Reviews by trbuie
Careful Now. by StayingHidden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 77]
Summary:

Bella love her lavish life, but it doesn't all come easy. Not every Swan is pure.

Join Bella and the usual characters as they go about the life that comes with being part of one of the biggest crime families in the United States. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25096 Read Count: 10705
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2019
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm glad Bella was at least honest with her friends about what happened.   But maybe Bella should have went to a doctor about her head.

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well hopefully the men's reactions will rub off on Bella some.   Her lack of concern over being assaulted is kind of concerning.    Een if it is a family member in her eyes, women don't deserve to be assaulted.

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wonder if Jessica really understands why none of them like her.   hmmmm......   I bet she just keeps believing and spouting her crap.   It is probably better to have her ears a ways away.

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Date: 19 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Creepy Alec, Edward, Alice, and unknown person just all need to go.  Poor Bella ....no relaxing.   They need better security.    Great chapter.  Don't be so hard on yourself.   :)



Author's Response:

thanks for reading!!!

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Date: 20 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

hawt!!

Choices by mama4dukes Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

choices

When Bella Swan abruptly breaks up with Edward for suppressing her ability to make choices, it forces Emmett to take a good, hard look at his life within the conformist household of the Cullens. Is he happy with his life? Or does his destiny lie elsewhere? What choice will he make.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10902 Read Count: 1229
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2018 Updated: 26 Mar 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love that choices were the focus of your story.  Some people made them quickly...right or wrong.    Some people took longer.   And then some never used their own brain to make a choice.   Pretty true to real life, I think.   Great story.



Author's Response:

It's true. The story is about choices, but it's also about the capacity to change. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Since you are one of my favorite authors, I can't believe I've never seen this 1 shot, much less read it.    It was really good.    The really dumb asses of the Cullens still haven't learned it seems.    Alice, Bree, and Rose are probably going to be stuck there forever.    LOL

Emmett and Bella are cute together and I really liked their choices of friends.   I wish Emmett didn't take so long to figure out that Bella was his mate, but he is male.   LOL

Great story.   :)

Summary:

WIIDFM

I don’t like that Edward told Bella to be wary of me or that I should stay away from her, That’s not what should happen, Why? he’s my anally retentive brother, That's why!  (Film version of meeting the family) Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Why?
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3974 Read Count: 449
[Report This] Published: 30 Mar 2018 Updated: 30 Mar 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: You & Me

I still think your version is so much better than S.M.'s.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

You're a star xx

Alexis

Summary:


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Crossing a Whitlock was highly unadvised, they never forgive and they never forget...


 


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awardty


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3980 Read Count: 825
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2018 Updated: 16 Apr 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh....    I would definitely read more of this.   Loved it.

Summary:

LDEID

Isabella Swan is the only daughter of Charlie Swan, the leader of the Swan Mafia Family. While out with her father, they are attacked by a rival family, The Wolf Pack and her father was critically injured. The family doctor was unavailable, and Bella is scrambling for a replacement. She called the person she’d least expect to help her.

Dr. Edward Cullen is working as an emergency room physician when he got a phone call from the girl he’d secretly loved all throughout college, but she kept him in the friend-zone, save for one drunken night. After that, she disappeared, and he hadn’t heard from her. Until this fateful night … And he found her much changed, hardened, scarred and angry.

Charlie Swan’s life hangs in the balance, and the only person who can save him is Bella’s former friend and one-time lover. Will Edward be able to save Charlie and stay away from the girl, who is now a woman and far more beautiful, despite the scarred and hardened exterior?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44585 Read Count: 11878
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2018 Updated: 12 Jul 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm bawling here.  Dam!!

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Date: 05 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm bawling here.  Dam!!

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Date: 21 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Jacob is messed up and he needs to go......   ugh.........

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Date: 12 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

All that has happened to Bella would be really difficult to get over.    Great story.

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Date: 12 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

All that has happened to Bella would be really difficult to get over.    Great story.

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Date: 18 May 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella seems confused but her friends seem to be helping her face her own needs, wants and love.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well that is a lot of issues to bring into a relationship.  Poor Edward found out the hard way what was going on.   I am glad that Embry is dead, but I have a feeling he isn't the worst.

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Date: 02 May 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I feel so sad and bad for almost everyone in this story.  

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 39740
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hopefully they will get to talk soon.

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Date: 08 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Dam!  This was gut wrenching.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That whole chapter was heart breaking.

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You are killing me smalls!   Dam!   This is so sad.

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It sounds like it's pure dumb luck that Edward doesn't already know Bella.   Still breaking my heart her....  ---wags finger---

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG......I'm beginning to think you love to torture us.   I'm literally bawling onto my keyboard here.   sigh........     You can redeem yourself by giving us some happy soon please.   LOL

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Date: 04 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

It's awful that Bella and Edward can't be alone for 5 minutes. 

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Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love that they have officially met now.   :)

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Date: 28 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm pleased that Esme encouraged Edward to follow Bella and that Edward and Bella both were honest about their feelings and fears.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 02 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward and Bella both are so swoony and romantic.    Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 09 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think that cute little ladybug is as excited about the date with Bella as Bella and Edward are.   ;)   

 

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Date: 10 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well that was a roller coaster of emotions.    They both were so happy and thrilled, then both are devastated for different reasons.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 15 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm ugly crying.   And I'm super relieved that Bella is going to Edward instead of running from the heart break.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 20 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Bella got there to fight, but Edward had already seen some sense.    :)   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

Summary:

Two men who couldn't be more opposite and one woman. Her growth, happiness and sorrow.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5686 Read Count: 2496
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2018 Updated: 05 Aug 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Peter is a total asshole.   I can't believe he shattered so many lives and is just "like get over it already Bella".    He is disgusting.

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella doesn't even see the crapthat Peter did and is still doing as emotional abuse.....controlling bastard.    Grrrr.......    Not that I have any strong feelings about this or anything.   LOL

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dam!   Rose should get with Peter.   They would be an asshole match made in hell.   LOL

P.S. I just randomly tried your story and ended up really liking it.   I normally would never read a story that doesn't list any characters or pairings at all.   If you change that, your readership might go up.

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward sure was angry and a bit of an asshole to Bella.   I wonder what happened to Alice.   hmmmm........

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Date: 23 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hope there is a reason Edward is being such a prick.   And I hope he stops soon.   Alice and Esme and Emmett are working overtime to get Bella to feel welcome.   If I was Bella, I would have left crying by now.

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Date: 05 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward should take some of that blame he is dishing out.   He introduced Alice to Tanya and thus James.

Summary:

ADITLOAOG

Why was it always me? Why couldn't I be normal? Did I have a tattoo on my forehead saying Tasty Meal, Feel Free to Kill Me'?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Contests & Competitions
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12024 Read Count: 2155
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2018 Updated: 01 Mar 2019
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Human days

I loved and voted for this story when it was in the contest.   I love it when Jasper and Bella get revenge on Malice and Fuckward.     More of this 1 shot would be amazing, but actually anything written by you is.   :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

you're too kind, but I love to hear it xx

Alexis

Summary:

wtas

 

They survived the Chitauri and all that came after that bringing the team closer than ever, but now friendships will be tested and boundaries pushed. But When the Ash Settles and all there is left is chaos, things need to change. Sequel to THoaFG


Categories: Avengers, Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Clint
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4656 Read Count: 550
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2018 Updated: 20 Sep 2020
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read it on your site first, but love this.   I'm excited for more to come.

Mate of Choice by Manasseh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Two vampire lovers try and have it all...What happens when they ignore the mating pull for too long?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7048 Read Count: 1176
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2018 Updated: 25 Jun 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well if that isn't the definition of "Karma's a Bitch", I don't know what is.   I loved this.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story so much.  I'm a big fan of karma.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love the karma and irony of this story.

Bella Has Changed by Manasseh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Edward has noticed some differences in Bella....


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3674 Read Count: 643
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2018 Updated: 28 Jun 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved bossy Bella.   Edward was being a hypocritical douche.

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Date: 13 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good job Bella!  That will show him.   LOL

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like Bella taking control of Edward's emo controlling ass.   :LOL

Summary:

FOYS

 

In the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness … or succumb to the world’s worst pain, losing someone that had no reason to die …

Edward Cullen, a decorated fireman, after losing a woman in a deadly apartment fire, left his life and family in Seattle, trying to escape the ghost of the beautiful woman, the concert mistress of Seattle Symphony. He stayed away from Seattle, living in Boston, working as an arson investigator until his mother called him, informing him that she had cancer. Without a second thought, Edward moved home to help his family.

Dr. Isabella Swan, a renowned oncologist, specializing in women’s cancers, went through the paces of life. Her mother, an ovarian cancer survivor, was her impetus to become a doctor. However, she was closed-off and had been for many years … since the death of her twin sister, Angela, in an apartment fire. Bella focused on her job, working to forget the empty pain of losing her soul mate. Even eight years after her death, Bella was profoundly broken because of it. She never let anyone in … Until … a handsome, sexy man and a son of one of her patients … Edward Cullen …

Everything in her mind told her it was wrong, but in the blink of an eye, your world can change. You can experience the greatest happiness. Your life can come back to life, especially when you find your new soul mate … the Fire of your Soul.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115672 Read Count: 29410
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2018 Updated: 25 Aug 2021
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That is terrible that no one thought to tell Edward that Bella was his mom's doctor.

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Date: 31 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Aro has gone totally off the deep end.   But with such a tragic story, I probably would have too.    

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 07 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I wonder if Edward is having sexy dreams about Bella as well.    Bella is sure having some hot ones.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 06 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

The reunion was sexy.   fans self.....    

I wonder if the killer/arsonist lost a loved one to cancer or a fire???   Or were they fired from their job???   Or were they a jilted omr night stand???    Hmm....

Whatever the aronist's reasons are they are escalating....

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 23 Aug 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Victoria and Angela both helped Bella come to grips with her feelings for Edward.     The investigation is supper scary.     I wonder who the creepy man is.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 05 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Esme and Renee are going to be as happy as a kid in DisneyLand knowing Bella and Edward are going to the benefit together.   :)    I wonder if the gossip will flow.

Bella and Edward's dinner date was steaming up until that douche of an arsonist ruined the night.    Being a cock blocker makes the crime of arson twice as bad.    Shakes head seriously.....    ;)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 22 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward and Bella should have pressed charges for assault.   I have a feeling they will both regret that decision.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 05 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That chapter was heart shattering.  So many people will be devastated.    

I wonder if the fire was an accident or if that disgruntled musician that didn't get Angela's job had anything to do with it.   hmmm......   I'm a paranoid suspicious bitch.   LOL

I'm hooked already.

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Date: 26 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Wpw, this fire victim is really busy with his vengeancce plan.   How has no one seen him?   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 10 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Super glad to read their interest in each other.   I'm worried about another arsonist.  Hmmm.....

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Date: 11 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Edward and Bella both are just destroyed.  :(

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Date: 18 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wonder if Angela's spirit was trying to help Edward out as well.   When he sees Bella being his mom's doctor, that might send him off again.   I'm worried for the both of them.

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Date: 26 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

Awe...   That was a sweet epilogue that really wrapped up how everyone progressed in 10 years.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 19 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Edward and Bella both needed therapy for past issues before the fire even.   I'm glad that they went together and are healing.

I loved Edward's casual "had to do it now" proposal.    :)

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 04 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

I'm super relieved that all 4 of them made it out with only minimal injuries.   Edward and Charlie are going to be pissed off all over again when they hear about Peter's involvement and intentions.   Grrr....   

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 06 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well it seems Edward is diving right in.  So Edward knows who Bella is now, but i wonder if Bella knows the history between Edward and Angela. 

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Date: 06 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well it seems Edward is diving right in.  So Edward knows who Bella is now, but i wonder if Bella knows the history between Edward and Angela. 

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Date: 12 Aug 2021 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

I have a feeling everyone will physically heal before they metally heal from all of that trauma.     Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 19 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Peter is kind of douchey.....   ugh.....   He acts like he's never been let out in public before.   

Everyone else seems like they are having a good time, except for having to deal with the sleezy douche canoe.'

Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 01 Feb 2019 Title: Fire Of Your Soul

Thanks for letting us know.  :)

Summary:

 

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Summary: At eighteen Edward was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit. It’s now six years later, and he has been released four years early. His bail conditions have been set. He has to find somewhere to live and get a full-time job, both things he has found in a small sleepy town. All he wants to do is keep out of everyone's way and move on with his life. Will this sleepy town of Forks, Washington let him, especially when they find out why he was in prison?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229926 Read Count: 52355
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2018 Updated: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: trbuie Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2018 Title: What Do You Want From Me

No contest is shown here to read.

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Date: 20 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This Cheney dude is a douche to everyone.    He is showing it too.

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Date: 03 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That Ben dude is one sick fucker.

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Date: 20 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh hell no....  this is giving me awful flashbacks to horrible administrators that I had to deal with in my teaching career.    Ugh....   poor everyone. 

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Date: 07 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love their book club idea.   It should bring them even closer together.   I'm beginning to think Edward was getting a touch jealous of Eric asking Bella out repeatedly.    LOL

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Date: 17 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

The 4 baby story addition seemed to come out of nowhere.  ---shrugs---   But I love Edward as a principal and Bella as a counselor after all that they've been through.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 19 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Poor Edward, he probably feels more at peace and sadder at the same time.  I wonder if Bella will be upset that Charlie told Edward so much of her story.  Hmmm....

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Date: 25 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think it can only be good that they are both opening up to each other.

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Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I think Cheny is using this Tony guy as an excuse.   I think Cheny hurt Bella and I hope little Bear proves it.    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing.

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Date: 10 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

They make little steps of progress, but they are both just so dam sad.   I'm sdad too now.  :(    Really good chapter.

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Date: 22 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Dam!  Ben was more of an evil bastard than I thought he was and for a much longer time frame too.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 09 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward is so sweet.  He is going full out with helping Bella.

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Date: 14 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It seems like so many of your characters need a hug.  :)

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Date: 13 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

It seems like Edward and Bella are both getting some closure concerning their past.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 13 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

It seems like Edward and Bella are both getting some closure concerning their past.   Thanks for writing and sharing. 

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Date: 02 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Excellent chapter....

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Date: 19 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward seems to be fitting in.  AAAAWWWWW

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Date: 05 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think they are helping each other little by little.

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Date: 31 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel so bad for Edward.  You would think that Mrs. Cheney would have named who really beat her up since it wasn't Edward.   I suspect the husband.   ugh.....

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Date: 07 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Poor Edward..... He expects the absolute worst from everyone and doesn;t expect anything from himself.

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Date: 21 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward's past is horrible enough, but I worry that Bella's may be worse or eqyally as bad.  And it may be ongoing.

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Date: 27 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Those 2 talking together but not discussing either of their own lives is a good starting point for them.

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Date: 02 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

There are enough criminals in the world.  I hate when cops are bad too.

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Date: 21 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Emmett is sticking his foot in it huh?

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well I am certainly confused about the necklace now.

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well I am certainly confused about the necklace now.

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Date: 15 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well I am certainly confused about the necklace now.

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Date: 05 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella and Edward both are such great supports for each other.   I'm shocked at the revalation of how Edward and Esme are related.   

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Date: 22 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

oh hell, I hate scary cliffys

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Date: 28 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Emmett is too gullible and Cheney has him bamboozled.   I am disgusted that Emmett seems to believe Cheney over Edward.  ugh.....     

Esme and Edward's conversation was sweet.    As was Edward's dinner with the Whitlock's.

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Date: 04 May 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Angela seems sketchy as sketchy as her husband.    Hmmm......    The 4 person date was sweet.  They sure have to go through a lot to avoid the asshole.  

I'm worried about Bella. 

Great chapter.    Thanks for writing. 

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Date: 21 May 2019 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

All of that probably happened to Lauren, but Cheney probably did it.  I wonder why she is going along with it.  Cheney probably threatened her.  He is so sick.

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Date: 25 May 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

You may be HEA gals, but you sure terrorize your characters first.    LOL    I think I might hate that asshole cop just as much as the Cheneys.    Thank you for writing.

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Date: 01 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Cheney is an asshole extreme.   ugh.....

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Date: 08 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Dam!   Ben amd Angela have affected so many lives in a horrible way.   Thanks for writing and sharing.