Reviews by trbuie
Summary:

Love That Dirty Water Banner

Edward is the new pitcher for the Boston Red Sox in 2013.  He hears the voice of an angel as she sings the National Anthem.  He is immediately smitten.  He asks the manager to find out who she is so he can find out more about her.   Bella is a vocal student at Berklee.  How will she balance college and being the girlfriend of a major-league baseball player?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6484 Read Count: 2319
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2017 Updated: 06 Jul 2020
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: A New Season; a New Team

Well Edward sure was persistent in meeting Bella.  I like that.

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Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Never Could Be a Yankee

That was a really sweet date.

Eala by Alyscia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

26167373-10159870349445192-1624629287814295822-nEdward Cullen and Bella Swan have an instant attraction from the first night he walks into her pub. The mob boss and the enforcer's daughter have more in common than they know. Danger is the name of the game, but they must be willing to sacrifice their love for their safety. Will their secrets stay hidden, or will they spill along with their blood?    

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49457 Read Count: 57106
[Report This] Published: 30 Nov 2017 Updated: 23 May 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I guess I see his POV, but I still think Carlisle fucked up a lot of things.



Author's Response:

Yes, yes he did

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Date: 26 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

So very sad



Author's Response:

:( it gets better

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Date: 19 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Carlisle is kind of a dick.



Author's Response:

Yeah just a bit lol 

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Date: 06 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It sounds like the only reason Bella and Carlisle got caught was because Carlisle was a dumb ass and couldn't shoot anybody.  hmp....



Author's Response:

yeah lol Thank You for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 12 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I hate the humiliation torture, but I couldn't have kept reading if you had written a rape.  Thank goodness.

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Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This seems like this story is going to be a tear jerker.  I'm getting ready.

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Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It seems like if anyone would be able to deal with a criminal life style, it would be Bella.  hmmm........

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Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward seems to be really surprised that a woman isn't hanging all over him.  I think they both knopw the other is at least a little interested.  But who is going to admit it first?   Hmmmm.........

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Date: 27 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well Edward was blunt as hell at the end there.   LOL    Bella probably doesn't give a shit though.

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Date: 23 May 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

So Alice was a hoe bag to the end.   hmmmm............    



Author's Response:

lol Yes she was Thank you for sticking with the story and reviewing!

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Date: 29 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass and quit being a jerk.  He can't have it both ways.



Author's Response:

No he can't thank you for reading and reviewing

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Date: 04 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think Bella is more cautious than Edward is.  LOL



Author's Response:

Maybe, lol Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 09 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm suspicious of Alice now.   hmmmm.......



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading adn reviewing 

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Date: 12 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I don't know who is a bigger dick Carlisle or Emmett in this chapter.   Edward might be since he hasn't texted Bella back.



Author's Response:

Bella didnt text Edward she was just waiting for him in general. But it does hurt waiting not knowing what is going on. thank you for reading and reviewing

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Date: 02 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm so happy that Bella is so quick thinking.   I hope she doesn't let the women or Carlisle push her around or tell her what to do.

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Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

It seems like no one is reallu understanding what Bella is going through or feeling.   The other women are just useless.  ugh.....   She needs to have a heart to heart with Edward about her feelings, frustrations, and everything in her head.

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Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well they pretty much knew at least 1 mole was in Carlisle's group.  I still don't trust Alice.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

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Date: 29 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bella is right.  If the Cullens got to kill Alice, then Bella should get to kill Carlisle.  I think, hopefully, they are about to bond while doing some ass kicking.  

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Date: 22 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I knew something was up with Alice.  Istill think she is shady though.   Dam her and Carlisle.  They are some morons.



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 11 May 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Is it bad that I loved Bella's freak out and shooting of Alice?   I guess I still haven't forgiven her phone using ass!   LOL

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Date: 23 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yeah, I would want Aro dead, but I'm still pissed at nosy, dumb ass Carlisle too.



Author's Response:

Yeah Carlisle isnt the brightest sometimes. 

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Date: 08 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I still think Carlisle's stupidity is what caused Charlie's murder and it seems he is still a moron.

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Date: 15 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's good that Bella is facing her past memories of her dad and his belongings.   I guess it's good that Carlisle faced the fact that he is an asshole douche.   ugh.....    I wonder who the leak is.



Author's Response:

He is a douche, and more clues to come :)

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Date: 04 May 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hopefully the little bit of talking that Bella did with Edward will start her healing.    It doesn't sound like Alice is going to get forgivien really, at least by Edward.



Author's Response:

Thank You for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

Mechanics and Mistletoe

Bella, an uptight, cold executive, is on her way home for Christmas. The first Christmas she’s been home since she started working for the Fortune 500 company that hired her from college, almost ten years ago. The only reason why she’s going home is to meet her brother’s new wife and her parents threatened to cut her out of the will if she didn’t make time to see her family. However, it’s snowing, a blizzard and Bella’s car wasn’t really designed for the cold. Or snow. Or anything other than sunny, perfect weather.

Edward Cullen is alone on Christmas Eve, working, as usual. His family was long gone and all he had left was his family business, Cullen Towing Service and Garage, though that wasn’t going well for him. Business was slow. His bills were piling up and he was afraid he was going to lose his livelihood if something didn’t turn around. Over the radio, he heard about a stranded driver, stuck on the back road. Edward pulled on his winter coat, gloves and started his truck, driving to the location.

A small sports car was stuck in a ditch, almost completely covered with snow. A beautiful woman, wearing heels and a fur coat was shivering outside her car. Edward immediately recognized her as the girl he once knew and had secretly crushed on for years. Her brother, Jasper, pretty told him to fuck off and said that she was too good for him, a grease-monkey, a blue-collar boy.

Can this uptown girl fall for a guy with grease on his hands?

Banner by Clo ...  thanks girlie!!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44621 Read Count: 13896
[Report This] Published: 11 Dec 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

That was great!

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Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm actually glad that Jasper, Alice, his father in law and all of his cronies are going away for so much more than beating up Edward and trashing his place.  That is 1 thing that Edward doesn't have to have a speck of guilt over.

Bella and Edward should think of something that they would both love to do for a living together, but do it in a totally different town than Chicago, Forks, or any where in Washington.  LOL

I now what you are going to do to us next.....You have a cancer patient declining chemo.......  Death?    Funeral?    Sad letters left behind??   

Bring it On!!!  I'm ready!!!    LOL

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Date: 25 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Jasper sure was an ass, but Alice was a piece of work too.   Edward and Bella are too sweet.

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Date: 13 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It sounds like all of Bella's family are assholes.  I wouldn 't want to ge to see them either.  It goes both ways too.  I didn't read about any visits or attempted visits from them either.

Poor Edward seems so lonely and alone too.  These 2 need to get snowed in for about a month and then disappear, it sounds like.  LOL

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Date: 16 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dam!   Jasper the douche bag has partly ruined both his sister's and Edward's life.  He deserves some come upance.  I think Bella and Edward should tell his ass off together.   I wonder if Bella's mom is in on .the ass hatery

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Date: 20 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't know how someone can be as big an asshole as Jasper was and still is.  ugh......   

Summary:

fc

A Scottish Christmas Tale. Four broken souls reunited at Christmas. Will they be able to overcome the ghosts of their past, future and present? - Reverse Harem -


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7999 Read Count: 10408
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
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Date: 13 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awkward to me....  I feel weird for Bella.

Summary:

puss in boots

You know that saying, 'The straw that broke the camel's back!' Well, they didn't listen to me. A girl, no, a woman can only take so much teasing and cold shoulder, before she grows up and leaves you behind!  Coming of Age, One-Shot in Bella's POV


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Boots
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6157 Read Count: 984
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2017 Updated: 18 Dec 2017
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Date: 26 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Crunch Time

Had to re-read this fic before I read your new sequel.   It's still fabulous and I can't wait to see what comes next for these two.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 26 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Crunch Time

Had to re-read this fic before I read your new sequel.   It's still fabulous and I can't wait to see what comes next for these two.    Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 26 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Crunch Time

Had to re-read this fic before I read your new sequel.   It's still fabulous and I can't wait to see what comes next for these two.    Thanks for writing and sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Glad yo re-enjoyed it xx

Alexis

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Date: 19 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Crunch Time

Well that worked out really well for Bella.  Everyone else except the parentals were douches.  I always liked Garrett and Bella together....  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah, they were immature and she outgrew them,

Love me some Garrett, now he is a man lol xx

Alexis

Summary:

TMTIC

Would you like to know what Christmas means to me now, this year? Well, in that case, I'm gonna have to tell what it used to mean, before, so you get a comparison, so to speak! (Jasper's musing P.O.V)  J/ B pairing

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5058 Read Count: 387
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
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Date: 26 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Naughty Or Nice

I liked all the fun they all had once Edward and Alice were away.   Alice was the biggest bitch I think I've ever read so far in this story.   I don't think even Aro could help her.  I feel bad for Alice's future mate.

Happy Holidays..............



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yup, she's just selfish and mean,

but she has no idea how much she's missed being like that xx

Alexis

Summary:

There will always be a rivalry between them until that day where everything nearly burnt down around them.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23812 Read Count: 5135
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2018 Updated: 12 Mar 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't know how you consider car wrecks with death, fluffy.  LOL.   But the story is great so far.  I love their team work.

Summary:

HDCS

Charlie Swan, is getting married and his future bride seems quite mysterious! Bella is moving to Forks before starting college, this will be her chance to get to know the woman and her family. Twilight AU Multi-POV Bella &? (you tell me)


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30485 Read Count: 3918
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2018 Updated: 21 Apr 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Bring Your Daughter, To The Slaughter

I love your stories on ALL writing sites.  ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

you're a star. You're also my 3rd top reviewer so congratz to you xx

Alexis

Summary:

ASLD

Bella Swan lies changing into a vampire, but who bit her? She's surrounded by friends and enemies, Edward can hear nothing and Alice says she sees nothing! Who is responsible and why is Jasper so happy about it? Edward never wanted this, even if Bella did, this was never the plan! Twilight AU BxJ pairing


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Contests & Competitions
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11789 Read Count: 2639
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2018 Updated: 02 Mar 2019
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Well This Is A Conundrum

Your story was one of the 3 I voted for.  Yay!!   I would definitely read more of yummy Bella and Jasper.   :)    Congratulations on your win.



Author's Response:

Thanks,

 you're a star and I'm glad you enjoyed it xx

Alexis

Summary: Past Featured Story

AMDFT

Crown Prince Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is the heir to the throne in the small independent country, Gevalia. His life is all about duty, honor and pride for his country. However, he’s lonely, focused on his career. When his younger brother makes some poor choices, Edward is forced to fly to the United States to smooth out diplomatic relations and spend six months looking for a bride, with some pretty stiff stipulations by his mother, the Queen of Gevalia.

Isabella Swan is the oldest daughter and now owner of the Swan Family Bakery, Inc. 1897. She went to college to be a teacher but was forced to forego her dreams when her father was diagnosed with Parkinson’s disease. On a chance evening, a handsome stranger slips during a summer rain storm into her bakery and awakens something inside.

Who is he?

Where did he come from?

Why is she drawn to him?

All that is known is that Prince Charming is a real person and Bella is about to live A Modern-Day Fairy Tale. But will it end in a happily ever after?

Banner by Clo Rodeffer! Thank you, girlie!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194069 Read Count: 129904
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2018 Updated: 02 Jul 2019
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

It's so good to read another chapter of this wonderful story.  Your 'decent' characters are sorely missed and your 'evil' characters I miss hating on.   I hope you had a good break and are having a relaxing wonderful holiday season.  :)

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Date: 30 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42

I can't wait to read about the correct asses being kicked.   LOL    Great chapter and thanks for writing.  :)

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Date: 19 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44

You made me ugly cry.   That was traumatic.   Thanks for writing.

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Date: 06 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I am pleased that EVERYONE is being super cautious of Malice.   I want her in a cell so bad along with any accomplices.    

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Date: 06 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I am pleased that EVERYONE is being super cautious of Malice.   I want her in a cell so bad along with any accomplices.    

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Date: 28 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was a really sweet, romantic and sexy date.   I hope Edward is ready to head off potential trouble makers.

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Date: 06 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

After the hell Bella and Edward have been through, Esme is being a bitch.

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Date: 16 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

That was so intense, but so very sad.

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Date: 09 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40

How awful for everyone.

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Date: 23 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Alice has really messed up bella's thinking.  I hope her discussions with Charlie,  Jake, and Angela help her realize the truth.

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Date: 30 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I don't trust Alice either.   She can't be shamed.   She might even end up hurting Charlie.   I wouldn't put it past her/    

I'm happy that Bella is going to move in with Edward.   I hope his mother etc.. doesn't act like a douche to Bella.   Her self confidence is already almost non-existant. 

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Date: 25 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I'm guessing Alice is the source for the evil article.  Considering she is the only 1 who has called Bella a whore.  

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Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I think Edward unintentionally is setting Bella up for embarrassment by not being honest about who he is.    

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Date: 16 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm ready for Alice to be on the street or arrested.  ugh.....   I'm sick of her.   But I am pleased that the truth is out now.

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Date: 07 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

That's horrible that the bank loan officer was so awful and full of glee about the Swan's losing the bakery and then disappointed? when it was paid off????   What kind of banker are they?

I think their first date should allow for a lot of talking and intimacy.

I can't wait until Alice gets hers.   She is such a twat waffle.

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Date: 14 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I can't wait for their sweet date.  I'm worried Alice is going to really physically hurt Bella or Charlie .

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Date: 02 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39

I'm worried about who (Kate?) might be tabloid stalking Bella and poor Rose.   Esme is being a bit of a douche canoe.

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Date: 02 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm happy that Bella had a wonderful date with Edward and no one was an ass hole.  But I hate that she did a (non) fuck and duck.    grrr......       I hope Edward goes and looks for her to figure out why she did that.

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Date: 09 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Alice is just ugh......   I'm glad that Edward came after Bella and interrupted her and Angela.

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Date: 11 May 2019 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

I'm so happy that Bella and Mason talked tjings out and are so very close again.   Everyone that counts seems to support them.   Great chapter.   Thanks for writing.

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Date: 23 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38

That's the only way those rags can sell paper is to print sensational lies.

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Date: 08 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor Rose and Emmett.  It's especially sad that Emmett feels like he can't tell any other members of his family the truth.

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Date: 31 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Poor Bella..... Alice is a total shrew.  I hope she learns a dam lesson soon.

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Date: 19 May 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm loving everyone except for Alice.   Maybe she should get arrested or at least a scare of some kind.

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Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Esme and her pushy ideas for an arranged marriage to a bitch are horrible.  Good for Edward for standing up to the shrew.

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Date: 10 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Alice is hideous.....

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Date: 04 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I sure wouldn't take Alice on the plane out of the country.   I wouldn't let Alice within a football field length from Bella.

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Date: 11 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think they are just pushing a druggie into the corner.   She is already hateful and spiteful.   I wouldn't put anything past her even murder.

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Date: 18 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm hoping that Alice got a huge dose of karma and has learned her lesson.   Hopefully she will be nicer and more grateful for what she had.   Super happy that Bella isn't going into that situation.

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Date: 26 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm with the doubters.   I don't trust Alice 1 little bit.

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Date: 31 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm happy that the steward is the only person being rude so far.    The only exception being Alice but she always is rude.  LOL

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Date: 21 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Emmett sure is a mess.  Dam!!

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Date: 28 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Please tell me Alice is going to get the rudeness slapped out of her.  She is AWFUL!!!!

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Date: 17 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

God, Alice is awful.  She didn't even try to hide her bitchiness from a stranger.  Dam!  Edward needs to ditch the vapid women at charity events even if he has to ditch Jake as well.

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Date: 15 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Of course Alice is going to get with nasty Kate's plan.  They both need to be in jail.

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Date: 22 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

I hate that Edward and his family can't stop crazy Alice and crazy Kate from hurting Bella and Edward even more.   I mean Alice is detained and she is still gonna do damage?   Someone is shirking on a duty if that happens.

Merry Christmas to you and yours.   Have a great one.

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Date: 05 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Hopefully Alice goes down in flames.   I hope they catch Katherine.

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Date: 12 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

That sex scene made my laptop smoke.  LOL.    I do think Kate's whole family is nuts.

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Date: 29 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

That sounded like an amazing working vacation.     I loved the pictures on tumblr.  I felt like I was there while reading.    The sexy scenes made me jealous of your characters too.  LOL  great chapter!!

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Date: 05 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Punishing the rapist doesn't seem like enough in most cases.   sigh.....   I hope Rose will talk to Bela.

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Date: 12 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

Rose is having trouble coping understandably.   

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Date: 27 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

I'm happy that Mason is staying with Charlie.  He needs some support.

Esme is probably not handling everyone being mad at her very well.   But I hope she was sincere to Bella.   Although it's gonna take a lot more than a few words for Bella to believe anything Esme says now.   If Esme was that horrible to Bella then she might be horrible to Rose as well, if she ever gets a chance to meet her.

I like Billy and Rachael.   Their characters are friendly and loyal.   Jake is very similar.

Hopefully Bella will think about everything and at least call Mason.   

Great tear jerker of a chapter.  Thanks for writing.

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Date: 03 May 2019 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Well hell...... I'm leaning towards the idea of Mason leaving the thrown to be for the best for him AND Bella.    Esme better not be in that apartment.   Our couple deserve some time to be alone to reconnect and discuss things.    Bella needs to start her physical therapy too.

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Date: 19 May 2019 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

I'm pleased that all the jealous evil harpies have been punished.    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing.

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Date: 25 May 2019 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

Mason and Bella definetly are a tight couple again.   It is going to take more time for Esme to be forgiven.    Her reasons for tearing Bella up are kind of lame.   I wouldn't be in a hurry to forgive her.

Good chapter.   Thanks for writing.

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Date: 11 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Charlie talking about his daughter and his son at the press conference was too sweet.   I also laughed at Bella teasing Charlie about his bakery boners.   hehehe    Great chappter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 18 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 51

Well at least Alice has a chance to do something with her life now if she CHOOSES to.   I wonder if she will, or if she'll become a homeless druggy like her ex boyfriend.   hmmmm......

Charlie visiting was something that Bella really needed.   And I am glad that she and Esme both seem to be extending olive brances.

Looking forward to smexy times..  ;)    Great chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52

It looks like Esme finally learned a few important things before it was too late.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 29 Jun 2019 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 53: A Vanity Fair Article

I loved the magazine article approach to this chapter.   Thanks for writing and sharing.

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Date: 01 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 54: Epilogue 1

That epi was all sexy and lovey.   It was swooney.   (That bishop was ugh though.  ;)   Thanks for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 55: Epilogue 2

That was a wonderful and totally swoony ending to this great story..   Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us.  :)

Summary:

Category: Twilight / Supernatural crossover

Summary: Sam and Dean take their new apprentice to meet their mentor, Bobby Singer, and things get a little out of hand. Episode 2, sequel to Stick Her with a Fork. Written for the 2017 Fandoms for Hope and Relief. (language, violence, character death – not a main character) adventure, supernatural, action, romance.

Title: Daggers, and Tacos, and Vampires, Oh My!

Author: GeezerWench  

Characters / Pairing: Dean/Bella, Sam, Bobby Singer

Genre adventure, supernatural, action, romance

Rating: M (language, violence, character death – not a main character)

Beta/Pre-Reader: Bonzie

Banner by: GeezerWench

Words: total 3925

Prompt/inspiration:

Complete. 2 chapters.

Disclaimer: Derivative work. I make no money.

A/N: Written for the 2017 Fandoms for Hope and Relief in response to Hurricanes Harvey, Irma, and Maria, and the earthquake in Mexico on 09/19/2017. It brought in $680.00!

 

 

 


Categories: Supernatural TV Series, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Dean
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3957 Read Count: 571
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2018 Updated: 05 Mar 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Daggers Chapter 1

I love how you naturally included Bella into the Winchester's world.



Author's Response:

Well, here you are over here!

Thanks for the stalking ... er, following and REVIEWS!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Daggers Chapter 2

Idjit love sums it up.   LOL    All of these characters go so naturally together.  It doesn't seem like fanfiction, but original fiction.   Great job.

Careful Now. by StayingHidden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 77]
Summary:

Bella love her lavish life, but it doesn't all come easy. Not every Swan is pure.

Join Bella and the usual characters as they go about the life that comes with being part of one of the biggest crime families in the United States. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25096 Read Count: 10705
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2019
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That would be awkward and annoying having to put up with Jessica's ass if she really is that much of a bitch.

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wonder why Edward even hired slimy James.   hmmmm......

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Jake is being a little clingy to Bella.   I think he does like her.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't think I like this Edward at all.   He sluts around with whoeer he wants and even rubs it in Bella's face.   But Bella can't even dress skimpy?     And Jake is creepy as hell.....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella needs to wake up concerning Jake.   I hope she does soon.  And Edward needs to quit being so bossy.   That is what would make me mad and that's probably why Bella is pretending she's taken with someone else.    They are both a clusterfuck.   LOL

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Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

It's not like Jake will tell the truth.    He'll just be passive aggressive with Bella and deny it.