Reviews by dustybritches
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: The Pragmatic Gentleman

I love the changes you've made.  I am soooo excited to take The Perfect Girl out of my "Loved But Lost In Limbo" file.  I adore this story. I'll be following you here on TWCS and peeking in on your blog.  Thank you, thank you, thank you for coming back to this story.  I'm totally dancing around the room. :)

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: The Idealistic Painter

I need to stop comparing it to the first draft.  It's like I knew the bones but now it's fleshed out and a much better version.  I am so pleased with the changes you've made.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely reviews. Yes, I believe the first draft was a bit rushed and, honestly, I didn't know better. I do prefer this new version, it has a bit more depth, though the first two chapters were loaded with information. I couldn't avoid that. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, I'm pretty excited to share it again. xo Mina

Summary:

 

Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast?  AH/AU   OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2010 Updated: 06 May 2016
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Silence Is Golden

Good lord, soooo worth the wait! Be well and take the time you need to grieve and heal. Thank you for sharing Bella and her Lion with us. It is sheer perfection. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285577
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Sweet Fig Crostini

Another great chapter. Can't wait to see where we go from here. Thank you 



Author's Response:

thanks for your note.  I'm so pleased you enjoyed it.  The next chapter posts tonight.

Here's a teaser for the next chapter: 

 

“Vicky, I’d like you to meet Emmett’s better half, Miss Rosalie Hale.  Rose this my cousin James’ wife but more importantly my friend, Victoria Volturi.”

 

They shook hands.  Rose went over to join Vicky and Bella, while I moved over to stand with Emmett.

 

“I usually hate these things but it is actually bearable with Bella here.”

 

“Yeah, Rose was so excited to get all dressed up.  Alley helped her find a dress and I treated her to an afternoon at the hairdressers. You’d think I’d lassooed the moon, she was so grateful.  She's not used to little luxuries but she’s going to have to get used to it ‘cos I plan on spoiling her as much as she'll let me.  She’s the one Edward.  I know it.  I can’t move as fast as you have with Bella because of Rose's experiences with her abusive ex, but I can be patient.  Believe me, if it were up to me we'd be on our honeymoon right now. I fucking love her.”

 

“That’s great man.  I am truly happy for you.  This ex of hers sounds like a nightmare. There’s no way he’s still a threat to her is he?”  

 

“Well, threat of not.  If he ever finds her he’ll have to come through me and I won’t hesitate to put that man down.  Fucking pig, abusing a woman.”

 

“You ever need me, bro’ and I am there.  Just say the word.”

 

“Thanks Ed.  She’s my one and only from now on.”  His eyes were bright and I realised he too had found his mate.  Now all we had to do was find someone worthy of our Alice. I hate to see her alone.

 

“Edward?” My sweet girl was standing close and looking up at me.  I loved it when she did that. “The girls and I are going to find a seat ready for the parade.  Will I save a seat for you?”

 

“Sure, love.  I’ll be along in a little while.”  She walked off with the girls and as I watched her walk away from me I noticed how many men were watching her and checking her out.  I must have growled louder than I thought as Emmett hit me in the arm.

 

“Settle down man.  You’re in love with a beautiful woman.  You better get used to other men looking at her but you’ve got nothing to worry about.  That girl is the real deal.  You have a winner there man.”

 

I nodded and smiled.  “She’s my one and only too, Em.”

 

Cheers,

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - rustic tuscan soup

A beautiful chapter, so well written.  Thank you.

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh My.  You know she's gonna come out of the wood work now that he is sole owner of a fortune 500 company.



Author's Response:

Thx for your comment.  Always w Edward it is two steps forward one step back.  But I believe he and bella can deal w Kate.

thx for reading.

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I just want to gather them all up in a group hug.

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 ~ pre wedding jitters

My cup runneth over too.  Edward and Anthony...just big sobby ugly crying.  *hiccup* *sigh*

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334502
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh my goodness. So much was packed into this chapter.  Very well written.  Looking forward to the next chapter. Love this story thanks.



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281077
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Confessions of a Billionaire's W***e

I follow you on your blog for your series.  If you start a new blog for this or others let us know. I also follow you on facebook and get your new blog info there as well if you share there.  I know your frustrated but these open to all sites try to look at the big picture.  I don't want you editing your work to fit a site. I would rather see your work on a blog worded and designed just as you see it in your minds eye.  Stay true to yourself and your work and your fans will stay true to you no matter where you are.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

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A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142639
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four

I'd rather you write than respond to reviews.  Tues. Friday updates.  If you are releasing chapters that often I don't need a teaser.  I love the sweetness of this story.  Thanks for working so hard to share it with us



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, Dusty...lucky for me I can respond to reivews and write! I love making sure you all know how thankful I am that you take the time to leave me some feedback, even if it's just to give me a smile on my face. I'm so glad you're enjoying the tale I'm telling. I hope that doesn't ever stop.

xx Dee

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Thank you for the extra chapter and more please.  More More More...please.



Author's Response:

You're welcome, but thank you as well. More tomorrow! 

xx Dee

Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven

Don't ask me why but a bitchy Alice is a serious bitch unlike a bitchy Rose who can't be blamed because she's' just drawn that way'. A bitchy Alice is almost evil.  Well written.  I love that they were solid and a united front before the Alice hit the fan.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Their families hated each other.  They had competed with each other all through high school. But now they were stuck on a plane sitting next to each as they head home for the holidays. Merry Christmas everyone!

Thanks Fallingsnow for the lovely banner. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7704 Read Count: 19958
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2013 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ i got this baby

This was just perfect.  I love An Affair to Remember.  Although it parallels the movie it stands on its own too.  It was very well written, concise in wordage but generous in heart.  Perfect.  It will be a perennial favorite for me. Thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Leaving behind a misserable childhood Bella trades one type of misery for another kind.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64876 Read Count: 46224
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2016 Updated: 20 Jun 2017
Reviewer: dustybritches Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A good start. Looking forward to more