Reviews by trbuie
Never Say Never by Wombat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1025]
Summary:

Issued with a death sentence since birth Bella’s life was never her own; in an attempt to escape her abusive childhood she flees to Forks, Bella is destined to be with Edward for eternity but can he save her from the clutches of Aro and his army before its too late or will she be able to save herself.

This story contains Abuse, Violence, Love, War, Sex, Masturbation, Kidnapping, Rape, Death and a heap of other things.... Please don't read if you are not of age!!!!

Twilight Rocks But I Do Not Own It.... I do however own this story!!!!

This story is for Adults only. So Don't Read if you are not old enough......

I suck at summaries so please give my story a go.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58299 Read Count: 55216
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2010 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Killing him should have made Bella happy.  I hope that the others like that he's dead.  Update soon.



Author's Response:

You know Bella... she is too sweet for her own good.... I don't think she is sad that Phil is dead... I think it's more the guilt for being the one responsible..... The other are happy he is dead but not happy that they weren't the ones to tear him apart.... hehehe.... Thanks for leaving feedback... Next update around Wednesday

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Good chapter.  Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks a bunch!!!!!! Big Hug

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I'm glad that someone knows what is going on and is supportive of Edward and Bella.  I think I like the spirit ghost of Elizabeth Mason.  I hope that Jasper and Alice get back quickly.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review you are too good to me!!!!! I will post next ch super soon so keep an eye out

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Can't wait for more of Bella "convincing" the Cullens.  hehe  :)



Author's Response:

lol.. Thanks a bunch for reviewing... you are ace!!!!! I won't keep you waiting too long

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

That was an awesome chapter.  I loved it.  Update soon. ;)



Author's Response:

YAY!!!! Thanks heaps

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Please let them all kick James' ass.  I would so love that.  hehe



Author's Response:

hehehe... I am writing that chapt as we speak and I unfortunantly Bella has sidelined most of the family... hehehe I hope when you read it you enjoy

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Silly Alice.  She is so easily amused.  hehe  I would love to hear Jasper's planning session.  Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

hehehe... Thanks heaps for your review... wait until next chapter Alice get's even more sillier... hehehe

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

That was a great chapter and good riddance to James and Laurent.  I hope that you don't make Bella feel guilty about any of it.  Update soon. ;)



Author's Response:

lol...hummmmm... maybe just a little but Bella will bounce back in no time... hehehe Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OK, that was an adequate amount of guilt for Bella.  Not too much, not too little.  I love that Bella and Edward are so overcome that they drive the whole family to "go fuck".  hehehe  I hope that Edward got a front row seat for the Bella "self love".  hehe   Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks... I didn't want her to feel too guilty so I am glad you think I got the dosage right without going overboard.... hehehehe... I may go back and revisit the family fuck either as memories or outtakes because they will be fun to write... OMG of course Edward watched her and I sooooo can't wait for you to read EPOV... you may need some ice while you read it

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I can't believe that Bella stopped him.  She didn't have to stop him completely.  They could have done many things without having full sex.  sigh   Poor Bella, Poor Edward.  hehehe   I do love frustrated Jane though.  hehe   Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

hehehe... I know I know I was just as frustrated as you when she stoped him...lol... trust me they will be having the talk really soon as to what is ok and what is too far... It's only going to get worse for dear Jane... hehehe Thanks for reviewing once again you are a star

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Liked this chapter.  Good one.    :)



Author's Response:

hehehehe.... Thanks so very much.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Evil cliffy!  Man, you are such a big meanie pants!  hehehe   You should be ashamed leaving grown ass women in that sort of state.  LOL!   Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

Meanie pants hummmmm!!!!  well I had to stop somewhere and my evil side does enjoy torturing you all... hehehehehe I love that my story got you all worked up hehehehe.... you couldn't have stroked my ego more than you have with your review... YAY!!!! SqUeAl!!!! MWAH

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Never Say Never

You are right!  You relieved some of the tension just to create more.  hehehe  I'm not sure how you did that.  hehe  I'm routing for Bella to get Edward's pants off!  LOL   :)  Love you.



Author's Response:

hehehe I told you and frankly I don't know how I did it either... it was purely accidental but funny all the same... hmmmmm Edward without pants..... *drooling* fingers crossed.... MWAH for reviewing

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Can't wait to see how Bella deals with Tanya.  Update  soon. :)



Author's Response:

hehehehe... Me too... I'm sure it will be fun

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Aro is one evil son of a bitch in your story.  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

you are sooooo right I feel a little bad writting him this evil but it just keeps coming out.... hehehehe... what the hell does that say about me????? Thanks for reviewing and don't forget to check your email for the link to see what Bella was wearing in this ch

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

You evil tease!  hehe   How long will I, I mean Bella, have to wait?  LOL  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

HA!!!! you should know by now that I enjoy torturing you!!!! hehehehehe.... I promise neither you nor Bella will have to wait very long I am finishing the next ch as we speak so it's almost ready for you.... Thanks for reviewing you never let me down and it really does make me go faster.....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I loved the yumminess of the chapter.  Still hate creepy Aro and Tanya.  hehehe  I love that Marcus is waking up.  Hope that he helps our lovely Cullens.  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

hehehehe, any ch that has Edwar or Jasper in it are yummy as far as I'm concerned... hehehehe.... LMAO, I will be very interested to hear your thoughts on Tania in the near future, Your either gonna love me or hate me hehehehehe

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

OMG!  Totally yummy!  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

YUMMY you say, thanks a bunch but I think the next ch is better... hehehehhe MWAH your ace

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I hope that Bella will torture Tanya a lot.  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

LMAO!!! Thanks so much for your review and I am pretty sure i can arrange the torture of Tania, I'm thinking slow and painful hehehehehe, Don't forget to check your email for the link... MWAH!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Yummy, Yummy!  :)



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, MWAH!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Glad that Edward finally had enough of the bitch.  hehehe   But hate the evil cliffy!  Dam!  LOL  Update soon.  :)



Author's Response:

LMAO!!! The grin on my face is huge right now, I just love the reactions I have been getting because of T.... I have been playing around a little with her storyline because I am curious to see if I can change peoples opinions of her... Let me know if you start to like her at all.... HAHAHAHA had to leave it there but I won't make you wait long MWAH

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Good chapter.  Can't wait to read the next one.  I still don't like Tanya but I would love it if she sacrificed herself somehow.  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Thanks

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I love that Edward was unaffected by Tanya!  Awesome!  Update soon. ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much I am glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

That was a really great chapter.  I loved the yummy bath time with Edward and the funny prank time with Emmett.  hehehe  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

YAY!!! Thanks for reviewing, seriously that ch had a life of its own, the bath scene was not going to be soo long and it wasn't meant to turn serious, and I have no idea where the Emmett prank came from it just flowed hehehehehe I'm sooooo glad you liked.... MWAH

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

I loved Jake standing up to his dad.  I know it was hard for him.  sigh...  The Carlisle/Esme scene was kind of yummy!  hehehe  I'm hoping for some good to come out of Marcus escaping.  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks a bunch for your review, Jake's tough and he knows he made the right decision he was born to be a leader and his need to be fair and logical will make him the best Alpha the tribe has had. hehehehee I wanted to write the Carlisle/Esme scene for ages but it is sooooo hard it felt like writing about my parents doing it *UGH gag* but I think it turned out ok.... It will be interesting to see what happens with Marcus from here, will he go back to Volterra when the time comes or will he run hehehehehe hummmmm only time will tell.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Well Eli is just a touch awed at our Bella, huh?  hehehe   Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

hehehehe yup he is but can you blame him, she is crazy gifted.... MWAH for reviewing

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Well, I was please with Eli's respect and reaction to Bella.  I also loved the yumminess.  hehehe   Update soon. ;)



Author's Response:

YAY!!! MWAH MWAH MWAH!!!! Thank you Thank you Thank you

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Never Say Never

Good chapter.  I would have loved to know exactly what the french quote at the end said though.  sigh...   I'm worried about stupid Irinia too.  Why do they even let her and Tanya stay?  I don't get it.  Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

hehehehehe, Thanks soooo much for your review... Edward will be making her say it again in english in the next ch just so he knows she knows what she has said, so if you can hang out for that otherwise in the mean time if you can't wait google translations and copy and paste... don't forget to check your email for the link I am sending you

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Never Say Never

I'm glad that you are back with your story.  I hope that RL is good for you and yours.  I loved this chapter.  But I'm throwing tomatoes at you in my mind for the evil cliffy!  hehehe  Can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

I'm very well thanks for asking, as always thanks for your review, you never let me down!!!!!! You can throw tomates anytime cause that shit is funny, I won't make you wait too long I promise.... MWAH

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Never Say Never

Really good chapter.  It was very intense.  Can't wait for more.  :)

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Exclusively Edward's POV

Well I am happy that Edward is changing, because he was a slime.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Exclusively Bella's POV

Jasper sure was annoying.  LOL.  I wish I could have had as great a first time ad Bella did.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue

Well hell.... So glad Edward searched for Bella and changed his ways.   I really don't like Jasper in this.  He thinks he can change, but no one else can?  ASS!

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Congratulations on a job well wriitten.

Firsts by midnightlove87 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 210]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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 Bella and Edward have been best friends forever and they've shared a lot of firsts. Now Bella wants to share one last one together. AU/slightly OOC Cannon pairings B/E And rated M for language and lemons!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331144 Read Count: 104695
[Report This] Published: 10 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You are getting really good at being a cock tease.  hehe  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love that Bella and Edward are talking now, well mostly.  How come Bella hasn't shared how the Dr. makes her feel all squicky?  How come Edward hasn't shared how he hates the Dr. all leering at Bella?  They really are still keeping things from each other and that is not good.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

That chapter was so sad. bella and edward's (hopefully) miscommunication is getting to the point of ridiculous by now. She needs to 'woman up' and confront him about the smoke smell and the 'suspected' cheating and tell him how she feels. I don't know what to think about drunk raging emmett. That is just too sad and disappointing. too many secrets all around....... sigh.........

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bella is definitely not a dumb ass for accusing edward of cheating. It was always his norm to do so. can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 May 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Good chapter.  ;)

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Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Glad that Renee is gone.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Bella and edward are just surrounded by relationship killing cock blockers! They need to get the hell away from everyone. sigh.....

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

:)

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aaah, so sweet and romantic. I love nervous Edward. :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Heartbreakingly sad....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Edward is so clueless.  I feel sorry for the therapist.  He has his work cut out for him.  hehe  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

That chapter made me cry so hard.  Dam you!  hehe  Make it better. :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm still not sure about almost cheating edward but I loved the chapter. :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Even though they are getting better this chapter was still so sad.....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved that Bella kicked Dr. Perv's ass!  That was great.  I have always hated wilting flower Bella.  hehe   I hope that she isn't pregnant.  That would just be too much for one dam day.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

That was awful. I feel so bad for both of them.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Can't wait to see Bella finally have the guts to confront Edward.  hehehe  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I'm just so happy that they made up finally. :) I am so worried about emmett. emmett shouldn't be sad or upset. It just doesn't seem right. smirks.......

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That was a great send off to their apartment. :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Omg that adventure in the mesonite b & b cracked me up. hehe

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Dam!  He's giving up way to quick.  sigh.....   Update soon. :)



Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - RL has been keeping me busy and away but I am going on vacation!!

Thanks so much for the support!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

So so so sweet... :) congratulations

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

That was a great chapter.  I'm glad that Bella is finally pulling her head out of her ass.  I mean, come on he didn't cheat on her or murder someone.  At least she could talk to him.  The cliffy makes me salivate for the next update.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

i loved Bella's line at the end.  That was hot!  hehe  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Finally, that was a great chapter.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Such a sweet romantic thoughtful Edward in this chapter....

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27174
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Kind of sad.....  I am glad that Edward asked Bella out though.  Charlie teasing her was funny.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Swing My Way

Big cliffy!  Well this should get rid of ange faster.  hehehe 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

At least everyone is onto the Esme bitch. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Yup...Esme is a beyotch....hope u like the rest of the story xxoxoox

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Mile High Club

Dam!  That was smoking hot!  :)

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Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance

I'm so glad that bella and edward are together again but did you have to write another cliffy? What did I ever do to you? hehe Can't wait to see who is dead and who is shooting a gun now.

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Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

So sad.... i feel so bad for both of them.

Author's Response:

Oh you wont be sad for long :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

Yes im with bella. thank you thank you hehehe hot chapter.

Author's Response:

LOL No thank you! :) We'ew glad you thought it was hot. We did too.

Thank you sooo much for your review BB. See ya soon with the next update. We are working on it now.

x0x0x0xx0x0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

Really sexy and funny chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

A perfect combo....thank you sooo much and hope u enjoy part 2

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

Dam!  I think I'm more sick of Angela than Eric at this point.  hehehe  Get rid of both of them.  :)   Update soon.



Author's Response:

We hope to get rid of them......eventually... :) xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

First, loved the yummy!  Dam!  LOL  I'm so jealous.  hehe  Well, how the hell did Angela or whoever find them?  Did they stop the elevator?  Arggggg!  Can't wait for you to fix this mess.  hehe  :)

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

I love Emm's don'ts.  hehehe  I'm so glad that Rose took Edward shopping.  hehehe  And I love a Mike with actual integrity.  :)   Can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

Yah....we wanted to change around the characters in the story...and Mike had to have a place since Eric stole his Lead role...hahah.....xoxoxoxo Were sooo happy ur enjoying the story

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

Dam!  The exes are getting more crazy by the minute.  hehehe  Can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

LOL yes the exes are very CRAZY! We're working on the next chapter now. :)  Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

That was intense.  I can't wait for more.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank u xoxoxoxo part 2 shouldnt take long to post...xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

Dam!  OMG!  That was hot!  hehe  I know I shouldn't read your story at work.  How embarrassing.  hehehe   :)



Author's Response:

LOL I know what ya mean. Try writing it at work LOL. I'm wiping the sweat off of my face and people are looking at me all crazy LOL

Thank you for your review! Should we put DON'T READ AT WORK in our disclaimers LOL.

x0x0x0x0x0x0xx0x0x0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: trbuie Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

You are a cruel cruel woman!  hehe



Author's Response:

NOOOOOOOO *pouts* okay maybe.....lol.....well hope u enjoy whats coming next :D

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Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl

OMG, is it awful that I'm glad that she killed herself?  Dam!  I'm a bitch too.  hehe

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Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale

Dam!  Why did you have to kill Carlisle?  He was going to get away from the bitch and have a chance at being happy for once.  sigh....  You could have killed Laurent and Eric.  What is with Edward being an ass to Bella?  That is really crappy.  :(  



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Sorry this upsets u but we wanted the story to go a certain way sooo it had to be written..........if it makesd u feel better he finally is with Amy <3

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Weeping Willow

Dam!  I can't believe that Edward is being so much of an asshole to Bella!  He didn't even talk to her to get her side of things.  sigh.....  I'm just as pissed at him as Alice is.

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Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2

So so sad but I am glad that eddward is starting to get a clue.

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Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home

I'm so glad that they grew up and talked to each other finally. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204586
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Darn you!  Yes, I bawled like a baby!  :)

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Sweet chapter.  I love needy Edward.  sigh....   P.S. Lauren has no right what so ever to be pissed.  She is lucky she is even spoken to.  I guess I still don't like her character, huh?  hehehehehe  Update soon.  :)



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Thank you:)

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Aw...  short chapter, but too sweet.  I loved it.  Can't wait for more.  :)



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Thanks:)

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Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Good chapter.  Can't wait for more. :)



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Thank you:)

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OMG!  That was a tear inducing chapter to the extreme.  I really felt sorry for little Anthony.  poor guy.....   Update soon. :)



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Thank you:)

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Such a tearful and happy chapter.... i loved it. happy holidays. :)

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Thank you:)

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Really cute chapter.  But the ending was cruel and unusual punishment.  hehe



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Thank you:)

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I'm glad Bella stood up to Lauren.  She went about all of that in the wrong way.  Can't wait for more house hunting and for the boys to feel better and more energetic.  :)



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Thank you:)

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

That was an awesome chapter.   :)



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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That was so teary romantic. I loved it. :)

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Thank you:)

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Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

It's hard to do a chapter that is filled with yummy hotness and sweet romance, but you did it.  :)  Awesome chapter.  :)

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Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

:)

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Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I loved the sweetness of this chapter. :)

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Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

That whole chapter was so sweet.  I loved it.  :)

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Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Good chapter. and yes i shed a few tears...... :)

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Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I needed several tissues for this. darn you. hehehe :)

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Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

You were right!  I bawled so much during this chapter.  Alex and Anthony were too adorable.  sigh......

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71698
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

That was a really good chapter. The Alice part of the chapter was a big surprise. I'm curious as to who was doing the controlling of her. can't wait to find that out. I'm also looking forward to Jasper's pov or help in bella's training. I also hope that garrett isn't alone much longer. :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Even though bella, peter and garrett seem to be in control I am scared shitless for them. I wish they could have sorted out the cullen bullshit before volturi bullshit started. I hope bella can protect peter and garrett. can't wait for the next chapter. :)