Reviews by RandyWriter
Second Chances by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
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Edward and Bella parted ways after high school and never spoke again. 5 years later, when Edward dies in a car crash, Bella gets the chance to live out what could have been if she made a different decision 5 years ago. AH, HEA. contains adult themes and language.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100196 Read Count: 12206
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2015
Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Our Farewell

Such a heartbreaking story!! Can't even imagine it happening! Love the humor on the planes about those evil clowns (yes I share your thoughts on this matter). Bella meeting up with the family, wow! Brave!! Adore that she is sleeping in his room!!!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Funeral

My eyes were full of tears as I sat through that funeral....holy crap!!! Love that Lauraunt is going to help!!!! Yay!!!! Reading on!!!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 4: All I Have To Do Is Dream

Wow, that was an amazing morning! I was so excited! Squee!!! Poor Jake, but I have a real soft spot for true love, and Edward! Hope Lauraunt doesn't rip the rug out later! Reading on!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Since I've Been Loving You

So much love between these two. Love the way you showed us their beginnings, how they met too! Adore how much love they share!!!! Reading on!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Layla

All of the teasing at the beginning, had me rolling. So interesting also that Edward wants to propose, but because of something Bella said awhile ago, he's afraid to do it! The story of Layla had me teary. Too much devotion to work and money and not enough for love!!! Adore the teasing by Tigress Bella! Wow! Keeping Edward on his toes, lol!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Zoo

Love the story and how Bella was caught SHOWERHEADING, by Edward, lol! Adore that Bella and Edward are so passionate for one another!!! Love how Jake can tease her too! I was so happy to see Jake finding love now, and she seems so feisty. She obviously wants Bella's approval, but I think also wants Bella to know that she's Jake's girl! When the crew gets together, it's a riot! Adore the inner voices of all of yoru characters. Some of the funniest stuff ever! Glad Rosalie will get her chance to have her restaurant. Don't think she had that opportunity in the "other" life. Love the hot lemony times at the club..perfect. When Bella mentions Laurant though, Edwards obviously goes a little crazy, but she's able to quickly cover herself. Wow. I must admit I was a bit teary again thinking of how Edward mentioned the meadow and how he wants to marry her, sniff sniff. Really great love story!! Reading on!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: How Deep Is Your Love

Love the little bet between Bella and Edward...so funny! Bella and Edward going to visit Reilly and seeing his lovely home, very visual. Adored how sweet Reilly was with Bella, well, she did say that she would move in with him, lol. Rosalie is so upset and I had to wonder what was going on, and now we know! Love it!! CAn't wait, reading on!!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: All I've Ever Needed

Aw, I am so excited for Rose and Emmett and how he stormed into the apartment for answers, HOT!! Love that everyone was there....to share in the news! Edward wants kids, hmmm??? Love it! The bet...genius. Loved how he tried his hand at winning, but was trumped by Bella and her outfit, lol! YAY she won! Now, duh duh duuhhhh, Laurant has not so good news, and worse, Edward heard Bella saying another man's name again, eeek! I think she'll confess, lol. Reading on!

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Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: The Same Deep Water As You BPOV

I can't even begin to understand what must have been running through Edward's brain. Hearing another man's name again, and then that she can't tell Edward, wow! Loved that she told him everything and that he was so understanding. The little facts that she confessed from the funeral really convinced him I guess. Love the story! Can't wait for more! So Reading on!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 11: The Same Deep Water As You EPOV

Well that was interesting! So Edward took that news rather calmly, well, he was a bit shocked, but since he loves and trusts Bella so much, I guess it's only natural to stay calm. Love it!! Now things will probably get more interesting now, but at least they are in this together. She was so shocked over Charlie that it must have only convinced him more!! Now Esme is overjoyed and I think it will put a little more pressure on the rest of the women in the family!! More Grandbabies!! Haha. Can't wait for more!!

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Some Day my Prince will Come...in a White Lab Coat?

Amazing updates!   I just caught up!   What can I say, I'm a bit late!   Love the addition of Dr. McCutie!    Adorable.   Can't wait for proposal.    Bella and Edward are so cute together!     I guess I'm a little behind  on your stories!     I will catch up some day!   You are such an incredible writer, truly.   Every story, I feel like I'm in the room.  Watching, listening, incredible!   Thank you!!!!   

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Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

So this was so damn funny I almost wet myself.     The whole replacing instead of fixing, yeah my husband would gadfly do, lol.     Of corse I agree with Esme, beautiful babies, and I know they will figure it all out someday and kick themselves, lol.    Mama is always right!!!!    Such a funny sweet story!     You are an amazing writer my dear!!!!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

Edward is finally admitting to friends that he loves Bella, well to Emmett, lol, and hopefully if Edward stays strong, he can make Bella understand, to not be afraid of committing to him.     Love it!     Loved how Edward wanted to pummel the guy that was dancing with Bella and making her uncomfortable.    You do a great job showing how a relationship can take time, how taking chances with friendships to make them into a commited love relationship can be scary to some.     Awesome job!

Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 132: Chapter 132

Dang that was amazing!     So visual to see how destroyed Bella is, and how Alice helped get everything she could, out in the open....perfect!!    Loved it all!     So happy to see these two finally trying to get past the pain, and down to the truth now!    They are both so exhausted!    Time for some love  and peace.   Loved it all!!!

Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 135

Amazing, incredible, can't say enough good things about your story.    So excited to see your updates!    The gentle touches, words of love and how committed Edward is to Bella, makes me all warm.     Love it all!    Can't wait to see what Oaul gets in jail!!  Probably more than a swab stuck up his euretha, lol.     He doesn't have a hoo aha but he might think he has one after his time in jail, lol!    Oh happy days!     Love it all!   

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1082143
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: RandyWriter Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I really like this story! Perfect for me.   Bella and Edward are coming along nicely as friends, and hopefully soon a dating couple?   Love it!   Emmett has his hands full, and Rose is a perfect jerk.  Love it!   Hopefully Rose figures out that Irina needs a lobotomy, for doing what she did to Edward.   Love the personalities you gave to Bella and Edward.   Smart Asses!! Perfect!   Can't wait to see what comes next!  Keep it coming!!!  Yes!