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Shaky Ground by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
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Shaky Ground

Dr. Edward Masen lived a lonely, miserable existence as an emergency room attending at Harborview Medical Center. He ate, breathed and lived for his job. He refused to even think about women. To him, they were only distractions and he didn't trust anyone, except his mother. 

Dr. Isabella Swan just moved to Seattle, after completing her residency in Chicago. She was hired as a pediatrician at Harborview, becoming a pediatric emergency room fellow. She was not looking for a relationship, only focusing on her job. It was hate at first sight for both. Or was it? But, their attraction could not be denied. 

Unfortunately, a natural disaster rattles their lives ... the world was turned upside down when escalating earthquakes plagued the Seattle area. Will they able to survive the danger of being on 
Shaky Ground

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120201 Read Count: 123928
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2017 Updated: 01 Dec 2017
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Date: 19 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm glad that Edward came to the party and the realization that he wants to be loved.  I hate how Esme is such an unknowing bitch.  He needs to tell her and Bella ALL the truth.  I'm sure Esme would shut her pie hole when she hears the truth.

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Date: 22 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I feel like Edward is getting close to revealing everything to Bella and maybe start trusting her.  Hopefully he will tell his mom about slutty Tanya as well.

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Date: 26 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

As a former teacher, I identify with that helpless feeling that you can't do enough for a child who is hurting or being abused.  I hated that.

Just as long as Bella and Edward are both moving in the direction of together, it's great.

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well I'm glad that Bella figured things out and that Edward finally confessed to what had been done to him by Tanya to his parents.

Bella is going to be more freaked out by earth quakes since Edward got hurt by one.  

If the bitch ends up in the emergency room, it would serve her right if no one treated her.  grrrrr.......   

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh hell....  I don't know who is going to be tramatized more....Little Jake that witnessed a murder or Bella for hearing about it and the earthquake of course.

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Date: 04 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Hopefully their individual therapy will put them both at ease.  Their sexy times were really sweet and romantic.

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Date: 02 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Rose's mom is horrible.  I'm glad that they all just left her there.

Edward ans Bella are going to have to work hard, but will be happy.

Summary:

IWJW

Now I know what you're thinkin'! But he stole that line from me, honestly. Ian Fleming, the author I mean. Twilight AU One-Shot, Jasper's P.O.V


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3997 Read Count: 302
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2017 Updated: 03 Jul 2017
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I still love this.  I would love to read more about a ballsy Bella that tells the Cullens to their face 'Pass', before her and Jasper leave them.  LOL  



Author's Response:

Thanks, yeah never really done that have I, well I might just have to lol xx

Alexis

Summary:

 

Summary: Parenting can be a hard job to tackle, but it can be harder when you are parallel parenting between twins. Whatever will these two do with the girls they love corrupting their lives?
Banner by: HeartForTwilight Productions 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212062 Read Count: 63533
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2017 Updated: 31 May 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Edward automatically thinks the worst of Bella, but Bella doesn't think the worst of him.  hmmm....   She assumes some kind of mistake was made and is trying to find answers.  But Edward is already placing full blame, even though he know nothing truthful.

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Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think they are fooling themselves if they think they are only friends.  They are dating without calling it that.  LOL

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Date: 28 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I'm glad for Mike that there was video.  And I'm thrilled the police caught the lunatic banshee.  I feel so bad for everyone else.

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Date: 20 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I like how Edward and Bella called their bluff.  Charlotte probably won't even be able to be found or be high on drugs when she is.  Maggie and her dad sure are having their plans back fire.  Bella and Edward getting married will stun poor Maggie to death.  LOL  

That Buckly guy is just an ass that will probably end up doing something to get thrown in jail and getting his own kid taken away.    Sounds like Angela is going down too.

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Date: 31 May 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I really enjoyed the glimse into the future.  Buckley hopefully got arrest and beat up in jail.  mwahaha   

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Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I didn't expect that level of cray cray from Maggie.  Dam!

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Date: 03 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I like that Edward and Bella have decided to be exclusive and date.  And I laughed hysterically that Maggie found out about it that way.  She is a bitch.  

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Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I think Bella and Edward are doing great with getting to know the girls.  And their own banter and teasing is quite swoony.

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well that definitely forced or encouraged Edward to face HIS feeling a little faster.  I think Rose planned that shit.  Because she knpws Bella and Kassie can not stand Mike.

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Date: 05 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

They both definitely have their flirt on.

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Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

ugh.... so many disgusting people.

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Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

As a teacher, unfortunately this whole scene is common.    Kids don't learn how to be bigots, racists, sexists or assholes on their own.  They always learn it from their home environment.   It's all so sad......

I'm creeped out by Maggie as well.  I wonder if she has anything to do with this drama.

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Date: 23 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I hate assholes.!!!   Those poor children.   And those dumb parents that are going to start shit.  sigh.......

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Date: 07 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well..... the adults are sure bing cautous.

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Date: 14 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Edward needs to loosen up on the possibility of a relationship with Bella.  Whatever will be will be.  I think their competitiveness is a form of flirting.   I like it.

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Date: 21 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am glad that our little foursome is getting along so well.  And the girls are learning a lot with each other.     But I am so relieved that Kassie and Bella are standing up to Alice.  She is just ridiculous.

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That Maggie person is just gross!!!  Ewww....  I almost feel like crying about the girls being sad to be separated.

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Date: 04 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

It would be great if that was the ending and there were no slutty bitches or bastards that will try to mess things up.

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Date: 04 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am more worried abou Buckley, Maggie and her crazy dad than I was about Charlotte.   But at least she gave some true info and has a chance.   Buckley's ex-wife might have a lot to say as well.

Those girls really lucked out getting away from that family and it's aquaintances.

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Date: 23 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It was kind that the cast gave Cordie new tickets.  She was so grown up and helpful when Bella went into labor. 

Summary:

change

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a very secluded life. After her father's death, she decides to make a change. With a map, dart, and life insurance money to fuel the trip, she is off on an adventure. On this trip with her, we will see things through her eyes, and maybe find a new friend or two as well. AH. No heavy drama planned, but may change as the characters grow and talk to me.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56350 Read Count: 48617
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2017 Updated: 30 Nov 2018
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Date: 09 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm worried that neither one of them know their roommates.  They could be horrible.

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Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Hopefully Edward isn't a horrible patient.   LOL

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Date: 22 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

The wedding gifts were truly heartfelt and spectacular.    I don't envy you writing first time sex.   Just please don't get hung up on talking about Bella' s 'barrier'.  Ugh...... in fact don't even mention that.  We know they are both virgins.   LOL 

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Date: 28 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

That would be awkward taking care of Edward the first time with his parents hovering.

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Date: 16 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Sweet chapter.   Esme really went above and beyond, huh?

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Date: 21 Sep 2018 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

It's kind of sad that they are wanting to be pregnant so soon.  I would think most couples would want SOME time alone first.

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Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I normally don't like wedding chapters of stories, because there are always other people bossing Edward and Bella around, telling them what they have to do, and not letting them see each other before the wedding.

However, I liked the wedding you wrote.  It was simple like your characters, what THEY wanted and really sweet.

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Date: 01 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So sweet.....   I really enjoyed your story.   :)

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Date: 10 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

It must be difficult to write virgin sex scenes.  You did really well tbough.   I would like to read some more about them not as virgins though.   Can't wait.

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Date: 11 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Clerks like Marcus need to keep their opinions to themselves if they want to stay out of trouble.

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Date: 19 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I'm happy for the 4 of them.   That poor baby that has a skank as a mother would be better off with anyone else.

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Date: 11 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Edward just has to fess up his virgin status and demand a paternity test if necessary.   Tanya and her dad are both ugh... it seems.

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Date: 18 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh well now I some what understand both of their awkwardness.  They have zero experience between them.  

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Date: 25 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

They're slowly getting closer and closer.  I like their adventure so far.

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Date: 02 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope the get to see each other as much when they get to San Francisco.

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Date: 05 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm so glad that Edward finally found the guts to ask her about travelling together.  They should get a lot closer now, that is, if they don't fight aboout money.

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Date: 29 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That sounds like an adorable date.  I'm jealous of fictional characters.  --shrugs--

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Date: 30 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope they continue to trust each other and grow closer.

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Date: 16 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm sad he lost some money, but I am so happy he found out about who is room mate would actually be before he had to see the hag.  ugh....

Bella and Edward rooming together is sweet.

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Date: 21 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

They sure seem to be getting along well.  It seems like fate or destiny that they met.

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Date: 07 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm happy that Edward was upfront with his feelings about Bella.

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I wonder why Edward seems sad at times.  Does he want to stay with Bella?  I hope so.  He has to know that she likes his company.

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Date: 04 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Well that would be hella stressful for all involved.......

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Date: 04 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Not many men would suggest that for an activity.   Edward is very enlightened and I'm jealous.  LOL

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Date: 11 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

They are really super sweet together.

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Date: 31 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I love that they are having a sweet, romantic, sexy, drama free honeymoon.   I definitely need some more angst free stories like this one.  :)

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Date: 08 May 2018 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I'm glad that they all, as a group, are standing up to Tanya the skank.   ugh.....

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Date: 13 May 2018 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm just happy they ran off the skanky Tanya.   

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Date: 21 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was a swoony date.  And they announced or admitted their feelings.  --squeals--

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Date: 20 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Bella must feel shocked and like she is in another world with Esme telling everyone that she is her new daughter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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A group of college students with clashing personalities win an all-expense paid weeklong vacation at a luxury resort in the Caribbean, thinking it will be spent on the beach in glorious sunshine. However, after landing it becomes very apparent that all is not as it should when the students find themselves alone on the island with only their pilot and one guide. Or are they..?

2nd Place in Favorite Undiscovered Gem category of Twific Fandom Awards 2017

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: Read & Enjoyed, El Jardín Trilogy
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85312 Read Count: 31088
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2017 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
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Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think the 'do-ers were just frustrated that they didn't find anything and took it out on Edward and the others.  I'm glad that Bella decided to stay with Edward.

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Date: 02 Feb 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

I hate that Alice got away.   And I still hate Carlisle with a passion.

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Date: 26 Jan 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

I never did trust Alice.

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Date: 24 Nov 2017 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

I think I would tie Carlisle's ass up until I got some dam answers out of him.   Maybe have someone guard him or throw him in the lava.  hmp....

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Date: 19 Jan 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

It seems more and more like they can't trust anyone.

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Date: 10 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Your AN exactly describes my thoughts.  Dam!   I sure am glad that Bella WAS able to savwe Edward though.



Author's Response: It won't answer your questions, but here's your teaser, I hope you like it :-D ---- “Stay close, people! Watch each other's backs!” Garrett said, but when I turned to him, I heard Kate cry out behind me. “Bella, get down—” I turned back around just in time to see something launching at me. Kate tried to tackle me out of the way, but we were both caught beneath it; a large rope net woven from tough vines. “Agh! This is what I get for trying to help you!” Kate complained loudly. “Hold still, I can get us out of here!” I said. I wiggled around, and even though my limbs were tangled with Kate's, I was able to turn the cutlass in my hand against the vines. “Oh my god, if you cut my hair, you are dead!” “Just a little ... further...” I groaned. The sharp cutlass blade easily sliced through the vines, freeing us both. Kate exhaled in relief. “Whew, good thing I was there to save your ass.” Just then, a black, round-tipped arrow grazed Kate's arm. “Ow! What the hell? I can't move my arm!” “The arrows must be tipped with some sort of non-lethal paralytic so they can capture us! Look out!" Tanya called out. An archer took aim at me. Her arrow whistled through the air, and I knew I wouldn't be able to dodge it in time. ----

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Date: 17 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

There is so much WTH when I read your updates, but I truly love it.  Almost every sentence uttered by any character would have me ask a question.   So.......   ;)

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Date: 29 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This is truly an addicting mystery.  I don't know what the hell is going on and I love it!   LOL

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Date: 15 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm still really wondering what kind of fuckery that Carlisle and Esme are up to.  hmmm....   I did enjoy Peter, Rose and Bella's beer crawl though.  LOL    And Emmett really knows his 'settling disputes' stuff.

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Date: 22 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Being an ex physics teacher, I love all of the distorted time ideas and speculations.  This is great.  I wish Edward didn't act so hot and cold toward Bella though.

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Date: 01 Dec 2017 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

That chapter was awesome and I loved howq Bella used the whole Groundhog Day effect.  She sure wormed a lot of information out of Carlisle.  huh??   I still don't trust him though.

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Date: 27 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

WTH????  I can honestly say that I NEVER see anything coming at all.   LOL   You shock the hell out of me in every chapter.

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Date: 06 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OMG....so many more questions....  time travel??  worm holes???   Hopefully someone will get to kick Carlisle's ass soon.



Author's Response: Who do you hope it will be in that case ;-) You can find the teaser for the next chapter on my website. The adress is mariecarro dot wixsite dot com slash author The teaser is at the very top on the blog ;-)

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Date: 12 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

It seems like the boat was a trap to get them to the sea monstor.  They should put all of the folders together and let everyone read them.  Someone might have an idea about them.

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Date: 20 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

The teamwork killing the sea monstor was epic!   But I hate that they almost died.  Way more questions are coming up....is Bella getting flashes of past memories or is she seeing the future??  hmmm   I wonder how she understood their language.   

Darn Peter screwed up their possible relationship with the natives??.



Author's Response: About Bella's ability ... anything is possible ;-) Teaser ch. 13 “They seemed pretty human to me,” Victoria said. “And pretty stylish. What were they doing wearing masquerade masks?” Benjamin asked, but no one had the answer, obviously. “I think they're the island's inhabitants,” I told the others, but before I could elaborate further, Rosalie gave me a sarcastic reply. “Oh my gosh, do you really think so? The people inhabiting the island are the inhabitants? Wow, you're real smart.” Alice jumped in to defend me. “But Bella's right. One thing's clear; they must have been here a long time ... I just don't know how nobody noticed them before.” “Just because nobody told you about them, Alice doesn't mean they weren't noticed," Kate told Alice who stared at her as if it was preposterous that she wouldn't have been told about these inhabitants. Edward spoke over the both of them. “What we do know is that they've been watching us for a long time. They seemed to know me. To know Garrett.” Peter frowned. “Well, whoever these ... these 'Watchers' are, they're coming for us. And we'll be ready.” Garrett agreed with his best friend. “Peter's right. We've gotta barricade ourselves in. Block the entrances. Gather weapons, anything we can use to protect ourselves.” Kate sneered. “Oh, sure, great plan. Then what?! We just established that we've got no help coming, and a giant sea monster won't let us leave.”

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Date: 22 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Seems like more disagreement within the troops.   LOL

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Creepy....  Is this going to be kind of like Lost?   LOL  

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm still spooked.

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This seems like a nightmare version of "Lost" with potential radiation.    hmmmmm....

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So creepy people spying on them?  Extinct animals??   No one agreeing on crap??  Yep this is going to be bad.

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Date: 02 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy hell!  There is so much freaky stuff going on that it feels like someone's dream or nightmare or acid trip.  I guess Carlisle and whover his darling is are evil in some way.   I wonder what the sickos have planned.

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Date: 03 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I wonder if there is more to that Alice and Iris situation.  hmmm.....   Alistair and Tanya and Bella discovered a magical healing plant.  hmmmm........    And now Edward and Bella have to fight of the attackers buck naked.   Dam!  

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Date: 18 May 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Cute, sweet, satisfying, romantic ending.  Congratulations on finishing your wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am HEA to the core, so for me it couldn't end in any other way ;-)

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Date: 18 May 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Cute, sweet, satisfying, romantic ending.  Congratulations on finishing your wonderful story.

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Date: 18 May 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Cute, sweet, satisfying, romantic ending.  Congratulations on finishing your wonderful story.

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Date: 29 Dec 2017 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

I'm sad about the 2 deaths.   Grrr......   Why couldn't Carlisle have died?  --pouts--   That battle was intense though.

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Date: 05 Jan 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

The time travel back controlled by Bella was really cool.  I wish they found some concrete answers though.    I wonder what the heck is up with Victoria.

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Date: 08 Dec 2017 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

I kind of figured the 'Watchers' would be kind folks and Carlisle would still be a monster.  This chapter definitely proved that.    I hope Bella can reset things again to block evil bastard Carlisle.   I also feel sorry for Iris.   It almost seemed Alice was a little robot like as well there for a minute.  This isn't the first strange thing she has done.  hmmmm.......

And I love whatever amount of Bella and Edward loviness that you can give us.  :)

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Date: 15 Dec 2017 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

I am so riveted by this story and so frustrated at the same time.  I want to do a table flip Real Housewives style.   ugh......    It seems like there are too many baddies to ever get away from or do the right thing even if the crew wanted to.

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Date: 12 Jan 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Still don't trust Alice and I never will trust Carlisle or any of his machines......

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Date: 22 Dec 2017 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Love that Edward and Bella are all official.......   Really cute when Alistair was all loopy and dancing with Tanya.....   I'm not sure if I trust the pirate lady, BUT I trust her more than Carlisle.  He is awful.

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Date: 27 Apr 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Great chapter.  I am glad that Jane is dead.   I can't wait for Carlisle's end.

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Date: 09 Feb 2018 Title: The Mystery of El Jardín

Oh hell..... I can't stand Carlisle.

Summary:

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They had one shot to fix their future, to do that they needed to save Jasper…


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6101 Read Count: 1286
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2017 Updated: 18 Jan 2018
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Date: 18 Jan 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Maria is just so ugh...........

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Date: 27 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm just glad they are both awake and sane.  They can get on making Jasper see sense later.

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Date: 27 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm just glad they are both awake and sane.  They can get on making Jasper see sense later.

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Date: 05 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh holy hell...this is going to be difficult as hell for Peter and Bella.

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Date: 01 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dam!  So Peter and Bella are going to have to go through war and free Jasper.  Maybe they will kill Maria also. 

Summary:

 Just a little bit of fun on All Hallows eve…


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Horror, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1687 Read Count: 485
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2017 Updated: 06 Sep 2017
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad they had fun, but that would suck to only see your mate once a year.  ugh....   That would be horrible.    I loved their choice of prey.

Killer Mine by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

When life isn’t worth living, what’s a girl to do? Sometimes, not living life is the best way to feel truly alive. An entry for TreatsAndTricks3 Contest.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4255 Read Count: 320
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2017 Updated: 01 Nov 2017
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great and a unique and different reason for Bella to want to die.

Summary:

gullible

 

Those bastard's, I'll get them back for this if it's the last thing I do. How could I be so blind? I was just an object for them to fight over, neither actually wanted or loved me! Twilight AU


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46329 Read Count: 12580
[Report This] Published: 05 Nov 2017 Updated: 10 Feb 2018
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Hindsight Is 20/20

I'm ahead on the reading at FFN, but if you catch it up on this site, I'll read your amazing work on here.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yeah, I guessed that was your other name, 

glad you like this one too xx

Alexis

Summary:

Love That Dirty Water Banner

Edward is the new pitcher for the Boston Red Sox in 2013.  He hears the voice of an angel as she sings the National Anthem.  He is immediately smitten.  He asks the manager to find out who she is so he can find out more about her.   Bella is a vocal student at Berklee.  How will she balance college and being the girlfriend of a major-league baseball player?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6484 Read Count: 2319
[Report This] Published: 25 Nov 2017 Updated: 06 Jul 2020
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Game Day, Date Night

Great chapter.    Thanks for writing and sharing.