Reviews by AbbeNormal
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311087
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

the name of the group that has her. That way chalie can look it up himself, and decide what to do from there. That's my guess.

 

Love this story. Keep up the great work. Talent running amuck! lol You guys are so talented on this site. SHould have your own books out there.



Author's Response:

ahh but we are.. the publishing house is opening up in October with our first run of books.. We are very excited.. Footroza and I will publish at some point.. we are too busy at the moment. we are writing.. but it takes time.. but it will happen...  so watch this space.. LOL

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

This story is so crazy. I love it...but the thing is, you wonder how people can fall for this type of life. Yes, we all wish at times that life went a little slower like in the older days..but, since that is impossible, being in a cult is not the answer. I can't imagine someone telling me to drink koolaid and I would. But then again, I wouldn't have been in that group at all to begin with. The sad thing is, there are people right now in that same situation. Living in cults that feel they are right and almost walking on heavens streets. I don't understand. Your story makes me think beyond this story. It makes me ask questions to myself that I have to answers for. It takes a great writer to make someone question life and those around us. Keep up the wonderful work!

                                Mary

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

This story takes your breath away. It is so exciting. It is like one chapter it's Alice and her thing, and then the next Bella and her Mom...and now shithead and the cane. It just keeps coming and coming. You don't let a person breath between chapters! lol GREAT job...I feel like I'm right there, wanting to run and tell every person where to find Bella! lol It takes a great writer to make it seem real. I like you, a lot...you are awesome!

                                           Mary

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think I need a shower as well. Holy cow! Where is that blood preasure machine at? lol There should be an age limit warning! lol   Ok, kidding asaide....VERY cool chapter. Can't wait for the next one already! Have a great week....and again, great job. You are such a wonderful writer. I felt like I was right there...errr...not RIGHT there...but dang close! lol                   

                               Mary

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

LOVE this story. Caveward is the man! Seth is so in trouble. Can't wait! And, you are doing a wonderful job on this story. Keep up the good work!

                        Mary

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, it went so fast. I was digging in for a long chapter, which it was, and it was over before I knew it. That is a true sign of a great writer. When a chapter seems like a sentence. Great job...and as always, thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us.

                          Mary

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great job. I so love this story.

 Now, on with your Author's Note. I have to tell you, it surprises me when a gifted author is bitched at about updates, or length of a chapter, or even mistakes being made within a story. What gives people the right to say  anything about any of these things? You write a story if you think it's so dang easy. You update every day with a 10,000 word chapter every day as well...I bet you can't do it. Now, do it like this author is. With three kids and a husband that works outside the home. You think they feed themselves, clothe themselves and wash their dishess and clean the house and take themselves to school and friends houses and play dates all by theirselves? Are do you think maybe this Author works her butt off trying to make her home run smoothly for them? Now, you come a long and bitch because she doesn't update. Sorry, what was that? Are you that spoiled in life you think all these author's here work for you? Get a life. This should be an honor to read these stories. Not a right.

SOrrry to go off on you guys, but dang...I just don't understand people. And to tell you the truth Mrs. Author...I felt it would be better coming from me then you. That way they will be upset with me and not be upset with you.

You take your time, if they are real fans of your story, which they should be because it is great, then it would be an honor to wait for the next chapter. Take your time, and write and update as you can. And no matter how long it is, that's how long the chapter is....period.

             Take care,

                         Mary

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ahhhhh, I love this story. Keep up the great work!

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Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

errrrr...I guess my age is showing....whats an HEA? lol

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

you mean there was more then one of us that didn't know what HEA meant? Or are you being kind to me? lol

Great story. I would like to go right into the tonya crap and get it on the road. Please. Its like ordering MickyD's. lol I'll have a large drink with that as well.

Keep up the great job!!!

                                 Mary



Author's Response:

Yes my darling, there was more than one who didn't know what 'HEA' was. But don't feel bad, for the longest time I didn't know what 'OOC' was...(Out of Character).

As for Mickey D's, Do you also want to upsize to large fries :P Thank you for reading and reviewing. But stay tuned there's all kinds of fuckery on the way...

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol I went to Google and asked what OOC meant one day! lol So........I know what you went through on that. Also, that AU on as well. I'm 54 years old so, some of them I know...but those through me. You take care...and I just wanted to tell you something funny that happened tonight when my husband of 35 years came in from work tonight. I'm not even sure what we were talking about but I ended with that line from your story...with "Man Dave..thats like hundred shared of fucked up!" lol He was like...."What the hell ?" It was so funny I about peed my pants. Thanks for that line...it was priceless!

                                        Mary



Author's Response:

I don't think I know AU lol...Well I'm going to bed its midnight here. But I had to let you know you made me laugh! Glad my line came to use ;) Thanks...

Lisa

Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I was SOOOOO happy to see this updated. AND I wasn't disappointed. Very nice, very nice indeed!

                           Mary

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108585
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Once Upon a Vampire

oh my god...oh my god....oh  my god!!! <I'm doing my homer simpson impression, with jumping up and down on my tiptoes and all> lol I AM SOOOOOOOOO happy you are writing this story again. This is by far my favorite story I've ever read on Fanfiction or anywhere else. Thanks, you write so very well. You hold me right there and don't let me go until you are ready.

                                                   Mary

Tired of Being Sorry by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Ellie Wolf

Even death couldn't free her from the iron grip that was held over her life. Even vampirism wasn't enough to allow her freedom to live. After a century of being placed in glass on a shelf, she breaks free and runs. She put no thoughts to her actions and must now face the consequences.     


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6601 Read Count: 2858
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Oct 2013
Reviewer: AbbeNormal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it. You did an awesome job. I just love Peter and Bella togher. Would make a great longer story. They could be on the run because Edward changed his mind, and wants her back. Or the Cullens need to "get her back to normal" again and they all come looking for her. Or...maybe Jasper says  "Fuck it" and joins them. Now THAT would be hot. lol Ok...I'm done daydreaming! See what you do to me? Thanks for the story!!! Mary :o)

Author's Response:

I literally have a million ideas for this were I to have the time to continue it and it gets fun in my imagination. But, the time is not there right now.