Reviews by Keep Smiling
Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324404
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Keep Smiling Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Our Vacation

It's such a great story! I love to read it again and again. Always when they break apart I cry for the loss and the hurt!
Will you continue your Story?
Greetings Keep Smiling

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113786
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Keep Smiling Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Michele!

I was glad to see the first chapter if Aflo.

I have to say I was shoked to read, that Edward and Bella don't communicate. It was so hard for both of them, to become so routinate and open to each other.

I think I know why Edward don't touch Bella. He is so overprotective and thinks she is too fragil, physically and emotionally, to handle their D/S reationship.

The mysterious envelope... you said, there will be a person who try to distance the two of them... perhaps there are fake photos of cheating in them.

And there's a secret of Nick.. perhaps I have an idea of what kind of secret it is.

Isn't there a mistake of the ages of Tiffany and Christopher? If I remember correctly Tiffany is a few month older than Jack and Alexis. So she must be 19 or 20 years old and Christpoher must be a few months older than you described?!

So, I'm very excited to read your story of this amazng family.

Greetz Keep Smiling

PS: Sorry for my bad english, but it's almost 4 years ago the last time I wrote english. It's a foreign language to me. :)



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