Reviews by Scorp112
Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***WARNING:  This story contains heartfail, adult themes, violence, abuse, sexual situations, and is not intended for readers under the age of 18.***

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76124 Read Count: 20345
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: What the Hell Happened to Bella?

Wow. Poor Bella. He's not even real and I wanna kick James in the head. 

Great story...can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Oh, there is a LONG line-up of people willing to kick the fictional James in the head.  You are not alone.

And thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Branded

Tough, tough chapter.  Parts of it definitely had me tearing up.

Love the interaction between Bella and Edward.  Just perfect - not too much, but not too little. 



Author's Response:

I'm relieved to hear you say that.  I've had differing opinions on the rate at which they move.  ;)

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64121
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very intriguing!! Can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awww...they're so cute!! Can't wait for the date!

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They are too cute!!!! I'm glad Edward called her. 

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok, first, Candy the bitch needs to be slapped - repeatedly. 

Loved their first kiss - swoon! 

Very interested in seeing what happened with Jake and Bella. 

I adore how close Edward and Bella are getting already.  Of course, I'm also waiting for the other shoe to drop now...

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, things are moving sooo fast.  I hope this doesn't end badly!!! 

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awww...this is so cute!!! I love how Edward has fit right in with Alice, Jasper and Charlie.  I'm also glad we know what happened with Jake.

I'm with Alice - he's gonna mess this up. (Of course I know that thanks to the summary when it says he leaves her. He better have a damn good reason!!)

BTW - I think you're a terrific writer.  Reading your story has been very enjoyable!

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well, hello holy hot sexing! :) 

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Whoa, craziness! But I got to say, whirlwind or not - I LOVE IT! :) Too cute.

I can't wait to see where you're taking us on this journey - obviously he leaves her at some point, but will she still stay in the house? What is stronger than his love for her that makes him go?  

All questions I know I'll get the answer to, but I'm curious! Can't wait! :) 

Reviewer: Scorp112 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay, can blame him for wanting to help his family or do something incredibly selfless or worthwhile.  Seriously, it's just six months.  They can survive that.  

I just hope neither start questioning their commitment to each other since their romance has been so whirlwind and now they'll have time apart to think and process. 

I'm assuming since she's moved in with him, she'll stay at the house when he leaves.  I could see her offering to leave since they haven't been together that long.  It would be a Bella thing to do...

Can't wait for the next chapter!