Reviews by nilo24
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514144
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

its a little weird you save three chapter of 74 that all chapter is same content so i think you have to delete the simaler chapeters

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624470
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it

Summary:

Bella can no long hide behind her intellect when she has a stroke. She can't hide from her childhood love when he shows up back in Forks, either.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Sparkledamnu's Must Reads
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26330 Read Count: 9907
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2010 Updated: 07 Feb 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Hi . i read your stories it was happy ending i felt for bella who have storke and all this hospital visits its very tought time and she compare i o her life what she did wrong that she deserve this . emm you are good in writing this you could put this story in fanfiction dot com becuase a lot people will review it its very good and short . i love it thank u fo writing i .

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153025
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Suppression

hi , Thanx for writting i am eager to find out what you plan with this story how three wife and one male will be ,..emmm i cant imagine this kind of life are all about sex i think it is . its hard to live like that and you nee tention in this kind of life

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

I'm new to your story and love it. I added it to my favorites a while ago, but just started reading it. I could not stop. Thank you for a wonderful story and I look forward to future updates

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster

it's amazing. and acctually i don't have anything to say, it's all said already before.
your story is so different from all others at and i love it. you made it so good that i think that it's impossible not to love it after few chapters

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings

it's amazing. and acctually i don't have anything to say, it's all said already before.
your story is so different from all others at and i love it. you made it so good that i think that it's impossible not to love it after few chapters

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

Another powerful chapter! Poor Bella! But so glad the truth is finally out

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

That was wonderful! You're writing is beautiful, as always

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Magic Eight Ball

this chapter blew me away. it was even better than i imagined it would be. can't wait for the next one

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

i think u have 4000 review in fanfiction in here, not much peoplecaming but they will come becuase fanfiction delete some stories and people come here

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

i dont get it . in authour note you mentioned that you will write chapter 18 but this is chapter 14 i search your story in google i find out the only place you write is in this website so why you are saying you have more than 4000 review and you update until chapter 18 emmm i really confused im egaer to ur update

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

hi .

 

wow thank u for up dating so soon , no mistake really it was very nice. okay i recomand for slow burns you read this chapter its so good

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5390119/26/The_University_of_Edward_Masen

and also if you more emmm master of universe you could search in twilighted.com without sensor and fanfiction with sensor you will love their slow burns



Author's Response:

thank you very much for the recomendation, i will look into it thank you :) xx

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

I love this chapter, hell, i love this whole damn story. It's great, and i love it



Author's Response:

hehe im glad you liked it :) and im ecstatic that you love the story. thank you so much xx

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Notes

hi....thank you for up dating .hope your new classes are good . i love the way you described the i love ou in the begining of this chapter the way bella hand was writing in edward chest it was so kind and romantic . i really liked . emmm i really love to know more about alice and emmet feeling toward to thir rose and jasper are they also have monster within themselves that alice and emmet recognized too

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88019
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

interesting plot line , bella become doll for edward and he doesnt feel herself yet but he doesnt like the way bella act on him , im sure he is feeling grows , keep up dark edward up i like him

Seducing Revenge by ladyinblue6 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 64]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47921 Read Count: 10912
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow, i read your whole story today wow, it was really good a little bit of mistake and i wish you choice different for children but i am happy for bella , it was very nice . thank you for writting this story .

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161682
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this chapter, hell, . It's great, and i love it.

WOW! Cannot wait for next chapter. This has rapidly become the highlight of my week. Thankyou!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hi, wow its a little funny that all cullon kids are in all her classes and they all want to be talk to her and feel her safe emmm interesting. i eager to know what will happens

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love your story! It's one of the best that I've ever read. One thing I really enjoy is your unique plot, it makes your story that much more addicting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

emmm,weird she will fight and screams so bad wow, how you want this story goes i dont know im still in this chapter 4 i have to read a lot to see what will comes next.but thanks for taking your time to write . i love it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i just started this story and its really really good. Your writing is amazing... It's like you are in Bella's head but also the reader is aware of what she is oblivious...


Somebody told me about this story and that I should read it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i wish more of these good people we creat it in fanfiction sotries was real in real world we living . emmm its so hard and touchy it had hurt,comfort and maybe love in ur story

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just read the  chapter 7 and you've already gotten me hooked.I'm just curious as to have very dark things are going to get. I see that I have a lot of chapters to get through

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow, so she is writting godto know but im thinking when she starts talking it wil be ard to talk after 2 years

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

so she confess like that emmm i really love it if u put more prietly confess from bella to charli or edwar alone emmm but itsnot m story to tell

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

what can i say a little hurt but good chapter over all

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

poor bella you are a little fast in these chapter 10 and 11 and love and confession all three guys are feeling about rape emmm



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reivews:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

thank you for up dating . i was starting to read a;; 22 chapter yesterday night when i find out you up date new chapter here,

 

last three small 2 line sentence you have mis-spell : you wrote wood instead of would . just want to let u know

he wood look over at me and smile before he looked down at his plate



Author's Response:

Thanks foir reading and pointing out my mispelling:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76112
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lovely chapter :)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

its a lot of sugar if edard want test all the cakes and dsirt in bella bakery

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

poor TANYA, did you check my email or read my E-mail . i change her charecter differently from others .

poor Emeth with all caked he have to eat every day he will get sick

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh Emmett , i wish my brother more like , he is funny in this chapter . good job , you know i hate when people dont put review when they read each chapter , they are too lazy

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

how he could be reach what he study that he is 24 and he is working in a company ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh in fiction everything is possible isn't it !

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Emmett is cute  , i hope too much sugar, dont bother his health

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

edward sweet in here but he is too shy or ,....that doesnt say his feeling toward bella. peter use bella to her advantures

you know its better not to tell anybody what you have and what you dont have so people dont get used you . in bad way

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow coool

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183957
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The ship wreck.

Thank you for writting this story and time , im so suprize how did you find french story or translat it , i mean how and who wrote the french story its just story i have in my mind it seems all the people in ship survived



Author's Response:

I'm the author of this story, meaning that I both write it in French and in English. I should finish to write the French version around Christmas. My chapters in French are longer and I split them for my English version so there will be more of them.

Summary:

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bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.

how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.

nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.

warning: dark edward and sexual abuse

Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why.  Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see! 

-Love Sinister :D

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49638
[Report This] Published: 07 Jul 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2018
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: so close but so far away

i really love your story , why edward telling lie at the beginning , when he truley wants her to have child with him with the act he did in dr office. thank you for writting please up date soon oh also , in this sentence you have tiny mistake , and im surize how easy she could live edward mantion so easy and not anybody following her and how she got euro moneys ,emmmm, over all it nice story

“My father and uncles are incouraging me to marry someone. Someone who has had my kids  already.” He said grazing my face.

encouraging



Author's Response:

yea, thnx. and i really was going to expain all of that in the next chapter you kno her tell jake the how she got out easily and everything, because remember she was there for nine months, it will all make sense in the next chapter.

so yeah and sorry about that little mistake i was trying to hurry and post it.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: story teller

What is love? baby dont hurt me, dont hurt me ,  No more ,...


well , can you believe if i say that from last up date until today i check this site everyday to see this chapter , yep , i love your story , you are very good writer and you are very good in charecters , Please dont listen to Others about why this story is Dark or why edward is like this and they want Softer Edward , you see many writers in Fanfiction or this story dont listen to others they have their oponion and they try to make whats they want in thier story and Reader have to be thank full to read the story , i love the way your story goes , so please dont give up , keepp up what your ideas of story , Okay Well, i dont get why edward wants babys so much , :D i hope the baby is girl Not boy . Girls are sweet and more to mommy until the boys but im sure if baby be girl ,edward try to make boy for next year. I like Mob eward .
Thank you for updating and writting this story , i know its really hard to write and Edit and do,....all the stuff but i know the reviews makes you happy i will review for all the chapters

Author's Response:

AAAwwwww thank you well i guess we know what the baby is. because you just made my day with that review

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: abandon and sacrifice

hi dear , wow i am so happy that you up date your story , well, well i see james is good guy

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: a life

tough chapter, really all the chapter i read are all about helpless bella , i dont know where you want to go with this story ,,but good luck , good chapter

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: head start

long time no up date, please up date story if you put time between your chapters we will forget , i really want to know what you have i your mind about this story , i dont know where this story will go dear. thanx , edward back , i dont know but i like dark edward

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well, good chapter as always i am wondering how many children in totall bella have why bella stop her body to be pregnant again , thanx for writting

Summary:

Crimson Love banner

 

Sometimes love is darker. More crimson.

For the 'Beyond The Pale' Contest located at: http:// www. fanfiction. net/u/2431148/BeyondThePale. Image used: #17. (Voting open NOW!)

WARNING: Contains graphic violence, sex, and language. There are disturbing images and themes in this story.

(Banner by: Me, Myself, and I.)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7242 Read Count: 648
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Crimson Love: One-Shot

Wow, this one shot story was great. i went to the site in your profile and vote for this story . in this story you put everything in it.  love , hate, hurt, obsesseness,....i really like it . you have to change name of the story to obsessive of Edward as all readers here in this site and fanfiction are obsessed . i like the lemon part also you wrote very highly and i hope when that part come to my story i could wrote it i dont how to write but im sure is hardest part to write becuase its,.... well my story is called If only . if u have time i be happy if you read it

Carnival by pdd912 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Bella meets Vampire Edward at an amusement park in New Orleans.  Mind control and Smut ensues.  Dark Edward.  Defiled Bella.  Consent is questionable.  Might be nonexistent.  AU, very OOC.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1336 Read Count: 669
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i like this chapter, it has everything . it seems you want to write more becuase he have unfinished buisness with her. good chapter , thanx for writting this chapter

Dont live in regret by DLIR Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

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Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?  

E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Yes...

you put so much emotion in this story , you are very good in writting and efeacting all our hearts for sure . thank you for putting time and writting this story



Author's Response:

awwwww thank you soooo much.xoxoxoxo I really really try and i get sooo happy when people love it thank you....my sister is working on the next chapter right now xoxooxoxox

MALEVOLENT by LegendaryDiamond Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

He manipulated and tainted everything he touched and I wouldn't allow him to touch me so I ran. "You can run Isabella but you can't hide, do you hear me? You're mine Isabella, you're mine!" He's found me... Warning: extreme Darkward. Read at your own risk.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42123 Read Count: 61612
[Report This] Published: 10 Dec 2011 Updated: 16 Jun 2015
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Benevolent vs Malevolent: Final Showdown

as writer it is hard to write strong bad situation such as abuse and rape i am struggling too as i am writting story of "hate bella" , i know many readers give you hard time , i dont understand why edward love is so dark and how he can learn not to be dark in love , but i am happy she is free

 

Summary:

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Very mature subjects matter - AU- Canon pairing – Edward kidnaps Bella to use as a toy. The Cullen's attitudes different from canon – lots of lemony goodness, or badness depending upon your mindset. Some bondage, ok lots of bondage...


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43257 Read Count: 36496
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 20 Jul 2012
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed half-star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow, you are not slow writer you jump to hard stuff emmm

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed star
Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

if you see that you dont have more reviews becuase this site is not working with internet explorer 9 , as you many people using ie 9 and they put messages for stories and ,..but all the messages are blank , the owner of site said its been 1 years this happens to reviewing of stories so she suggest to use google chrome for send reviews to other , so i downloaded this apps espically for this site . i know you might be heart broken if you see you dont have more reviews is this site faults and ie9 versions,...

 

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

wow, this expensive lingerie needs a great body i think most actors and model are wearing this i love la santa and cheaper lingerie

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 280982
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i love this story , i love dark side of edward and you kind of write it like beauty and beast kind of way , good job dearest and i know how much time you spend on writting this story. thank you for make our boring life interesting by reading this story .

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner courtsey of Fallingsnow Winter

Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great story line and , i feel edward judge to soon about bella situation , and i wish he didnt post this article. she broke her , didnt he get scared if father of bella come after him ....

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i love this story , its funny and your story line is different from others and it is cute , i am so happy that you are up dating this story and i can read it , you deserved more reviews  . thank you for your time

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow, so much secrets , poor bella , she is very alone

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sometimes the bad things that happen in our lives put us directly in the path of the best things that will ever happen to us. ExB AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2110 Read Count: 123249
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2015 Updated: 29 Oct 2015
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Come Back Tomorrow

it is sad story , i feel it would break my heart to know what is happeining to him and others



Author's Response:

I know.  :(  But it's also a beautiful love story, so I hope you're stay with us! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Dominant & A Gentleman

Growing up with a father in the military was hard on Bella. She made a promise to herself that she would never date or fall for a Marine like her father. That is until she runs into a pair of identical twins that have her reconsidering her rule.

Anthony is shy, extremely polite, and a true gentleman.

Edward appears to be in control and exudes confidence, and has a very dark side.

Will she take the risk or walk away?



A special thank you to Chandrakanta for creating the awesome banner for this story.

And a heartfelt thank you with undying gratitude to my awesome beta LostInPa who has helped with this story from the very first chapter.

I ♥ you hard!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/OC
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134473 Read Count: 94203
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2015 Updated: 01 May 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Epilogue Disneyland....Ooorah!

awasome story and awasome writer

Crowned by cristina Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 280]
Summary:

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A playboy prince and an unwilling princess. An unusual match, brought together by strange circumstances. Will they find love or are they doomed to hate each other? 

Banners made by  the very talented StillDreaming85 and FallingSnow Winter.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35361 Read Count: 32488
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2015 Updated: 04 Oct 2015
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

it is nice story , developing in good parts, but i feel so sad for bella she cant be in this horribile situation . it is hard for her

Summary:

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It's always been said that they're three sides to every story- yours, mine and the truth. With all the forbidden sex, manipulation, lies, secrets, deceit, twists an turns around every corner, finding the truth proves to be quite a difficult task. Backstabbing and deception become commonplace... Warning: super lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 68959 Read Count: 17582
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2015 Updated: 14 Jun 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Sinfully Right

this story is very confusing , very , everybody have secrets, it brings cruisty of readers by reading this story ,

Summary: Past Featured Story

ttb

 

Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 171235
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

POOR ISABELLA AND ALL THE PROBLEMS SHE GOTS

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 24 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

oh , this is unbelieveblae , her sister did this and bella killed her , it is not good at all

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I LOVE THE BLACK WEDDING DRESS AND I LOVE THE CHARECTOR BELLA WHO IS NOT LISTENING TO EDWARD AT ALL

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

what can i say about yout lovely story , it was amazing i love your plot line and the way you described your charectors and how bella is fighting back with edward and i laugh a lot in last chapter it was great that she wear black wedding dress and how you describe their relationship . you have great story and you are great writer, but it is sad that bella parents died one day after their wedding and it is going to be hard for bella to accepted it . i really like it if bella do give hard time on edward , you make it so funny .

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

it is sad the way bella lose her parents but bella cant forgive edward easily she have to give space between her and him , it is hard to grive

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh uh , it is not easy to grive , it was nice chapter ,but i feel it is to soon to forgiving edward

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

it would be fun if princess get angry towards edward  , it would be funny

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

i thought this chapter was like caught me if you can , bella running away and edward is to chasing her like the begining of your story , i like it , to be hard to get but , i am happy about your story . thank you for taking your time and writting this wonderfull story.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

sister betraying bella , is hard to trust anyone

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

WOW, I DID NOT LIKE EDWARDS FATHER ATTIUTED , HE IS VERY OLD FASHION. It was none of their business whether BELLA  and EDWARD had sex or not, IT IS HARD SHE HAS A LOT TO DEAL WITH IT , SHE IS NOW LIVING WITH THEM AND SHE NOW HAS ENEMY WITH HER SISTER SITUATION AND DEATH OF HER PARENTS THIS IS NOT GREAT FOR EDWARD PARENTS THINK SO CHEAP

Nightmare by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary:

Summary: There's a serial killer on the loose and he calls himself Sent From Hell. Edward is a little strange and his past is jaded. He's let his crush on Bella be known, but she's scared of his unknown past. When Bella is hunted down, will Edward be her saving grace or will he be Sent From Hell?

 

Banner by: CaiteexxGraphics


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68989 Read Count: 29009
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Jan 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

great story plot , i thought it was edward who i was suspecting i didnt know it would be jasper , great story thank you for writting it .

Deprivation by aliciaw68 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is deprived of Intimacy and Bella something far more private  can fate bring them together or not ?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 67 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160365 Read Count: 97954
[Report This] Published: 28 Oct 2015 Updated: 03 Apr 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

it wa very funny chapter , i like this chapter the most ,..sniffing women :):):):)

Blood Master by Wonwordful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by IpsitaC77

Beta: EdwardsFirstKiss

COMPLETE. When Bella asked the ruby-eyed vampire to end her life, she never expected him to 'kidnap' her instead. Who is he, and where is he taking her? A crazy adventure begins, unravelling unprecedented secrets. World travel. AU/OOC. NC17 for strong language, some violence and mild BDSM.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131671 Read Count: 93967
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2015 Updated: 23 Jan 2017
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces

wow, i read your stories in two days , i love your charector espicall edward the funny, crazy vampire edward , he deals with bella well , i love he made breakfast for her and was carefull of her ,so she doesnt do suicide again , at the end of the chapters their funny side was and it got very serious , your plot was very nice and you are great writer , thank you for writting this story



Author's Response:

Hello, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed Edward's character and the plot, it means a lot. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the last few chapters and the outtakes :) 

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Twenty-Five

YOUR STORY IS VERY COMPLICATED , A LOT CHARECTOR AND SWITCHING BETWEEN DOL AND BELLA AND OTHER  CHARECTOR , AS READER I GET CONFUSED A LOT , A LOT OF FANTASY CHARECTOR .

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

Banner by Rita01tx. Beta'd by Frannie Walsh.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 20431
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

love your plot story line , great and sweet ending



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and I'm so happy you liked the ending. <3

Summary:

OOTD

 

Edward Cullen is a fallen angel, living among humans. He’s dark, snarky, tattooed and a total badass. However, he still has his wings and angelic powers because the ‘powers that be’ believe that he is capable of redemption, despite being cast out of heaven. His exile was due to the fact that he was interacting with an unknown evil that tempted him over sixty years ago. Because of his mistake, he’s resigned to live out his immortal existence as a bitter angel, caught in limbo.

 

Isabella Swan, a human, is in the wrong place at the wrong time. In her innocence, she manages to worm her way into his heart, bringing him back into the light and out of the darkness.

Banner by Clo Rodeffer

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read, Gelesen, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 108687 Read Count: 68027
[Report This] Published: 03 Dec 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2017
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

interesting plot story i read your story in one week , and i am happy how you make edward as angel

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 64343
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

thank you for writting this story finally i read the full story of yours. great job

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart

wow, this chapter covers a lot , is like forward edward situation by 10 years i feel. anticipation is killing me . is just wierd to see bella choose this career as she is daughter of chief in small town and she was very innocent and now she had vip escourt wierd. and i am sure carlise knows about bella very well that she is the one edward grow up with it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream

this is serious action story better then any mafia movies i watch so war so well writen , can i say i miss your writting alot . thank you for taking time and writing  it

Summary:

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Charlie owes the mob an obscene amount of money and  it’s time to pay up. The problem is, he doesn't have the money. So in a last bid to save his own neck, he offers them his daughter. Dark Romance.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27753 Read Count: 53465
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2017 Updated: 17 Feb 2018
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

you are great in writting and your stories are the best , most of your stories got a lot reviews i hope you write more keep it up becuase as reader i am very eager to read more of your story , thank you for time and writing this story please keep up dating faster

Summary:

rwiwtb

Bella is an exotic dancer, and she loves her job. Edward is a millionaire with a savior complex who needs to rescue Bella. She doesn’t want to be rescued, but she does want Edward for the things he does to her body. When she discovers his issues run deeper than she ever thought, will she accept him for what he can offer, or will she walk away? Drabble. Olderward.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25351 Read Count: 79279
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2017 Updated: 25 Dec 2017
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed star
Date: 17 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

interesting plot line and bella fast and wierd liking her job



Author's Response:

She is different.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

hi , thank you for replaying to my comment , each chapter are short and you are building the anticipation i am thinking this bella charector is very bold she does not think of HPV, AIDS OR ANY SEXCUAL ADVANCES , i think it well take longer time to know what will hapen , have great week



Author's Response:

Thanks. She'll be sure to insist on protection.

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

its look like the story is like pretty women , you are killing me slowly by short chapters :) , thank you for writting



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

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Author's Response:

Thank you! Such a cute little face. 

HATE BELLA by nilo24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

 

I born in a rich family , life is not easy and i was innocent in all of it until i decide it to have one thing i cant never have. i decide it to not have heart-broken heart, my plan was to steal him, but i cant steal any men, but i did choose anorther option as you will know , HE will Hate me ...

CHARECTERS: BELLA, EDWARD, ALICE , ESME , CARLISE,CHARLIE,


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Tragic Affairs
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20791 Read Count: 1756
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2017 Updated: 15 Oct 2017
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

HAppy you like it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i care for you , dont you know , it is hard not to see you and i miss you , but time will heal the pains , oh it is very hard , you are struborn and i am like you , i lost my trust , you hurt me so bad , my feeling hurt this story is all about hateness i have towards you . how i can punish you how i can hurt you the best i can do , is hold it in my head, put it in myself dont say it dont speak out. no one will lessson people think is easy but is not . your pain is your pain and you affected mostly becuase it is yours only :(

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

THank you for reviews, gosh writting is hard espically when English is not your first language and you love to write but i will do it . you guys can clean it in your head .:D

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

THank you rob- love happy you enjoy it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

pocket vagina or flashligh i was reading in amazon that most wife are buying it for their mens so when they travel they can enjoy themself. interesting avoid cheating :D:D

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward is sissy , scared of a littile humilation and tourure emmmm, she is mad very mad . breaking to her office what he was thinking

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

who like bella being evil ??

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Every one has secret and baggaged they just hide it so you dont know what is it

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

:):)

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

thank you rob , i know she is harsh , every bad thing we do comes what we dont have and we want to improve it by something

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HI .

 

i DONT HAVE beta and english is not my first language i am using grammer website and dictionary to improve my writting please dont judege it read it , you will love the charector after while.