this story.

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184399
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
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Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - The Chase

Evil cliffy! Grrrr!  You sure are good at giving us those.  hehehe

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Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - Caught

I love that fate/charlie/jake killed renee with a tree. awesome!!! I'm so sad that edward had to get shot or grazed though.

Hide and Seek by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A day of play for some not so childish vampires. E X B and an afternoon of adult fun.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 587 Read Count: 860
[Report This] Published: 20 Apr 2011 Updated: 20 Apr 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

tee hee hee  That was kind of sweet and perverted of Edward at the same time.  hehe  :)

As You Wish... by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Banner by RachelxMichelle

Banner by the talented RachelxMichelle.

Crazy happenings are afoot in the vampire world.  Bella breaks up with Edward and everyone around her starts going nuts.  Read about the craziness surrounding Bella and how she finally finds her mate.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6903 Read Count: 2369
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love how everyone turned out.  Lauren continues to sleep with everyone makes me laugh.  

 

Summary:

Sequel to Taking Chances. Finding the family they didn't realize they needed, they thought they had everything. Now Bella and Edward, along with Alex and Anthony, are in for the wildest adventure yet. AH & NC-17 for language and other things. Canon coupling.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94877 Read Count: 82003
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2013
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Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It seems like bella is taking on too much for 1 person much less a pregnant person.

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44756
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
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Date: 08 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Glad you are back....  I really love this story.

A Redeeming Love by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Can you forgive the ultimate betrayal?  What if he didn’t deserve the girlfriend he has?  Can you forgive your fiancé?  Your brother?  Can you find love again?  Let’s find out…


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10553 Read Count: 1847
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2011 Updated: 15 Aug 2011
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Date: 27 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: A Redeeming Love

It sounds like everyone in this story is getting what they deserve, good or bad.   LOL

Summary:

Getting the Hell Out of Dodge

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Immediately following the battle with Victoria's newborns, Bella learns that the Cullens were using her in a most malicious way.  With the Volturi wanting her to be dead or changed, time is ticking for poor Bella.  Will someone get her the hell out of Dodge?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9423 Read Count: 3740
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 25 Aug 2011
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Date: 05 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I had to re-read this one for the unknown number of tmes.  It really is great.  :)

Intensity by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 299] New!
Summary: Past Featured Story

Intensity

Twelve years have gone by since Paul and Bella walked away from La Push and reached for success. When they unexpectedly run into each other, the pack suddenly comes trickling back into their lives. Time changes people but can it change traditions? AU/OOC

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 325149 Read Count: 64812
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2011 Updated: 23 Feb 2024
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Date: 09 Jan 2021 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Talk about evil cliffy...   grrr....   LOL

Great chapter though.   Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Carlisle will save you from the cliffhanger--I promise! Thank you for taking the time to read and review. XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 11 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Paul was reminded of, and became very appreciative of his wife and friends again in this chapter.   :)    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

Sometimes, Paul needs a subtle reminder to appreciate what he has. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Chapter 41.

XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow just more and more mess at la push. i'm glad everyone's on board to help jenny and i'm glad that they made jared slow down and think. i imagine kim would have been pissed if her thoughts were ignored. i love that paul disusses everything with bella even getting a van for billy. true equality is hard to find.

Author's Response:

Yes, the mess in La Push is quite substantial, but Paul and Bella will be able to assist in easing things up a bit.  Jared has a tendency to think with his heart, rather than with his head.  Yes, Kim would have been upset, but you have to give Jared points for bringing the issue up with her.  Jared and Paul both have the utmost respect for their wives.  XOXO  mama4dukes

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Date: 26 Feb 2021 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I love the interesting history and bonding between Carlisle and Taha Aki.     The prophecy probably blew both of their minds.   :)   

Thanks for writing and sharing. 



Author's Response:

Carlilse and Taha Aki were there for each other when they needed each other the most. As for their father-son bond, clearly, the spirits saw it too. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

 

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Date: 11 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Well crap!   What's happening to Paul and Bella?  This sounds scary.  Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 23 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Bella and Paul both have quite a few fans.  ;)      I giggled at Charlie teaching Bella how to play beer pong.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 27 Mar 2021 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Men typically over spend or spend more money on useless crap than women do.   LOL    They like to gripe about women, but it's really them.   :)

Paul and Embry were very supportive friends to Carlisle.

I do wish the others would quick giving them shit for not having kids.   What if they never want to?    Everyone doesn't have to bear children to be a good person?   They all need to quit being so dam pushy.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

 

Men do overspend--I completely agree. I have my husband as a prime example. Paul and Embry both know what it feels like to be ostracized and they would never do that to Carlisle. More coming soon. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

 

XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

There arre just so many really shitty parents in this story.  sigh....  It's making me feel amazed at my own parenting skills.  hehehe  Linda is going to give up some information on scumbag Fuller, I just know it.  :)  Poor little Will traveling across several states for safety just irked me.  I don't think Jake is nearly repentant enough for that shit.   Angela never will be, I have a feeling.  She is probably a lost cause.  I'm thrilled about the teenage bullies hopefully being arrested.  :)



Author's Response:

The teenaged bullies will get what's coming to them.  Charlie and Barry are going to build a strong case before attacking though. 

Linda is a great gal, you'll see what I mean in a few chapters.

You're probably right about Angela.  As for Jake, remember that he does have a kind heart for the most part.  He needs to pull his head out of the clouds.  XOXO

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Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm glad Collin pulled his head out of his ass! Finally! hehe Linda deserves his apology next. I'm still pissed at Jake though. He did so many people wrong including his own son. He has a lot of work to do. Paul waking up horny in the middle of the night wasn't that unusual to me, but what had me giggling was Bella continuing to sleep & even snore. hehehe :)

Author's Response:

Collin has grown more than Jake because Linda is a strong support system.  Jake needs to open his eyes.  As for Paul, Bella, sex, and sleep--Paul may be perfect, but he's still just a guy.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

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Date: 16 Sep 2021 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

The Charlie/Pail relationship is really sweet and supportive both ways.    My opinion changed of Pauul's father somewhat.     I think this Travis douche is goinna try and blame something on Paul's father when he gets out of prison.    Hmm....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Charlie's adventures with duct tape seem like a page out of my life.  hehehe   I loved Paul's realization at the end about who was really the source(s) of evil in his past.  



Author's Response:

Duct tape is truly a wonderful product and they come in so many wonderful designs now too.  Paul needed to realize that he is who he is because of La Push.   Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

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Date: 14 Feb 2024 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

I giggled so much every time poor Jared was horrified.   ;) 

 Carlisle must be so happy to find his mate.    He sure needs Jared's lessons though.   LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing. 



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

 

I agree that Carlisle needed to find a mate. As for Jared, he now has a purpose!

 

I'm glad you enjoyed chapter 55 of the story. One more funny chapter before we get back to serious issues. Thank you for taking the time to read and review Intensity.

 

XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 22 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

So many questions about Paul and Bella.....    Edward is ashed and Esme is ashed.  I did not expect that.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

I know, really? Edward and Esme have both been 'ashed' and neither of them played a very significant role in the story in the first place. Why is that? It's simply because there was no place for Edward nor Esme in the story, and I needed Carlisle alone and free of his family. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 01 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Dam!  All of these people/parents need to start handling some of their own issues for a change.  Paul and Bella shouldn't have to flee their own home just to get some privacy and alone time. Dam!



Author's Response:

You might be correct there, trbuie--but Paul and Bella created their busy lives themselves.  And as Alpha--Paul has to have an open door for his pack at all times.  As for their little getaway, I think they need it.  Dang it--I need one, too.  Thanks for chiming in and for taking the time to read Intensity.  XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 04 Mar 2022 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I'm relieved they are all being cautious around Fuller and his cronies.     Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

 

Absolutely! The pack members understand how dangerous Fuller and company are. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Both Billy and Jacob learned a few things chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

Hi trbuie,

They both learned lessons that were a long time coming!  More Intensity on the way!

XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 16 Feb 2022 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

What a traumatizing lunch for Bella and the others.   Ugh....     Thanks for writing and sharing.   :)



Author's Response:

It was traumatizing to everyone! Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I have missed your writing so so much.   It's great to have u back.  The Fuller's are just creepers in general.  I'm happy to hear that they are going to be supportive of their daughter and help her press charges.  The Leah scene was funny in a Paul and Charlie having another thing in common kind of thing, even though they were both dorks.  hehehe  The sexy scene was hot!  lol   And I understand Paul not being comfortable with Jacob hanging on Bella.   Can't wait for you to update your Peter/Bella story too.   I reread it the other day.  :)



Author's Response:

Yes, the Fullers are creepy--they are the complete opposite of the Camerons who are extremely supportive of each of their children.  Paul and Charlie are both snarky males who, at times, lack sensitivity but are generally great guys.  And Paul being jealous of Jake--yeah, it's understandable, but Jake is now comfy having Bella as his friend.  More Peter/Bella after I get over the brick wall I've hit with that story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO  mama4dukes

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Date: 30 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Everyone is maturing and seeing the other side in this chapter.   thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

You hit the nail on the head with your assessment. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I'm so glad that Jake is finally getting a clue about Angela, but I'm sorry that it took such extreme actions for him to 'wake up'.  sigh.....  Love all the support that Jake has, he is going to need it.   Love this story and your others....can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

Jake is finally waking up, but he has the others behind him.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I cringed in embarrassment for those 2 boys.  But I love the total support that all the kids are getting.   Bella should cut back her hours.  She can still do what she loves, but safely and have time for Paul too.  Plus, I can't wait for your other stories to be complete so you can start posting them.  I re-read them all often.   :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Let's hope Sammy survives the smothering mother that is Emily.  Bella and Paul will need to work their hours out, but Paul can't push her.  Thank you for the kind compliments regarding my other stories.

XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I laughed hard at Charlie's whimpering and whining about dieing and having to work forever now.  lol   I DO wish everyone would quit pressuring Bella and Paul to have kids.  Some people just don't want babies of their own.  Look how much they do for everyone else's kids.    

p.s. Hope you had a great holiday!!    Tracey



Author's Response:

Hi Tracey,

Poor Charlie, he'll never be able to retire now.  And you're right, everyone needs to stop pressuring Bella and Paul to have kids.  They'll have kids when they're good and ready!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 24 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That was nice cor Jacob and Tawny.     I'm really pleased about Bella putting her foot down and demanding her and Paul get away.  They needed that.

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

wow! It's so good to see your writing again.  I hope you are doing well.  I really loved the idea of Eric helping out with discovering Fuller's crap.  hehehe  

As a former high school teacher I witnessed the after effects and reported several cases of suspected child abuse.  Most of the time the kids actually told me about the problems at home or hinted at things.  Sadly...I was never wrong.  I dispise abusers.

I re-read your peter/bella story just last week.  It is still awesome and I can't wait for more.  :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  It's great to get the opinion of a high school teacher.  I despise child abuse of any kind and I think it's important that it's brought to the forefront.  So much of it goes unreported.  

Thank you for taking the time to chime in with your opinion.  XOXO  mama4dukes

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

gross new info, but expected!  lol  



Author's Response:

Yeah, Tony and Angela are pretty gross.  Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity.  XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 04 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Yes, tony and angela are still disgusting...  gag!   I would also feel like Jake.  :)  Paul defenitely needs to spend less time worrying about everyone else and concentrate more on bella and their relationship issues.  Someone needs to eplain to bella what part-time work is.  LOL

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Date: 15 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wow!  This chapter was a great adventure.    Tawny started out being all suspicious,  but she calmed down.   I'm glad the crew got to be together a while and Jacob/Tawny got married how they wanted in Vegas.  It's really not important what anyone else expects or wants when it comes to your wedding.

Bella was so kind answering Jacob's sweet, smart kid's questions.  

Great chapter with lots of yummy Paul/Bella goodness as well.  Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Glad to see Paul and Bella getting back on track.....  glad to read some more of your greart writing as well.....  merry christmas!  :)

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Date: 04 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hopefully Sue will be ok.  Paul and Bella sure having a rough go of it as well.  I am happy that Paul has some happy memories of his mom now.

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Date: 09 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am so glad to read some of your great writing, but did you have to leave us on such a mean cliffie??   Did you get coal in your stocking or something?  LOL

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Date: 16 Jul 2023 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Plot twist....   Jason Jenks knows about vampires because his parents are vampires.    The three of them will probably help the group to catch Fuller.   

The Volturi breaking Fuller out of jail is another unexpected turn.   

Charlie and Paul bonding more is always nice to read.   :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Hi trbuie,

 

I made Jenks' parents into vampires because I felt he knew a bit too much about the supernatural world. The Volturi have definitely added a bit more danger to the group. As for Paul and Charlie bonding, all I can say is the Great Protector needs a father figure more than anyone in the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I truly appreciate your reviews. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Paul got to learn a lot of amazing things about his and Bella's past.   Trippy...   :)   Thanks for writing and sharing girl.   :)

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Date: 14 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well at least Paul got some of the parentals to go away.  LOL   Charlie getting Paul to let his feelings go was really sweet.   This is the ONLY  wolf story that I have or will read.   You are awesome and so is this story.   :)

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Date: 13 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I laughed so much at Charlie's over reaction's in this.    I'm pleased that Bella got some clarity about what she wants to do with her life.   Great chapter.   :)

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Date: 22 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awe.... Bella and Jacob both were really sweet to each other.  And it appears they were really honest too.   Jacob's children will benefit from their father being more happy as well.  Great chapter.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 01 Apr 2022 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Wow!   Well hopefully with the video of Fuller running his mouth and Johnny Lahote's information, the police can keep Fuller in prison.    Man!   He sure is a scumbag.     Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

 

Yes, Fuller is behind bars so now the real work to keep him there begins. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

 

XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Bella and the other ladies came through with the catering...even for Carlisle.

With so many people on this case, hopefully Fuller will be staying in jail permanently.   grrr...

Thanks for writing anbd sharing.



Author's Response:

Let's hope Fuller stays in Jail permanently. He's annoying. And that's mild. Thank you for taking the time to read and review the story. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2023 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I'm happy for Rose's new peace within herself.   She deserves that and so does Emmett.

Carlisle finding his mate was sweet.   They are so alike. :)

Chepi was funny.  Alice is disturbing.   Bella is less annoyed and pissed about her perving on her and Paul than I would be.  LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing. 



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

 

We definitely needed to give Rose some peace and Emmett as well. Carlisle needed a mate after his experiences with Esme. Chepi will feature more soon. Alice is nuts. Thanks for chiming in. I'm so happy you're enjoying Intensity. More zaniness coming soon.

 

XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Mar 2023 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Bella and Paul's version of meditating would be waaaaaay more peaceful.   ;)

I wonder if Paul's "missing" uncle IS one of the attacking vampires.     Hmmmm.....    just a thought.....     Hmmm.....

Jeff getting "date ready" to chase a vampire made me smile as well.    LOL

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

OMG! Thank you! You were the only one who commented on Jeff trying to figure out how to get ready for a vampire chase! You made my week! As for Uncle Malcolm, you'll find out soon enough. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Carlisle's POV was a great read for this little meeting.   Those "men" think they have everything all planned out regarding Babs and Bella.    LOL

Peter's no filter mouth almost got him into trouble.   ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

Paul did his best to make Carlisle feel included. Peter's filterless mouth will be making an appearance in La Push soon, but not quite yet.

Thank you for taking the time to read and review Intensity. 

XOXO mama4dukes

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Date: 01 May 2023 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

A lot of new friendships and enlightenment at Bella's house....    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

 

Lots more coming, and many friendships to be had. Thank you for taking the time to read and review chapter 50 of Intensity.

 

XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2023 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

It sure is a mystery who changed Stormcrow and Byers.   They are obviously on Fuller's side of things.    Or maybe Fuller works for this vampire?    Hmmm....

Carlisle is going to flip out I'm sure if he discovers Rose and Bella missing.    Maybe the two will get back before Carlisle notices them being gone.

The wolves and coyotes are in good training hands.   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2023 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Paul and Emmett don't realize how well their wives know them.   LOL

Bella and Rose telling all the others what is going on will help I'm sure.    Alice and Charlotte will proobably find out something by following gross Angela W. too.

Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Dear trbuie,

Yes, in the end Paul and Emmett are males who don't understand that their wives are well aware of their bad habits. Bella and Rose will get a ton accomplished as will Alice and Charlotte. Thanks for sticking with the story. XOXO mama4dukes

Alone by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

*Winner Public Vote The 80s Power Ballad contest/Winner Third place in the Judges choice* I didn’t really mind being alone. Not until I met him. Now, he’s all I want. I just need to tell him. How can I get him alone?

Banner by Christag_banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4106 Read Count: 606
[Report This] Published: 24 Sep 2011 Updated: 24 Sep 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Alone

This was so sad in a way.....

Say Goodbye by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 151]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Say Goodbye Banner by FrozenSoldier

Bella Swan loved, until that love was thrown away. She hoped, until it died inside of her. She cried, until the tears dried up, and in their place, darkness fell. She wasn't afraid of it, she embraced it, clung to it. It made her feel alive. Then she got even.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 27180
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2013
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella

I just wonder who the dick was..... and why did it take her 365 days to get angry at hys lying scumbag ass?

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella

I just wonder who the dick was..... and why did it take her 365 days to get angry at hys lying scumbag ass?

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Meeting Bella

I can't wait to see who and how she gets even.   I hope she can eventually trust at least 1 person.

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Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Cleaning House

Well we know the who now.   I love that she and Alice will dePaul her living space.  It is sad that she still was getting things HE liked.   I'm really happy for Bella.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In with the New

I love that Bella has so many friends that came to support her.

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Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Clawing

So she is going to go after random dick heads.   I should be appalled but I'm not.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Famous Last Words

It was truly ironic that his name was Paul as well.   Too bad for that son of a bitch.   Hopefully his ex lady will be able to move on quickly.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Truth, Lies, and Hope

Well she got inspiration from something at least.   I hope her story wasn't about the murder she just committed.  

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Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Biscuits and Gravy

Interesting.....  She gave up Jasper so Alice could love him. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Easy

Bella seems a touch annoyed by the nickname the cops or news people gave her.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Warm

Oh crap....  I don't want Edward to arrest Bella.   ---pouts---

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Territory

I'm happy and scared for Bella at the same time.

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Date: 01 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Glory

I am so nervous for Bella.....  ---bites nails---