Reviews by asam75
Summary:

Two men who couldn't be more opposite and one woman. Her growth, happiness and sorrow.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5686 Read Count: 2496
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2018 Updated: 05 Aug 2018
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Enjoying the story...hope you continue.  However if you drop it, I'd still like you to finish the one where Edward was an architect and Bella went to Europe for six months.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 27 May 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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The Collection by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 365]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In Volterra, the Crown Prince chooses his future queen from the Collection. 35 young women from every province of the country, open to members of all castes, given the opportunity to be the newest chapter in the country's fairy tale. But Isabella Swan didn't want to be part of the Collection, all she wanted was to love a boy and have him love her in return. And Edward Masen was not that boy.

 

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The Collection: A Twilight/The Selection Crossover

For those of you who have read The Selection Series, you will recognize the world of this story and some of the character types, but most of the plot will blend elements of the two series with original ideas, so it won't simply be The Selection plot with Edward and Bella. There will be things that will completely take you by surprise, I hope, and keep you entertained. This idea overtook me while reading the last book, which is the first time a series has done this since Twilight, so I wanted to play with it. Also, it felt right to post this the day before my 9th anniversary in fanfic. Thank you to all my readers, new and old, and my team, past and present, for sticking with me on this journey. 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Wanna read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118372 Read Count: 63740
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2018 Updated: 17 Jun 2020
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 31 May 2020 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 37

I had suspected the king, but it wasn't him.  Now I wonder about Angela and her "off" voice. Why would the rebels care who is chosen? But Angela certainly does.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 28 May 2020 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

Good chapter.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 46: Epilogue

I like this Tanya from the latter part of your story.  Thank you.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

I thought Edward was in charge of who went home.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Both Alice and Jasper knwthe consequences, but chose not to wait until the end of the collection. They were shown mercy. Bella and Jacob know as well. Bella has been very foolish with Jacob and allowing him access to her room.

Bella is upset about the punishment, but she is rejecting the law not hating Edward.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Bella is smart not to meet with Jacob clandestinely.  She finaly told him she's 100 percent committed to the collection.  Now she should tell Edward how she knows Jacob.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

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Date: 07 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

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Date: 07 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

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Date: 08 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I'm a little lost.  Why did she drag him out of the meeting?  What they talked about came from what he said, not any topic she introduced.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Her attachment to Jacob is bound to come between Edward and her.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Why is Jacob interested in Bella again?  As I recall, he broke up with her because she was a Five and he was a Six.  Now that she's a Three he's interested again?



Author's Response:

He regretted it right after he dumped her, but also as a guard he is now a 2, so he is higher in status than she is and could provide better.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Thank you.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

Thank you.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

Italy sounds like a good place to live.  She should consider the offer of an Italian noblemen.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

There was a lot covered in this chapter.  Glad Alice is okay, but the palace doesn't seem the safest place to be.

It reminded me of Willoughby taking Marianne Dashwood to his family estate in Austen's Sense and Sensibility (it didn't work out well for Marianne) when Edward took Bella to the princess suite. Of course, we later learned that he had taken Rosalie to his own suite.

Why do they have to be interrupted when Edward begins to speak to her?  He should have started his goodbyes with her.

I still think her worst threat is her clandestine involvement with Jacob.

Thanks.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Ugh, cooties!  Everything Edward just got from Tanya, he just passed on to Bella.   I agree...why her?

I suspect Bella is going to be bold in her choice of projects.  She wants to leave, so she'll have her say first.  I disagree with some of her thoughts though.  If I was dressed in rags, I'd still want to be warm; without electricity, I'd still need food.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

That's another check in the "Yes" column for Italy.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 06 May 2020 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Thanks.

Summary:

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Prince Edward travels abroad to find adventure, experiences but more importantly himself. Agreeing to be father to Bella's baby is the only the beginning. He thought his biggest challenge would be to get the royal court to believe he is the biological father. It takes a baby to show Edward the man he truly is; the man he could be. In honor of my DS community.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137118 Read Count: 24876
[Report This] Published: 03 Aug 2018 Updated: 07 Nov 2018
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm glad she's not blaming Edward.  He tells her she needs to live life and it's unfortunate it was the anniversary of her father's death.  She's the one who decided that meant a frat party, alcohol and a random creep.

Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62607 Read Count: 65970
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 27 May 2020
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 27 May 2020 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen ~ July 19, 2017

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Date: 18 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen ~ Who is Renee Dwyer?

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 21 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen ~ Father of the Bride

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty ~ Time For a Wedding

I think Bella should have told Edward about her possible bloodline before the wedding given that the Volturi are his sworn enemies.

Summary:

When her mother, Mrs. Kringle, guilts Bella into coming home to the North Pole, will the winter in the air make her decide to stay? Can she bring herself to face the green-eyed elf that haunts her heart? Jingle All The Way 3rd Place Judge's Winner. *edited summary*


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12047 Read Count: 1017
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2019 Updated: 25 Jul 2019
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I knew it would work out...thanks.

Summary:

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Struggling through tragedy and betrayal, Edward believes he’s living in a cold and loveless world with no choice but to harden his heart. He’s only living a numb half-life as his sole focus becomes revenge. If he forgets his true reason for living, is there anyone who can get through to him?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21 Read Count: 19536
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2019 Updated: 03 Jan 2021
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Strong start.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Wander No More by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

History is written by the victors, but lore is written by the fearful. The Great Battle between humans and vampires is centuries in the past, and all the Wanderers have are their stories. When Bella, a young Wanderer is chosen to be the next queen of the vampires, she must choose her mate and king and try to navigate a world so different from the stories she knew. 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23068 Read Count: 21325
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2019 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Bella's taking charge, apparantly comfortable in her position as queen.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Bella's flexing her power...I wish I had her confidence.

Truths and Lies by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

It has been a long time since I have written anything, so please be kind!

Bella has gone from priviliged upbringing, to just a normal hard working P.I. She loves her job and often thinks if her dad hadn't had to agree to a demotion, she would have continued on and obtained her PHD.    


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4392 Read Count: 1031
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2019 Updated: 29 Sep 2019
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Good chapter...and looking forward to more.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good chapter.  Could Edward's confidante be his wife's lover?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Summary:

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Edward and Bella are coming to terms with their surprising imprint, but there is a lot to be resolved. Will their new relationship manage to weather the storm as both new and old challenges are thrown their way? Book 2 of Mate Series. Read Book 1: My Stubborn Mate before reading this book. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169738 Read Count: 38413
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2020 Updated: 05 Feb 2021
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 22: My Cousin

I'm glad Bella it's listening to her wolf's instincts.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 22: My Cousin

I'm glad Bella it's listening to her wolf's instincts.

Summary:

Madam President

 

Summary:  Bella Marie Swan, the previous first daughter of the United States is elected as the first female President. After her inauguration, she moves in the White House and begins the job that she was elected to do. It had been a hard-fought election, with her opponent attacking her personally for being a woman and not being married. However, in the end, the people of the country spoke with their votes. The first day on the job she was introduced to her security team and was shocked to see the leader was her high school sweetheart, Edward Cullen.

 

Edward Cullen had worked hard and up through the ranks to become the leader of USSS for the POTUS. Excited to start his new position for the upcoming President, until she won. The only woman he had ever loved.

 

Across the globe, an old foe of the United States has decided it is time to cripple their enemy before launching an all-out offensive. Sometimes the biggest killer is those that can not be seen by the naked eye.

 

Will Edward be able to keep his feelings hidden or will in the face of death, he will tell her? 

 

Action/Romance and of course a HEA!!! HeartforTwilight  #BabiesattheBorder #MadamPresident 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15900 Read Count: 7021
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2020 Updated: 26 Nov 2022
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four ~ Off to the Ball

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Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 10 May 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five - Football One?

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Man of Omerta by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 197]
Summary:

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Silence. Honor. Humility.  This was the world as I knew it. Isabella didn't change this for me, she made it clearer. She became a part of that oath as I spoke the words, because a man who couldn't protect his family, couldn't be trusted to protect the organization. “We settle things like men, amongst men, we don't run to cops like cowards.”

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52604 Read Count: 27435
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2020 Updated: 30 Apr 2021
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

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Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 57011
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward is the one being judgmental and unprofessional here. There is no reason he needs to force his best friend on his client. Even if she did know that Jasper was her brother, she doesn't have to like him anymore than Edward has to like someone to have them as a client.

While a field trip is fun and good, businesses don't train employees at this level.  They hire people with the basic skills in place from trade courses or work experience, and develop from there. Eric is fully delusional if he thinks great chefs are making fourteen dollars an hour. They could hire a fry cook for that who would do a better job.

Before I Die by britter18 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 422]
Summary:

 

Before Edward Cullen can become Don of The Cullen Family, he must do one thing first. Something he doesn't want to do but to become Don something he has wanted since he was young he will have to do it.

Bella Swan runs away from an abusive ex, and ends up seeing something she shouldn't. Edward Cullen offers her a choice what will her answer be?

Mafiaward/Bella

Thanks to Clo for the banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Before I Die
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319940 Read Count: 73628
[Report This] Published: 27 Sep 2020 Updated: 10 Sep 2023
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Terms

They should sleep together at least once to get the specter of being a virgin from hanging over her head.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Should've Said No

Thanks.

Summary:

 

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He had it all and lost everything in one night. She's trying to deal with her demons from her past. Does he have what she needs? Is she enough to heal him? Is she enough for him?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: None
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 171680 Read Count: 35596
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2020 Updated: 09 Jun 2021
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Good, keep them coming.

For Love & Duty by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary:

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The history of Skyelynn has been shrouded in lore that no one can remember. Isabella is born to a father who would love to keep her locked away, but her duty to the profession she'd chosen requires her to live outside the castle walls. One night, an injured stranger in the woods behind her home changes all that. The shrouds fall away as the pair discover how much truth is in the lore, and where the line between love and duty lies.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 32071 Read Count: 7469
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2021 Updated: 29 Jan 2022
Reviewer: asam75 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2021 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

She did say she'd show Paul frigid.