Reviews by trbuie
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71698
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Love this story and vampy bella... can't wait for more

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Really sexy funny chapter.  Can't wait for more.  :)

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Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved the yummy forest time and I can't wait to see who is going to kick Riley's ass. hehe  :)

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I love that peter and garrett are in awe of and respect bella so much. can't wait for riley's ass to be kicked. :)

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm glad peter was there for bella and supported her inner rage without sugar coating things. I hope that others will help them fight andd destroy icky vicky. :)

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Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Dam! Bella definitely deserves a break/vacation after that! :) I do hope that seth had to tear off a few alice limbs during the fight. hehe can't wait for the aftermath.

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Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I can't believe that Alice is such a bitch!  Dam!  I feel sorry for Jasper as well now.  sigh....

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Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I like that Bella is being cautious around Alice and Jasper, esp. after Jasper's immature cheat/fighting stunt and Alice's inconsistencies with her story.  I also appreciate Bella being short and to the point with them.  They deserve nothing else right now.  Can't wait to see how the wolves change/don't change the dynamic of things.  I hope they don't freak out about Bella's diet of criminals.  hehehe  :)

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Can't wait for more. I agree with Peter. I'm not sure about alice either.

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm hating Alice!  Grrrr!  :)  I love that Seth kicked her ass and that Bella figured out a way to coral her ass!  Can't wait to see what happens next.  :)

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Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I agree with Bella.  It did seem like too easy of a death for them, almost anticlimactic.  Is Jasper being kept against his will?  Did he tell the kings about Peter, Garrett and Bella's powers?  I hope not.  I don't want to hate him.  sigh......  I am worried about everyone getting away.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of my favorite go-to reads when I want to read a great relationship and a powerful Bella.  I lost you on FFN but found you here.  Yeah!   I loved Bella's anger and humor.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love that their hearts and bodies knew something was up right away when they saw each other.....  the head, though, is probably a little slow or timid.  

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Peter and Garrett being shocked and in awe never gets old.   :)

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It sure is obvious that Bella fully trusts no one.

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Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love how Bella is so comfortable with Peter already, but hate how she is so cautious.  But I understand.......

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

love them getting closer......

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

garrett and bella's relationship is really sweet....

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

bella had the balls to speak first.....love it

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

paniced bella caused so much pain for both of them

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

so.....the first asshole to show up......

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love Bella protecting both garrett and Peter from Jasper, since he is being a dumb ass.....lol

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

i'm glad they have a plan finally and both have said the l word

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

loved the sexy yummy time

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

high stress and tension.....code red indeed

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Date: 28 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Fucking Alice has to ruin training time.....

Summary: Past Featured Story

idwtwy

It's been 6 years and Edward hasn't returned. Bella is now living in Seattle as a homicide detective. The homicide rate has shot up in Seattle and when Bella's life is put on the line, she sees the person she was hoping she'd never see again. OOC. R&R.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37619 Read Count: 5184
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2010 Updated: 12 Dec 2010
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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Is This What it Feels Like?

Can't wait for more.  :)

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: White Horse

Dam!  That was sad.  sigh...

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Promise

Bella, be strong babe.  hehehe

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Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: I Don't Want to Want You

Good chapter.  :)

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Before the Storm

Liked it.  :)

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bliss

Jamie's reaction was unexpected and funny.

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Huntress

Dam!  Evil cliffy!  Update soon please.  :)

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Keep Holding On

Well, they sure drew it out long enough didn't they?  :)

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

:) Congratulations on finishing. 

Summary:

afitr

 

Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
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Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Divine Miss Hale

This chapter made me laugh so hard.  Poor Bella.  teeheehee  Update soon.  Happy New Year.  :)

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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts and Broken Thongs

I think that the chapter was really good.  I think Bella was angry and spoke her mind when she needed to.  Fights aren't about getting the upper hand and being bitchy just to be bitchy.  They are about (hopefully) being open and honest about your want and needs in the relationship.  She did that.  Now, as long as she stays true to what she believes, I think that they are on the right track.  Can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Trbuie! I admit I was afraid that some gals would be pissy that Bella let Edward back into her life so soon. But I so agree...communication and honesty are paramount to a successful relationship. If only they had been open with each other about their fears and insecurities in the original New Moon... Sigh...then again...I wouldn't have had a great storyline to write about!

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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: An Understanding

I was shocked at your version of Laurent and his story. I liked it a lot. Loved the sexy desprate needy sexy time... Loved the BJ porn and the sexy banter afterwards. :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper

Hot sexy funny and sweet..... :)

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Into the Woods

That chapter made me cry for both of them.  sigh...  Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

Don't cry Trbuie! I believe in HEA's! But there will be tears, laughter, and (hopefully) some sexy times ahead for our star crossed lovers. Keep on reading. Chapter 6 (EPOV) will be posted next Friday.

Thanks for your review! Jayne

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Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: EPOV In which I find my voice

The first step is always the hardest....  1) Admit you are a dumb ass.   LOL  hehehehe  I love it.  Poor stupid Edward.  Well, at least he is one the right track.  Maybe he will eventually get there.  :)



Author's Response:

Well, I guess he's taken the first step! Lets find out how many more steps he has to take before he can meet Bella half way!

Thanks for your review!

 

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Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Pick-up truck pick me up

I like that Bella is focused on the "talk" to come, but they she and even Edward are being playful.  that is hopeful too.  :)



Author's Response:

I think you're really going to enjoy the playful banter that is woven through out this story. These two kids have a lot of exploring and growing up to do over the next few days...get ready for an emotional rollar-coaster that will be full of laughs, tears, sexytimes, and fun!

Thanks for your review!

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Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling

I am mad at and feel so sorry for both bella and edward. i hope alice and the family or edward gets there quick enough.

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Love Letters

Loved jaspers letter..... hope the letters dont make edward jumpy.

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Teddy

I liked that the proposal just came busting out of Edward.  It means he is loosening up on his controlling tendencies.  :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm thinking that pulling the  stick out of his ass must have been a success. Wait until Rosalie hears!

 

Thank you so much for sticking with this story and your reviews!

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Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Simple Man

I really do hope that Emmett gave Edward a clue.  Can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

I think it's safe to say that Edward got the message loud and clear. Let's hope the stick removal surgery goes well... See ya Thursday!

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Compromised

I loved this chapter.  It was so sweet.  I hope that Bella reassures him quickly in the next chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

Ah...teenage angst and second guessing! Hopefully all will be resolved next chapter. See you next week!

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Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Tears for Lottie

That was so sad...  Too much guilt and responsibility for a 14 year old boy.  sigh....  



Author's Response:

Agreed. I always knew Edward had more of a backstory than Meyer's ever let on. Know we know why he always seems so sad.

Thanks for your review!

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Guilty as Charged

too cute....  :)



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, see you next week!

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Bed Time Stories

Such a sweet chapter.  Love the easy banter between the 2, but I hate the evil cliffy.  :)

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Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Promises

No sex with Edward is too much!  hehehe  I love the idea of a horny toad Edward.  LOL  I'm so jealous.  I loved this chapter.  :)



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I guess waiting over 100 years was so worth the wait! Just hope he can control his sexy lust as well as he did his blood lust.

 Pfft...who am I kidding? I hope he's an out of control sex pig who melts our respective laptops.

Better invest in a cooling pad, girl!

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Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble

Good chapter. I'm glad that bella took edward's feelings into account and didn't try to hide or put off the telling of the engagement.

Author's Response:

Same here. I like to think that these two are a lot better at sensing each others needs and communicating their own a little better than the original. That was my intent when I started this story SIX months ago! Thank you for your consistent and positive reviews trbuie...very much appreciated!

Witch Way by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 188]
Summary:

I was a normal girl, living a normal life. Never did I expect to thrust into a world where the supernatural ruled. Vampires, Demons, Werewolves and Witches? ExB, AU

 

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Witch Way

 

Thank you, Sephrenia for the beautiful banner!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136619 Read Count: 80686
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
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Date: 19 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Break Up

Well that would be a fun way to get rid of a creepy ex.  LOL

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Date: 19 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: What Just Happened?

Edward is telling her things as they come up.  But hell there seems to be so much info it's always being dumped on Bella.   She can't get that caught up felling, can she?

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Date: 19 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Phase and Phascination

Poor Bella....They are just pooring the new info on her all at once.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 4: My Bella

I like that this Edward is actually honest and talking to Bella about things, instead of being a controllong SOB.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions and Realizations

The only thing that is ugh... is prudish old fashioned Edward.  I hope that changes soon.  My parents didn't tell me as a 25 year old who I could or couldn't bring home and where they would sleep.  Charlie needs to back off.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Tests

They are al so bossy seeming with Bella.  Help her but don't boss her around...geez...  I'm so glad that Bella and Edward stood up to Alice concerning their OWN wedding.  Alice should not have any say at all!!!

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Jasper and John Barleycorn

So Laurent was just a slime ball human??  Not a demon?  Rapists can still rape without their dick though....  So I am worried that he is still alive.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Reactions of All Shapes and Sizes

Well they did have to start somewhere.  Poor Angela has piss poor luck with men.  I hope that changes.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Blessings

Over react much Charlie???  Dam!   

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Forks

So Charlie the cop is just not suspicious of Edward not eating at all for days??  hmmm....    

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Vegas Baby! Vegas

Breaking stuff was hella sexy, but being able to fix things is very cool too.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 12: James

Wow James is a powerful asshole!  Dam!  I sure hope he is dead now.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Burned

Why the hell can't the rest of the Cullens go the hell away for a dam while?  gezz!!

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Scorched

I love that everyone went the hell awasy so Edward and Bella could comfort each other alone and talk to each other in private.  I'm human and I could never live with that many people.  Forget about it if the people could 'see' and 'feel' and 'hear' everything you and your husband talked about or did together.  Living along would be a must.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Voices in the Moonlight

Fucking James!  I am so sick of his ass!   And I am sick of the cock blocking family interrupting sexy times.  Don't they have anything better to do?

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Training

They sure do need to get away from all of those cock blocking people esp wedding nazi Alice.  ugh.....  You can't FORCE someone to be your maid of honor.  It's supposed to be a question to someone and they either accept or not.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Isle Esme

Carlisle is a moron.  I am glad Esme layed into him.  grrr.....  And I am so glad that Bella and Edward are getting away.   They should live on their own and in their own place after fighting the big bad.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Honeymoon

Never underestimate the anger and determination of people who want sex and keep getting denied.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Denali

I hate hags that try to tear others down and steal people who don't even like them.  I do wish Edward would quit this gentalmanlly crap with Tanya.  He needs to rip off one of her lmbs as well.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Preparations for Battle

Hell...it takes a lot of combination of people's powers just to kill 1 demon.  I'm kind of worried to be frank.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Decisions and Transitions

Hmmm..... nervous as hell

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Goodbyes...Maybe?

Ok Charlie knows all now.... hmmmm.....  I still think after the battle Edward and Bella need to separate from everyone else.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 23: The Battle

A lot of trauma that I hope can be over come, but at least people left them alone for a bit.

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Date: 20 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

Finally they are getting to be alone.....

Summary: Past Featured Story

You'll Find What You're Looking For At Walmart

What happens when a lonely and betrayed vampire meets his mate at Walmart?  He claims her, of course.  Join Peter and Bella as they band together with their ragtag team of friends to creatively exact revenge on those who did them wrong.  Peter x Bella pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 301749 Read Count: 81573
[Report This] Published: 07 Mar 2011 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
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Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Hmmmm.......  I'm glad Peter got to Bella and that stuff is still up in the air.   I think if someone needs a sacrifice, it should be Carlisle.   LOL



Author's Response:

Oh, I agree completely that Carlisle needs to sacrifice himself--whether willingly or unwillingly. Thanks for reading and chiming in.

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Date: 20 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

OMG.....I am bawling now.  Why can't Peter and Bella just live as vamps together for eternity?   My HEA is definitely ruined now.  I am so sad.  Peter forgets Bella even existed???  I hate that.   

You better duck.  Here comes a tomato.  Big meanie....  :(      LOL



Author's Response:

Don't worry. This is not the last chapter (far from it) and I'm a firm believer in HEA's.

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Date: 19 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That is aweful.  Everyone is getting along just fine as supernaturals.  She can't leave Peter.  She should stay a vampire.



Author's Response:

Are they truly happy as supernaturals, though? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

Summary:

 

 

 

Summary:  Dr. Masen sits and has coffee in the commons of the university every day the weather is nice.  What happens when he meets the woman of his dreams in a most embarrassing way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4135 Read Count: 2035
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2011 Updated: 21 Mar 2011
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Date: 16 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Same Time Tomorrow

That was romantic and adorable.   I loved it.

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79428
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

so so sad....

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Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward was too cute in this chapter.  :)

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That whole chapter was so so sad. It brought back memories of my own fathers funeral and how awful it was. I can't imagine no one speaking to me when my dad died. That is just horrific. sigh......

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad that Bella is being honest with her new roomies and friends.  And I'm really glad that she is about to kick Newton's ass.  hehe  :)

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

so so sad....

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Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am glad that the parents were so sweet to Bella.  She deserves it.  :)

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Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bitchy Bella really isn't all to pleasant.  I hope that everyone can see through her.  :)

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Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Everyone assumes the worst about the other in this story. sigh.... so so sad......

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Dam!  Hasn't Bella already suffered enough?  That sucks big time.  

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

so so sad....  I'm so glad that Edward followed her to Forks.  sigh....

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Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Such a sweet sad chapter.  I can't believe Bella was the first to admit her feelings.  She really is the brave one of the 2.  Edward should have spoke his feelings first.  :)

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Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm glad that both of their feelings are out in the open.

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I can't believe people would treat someone so shitty, esp after their parent just died.  Dam!  Bella's right she needs out of that town fast.

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Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yes you made me cry. darn you! hehe can't wait for more.

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Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm glad you are back with this story. Garrett is justassuming bella had a normal childhood I guess. I like protective edward. :)

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Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Finally.... sighs happily...... :)

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Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think that the parents are kind of acting like "know it all jack asses".  They were very quick to judge and try to stop things before even knowing the facts.  And to threaten them with not paying for school was the most immature rash thing I've ever heard a parent do.   I hope that our sexy little couple goes and elopes to be honest.  They don't need Edward's parent's money.

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Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Loved the 3 couple wedding! Very unexpected and sweet. I hope Bella just takes over paying things for all 6 of them. The parents would be forced to deal then. :)

bittersweetheart by Mynxi Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

O/S for fun. Bella is changed abruptly but she's not the sweet girl they remember when she wakes up & Jasper finds the perfect mate for the Major. Rated M for violence & gore. OOC/AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Horror, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4292 Read Count: 2847
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You should continue this.  It could be a really good story.  :)



Author's Response:

I've heard that before, but I just don't have a plot to go with it. Plus this was in 3rd person which was really hard for me. I'm glad you enjoyed it though.

 

Thanks darlin!

xoxoxoxo

M

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward left her in the woods. Bella was destroyed. Here is the reason she fell apart, why their departure hit her so hard. Vampires are the ultimate predator, everything draws you in...


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78406 Read Count: 25112
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bella sure is a determined survivor and feisty in this chapter.