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Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 121978
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Welcome back.  Love the chapter.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I hope that you and your family will be better soon.

 

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Im here, still do not like Renee... nothing excuses what she did to Bella!!  NOTHING!

You dont leave your kids!

 

Looking forward to more,

 

Welcome back :)



Author's Response:

I don't care for Renee much myself. I understand her motive, but not her ability to carry it through to actually leave Bella behind. I didn't like her in the books, movie or in pretty much any fanfic story. She's not a very strong person.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh, my!!

 

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 166717
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time.   I love it!!!  I would love to see some future takes!!

 

LOVED IT!!!  :D

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 427]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53326
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan

I just found this here and I am loving this!

Edward is in so much trouble!!

Looking forward to more :D

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 192690
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 1: First Impressions are Forever

Followed this from Random Rita post.  Glad I did.  I think I am in love! :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 6: The Demon Comes Out to Play

Damn... that was great! Edward is scary as shit! 

I am glad he gave Jacob what he deserved!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Story Banner

This story takes place after Bella Swan graduates from Forks High School. She has been trying to move on from her heart wrenching break-up with Edward Cullen when he left her behind to go to Dartmouth. She has been living her life trying to move past the memories of him - her one true love -ever since.

Then that fateful night at the reunion, she sees him in the first time in ten years and her life is turned upside down when she must choose between the one man she has always loved, and her husband that she is devoted to.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114042 Read Count: 14882
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2011
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 33: The Epilogue

Such a great story!! 

 

I really wanted to knock Jacob out.  Edward was a idiot, but Jake was a dick. 

Loved this!!

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 548]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 163492
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Commencement

Poor Edward!! Green is just not your color beautiful!!   Lol 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Connection

She fucked his brains out. Then she freaking leaves him.  SHE is a BITCH!! She should had at least gave him a chance. I hope Emmett tells him!  But I bet he won't, he is a coward to!  Ggggrrrrrrrrr!! This chapter pissed me off!! 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Time

 Still think Bella is being a mega bitch and lost a respect for Emmett.  He should have never done this to his brother.  I hope takes the kid and kicks Emmett out of his life. 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Admissions

Edward, MAN UP and take Charlie and boot her out in her ass! Emnett TOO! 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Advice

Edward was to forgiving of Bella. She was in the wrong in so many ways it unbelievable!! I do not blame Edward for being pissed at Emmett. What he did to Edward was awful!  So much for being a twin, to Emmett  it  didn't mean anything!  I am surprised that Esme hasn't stepped in more.  

Summary:

The arrival of a wedding invitation reminds him of the biggest mistake he ever made in his entire life. Now he is doomed to spend the rest of his life wondering if she would have ever married him.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Jake/none
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2415 Read Count: 389
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 07 Apr 2010
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Always

This is amazing!!

 

I followed from a Facebook rec, Cheatwards Spot.

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1703]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 289674
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Id freaking kill Alice!

Meddling bit*h!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

I am sorry, I just dont get it.  The title is Married to the Ememy. But she never treated him like the enemy. 

Oh, your The Edward Cullen, yes I will stay married to  you for a year.  Even though you treated me like crap for 7  years.   Oh yes I will sleep in your bed for a year. Cause the couch sucks.   Oh yes kiss me and lets pretend that all is good. 

 

This not a woman that hates this man!

 

You need to re name your story to BELLA SWAN, SPINELESS VIRGIN!

He is still a bully!  He is still has his own agenda.  

 

Gahhh

Summary: Past Featured Story

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How can a woman go on after learning that the love of her life has
committed one of the ultimate wrongs. Bella will have to fiind out for herself
after she learns who Edward truly is.  Will she love him regardless of his
flaws?

 

Banner courtesy of RachelCullen77. Thank you wifey!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68332 Read Count: 36855
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 May 2014 Title: Chapter 21: What Could Have Been

I liked the story, but hated the last two chapters.. 

 

Chapter 21 was like it was written by  teenage girls... badly written I should say.

I dont get it, that was a crappy end to a good story

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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stories/186/images/DIAMONDINTHEROUGHBestLemon-300x237.png    stories/186/images/DIAMONDINTHEROUGHBestJacob-300x237.png   


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1215387
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Flove Dougie!  To funny, him and Tanya. Curious to what Edward saw when he was cleaning up Bella.  Looking forward to the next update!    Happy Easter to you and yours!   :)



Author's Response:

Edward saw something?? did you think that the surprise came from something he didn't see???

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

What did Bella do to get grounded? I get the safety aspect, but... Not consulting Edward?   I am really enjoying the whole family get together. I love they way they are talking and laughing and just bonding.  UPdate soon!! Love it. 



Author's Response:

Just remember that Edward is not the one who said the word 'Grounded" - that never left his mouth...lol

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok, now I am really curious, what didn't he see??? ( come on please tell me. I am gonna love and read the story anyway.)



Author's Response:

Now think ...what did she have that edward wanted gone and she said 'no' but then she shaved it off becasue it poofed out ...it's the small patch of hair she had on her cooch ...

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Now she is grounded!!!!  I love that Edward when ahead and ordered her ring.   Great chapter!!   :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

I flove this story.  It is great!   I was surprised that Edward actually did use the cane on her. Even if she enjoyed it. Her earlier reaction was fright. But that worked ok for them. Guess that's why I am not a Dom!            Alice is being abit immature afar as what Edward/Bella, Emmett/Rose do. She need to understand that her and Jasper are not that different.          Can't wait till Edward sees that Bella in now pub hair free.         Love that he sang to her in the club, and the way Aro teases her.   Dougie :).  He is a hoot! To freaking funny.  Can't wait to see what happens with Tanya's skanky ass!   Curios what happens at "Midnight" that Edward was talking to Zarafina about....    Update soon!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

I loved that Bella called Edward out for slipping in to his Dom mode.  They were not Playing.   Lockdown. I understand they are afraid for her safety.  She is having one of those it can never happen to me moments. I was glad that Jasoer was able to let her see where they were all coming from. .    She got scared as soon as her car over heated.  I was afraid when Demetri walked out.  So glad it was him.  I loved the comment about babysitting and the raise.  I think it would be cool and Edward would love it if Bella would surprise Edward with one of Demetri's paintings or statues.   I can see him loving that.     I think they are going to find that her car was tampered with.   Did Bella try on the ring that Edward had made for her??     When Edward found the cereal, I laughed. It's going to be fun to see if he lets her keep it.   Looking forward to the next update. 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

They are all in a state of shock I think. Edward, Jake,  and Charlie.  I don't  think Bella see's the danger she is in.   Very scary!!   When is Edward going to propose??  Update soon.  I am greedy.. Love this story! :-)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Amazing, I was vey happy to see thst you had updated.  Tanya is playing with fire.  Hope James burns her.   Just desserts, if you ask me.  Finding Newton would be good thing.

Cauis is saying Charlie is not Bella real father?? Really?  That's crazy, I think? Maybe? Renee has always been flighty, so maybe not...

So I do have a question, when is Edward going to propose?

PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!  Love this story :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

Great two chapters.

 

I am looking forward to more..

 

Edwards birthday and his pictures presents.  :)

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

Loved it!  Wondering if Bella will crack and tell Edward what was whispered.  

Karen is not on her med's is scary.  Maybe Mike will tell whats up, but I doubt it.

WHEN IS EDWARD PROPOSING??  He party would be great.  The whole best birthday gift ever type of thing.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Mercy.   

I did laugh when Bella was talking about Tanya.  Then Seth, love that kid.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Thank  you for telling me about your blog. I love it!

Also, I do have a question.  How old is Edward and Bella in this story??

 

Love this and can not wait to for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

This chapter they are celebrating Edward's 28th birthday and Bella is 25, going to be 26 come September

Summary:

A small group of people struggle with the drama that comes before two of the friends' wedding. Secrets and lies become known at the worst of times and everyone's lives are affected. There is cheating, lies, blackmail, and all different POVs



Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16328 Read Count: 615
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: I Do, I Don't

Wow!  What a mess!  Loved the story!

Summary:

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

 

Written for Breath-of-twilight's Countdown to Halloween over on ffnet. One-shot. Edward had some unfinished business. Can he show Bella how much he loves her before it's too late.... Warning: You will require tissues to read this story.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6399 Read Count: 1829
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was way sad!!  But amazing!  I loved it.

 

How about extending it??

After the  baby's is born,  a mini Edward??

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 257915
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 60: Outtake part five

I loved this chapter! 

 

Looking forward to more :D

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 486]
Summary:

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 91589
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This was a great story!!

 

I loved it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 153219
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

I have to say that you have a way of showing hurt that really hurts.

I feel so bad for both of them.    I am not sure if I could have stayed with Edward.  I mean Bella made plenty of mistakes.  But that would have been hard for me to stay with him.

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

They sure have been through hell and back!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Wow... so much hurt!  They both need to talk to someone.  Bella needs to deal with the loss of her daughter.

 

Edward needs to let go of the guilt.

 

Looking forward to more.  BTW. This chapter didnot suck.  I thought it was very good.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Loved the ending.   They went through hell and back to get where they are. Evan will be a wonderful and healing addition that they need.

 

Sorry to see it end!

Billionaire by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Past Featured Story

billionaire_banner1

It was just a bit of fun, a chance for an all-expenses paid vacation, and a favor for her bestie. Never in a billion years could Bella have imagined just how much meeting Edward Cullen would invert her world. This was an entry for the Pick a Pic challenge.

 

Thanks to Belindella for the beautiful banner.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12563 Read Count: 1769
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jan 2011
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Billionaire

I love this... its are great story..  I hate reality tv.. was doubtful when I started reading this. 

But it was great!!

Summary:

bannar

BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 71104
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

Edward punching Graces ex!! To funny. But I gotta say when I got to the bottom of the page and read "The End". I was so damn sad. You have a great Edward and Bella. It will be hard letting them go. So future and out takes are always welcome!   Sincerely Than You for sharing your amazing story!

Summary: Past Featured Story

fsg

New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 129180
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events

LMAO! That was too funny. His mother reading this story. Question: how's momma gonna take it when they have sex and Bella writes about it?? Or even Edward??  Update soon.  :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls

So, I think when Bella out that everyone knows her secret. That she is going hurt and angry.  Edward had better come clean soon. Or he just might lose her. 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59: Dream Date

I read your authors note at the top.  In two years of writing has only been 12 days of FFSGSG's time frame...

WOW!!!

So Edward is in love with Bella.   Bella cares for Edward but is it love??  I think so.. ( two years = twelve days?? REALLY???)  I think that she will think its too soon.

 

Him dreaming that he needs to tell her.. the ILY's  Can not wait to see what happens next.  And Bellas truck?  Will she get a new one?

Wow..

 

Looking forward to more. ( still trying to get my head around the whole 12 days= 2 years RL!)

Looking forward to more of this wonderful story!  :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58: Hugs and Gropes

Loved Gropella and Huggyward.... or is it Gropeward and Huggyella???   I loved both chapters. Looking forward to more

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60: Just B(&)E-ing

Is this still day 12, or are we on day 13?

 

What did Renee say to Edward?

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61: The Momversation

Nice. LOL... 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65: Loose Lips, Sinking Ships, and the Following Fix

Cannot believe that is has taken two + years to get to the ILY's!  Or  13-14 ish days..

But I do like how your chapter worked out.   Looking forward to more :)

Summary:

Sequel to Taking Chances. Finding the family they didn't realize they needed, they thought they had everything. Now Bella and Edward, along with Alex and Anthony, are in for the wildest adventure yet. AH & NC-17 for language and other things. Canon coupling.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94877 Read Count: 77565
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2011 Updated: 27 Oct 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Ut oh!!

Update soon please!  

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ahh this was so sweet.  

The story of Tia and Bella was pretty sad.

the house was awesome!

 

Loved it!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Tears.. :)

 

So good!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It was a good chapter :-).  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LOL!!  Brothers are no better!  I have 5 of them!!  :)  and two sisters!

 

Love this, looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh my.....

 

HURRY AND UPDATE!!!

You left it at a scary place!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh my gracious!  This was so scary!!

 

I can not wait for the next update!  Thank you for posting this one so soon!! :)

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 43959
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter.. my family is crazy about sugar cookies too! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I am glad that everyone accepted her pregnanacy without complaint.

 

Loving this and thank you for the update :D



Author's Response: I'm glad you're still reading this! Lol. I'm not really into angst, and remember, his family has wanted the two of them to get together forever now.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Good Chapter!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

 Your back :D  Happy Dance :D

Great chapter, looking forward to more :D

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 411226
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 May 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I feel like I have already read this before.  Is this a repost, by chance??

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1417899
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 02 May 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Craft of the Father

Sonny got shot!! Oh, I cried. I was afraid he would die.  That's just nuts.  I can't beleive that.  I was afraid that Bella was gonna blame Edward.  It's scary how fast stuff like this happens.  Update soon!! I love this story!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 56: Well Enough

Woo-fu+king-hoo!!!! Is it werid that I am so proud of Bella?? First her Mom the that skank hoe Lauren!!  You go Bella!!! Damn Girl!!    Even Edward liked it!!! Aro laughed!! Woot woot!! ( yeah I am still cheering!).     So looking forward to the next chapter! 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Now and Then

I personally really liked this chapter. There was not a  lot of drama. But that's ok. Quiet is nice sometimes.  And Bellla keeping Edward happy. That was great. They needed to re-connect!! ;).    As always, love the story and look forward to the next updates!! 

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 101227
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Beneath the Surface

Not to complain, but with the new story. It will push this one back farther in updates.  I would kinda like to see how this one plays out.  Do you think you can update more often??? Thanks!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time

I reaalllyy like this story. I just wish Bella would be allowed to mature a bit more.  But her navitity is what makes her sweet. So keep her like she is.   Great update.  ;)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Little Things

I get that Edward has known Bella since she was a child. I get that Edward was a man whore.   I get the Jasper is jumping off his rocker thinking he let his brother down.  I get that they want Bella to stay a child.     What I don't get, and I went back trying to figure it out.  1. What was Roses reason for not wanting Bella and Edward together.  2 Why after everything that happen that Jasper can not come to terms that Bella has grown up.   3.  Edwards deal with Bella, he wants her... He thinks.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering

Oh, Hell!! He is a Whore dog!! He can take it.   Can u tell us there ages? I sometimes think Bella is like 16. Then others 19-21.  Edward like 25-35..  Help!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Value

She named there son after him. But still hasn't told him. Still think she is a bitch and Emmtt and Rose is just as bad.  I do not see how the three of the could possible redeam themselves.  I hope Edward disowns the lot of them!  What the did and are doing is unforgivable!!   How could he ever forgive his brother for this is beyond me.  That's HIS brother!    

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Letting Go

GGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

The thing I don't get is how old is Bella??  12? 13?

She knows nothing of sex, only Edward is ALLOWED to teach her.  She is not allowed to read, watch nor ask questions.  Really??

 

Then to end it??

I will follow, but I hope this freaking slow burn will turn into a flame at some point..

Getting tired of, poor innocent Bella!  With manwhore Edward and Jasper calling all the shots.

 

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100037
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Harsh day after

Bella is going to have to work a lot harder to throw Alice off the trail.  It seems that Edward is playing games. I just wonder when he is goons clue Bella in on the rules.       The envelope I think has the contact from mike. So Bella is now Edwards employee.  That's what I think                                                                                                       Update soon!    :)



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, it's not the right answer, but thanks for reviewing :0)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Trapped

WoooHooo!!! Good jab... job Jacob!!

Cocky bastard deserved it from the verrrryy beginning of this story.

Please update soon~!!  Love it!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Fatal Negotiations

So he is taking her out on his yacht?

 

Wow... great place to get coffee!

 

Thanks for the update :D



Author's Response:

:0)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Cullens can afford anything… including Companionship.

All human drabblish, fan fic inspired by Joss Whedon’s concept of Companions in the series Firefly.

 

Banner done by the wonderfully talented Christine:http://www.christagbanners.blogspot.com/


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 27389 Read Count: 264879
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2011 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 May 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

That was so sweet.  A girl!! :).    Hate to see this end. I like this story. Well except for the fact that most of them are physco!!  

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

They have came along way.  To think she was hired to be a sex servant to the fam. Glad they are getting their HEA! I do like this story.  Update soon! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Oh, that was so sad! Poor Bella! Just damn!! :(

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

Three days before Thanksgiving newly engaged Bella gets some surprises from her fiance Edward. What is his secret and will their relationship make it? And what happens on Thanksgiving day with his ganja loving brother meets her chief of Police Dad?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12410 Read Count: 13893
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2011 Updated: 10 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I laughed and laughed and giggled and may have snorted a time or two. This is to damn. Funny!!!! ;).   Great job!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

LofuckingL! To funny!

Wrecked with Bella by jkazzie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 583]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Cullen's and Bella find themselves ship wrecked on a desert island in the Pacific.
AH, with canon pairings. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 307616 Read Count: 105446
[Report This] Published: 02 Jan 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Glad that you had fun here in the USA.  

 

Loved the story, I am wondering if Felx will let them kidnap and harm the Cullens? 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!  I hope you are feeling better soon.  Was so happy to see the  update, even though it took me a day to get to read it.

 

Looking forward to more!!

 

Swiss Family Robinson is one of my favorite Disney movies :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 250820
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly

I almost got in so much trouble reading this at work on my phone!! I was reading away a d I got to the whole chocolate cock part and burst out laughing. My boss raise out of his seat in his office and ask me if I an alright. I could not look at him!! To freaking funny!!  ;p.        Alice is a bitch.  She needs to get over it. I was so glad that Edward canceled with Sally.  Then Esme, realizing that Bella is special. Not handicap way. Just naive.  Great update! Think I will wait and read at my lunch break from now on!!!  :)

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Many of you are wondering what he deal is with Edward and the talk of his lost son.  In chapter 5 there was a dream sequence that told a lot of what happened that fateful day when Edward found out Tanya was using him, to get his money.  She was not pregnant like she had told him, the problem is the night before they had unprotected sex, and she actually did give birth to his child.  Esme found out about it, but hid it from Edward trying to protect him.  Tanya and Edward junior later died in a fire.  There will be more to come on that, but it seems to be getting a lot of questions.  Now for Alice...She is clearly a not nice person in this fic, and to some she will partially redeem herself, but for some there is no redemption, her words and actions are far worse than any you have seen from Edward.  Siobhan is for the majority out of the picture, so she is of no major worry.  Uncle Harry is a very mean man, and there will be more to come about him.  We love our Aro he is one of the kindest and most loving men and we are proud to have written an Aro who is not only out of character, but also so very loveable.   Bella has come to trust Edward, and it shows.  A lot of you keep asking if she will sleep in the step-moms room, or if Edward will talk her into it...the answer to that is no.  The next few chapters have so much going on in them, I am sure that you will all have favorite parts.  We love hearing what your thoughts are so keep asking questions and we will answer what we can without ruining the plot. Sorry you almost got into trouble, but we needed to lighten the mood of the chapter and end on a happy note.

Thanks for Reading and Reviewing
Kasi (&Nikky)

Chapter 15 teaser...Subject to changes during BETA process...

It’s Saturday, and we are into the countdown to Thanksgiving.   Alice has called me numerous times, and left well over a hundred text messages and voice mails.  I have dealt with each and every one of them the same way. Without reading or listen to them, I just hit delete.

Esme found out during one of my talks with Carlisle about the stunt Alice pulled.  At first, I thought she would take Alice’s side, but was stunned when I found her on the phone giving Alice a piece of her mind.  Jasper has also said that he and Alice are talking, but not back to normal yet.  Jasper is really pissed at her.

Yesterday, Esme called me, and to my surprise, she asked me if I would still come over for Thanksgiving dinner.  She told me that she would understand if I did not want to come.  She said it was my choice, and she would still make my dinner if I wanted and bring it over to my home or Midnight Sun.  Not once did she try and force my hand.  After much thought, I said that I will be there.  I do enjoy spending time with the guys, even more so in the last few weeks.  I know they all were hoping for me to come, and I know I owe them a lot. I told them that I will join them and stay, as long as Alice and Rose keep their mouths shut. Esme, Carlisle, Emmett, and Jasper, have promised to keep them under control.

Things with Bella are still going really well. Too well, in fact.  She…fuck! Every time I see her, I want to hold her close.  It’s no longer just me having dirty thoughts about her, a lot of dirty thoughts about her, which I still am, but I also want to hug her, lie with her, make love to her, and that is really fucking scary for me, for lots of reasons.  I am worried, because I wonder if she could even cope in that type of a relationship. I have been a pussy about it, because I haven’t had the guts to ask Peter or Jasper what they think.  I know it’s because I am afraid they may say she couldn’t handle it, or I am not good enough for her.  I already know that I am not, but one can always hope for his own redemption.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Confessions

They admitted they love each other!! That was so sweet.   Wonders chapter!  Loved it.



Author's Response:

WOW...the responses are so awesome that Nikky and I are both giddy.  There haven’t been many questions asked in the first 60 reviews, so I am going to answer a few non questions I noticed.  Bella was never kidnapped by Sue and Charlie.  Charlie Swan is Bella’s biological father, and Bella was sent to live with him after her mother died of cancer.  Aro honestly never knew of Bella’s real age, he had suspicions that she was not raised correctly and was acting younger than the 18 he thought her to be, because of the inept social skills.  Zafrina did not know either, but again had those same social skill thoughts that her son had.  We in no way were bashing DCFS or DHS or any other social workers, by saying that the kids would be taken by the state.  If anyone had turned Sue in for abandoning the kids the almost 6 years ago now she has been gone, the kids would have become wards of the state, because at 13 no state official or judge would have deemed Bella capable of fully caring for 2 yr old twins alone.  Just want to say that we both believe that it takes a special kind of person to be a social worker, and we both give those of you who are in the field of social work a round of applause because the things you have to see and or deal with can’t always be fun.  I have to say that the wonderful response to this story is more than either Nikky or myself could have hoped for, and we owe that all to you the readers.  THANK YOU!  If there is any questions or discussions you would like to have or read about past discussions, feel free to join us at TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction on Facebook.  Kasi (& Nikky)

Teaser for Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things.  Subjected to changes during beta process.

I dropped Bella of at Seth and Leah’s school. Before leaving her, I told her I would pick her up from the college when she got off.  It was so fucking hard to leave her; I just wanted to stay with her forever.  I knew the minute she was away from me, my old doubts would come back.  I knew that I had to talk with Jasper about her upbringing.  It’s that thought that makes me leave, even though I want to wait with her, take them home and stay with them. I am really at a loss for what I should do.  What can I do?  What do I do?  How do I help her?  How can someone so pure and good, come from people so evil?  The questions are killing me, but I know one thing for certain: if that bitch doesn’t stay the fuck away on her own, I will make her.  That sorry excuse of a parent will never get her hands on my Bella, Seth, or Leah again.  I will protect them with my very last breath, and deplete every cent I have, if need be.

I sit at my piano and just start playing.  I let the music guide me, keeping Bella in my thoughts as a play.  I let out all the feelings I have been denying myself. I haven’t been at it long before I find myself playing ‘Angel Eyes’ by The Jeff Healey Band, and I begin to sing along with my playing.

Girl, you're looking, fine tonight,

and every guy has got you in his sights.

What you're doing, with a clown like me,

is surely one of life's little, mysteries

 

So tonight I'll ask the stars above,

"How did I ever win your love?"

What did I do?

What did I say,

to turn your angel eyes my way?

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Nicknames

I like the way Edward is bonding with Bella, Seth and Leah. I ha e a feeling that nasty Renee is gonna show back up and make a play for our hero, Edward.     I do how ever have a question. With Bella being so social immature.  And Edward being a Dom. Or at least having a dominate personality.  What's gonna happen to Bella  I can't see him going back to vanilla.    Anyway, love the story. UPdate soon.   : )



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Edward is not a Dom, but he likes to be fully in controll at Aro's club.  It is not all about the need to Dominate, it is more aboutthe need to remain in controll to not allow anyone to hurt him or use him.  Edward’s view is improving, and he is learning quickly that he is not able to function to his fullest at Aro’s club.  Aro’s club and Aro and some of his girls will remain a vital part of this story.  Having Edward putting on one of Bella’s newly gifted bras was such a fun thing to write about, we hope you all found it just as amusing as we did.  This story has a long way to go.  We have been asked when things will pick up between Bella and Edward.  Well we promise they will be together, but Edward is just learning to change and before he could give himself to her fully, he has to let go of a few things from the past.  There are a few more bricks that need to come down off that wall he has built.  As for Bella, her pure innocence alone is a good reason for things between them to simmer slowly into a boil.  I will tell you this, there first kiss is written already...and Lordy I needed some ice water after that one.  WOOOWHOO!  I know the weekly updates, seem like forever, but if we get things wrapped up and have the story done on our side then we will post faster.  Right now Nikky is working on 25 and I am working on 24 and we know that there will be at least 30-35 chapters.  Thanks again for the story love.  This story is dedicated to those of you who care enough to review!  With our love, and until next week.   Kasi and (Nikky)

Chapter 13 teaser...subject to changes during beta process.

I hear the beep of a horn, and know that the car is here. I grab my overcoat, and I head out for my painful evening.

“Good evening, everyone,” I say as I close the limo door.

“Hello Edward, I see you still haven’t tied your bowtie, Siobhan can tie it for you if you’d like; she’s really good at them.”

I turn to face Alice, trying not to scream at her. “No Alice, I can manage myself, thank you very much. I will tie it right before we arrive at the Autumn Ball.” I feel eyes on me, and my head turn’s to see who else is in the limo. There sits Siobhan, in a…dress? Fuck, it leaves nothing to the imagination, the dress… if that is what you call it. It’s more like a sheer piece in the front, glued to her skin. There doesn’t appear to be any cloth on the sides of her entire body at all. She cannot be possibly wearing anything under the dress. I can see from her armpit to the sole of her foot in the clear stiletto shoes she is wearing, there is nothing but skin. She looks like she should be working for Aro, what a trashy high class whore!  I am sure she thinks it’s attractive, and I am sure everyone will know she is going commando. I mean I like women to go commando, but I also like to be the only one that knows. If I wanted my date to not wear panties, I wouldn’t want every other person in the general vicinity to know too. I don’t want to share! Thank God she isn’t my date! There is another reason on the list of why I won’t date her, or any other women.

“Wow, Edward, you look really good,” Siobhan smirks at me before crossing her legs. She lets her dress fall to the side, I am sure if I was looking I would have seen her pussy. The way she was right now I, or anyone for that matter, could finger fuck her here and now for all to see. I turn my head in disgust at her behavior.

“Edward, are you going to tell us how we all look?” I look back at Alice, with a broad smile on my face. “Sorry, forgive my rudeness. Alice, Rose, Esme, you all look very beautiful.” I give them my best smile that almost says, see I can do nice.

“Siobhan, your dress is very…nice?” I make my statement sound like a question because I real don’t know what she has on. Siobhan laughs and goes to touch my arm, and I shrug away from her.  I see she’s about to speak, so I jumped in first. “And of course Charlotte, you look beautiful as always. Peter is an extremely lucky guy, and if he does not mind me stealing you for a few minutes tonight, I would like to ask you something?”

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day

What is up Rose's ass? Why does she hate Bella so. It's got to be more than Tanya.   Emmett left.  Good for him.   Alice is going along with Rose.  Hope Jasper kicks her ass.  Love Esme.  Telling Rose off!!   I wish Edward would admit some of his feeling to Bella. Update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing His Cimmerian View.  Nikky and I are both just so blown away by the response our story is garnering.  Thanks to the many recommends and pimping we have been getting.  Thanks for the response of our fans that make and send us banners and poems and mostly the kind words of love that give us the drive to keep HCV going strong. 
There have been a lot of you all asking for the Bella point of view, and you are going to get it.  The next chapter will have a lot of things going on and we hope you love it.  The age reveal will be in chapter 17, along with a first kiss, the kids going off to camp, Edward and Bella together and meeting up with Sally...those are a few things you have to look forward to.  We started a group on Facebook, you’re all invited to join.  TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction. 
Now to the nitty gritty... 
We both wondered how many of you would ask if Edward’s son was really dead or not, and if Tanya was dead or not.  We want to be clear that Tanya Denali and the child she gave birth to are in fact deceased; they died in the fire.  
We want to point out that Edward is not a Dom.  He role-played and dabbled with the girls at the club, because it was his way of maintaining full control.   He has no desire to tie Bella up and spank her, he is not looking at her as his next submissive or slave.  Just want to be perfectly clear, he is not into the BDSM lifestyle, he is just a man who was seating his needs at a club the only way he saw fit to do so and protect his heart and soul. 

Thank you again for all of the story love and wonderful things you say.  You really have no idea what your words and kindness mean to us.  Thanks, Kasi (&Nikky)


Chapter 17 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
Right now, we’re back at Bella’s apartment getting Seth and Leah’s stuff ready for their trip.

“Okay, Seth, you have everything from your list in your bag, right?”  I watch as he nods his head, and chuckle to myself since Bella had just checked over the list and the bag with him herself.  “Leah, do you have everything from your list in your bag, too?”

“Yes, Bella. Edward and I just went through the list twice.”  I turn my head to hide my chuckle. 

“Okay. Well, we have to be at the church in forty minutes, and since Edward is taking us, we have time to double check.”

“Baby, Leah and Seth have everything they need. How about you go pack your bag now, and feed Jake?  I will help Leah and Seth take their backpacks down to the car.”

“Okay, I will hurry,” she says, leaving to go to her box.

I can tell that Bella is trying to put on a strong front for them, but I know this is killing her to let them go on this trip. It will be good for them, though, and good for her, too.  I have planned out this weekend so that she gets a chance to be a twenty-four year old for a change.  After we have everything packed and ready, we head out.

I drive them to the church, seeing a bus and a bunch of children.  I also see Sally there, and I frown as I pull into a parking space.  “Sally works in the Sunday school. She’s the main reason they are going.  She is taking her cell with her, and said that I could call her anytime.  She is also going to have them call me before bed, and when they get up in the morning.  You can stay here if you want. You don’t need to come with me. I won’t tell her who you are.” I turn to look at her, and smirk because she answered my internal question.

I shake my head.  “No, I am fine, Baby. Thank you.” 

The night of the break in, I explained to Bella that I went by a different name at Aro’s, and the girls I was with, had never seen my face because they were blindfolded.  I was very glad that she just nodded her head, and didn’t ask any other questions.  I hate the fact that I’ve been with them.  I don’t want my sins to show in her eyes when I look at her each time I remember that she saw me there.  When the time comes, and she finds out what I did and what happens there with me and the girls, I hope and pray to God that I don’t lose her friendship.

We get out of the car and start walking over. As we do, Sally waves, making her way over to us.  Her eyes hit me for only a few seconds before she looks back at Bella.

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 211971
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Alternate Arrangements

Wow, Rose is a major bitch. What ls her problem?  Emmett had a great ideal.. Who knew?? Lol.   Edward should have told Bella face to face.  The mystery POV... Stalker Mike??  Love it!! Update soon and often:)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Date Night

The Presidential Treatment is one of my fav's!! So glad they are moving forward.  Any teasers before Wednesday??? ;-).    Please ....

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 May 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 The Presidential Bedroom

Edward and Bella finally!! :).        Love, love, loved  it!!!!!     Update soon;)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Letting Go

Poor Bella trying to hang on and needing to let go.  Edward holding her while she shed the last of her tears for Brady.  Such a good chapter. Love the story! 

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Daddy Time

So glad Edward put Carlise in his place!! Good Job!! Take no prisoners!  First orders of biz for the Prez!! Love how close Edward and Bella  are all becoming .  :-) 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Handling Things

Good Evening everyone. With extreme pleasure , I would like to introduce you to my wife and the First Lady, Isabella Cullen.  And OUR son Seth Cullen.    Lol.. Yep he is in trouble..   Can't wait for the next update! Soon please;) 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 May 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Adjusting to Change

Prezward can tuck me in if he wants to ;-).    Love that they are opening up with each other.  Rose is nice.. Maybe Bella should hide !!   Love it!! Update soon.

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Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 59997
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hey, I hope this reveiws.. I have problems with it sending sometimes. If it does I hope you know that I am loving it so far... It would been better if Bella had kicked Jacob in the nuts... ( welllll maybe that is just me LOL) Anyway LOVE IT!! Update soon!

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Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh,wow.  Just wow!

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Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Lmao

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Why Is he so pissed?? I mean he knows she is it screwing around on him.  She is in the hospital. Where is Esme?? She took her to said hospital.. So WTF???

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Ok I get why he is worried. But not why he yelled at her WTF did u do!  I don't get it.... Please update and explain! Thank u!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Did I miss a chapter??? I am so freaking confused....  He is pissed! She is freaked. Nothing is explained now they are laughing...   Huh???? Help please!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I like the last to chapters. But still confused as hell. Bella was cringing away from Edward with her hand going to her stomach.  Or something like that. I did not see a James Tanya moment in that.  Sorry!! Still confused.



Author's Response:

It´s okay, that chapter will be key later on down the line.  I assure you that it was between Tanya and James, not Bella and Edward.  Remember, Tanya´s still out there lurking, so at anytime she´s going to rear her ugly head.  I hope this clears things up for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

So did Bella die? 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 64: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

That was a krazi ride for Edward and Bella. Great story... I hope this isn't the end of these two. I would love it if they had more stories to tell.  ;)

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37007
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess

Wonderful chapter.. Love Charlie!

 

Looking forward to more Bella and Edward :)