Yay, super excited for the update!  so wow I hope char gets in big trouble she kinda deserves it there :)  and how did Bella vanish?  did Carlisle get her?  can't wait to see the Major's monster on the loose that is always so sexy :)

Okay so honestly I am having a hard time believing that this big bad killer has fallen so hard and fast for Bella without even talking to her yet.  I think it is my caution at love at first site maybe....  But I am really liking the story a lot.  I like damanged Edward and his messed up family.  I like in a sick way I know that they kill people for a living.  I mean sure I couldn't do it but it sounds very interesting type of life.  Okay I will shut up and keep on reading! :)   

Wow not many words to say after a chapter like that.  However I can't wait to see Edward's response.

Yeah was very excited the updates worked and I was alerted to your new chapter!  I love how smooth Alice was with Edward getting that car.  I have used that move on my Dad many times so it made me smile.  Of course I didn't get a car but still same move just smaller returns :)  hehe 

So glad Jacob's out of the way and looking forward to seeing the next interaction between Edward and Bella. :)

Ohhhh that was a nice long chapter I love that!  I am glad to see they can finally talk.  Looking forward to seeing Bella's reaction when she learns more about what Edward really does and what his life is really like. :)

That was a nice long chapter.  I am kinda looking forward to seeing Edward's animal come out and play again :)  Oh and I love Alice and her shopping that was great! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Oh man Edward is losing his shit but in a sick way it's kinda hot.  I wonder what he is going to do with Bella if he will give in or not!  I hope Seth is okay he was always my fav out of the wolf pack.

Can't wait to see how it all goes down! :)

Oh your a big meanie leaving us hanging like that!!!!!!!!!!!! :) hehe

So where did Jasper go??  What did Demetri do with him or should I say Felix??  and man even I wanted to slap Bella and tell her to stop being such a moron and get with the program!

Loved the chapter and can't wait for part 2 to see what happens!! :)

Wow Tonya's a piece of work and I really liked the little diamond back story.  It seemed to me like at the end the sex for Edward was almost like going through the motion and although he was of course enjoying himself he was doing it more for Bella then for himself as she took charge. 

It is really cool how the monster has come around about Bella too but yet he sometimes still has different opinions on what should go down, that always makes me smile :)

Wow man the Denali's are one messed up family.  However I am curious about their inside source for the clan and what is Tanya's big plans.....  

I enjoyed Edward's little "run in" with his dad...  The monster does seem to make sense sometimes. :)

Curious what the big plans with Bella are and man is Edward going to flip his lid if they ever get a hold of her :)

Damn I think Edward needs to think about maybe training Char to be in the Clan cause she could be one bad ass!  

Poor Edward he isn't going to know what to do with himself but I am looking forward to how he handles it once he gets back home :)

So Edward's not telling Bella about work and Bella totally called his ass out on the whole marriage thing I loved that! :)  

I love how the monster is starting to really like Bella too some of his comments crack me up.  I wonder how the "job" is going to go sounds like it might end up being a mess :)

Ohhhh I really really love that ring.  Where did you find it?? I espeically love the cherry blossoms :)

Edward is just too cute with the pink clothes and burning down the kitchen.  I have no idea how he would even melt the knobs I mean wow he must have been going for indoor bbq????

Poor Charlie I am curious to see what happens when Bella finds out they have him. :)

Okay I have a confession.....  I am really excited to see the drama back again *hides smile*  I just love to see Edward's monster come out and play, what can I say I am a beast myself :) hehe

And seriously I want to smack Bella cause what in the world was she thinkin????  How in hell can she help Charlie in any way shape or form all she has done is gone and made everything worse.  

Can't wait for the next update and to watch Edward just loose it and go balistic it's going to be full of awesomeness :))))))

Oh fooey!  I wanted to see some action!  you got me all wound up for the big show down and now I have to wait! *pouts* 

So Alice is on the puters I think that is kinda the cool job anyway hacker, I could do that....  well if I liked programming that is :) hehe

I can't wait for the big action.  Are they all gonna make it?  I have a feeling no so who's gonna die and who's gonna get hurt and what is Edward going to do when he sees that Bella is pregnant!?! man he is going to have a baby himself right there from that shock! :)

So I was wayyyy behid on my reading and finally catching up!  Is this the last chapter???  You mentioned two more but this kinda seems like a rap.  I am so sad to see things end either way I have really loved this journey.  

When Edward pulled out that ring I grinned so big!  I still want one of those and have bookmarked the website :))) hehe

Howdy!  I know how it is RL can sometimes get in the way of things we enjoy :)  I am glad to see your still with us and doing well and hopefully this new year will bring more time for fun things :)  

Demriti is one sick puppy....  wow I am sure alec is wondering what he has gotten himself into :)

And the big day is coming up!  Yay!  Ya know I still ahve a link to Bella's engagement ring I love it :)  Maybe one of these days I might take the plunge :) hehe

Hope your having a great new year and I can't believe we only have one chapter left!  I am super exicted for it and sad for it to be over all in one :)

Oh I wonder where Edward went.  I feel bad for Bella to get hit with Edward right after the whole Jake mess is rough.  I wonder how long it's going to be before Edward owns up to the fact he was lying.  but I am glad to see Bella and Alice friends again :)

Uh oh small towns are the worst they are going to have to be careful.  Looking forward to seeing how dinner goes down.  :)

Oh no!!!!!!  I LOVE Charlie and he died!  :(  I wonder how this is going to affect Bella and Edward and how she is going to beat herself up.  Okay reading on :)

Uh oh...  that's not good.  what is the principle going to say???  and June man I kinda want to smack her for being so nosey :)  

I'm glad Jake apologized and they can be friends again.  And hopefully Bella will realize she needs to be with Edward! :)

hehe drunk Bella you have to love it.  I love that they all went out to dinner and it will be interesting what they end up telling bella about her job :)

I am so glad Bella and Jake are friends again and Jake is being really cool abou hte whole thing.  I hope that kick that nasty guys ass :)

Yay!  baseball.  I love how Jake is just fitting in with no worry of a love triangle it's such a nice change and it just makes me smile :)

I am glad that Edward got to feel what he did to Bella in the woods, he deserves to understand fully the impact it had.  :)  I'm a big meanie I know this :) hehe

So what's going on with Bella's head and how can Edward see and feel the visions I am curious to see what it is all from and what does it mean for the future :)

Wow those flashbacks are kinda scary.  I have to ask though I don't get the "miss" thing?  What does that solve?  Maybe I am just confused...

I feel bad for Cain I mean he is one messed up puppy with a messed up father figure.  I felt bad for Edward too having to stand there and not be able to do much that had to kill him.

I am curious where they are going to go from here and how Edward will respond once he gets home and alone with Bella. :)

Yay I am excited I am all caught up. :)

I am loving vampire Bella and I am curious about her visions too.  What do they mean? What type of Talent other than shield does she have?

Looking forward to exploring that and more Edward Bella time cuase whew that was hot :)

Wow I wonder what that extended vision was?  And if that will continue.  I am glad to see Edward came back and am curious to see what Bella can do to help Alice.  

I thought it was totally cool how Bella was the one that planted the seed in Edward's Mom's head to save Edward any way Carlisle could :)))

Wow so Bella pasted the test I can't wait until she can go see Cain...  And I love how she's playing the piano.  

I like how she's only pulling hte memories of bad times up when Edward isn't around and I kinda thought how after having a rough day like she did remembering all that stuff and then still resisting the blood was a really good sign :)

Oh! I kinda really like Edward vaunrable and needy....  it's so different from him and not expected. :)  I love how Bella is freaking out too! :)

I love their runs, quiet time doing something you love...  that's always such an amazing feeling.

I can't wait to see what goes down from here!  Will Bella have to comfort him? Does she need to take charge of the situation and be in control over him for a while?  Each chapter you get closer and closer to seeing how they physically come back and it's awesomely driving me crazy :)

Wow, I'm not surprised to see Edward back but in some ways as much as i want to slap Bella for not taking what she wants I am so glad she stood up for herself :)  I can't wait to see who makes the next move and who will make the first move of them touching each other again :)

Hi!  I am not sure where I review each chapter now that you have moved over here and on to your own site but I figure as long as I review each chapter somewhere I am good :))))

I loved this chapter, they are slowly coming together.  A friend of mine and me had a big long discussion about the chapter yesterday after we both read it :)  I love when a story starts a big talk.  I am just so excited to see them working toward getting back together but as we were discussing what will that mean for them?  How will the dynamics of that relationship work???  She was very happy being submissive but will that continue?  And how will his ALIVE daughter play into it? :)  I can't wait for more :)))